TPO115综合写作满分范文.docx

TPO115综合写作满分范文.docx

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TPO115综合写作满分范文

TPO1综合写作高分考生范文

Thelecturerclaimsthatthenewpolicy,whichallowspeopletoworkfourdaysaweekinsteadoffive,willbringsideeffectstoboththecompaniesandthesociety.Thisdoesnotagreewiththereadingpassage,whichsuggeststhatsuchapolicywouldbebeneficial.

Tobeginwith,accordingtothelecture,acompanythatallowsemployeestohavefewerworkinghoursislikelytohiremorepeopletoensuretheirnormalproductivity.Asaresult,expensesfortrainingandmedicalinsurancewillinevitablyrise.Thereadingpassage,bycontrast,suggeststhatemployeeswhoenjoymoreleisuretimewillhavefewermistakesandworkmoreefficiently,leadingtotheincreaseofprofitfortheenterprise.

Thesecondpointofdifferenceisregardingimpactonunemploymentrate.Thelecturerassertsthatforthesakeofsavingmoney,theemployersmightraisetheirexpectationon4-dayemployees,ratherthanrecruitmorepeople.Consequently,theemployeeswhowork4dayswillbeforcedtofinishwhattheydidin5dayspreviously,andthereforenoadditionaljobswillbecreated.

Finally,thelecturerarguesthatnotonlythequalityoflifewilldeclineifanemployeeworksshorterhoursandreceiveslesspay,butalsotheyhavelesschancetobepromotedtoasupervisoryposition.However,thereadingpassagecontendsthatmoreleisurehourscancreateopportunitiestostrengthenfamilytiesandallowemployeestodevelopprivateinterests,makingthemfeelmoresatisfiedaboutlife.

博主修订版：

Thelecturerclaimsthatthenewpolicy,whichallowspeopletoworkfourdaysaweekinsteadoffive,willhavenegativeeffectsforcompaniesaswellassociety.Thisclaimisnotinagreementwiththatofthereadingpassage,whichsuggeststhatsuchapolicywillbebeneficial.

Accordingtothelecture,acompanythatallowsemployeestohavefewerworkinghoursislikelytohiremorepeopletoensurethatitmeetsnormallevelsofproductivity.Ifthisoccurs,expensesfortrainingandmedicalinsurancewillinevitablyrise.Thereadingpassage,bycontrast,suggeststhatemployeeswhoenjoymoreleisuretimemakefewermistakesandworkmoreefficiently,leadingtoincreasedprofitsfortheenterprise.

Thesecondpointofdifferencebetweenthelectureandthereadingpassageconcernstheimpactofthepolicyontheunemploymentrate.Thelecturerassertsthatforthesakeofsavingmoney,employersmightraisetheirexpectationsof4-dayemployeesratherthanrecruitmorepeople.Consequently,employeeswhowork4dayswillbeforcedtofinishwhattheydidin5dayspreviously,andnoadditionaljobswillbecreated.

Finally,thelecturerarguesthatunderthenewpolicy,employeeswillexperiencenotonlydecreasedqualityoflife（asshorterworkinghourswilltranslateintolesspay）,butalsofewerchancestobepromotedtosupervisorypositions.However,thereadingpassagecontendsthatmoreleisurehourscancreateopportunitiestostrengthenfamilytiesandallowemployeestodevelopprivateinterests,makingthemfeelmoresatisfiedwiththeirlives.

SampleanswerforTPO2Integratedwritingtask（level5）

Thelecturertalksaboutresearchconductedbyafirmthatusedthegroupsystemtohandletheirwork.Hesaysthatthetheorystatedinthepassagewasverydifferentandsomewhatinaccuratewhencomparedtowhathappenedinreality.

First,somemembersgotfreerides.Thatis,somedidn’tworkhardbutgotrecognitionforthesuccessnonetheless.Thisalsoindicatesthatpeoplewhoworkedhardwerenotgivenrecognitiontheyshouldhavegotten.Inotherwords,theyweren’tgiventheopportunityto“shine”.Thisdirectlycontradictswhatthepassageindicates.

Second,groupswereslowinprogress.Thepassagesaysthatgroupsaremoreresponsivethanindividualsbecauseofthenumberofpeopleinvolvedandtheiraggregatedresources.However,thespeakertalksabouthowthefirmfoundoutthatgroupswereslowerthanindividualsindecisionmaking.Groupsneededmoretimeformeetings,whicharenecessaryproceduresindecisionmaking.Thiswasanotherplacewhereexperiencecontradictedtheory.

Third,influentialpeoplemightemergeandleadthegrouptowardsgloryorfailure.Iftheinfluentpeoplearegoingintherightdirectiontherewouldbenoproblem.Butincaseswheretheygointhewrongdirection,thereisnobodythathasenoughinfluencetocounterthedecisionmade.Inotherwords,thegroupmightturnintoadictatorship,withtheinfluentialpartyastheleader,andmightbecomelessflexibleinitsthinking.Theymightbecomeone-sided,andthusfailtosucceed.

TPO-3integratedwritingsampleanswer（满分范文）

Thelecturerevisestheideapresentedinthetext,thatRembrandtwasnottheartistwhopaintedthefamouspainting"PortraitofanElderlyWomaninaWhiteBonnet”.

