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作文专项分类
中考英语作文专项
※.五个步骤写好中考英语作文※.
书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查,涉及篇章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容,以下就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导:
一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式
时态:
故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。
说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。
如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。
人称:
注意在句子中人称的统一。
例如:
Thankstotheteachers,wehaveimprovedourEnglish.
其中we和our就是人称的统一。
格式:
注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点
切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。
一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再涂掉。
根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。
特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
三、成文时表述正确,文字流畅
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。
首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。
同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
四、文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次
考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序:
Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast
2.表并列补充关系的:
Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Inaddition
3.表转折对比关系的:
However,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing
Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…;Some…,whileothers…
4.表因果关系的:
Because,As,So,Asaresult
5.表换一种方式表达:
Inotherwords
6.表进行举例说明:
Forexample+句子;suchas+n/doing
7.表陈述事实:
Infact
8.表达自己观点:
AsfarasIknow,Inmyopinion
9.表总结:
Inshort,Inaword,Inconclusion,Insummary
文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:
宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例:
IbelieveTianjinwillbemorebeautifulandprosperous.
状语从句举例:
Ifeveryonedoessomethingfortheenvironment,ourhometownwillbecomecleanandbeautiful.
动名词做主语举例:
Readingbooksinthesunisbadforoureyes.
It’sbadforoureyestoreadbooksinthesun.
常用状语从句句型:
1)时间when,not…until,assoonas
2)目的sothat+clause;todo(为了)
3)结果so…that+clause,too…todo(太……以至于……)
4)条件if,unless(除非),aslongas(只要)
5)让步though,although,eventhough,evenif,nomatterwhat/when/where/who/which/how
6)比较as…as…,notso…as…,than
五、认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。
下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:
1.Welivemoreandmorecomfortable.改正:
comfortably(副词修饰动词)
2.wecangetmanyinformationsbyreadingnewspapers.改正:
muchinformation
3.TherehasmanyprogramsinTV.改正:
TherearemanyprogramsonTV.
(Therebe句型和介词短语)
4.Ithinkrideabikecankeepourhealth.
改正:
Ithinkridingabikecankeepushealthy.(动名词作主语)
※.中考英语作文常考的八类典型句子※.
一、环保
1.It'sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.2.Itisveryimportanttotakecareofourenvironment.
3.Weshouldnotthrowlitterontotheground.4.Weshouldplantmoreflowersandtrees.
5.Weshouldnotspitinapublicplace/cutdownthetrees.
6.Wemustpickupsomerubbishandthrowitintoadustbin.
7.Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.
二、旅游
1.LastSunday(Saturday,…),itwassunny(rainy,windy,foggy,)
2.Igotupveryearly(late).AfterbreakfastIwentto…withmyfriendsbybike,bus,…
3.Weenjoyedourselves.
4.Weforgotthetime.Wedidn'tcomebackuntil5o'clock.
5.Weallfeltverytired,butwewerehappy.6.IthoughtIwouldneverforgetthistrip.
7.Lastsummer,myparentsandIwenttoBeijingforourholidays.
8.Wevisitedalotofplacesofinterest.9.Wehadagoodtimethere.
10.Weboughtalotofthings.Theclothesherearegoodandcheap.
三、比赛
1.LastSunday,ClassOnehadafootballmatchwithClassTwo.
2.Allofuswenttowatchit.3.Thematchwasveryexciting.
4.Infact,Ihaveneverseensuchanexcitingmatchbefore.
5.Thescorewas5-3.Ourteamscoredthreegoalsinthelastfifteenminutes.
6.ClassOnewonthismatch.ClassTwolost.7.ClassOneplayedwell.Theydeservedtowin.
8.TheirPEteacherwasverypleasedwiththeirperformance.
四、健康
1.Itisveryimportanttokeephealthy.2.Howcanwekeephealthy?
3.Wecan'tgotosleeptoolate.Wecan'tgetuptoolate.
4.Weshouldeatthefoodhealthily.5.Weshoulddomoreexercise.
6.LastTuesdayIgotacoldandhadapaininmyhead.
7.Ididn'tfeellikeeatinganything.8.Idecidedtoseethedoctor.
9.Inthedoctor'soffice,thedoctorlookedmeover.
10.Hesaid:
"Nothingserious."Andhetoldmetotakearestanddrinkmorewater.
11.Anursegavemeaninjection.Itwasalittlepainful.
12.Thedoctoraskedmetotakethemedicinethreetimesaday.
13.Afewdayslater,Ifeltbetter.FromthenonIbelievethatkeepinghealthyisthemostimportantthing
intheworld.
五、学科
1.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglish.
2.MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish.
3.Itisusedbytravelersandbusinesspeopleallovertheworld.
4.ChinahasjoinedtheWTOandtheOlympicGameswillbeheldinChina.Englishbecomesmoreandmoreuseful.
5.SoEnglishisveryimportantandIlikeEnglishverymuch.
6.WehavealotoffunintheEnglishclass.
7.OurEnglishteacheroftenmakesushappyintheEnglishclass.
8.IhopeIcangoabroadoneday,andthenIcanspeaktoforeignersinEnglish.
9.IlikeEnglishandtrymybesttolearnit.
六、节日
1.InChina,themostimportantholidayistheSpringFestival.
2.ItcomesinJanuaryorFebruary.
3.OntheSpringFestivalEve,peoplehaveabigdinner.Theyhavealotofnicefoodtoeat.
