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短文改错训练

短文改错训练

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MostfamiliesinChinahopedtheirsinglechildrenwillhaveahappyfuture,sotheyareverystrictintheirchildren.Sodoteachersinschools!

Manychildrenaregivensomuchhomeworkthattheyhavehardlyanysparetimehavesports.Thechildrenareforbiddentodoanythingbuttostudy.Nowondersomanychildrenaretiredoflessons.Someevenattackorkillhisparentsandteachers!

Ibelievemanypeoplealreadyreadthiskindofnewsinnewspapersormagazines.Shouldn’twedrawlessonfromtheaccidents?

Nowourgovernmentiscarryingoutaplantosolvetheeducationquestions.

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Nowadays,almosteveryfamilyhasTVset,andalmosteveryonelikeswatchingTV.TVhasbecomepartofourlives.TVhasmanyadvantages,forexample,itinformsusthelatestnewswhichishappeningintheworld;itcanopenoureyes,enlargeourknowledgeandalsohelpustoseemoreabouttheworld．But,italsohassomedisadvantages.PeoplewastetoomuchtimeinwatchingTVandhisnormallifeandworkareaffected．TothechildrenwhotheyspendtoomuchtimeinwatchingTV,itcandoharmfultotheirsightandhealthy.SoweshouldcontrolthetimeofwatchingTV.

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AfewmonthsafterreturningtheUSfromGermany,ItookpartinacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIhavelearnedtosayGermanwellinGermany,Ithoughtitmightbeinterestedtobeginstudyinganotherlanguage.Atthefirstclass,theteacheraskedustodoapronunciationexerciseinithewouldsayawordortwoinFrench,andeachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegottome,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andIfinallyaskedhimwhy.“Ifinditgreatfun,”sheexplainedit.“In25yearsofteachingatschool,it’sthefirsttime

I’veheardanAmericanspeakFrenchwithaGermanaccent.”

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DearXiaohua,

ItisfourdayssinceMotheracceptedtheoperation.Sheisfeelingmuchmorebetter.Thedoctorstoldmetheoperationwassuccessful,butbecauseheroldageshehadtostayinhospitalforothertwoweeks.Thedoctorsalsosayitwasquitenecessaryforhertodoso.Weexpecttogetafullreportintwoandthreedays.Pleasetellthegoodnewstotherestoffamilyassoonaspossible.Youneedn’ttocomehere.I’mabletolookafterMotherbymyself.You’dbettersendflowerstoMother.Shewillfeelhappily.

Yours,

Xiaohui

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DearAbby,

Howareyou?

TodayI’vegotawonderfulnewstotellyou.

IhaveofferedascholarshipatauniversityinAustraliaformyfurthereducation.Onehundredandtwentystudentstakeexamsforit,butonlyafewwaschosenandIwasoneofthem.However,myparentsarenothappyaboutit.Theyarestrongagainstmegoingthere.TheysayitistoofarawaythattheywillnotseemeforawholeyearandtheyareafraidofIwillfeellonely.Theycan’timagineagirlsoyounglivealone.Theyadvisemetostudyinthecapitalinstead.ThenI’llbeabletocontinuelivingwiththem.HowcanIpersuadethemtoacceptthefactIhavegrownup?

Bestwishes,

Jane

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BeforeIwenttoseniormiddleschool,somepeoplestoldme.“Alifeofseniormiddleschoolisunforgettable.”WhileIfirstenteredmyseniormiddleschool,everythingseemedunpleasant.Faceallthestrangethingsaroundme,Ioftenmissmyoldfriendsandclassmates.Ididn’twanttotalkothersormakefriendswithothers.Littlebylittle,myschoolrecordwentfrombadtoworse,especiallymymaths.Icouldn’tevenpasstheexam.Ilosttheheartandmissedthehappytimesalldaylong.Itoldme,“Idon’tbelongtoit.Idon’tlikethelifehere.”

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TomandDickarenextdoorneighbourwhoworkinthesameofficesotheywalkedtogethertoandfromoffice.Somedayastheywerewalkinghometogetheritsuddenstartedtorain.Tomquicklyopenedhisumbrellaandsaid,“Mywifesurelyhasforesight（预见）.Shesaidonthismorningitwouldrainandtoldmetocarrymyumbrellawithme.”Dicksmiledandwalkedtohim,said,“Mywifehasevengreatforesight.Shetoldmenottocarryanumbrellaandassheknewyouwouldcertainlyhavewithyou.”

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WhilevisitingFrance,wedecidetodosomeshopping.Notfarthehoteltherewasashopwithallkindsofclothinghangup.Whenwewentintotheshop,awomancameupandaskedthatshecouldhelpus,sowesaidthatwewouldliketolookaroundonourown.Shelookedatusratherstrange.Nothavingfoundanythingweneeded,wethankedthewomanandwasleft.SuddenlymyhusbandstartedtolaughpointingtothesmallsigninEnglish,whichread:

"DRY-CLEANINGSHOP.Asyouareasmoker,pleasedon'tsmokehere.