Theinconsistencybetweenthewhitecap,whichidentifiesthewomanasaservant,andtheexpensivefurcollarshewearsdissolvesastheProfessorexplainsthatthefurcollarwasapparentlypaintedovertheoriginalpaintingtoincreaseitsworthbydisplayinganaristocraticwoman.

Inaddition,theassumptionthatlightandshadowinthepaintingdonotfittogetherisrefutedbythefactthatintheoriginalpainting,thewomanwearsalightcloththatilluminatedherface.Thusthepresentationoflightandshadowwasindeedveryrealisticandaccurate,asitischaracteristicofRembrandt’spaintings.

Finally,themysteryofthepanelconsistingofpatchesgluedtogetherisalsosolvedinthelecture.Actually,thewoodpanelwaslaterenlargedtomakeitmoregrandandvaluable,buttheoriginalpaintingwaspaintedonasinglepanel,asRembrandtwouldhavedoneit.Furthermore,thewoodisofthesametreeusedinotherRembrandtpaintings,likethe"Self-PortraitwithaHat”.

AllthisinformationpointstoRembrandtasthepainterofthecontroversialpainting.

下面这篇作文是针对TPO第四套的综合写作（关于恐龙是否是恒温动物）写的，虽然有一些小错误，但ETS评分为满分。

SampleResponse

Theprofessoractuallycontradictsthestatementsmadeinthepassage.Sheisoftheviewthatdinosaursarenotendothermsi.e.theywerenotabletokeeptheirbodytemperatureataconstantrate.

Theprofessorcontradictstheissueofdinosaursbeingendothersbasedontheavailabilityoffossilsbeingavailableinthwepolarregions,shesaythatthepolarregionsinthosedayswerenotascoldastheyaretodayi.eatleastwarmenoughfordinosaurstolive.Durinharshwintersshesaysthatthereisapossibilityofthedinosaursactuallymigratingtowarmerregions.

Theissueoflegpositionandmovementbeingusedasareasontoclasifythedinosaursasendothermsdoesnotpleasetheprofessoreither.Shesaysthatdinosaurshadlegsundertheirbodiestosupporttheirhugebodiesi.ethelegsunderthebodyofthedinosaurwereactuallytosupportthehugeweightofthedinosaurandnottoprovideitwithabodystructurelikeendotherms（whichisactuallysuitedforrunning）.

Theprofessoracknowledgesthepresenceofhaversiancanalsbutalsopointsoutthatthatthefossilsshowthepresenceofgrowthrings.Theseringsoccurduetothethickeningofthebone.Thethickeningindicatesthatthedinosaurswere'ntactuallygrowingcontinuouslybutwereexperiencingperiodsofrapidgrowthandperiodsofnogrowthinsuccesion.Thispattern.shesaysischaracteristicofnonendothermicanimals.

Thusitcanbeinferredthattheprofessorchallengesthepassagebygivingreasonsastowhyshethinksthatthedinosaurisnotanendotherm.

DescriptionofResponse:

Despiteinitialappearances,thisresponselargelysucceedsinclearlyandaccuratelypresentinghowthelecturepointstakeissuewiththepointsinthereadingpassagethatdinosaurswereendotherms.Thefirstpointregardingdinosaursinpolarregionscouldbeabitclearer.Otherwise,theresponsemainlysuffersfromtypographicalerrors,butthesearenotregardedasmajorproblems;itisobviousthatthewriterhasgoodcontrolofstructureandvocabularyandtheabilitytousethesetoconveyinanorganizedandlogicalmannerwhathasbeenunderstoodandasked.

SampleanswerforTPO5Integratedwritingtask

Theauthorofthereadingpassageproposesthreetheoriesaslikelyexplanationsoftheprimaryfunctionofchacoconyonhouses,giantstructuresbuiltinthe12thcentury.Thelecturer,however,pointstotheinaccuraciesineachofthesetheories.

Thelecturerarguesthatthemodestnumberoffireplaceintherestructuresisincontradictionwiththehugesizeofthesehouses,indicatingthatthesestructurescouldnothavebeenusedforresidentialpurposes.Thereading,however,drawscomparisonsbetweenthechacohousesandothersimilarlargeresidentialstructuresinsupportofthe"residential"theory.

Thesecondtheory,thatthehouseswereusedforfoodstorage,isalsorejectedbythelecturer.Heexplainsthataplacethathadbeenusedforstoringmaizewouldhavemanytracesofscatteredmaize,whichisnotthecaseintheareaofthechacocanyonhouses.Thisprovesthatthe"foodstoragetheory"isunlikely.

Finally,regardingthethirdtheory,the"ceremonytheory",thelecturercontendsthatthepresenceofbrokenpotsclosetothegreathousesdoesnotoffersufficientproofthatthiswasaplaceforceremonialactivities.Hearguesthatthereareothermaterialssuchaspiecesofconstructiontrashfoundalongwiththebrokenpots,whichsuggestthatthesepotswereprobablynotusedforceremonialpurposesbutinsteadwerediscardedbyconstructionworkersuponcompletionofthegreathouses.

本篇范文可以借鉴的模板

Theauthorofthereadingpassageproposesthreetheoriesaslikelyexplanationsof__________.Thelecturer,however,pointstotheinaccuraciesineachofthesetheories.

Thelecturerarguesthat_________________.T