4.DuringtheSpringFestivalpeoplehavealotofinterestingthingstodo.
5.Peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriends.
6.Theygreeteachotherwithahugandsay,"HappyNewYear".
7.AsChinaisabigcountry,peopleindifferentplacescelebratethisholidayindifferentways.
七、写人
1.HisnameisJack.2.HewasborninLondonin1982.
3.Heis1.68meterstallandweighs52kilos.4.Heis20yearsold.
5.HecomesfromEngland.6.Heisagoodping-pongplayer.
7.Heismediumbuild.8.Hehasshorthair.
9.Heisoutgoing.Everyonelikestotalkwithhim.Hegetsonwellwithus.
10.HeteachesEnglishverywell.11.HeoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.
12.Heloveswatchingfootballgamesafterwork.13.Attheageofsix,hebegantoplaytabletennis
14..Heworksveryhard.HeworksinNo.5MiddleSchool.
八、生活
1.Jimgotupveryearly.2.Jimcleanedtheroomanddothehousework.
3.Jimwenttoshopanddidsomeshopping.4.Jimdidsomecooking.
5.Jimfedthecat.6.Jimsweepsthefloor.
7.Hewashesthedishes.8.Hehaslunchatschool.
9.Itisabusyday.Heisverytired.Buthefeelshappy.
※.2014年中考英语作文热点话题※.
(1)理想的职业
最近,你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。
请根据你们小组的情况写一篇英语短文,向英语校刊投稿。
组员
理想职业
原因
Mary
时装设计师(fashiondesigner)
喜欢漂亮衣服,擅长绘画
Kate
园艺工(gardener)
喜爱植物,想让城市更美
Mike
作家
愿意与别人分享精彩故事
Tom
厨师
为别人煮健康美味的食物
你
?
?
注意:
1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
★范文
Recentlywedidasurveyinourclassinordertolearnaboutstudents’idealjobs.Here’sareportaboutmygroupmembers’ideas.
Marywantstobeafashiondesignerbecauseshelikesbeautifulclothesandisgoodatdrawing.Katewantstobeagardener,shelivesplants,andshewantstomakethecitiesbetter.Mikewouldliketobeawriter.He’dliketosharehiswonderfulstorieswithothers.Tomwouldliketobeacook.He’dliketocookdeliciousfoodforothers.Iwouldliketobeapoliceman.Iwanttoprotectthepeoplesafe.
Hopefullyeveryonecanrealizetheirdreamsinthefuture.
(2)传统节日介绍
假设你是刘伟,你的美国朋友MIKE想通过你了解中国的传统节日。
请你根据提示,给Mike写一封e-mail,向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。
内容提示:
1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;
2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)
traditional,decorate,ontheeveofthefestival,gettogether,setofffireworks,luckymoney
★范文
DearMike,
Howareyou?
I’mreallygladthatyouareinterestedintraditionalChinesefestivals.TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina,suchasSpringFestival,Mid-AutumnDayandsoon.I’dliketointroducetheSpringFestivaltoyou.SpringFestivalisthemostimportanttraditionalholidayinChina.Itusuallylastsfor15days.
Daysbeforethefestival,peoplecleantheirhouses.Theythinkcleaningsweepsanybadluck.Theydecoratetheirhouseswithpapercuts.Ontheeveofthefestival,familymembersgettogetherandhavebigmeals.ThentheywatchtheSpringFestivalGalaonTV.Atmidnight,theysetofffireworkstowelcomethenewyear.Duringthefestival,kidsgetluckymoneyfromoldpeople.Peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriends.Theywisheachahappyyearandgoodluck.
Howhappyweare.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiuWei
(3)loseweight
假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“hearttoheart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信.请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题。
Deareditor,
NormallyIamahappystudent.Idowellinmystudiesandhavealotoffriends.However,Ijustfeeldepressed(沮丧的)recentlybecauseIhaveputonmuchweightandbecometooheavy.Ithinkit’sbecauseIeatalotwhenIstayuplatedoingmyhomework.AndwhenIdon’thavemuchworktodo,IusuallysitinfrontofTVwithchocolatesandpotatochips.PeoplesayIneedexerciseandrunningisgoodforme.ButIreallydon’tlikerunningalone.It’sboring.WhatshouldIdo?
Ireallywanttoloseweight.Pleasehelp!
Yours,
Xiaowei
★范文
DearXiaowei,
Weightproblemisquitecommonamongteenagerseverywhere.SoIdon’tthinkyouhavemuchtoworryabout.Herearemysuggestions.EatinglateatnightisOK,butyoushouldtoeatmorefruitandvegetables,whicharegoodforyou.
Also,whenyouarefree,you’dbetterdomoreexercise.Runningisgreat.Youdon’tlikerunningalone,butwhataboutrunningwithyourfriends?
Oryoucandosometeamsportslikebasketball.I’msureyourfriendswillbewillingtohelpyouloseweight.Ihopeyouhaveasmuchsuccessinlosingweightasyouhavehadinyourstudies.“Believemyself,andIwillwin.”It’sreallyimportantforuswhenwemeetdifficulties.Don’tloseheart;I’msureyouwillsucceedoneday.
(4)thefoodsafety
A.健康饮食关系到青少年的身心健康成长。
请根据以下提供的内容和提示词,以”HealthyEating”为题写一篇作文.
1.健康饮食的重要性(important,energy);
2.良好的饮食习惯(keepabalanceddiet)