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Aretheyearsyouspentatschoolbestyearsofyourlife?

Personally,Ifoundmostlessonratheruninteresting.Wehadtositatourdesksinsilenceandpaidattentiontowhattheteachersweresaying.Theywereusedtowriteontheblackboardandaskusdifficultquestions.Wealsohadtodoplentyofhomework,andhanditontime.Wehadtowearschooluniformsandobeylotsofrules.IleftschoolassoonasIcanandstartedwork.Ireadbooks

atthepubliclibrary,andlateIdecidedtoattendcollege.NowIreallyenjoystudybecauseI’mgrowingoldandknowwhatIwantit.WhenIwasatschool.Iwasjustthewrongage!

students’eyes.

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May10,2007Fine

TodayIwashavingaPElessonwhileIfelldownandhurtmyfoot.Iwasingreatlypainatthatmoment,butItriedtoactasifnothinghashappeneduntiltheclasswasover.ThoughIhaddifficultywalkbacktomyclassroom,Istilldidn’ttellanyonebutevenrefusedtheofferofhelpofmyclassmates.Asresult,thehurtinmyfootbecameworse.NowIknowI’mwrong.Wecantellothersourneedforhelpandaccepthishelp.Somedaywecannothelpothersinreturn.Inthisway,wecangetalongtoeachotherhappilyandpeacefully.

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Twofriendsweretravelingacrosstheforest whiletheymetwithabear.Theonewhowasingreat fearclimbedupintoatreeandhidehimself, withoutthinkingofhisfriend.Theanotherone foundthathehadnochancerunaway,so hethrewhimselfonthegroundandpretend todead,forhehadheardthatabear couldnevertouchadeadbody. Asifhethuslay,thebearcameupto hishead,andsmeltathisnoseandears.butthemanheldhisbreathe,andthebeast supposinghimtobedead,walkedaway.              

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Myparentsarebothinterestedinreadingandmusic,and myfatherpreferstohistorybookswhilemymotherlikes toreadnovelsandwoman'smagazines.Inmusic,their tastesaresimilar,andtheyhadnevertiredoffolkmusic. Mostofthetime,theyareinagreementonbringingup children.Theybothbelieveingivingtheirchildrenloves,andnonebelievesinpunishingachildphysically. Attimes,theyagreeeachother,butsometimes theyseemdifferently.Perhapsthatiswhynoneof theirchildrenknowsforsurewhichparentsheshouldfollow.     

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Thisafternoon,Ihadsuchinterestingexperience.Onmywaytothecinema,Isawacasetofalloffaman’sbike.SoIshoutedoutathimtostop.Unluckilyhedidn’thearmeandrideaway.Iwaswonderingwhat

todowhileanideaoccurredtome.Istoppedataxiandquicklygotintoitwiththecase.Soonwecaughtupwiththeman.Getthecaseback,hewassothankfulthatheofferedmesomemoney,andIrefuseditpolitely.

Thenthedriverdrovemetothecinema.WhenIpaidforhim,thedriverpushedmyhandaway,sayingwithasmile,“NeitherwillIreceiveyourmoney.”

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Hownicetohearyouagain.YouwanttoknowhowisgoingoninschoolsinChina.Infact,thingshaveimprovedsinceschoolsbegintoreducethelearningload.Iusedtohavetoworkatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworks.NowIhavemorefreetime,soImustfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadbooks,visitingmuseumsandtakingcomputerlessons.Besides,Icangotobedearlythanbefore.

Anyoneishappyaboutthesechanges.However,

Iwonderhowlongtimesuchsituationcanlast.

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DearTracy，

AlthoughI'm16yearsold，butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschildren.Hedoesn’tvaluemyopinions.Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeaboutleavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthisalltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexampletometofollow.Butheoftensays：

“DoingasIsay，notasIdo.”Evenworse，hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests,makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan’tbearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimestotalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme.

Puzzled

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EverymorningStevewenttoworkbytrain.Ashehasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelpsmakethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesdaymorning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewanted

toseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatchthenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthatheforgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunlesshesawthesea.Hegotoffatthenextstation,andhadtowaitalongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrivedlateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohimwhyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!

”heshouted.

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Itwasraining.InhiswayfromschoolPetersawanoldmanwalkingwithdifficultintherainwithoutaumbrella.Peterwentuptohimandofferedsharetheumbrellawithhim.Theoldmaninpoorhealth,soPetertriedtoholdtheumbrella.Buthewastooshorttoholdithighenough.Whilewonderedwhattodo,hesawtheoldman’sstickandhadanidea.Hehadtiedthesticktothehandleoftheumbrellaandmadethemlonger.Nowwesharedtheumbrella.Peterwashappy.

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Mysisterfoundabirdontheroadside.WenamedhimJackandkeephimforaboutthreeyears.Hewouldgreetusinatreeoutsi