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2011考研预测作文:
建议信
Directions:
Supposethatyouareastudentandfindsomeofyourclassmateshaveformedextravaganthabits.Writealetterinabout100wordstotheadministrativedepartmentofyouruniversitytoshowyoursuggestionsforthissituation.Donotsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,use"LiMing"instead.
【经典范文】
DearSirs,
Iamanordinarystudentofthisuniversityandamwritingtodrawyourattentiontothefactthatsomestudentsaroundmehavehadextravaganthabits.
Theydonotcherishtheirmoneyatall.Somebuyexpensivemobilephonesandlaptopcomputers,somespendmoneyonvideogamesorInternetchat,andsomegotorestaurantsandbarsoften.
However,itisknowntoallthatthriftandeconomyareaprimerequisiteofwell-orderedlivingandsuccessfulcareer.Tosolvethisproblem,inmymind,theleadershipandstudentsofouruniversityshouldworktogethertocreateageneralatmosphereofthriftylife.Teachersshouldteachbytheiractionthatthriftisanindispensablevirtue,andstudentsofhighawarenesscanhaveapositiveinfluenceonthosearoundthem.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
【文章点评】
这封信是写给主管部门,针对某一现象,提出自己的建议。
因而开篇先说明了写信的目的:
希望某些同学的浪费现象能引起主管部门的注意。
然后描述了他们浪费习惯的具体表现。
最后为解决这个问题,提出自己的建议。
首段的extravagant表示"奢侈的,浪费的"。
第二段的laptopcomputer表示"笔记本电脑"。
第三段的thrift表示"节俭"。
2011考研预测作文:
辞职信
Directions:
Threemonthsagoyougotajobasamanagerforacompany.Butnowyoufindthattheworkisnotwhatyouexpected.Youdecidetoquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.Williams,tellinghimyourdecision,statingyourreason(s),andmakinganapology.
Writeyourletterwithnolessthan100words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter,use"LiMing"instead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.
【经典范文】
DearMr.Williams,
Iamwritingtoinformyouofmydecisiontoresignfrommycurrentposition.Afterthreemonthsofwork,Ifinditinappropriateformetotakethepositionasamanagerhereforthefollowingreasons.
Firstandforemost,Ihaveexpectedthejobtobeinterestingandchallenging,whichturnsouttobetheopposite.Inaddition,thesalaryhasproventobemuchlowerthanyouoriginallypromised,andIhavealargefamilytosupport.Therefore,Ihavedecidedtoquitthejobaftermuchdeliberation.PleaseletmeknowifthereisanythingIneedtodobeforemydeparture.
Thankyouverymuchforofferingmetheopportunitytoworkwiththeoutstandingstaffhere.Isincerelyhopethatyouapproveofmyresignation.Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.
Sincerelyyours,
LiMing
【文章点评】
这封辞职信结构清晰。
第一段说明这封信是告知雇主自己想辞去工作。
第二段详细说明辞职的原因。
第三段对于辞职引起的不便表示歉意。
第二段用了"Firstandforemost,Inaddition,Therefore"作为衔接手段,使文章结构清晰、一目了然。
"Ifinditinappropriateformeto..."意思是"我发现我不适合做…",使辞职的语气委婉。
2011考研预测作文:
致歉信
Directions:
SupposethatyoucannotgoandseeyourteacherMr.Davidoffasyouhavepromisedforsomeemergency.Writealetterinabout100wordstomakeanapologytohim.Donotsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,use"LiMing"instead.
【经典范文】
DearMr.David,
Kindlyexcusemeformynotbeingabletokeepmypromisetoseeyouoffattherailwaystationtomorrowmorning.Mybrother,whoworksinacompanynearouruniversity,suddenlyfellillandwastakentoahospitalthismorning.Ashisfriendsandcolleaguesarealloccupiedbytheirworkandhehasnorelativesinthiscityotherthanme,Ihavetogotothehospitalrightawayandtakecareofhim.Accordingtooneofhiscolleagueswhohavesenthimtothehospital,itwilltakeafewdaysforhimtorecover,soIamafraidthatIcannotgotothestationtoseeyouofftomorrow.
I'mreallysorryandIhopeyouwillbebacksoon.Isurelywillmissyouwhenyouareaway.Haveapleasanttrip.
Sincerelyyours,
LiMing
【文章点评】
开篇表明自己因不能如约去给对方送行而致歉。
而后说明是因为哥哥生病无人照顾,所以抽不出身来去送行。
原因写得合情合理,条理清楚。
第二段再次致歉,并表达对即将离开的老师的思念。
最后祝愿老师旅行愉快。
体现了真挚的师生情谊。
首段的fallill表示"病倒",seesb.off表示"送行"。
Directions:
Supposethatyouhavereceivedalettercomplainingaboutthemisbehaviorofaparticularemployee.Writealetterofapologyinabout100words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,use"LiMing"instead.
【经典范文】
DearMrs.Robinson,
ThankyouforyourletterofJune17th,complainingabouttheconductofoneofouremployees.
Wehaveinvestigatedyourcomplaintalreadyandthepersonconcernedwillbeseverelyreprimandedandpunished.
Pleaseacceptoursincereapologiesforthisunhappyexperience.Weassureyouthatsuchamatterwillneverhappenagain.
Thankyoualsoforbringingthismattertoourattention.Weplacegreatimportanceontheconductofouremployeesandyourcomplaintwillgiveustheopportunitytoremedyanyproblemthatmayexist.Pleasebelievethatwepaygreatattentiontotherightsofourcustomersandyouwillbesuretofeelthechangeforthebetterinthedaystocome.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
【文章点评】
这是一篇对投诉信进行回复的特殊的致歉信。
首段说明接到了对方的投诉信。
次段说明已调查该事,当事人将被处罚。
第三段表示深深的歉意,并保证此类事件不再发生。
第四段感谢对方的来信并说明本单位将改进工作。
该信环环相扣,结构紧凑,值得大家细细研读,认真学习。
首段的conduct表示"行为"。
次段的reprimand表示"训斥,斥责"。
第四段的remedy表示"补救,纠正"。
2011考研预测作文:
求职信
Directions:
SupposeyouaregoingtograduatefromYanshanUniversity.Writealettertoacompanyinaround100wordstoshowyourinterestinthepositionasasecretaryandapplyforit.Donotsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,use"LiMing"instead.
【经典范文】
DearSir,
Iwishtoapplyforthepositionofsecretarywhichyourecentlyadvertisedinthelocalnewspaper.IamgoingtograduatefromYanshanUniversitynextmonthandgetmyB.A.degreeinBritishandAmericanliterature.
IamsurethatImeetthequalificationsyouspecifiedinyouradvertisement.Iamastudentinthetoptenpercentofourdepartment,andIhaveworkedasasecretaryinsummerandwintervacationsintheHuafengCompany.Ihavealsoattendedseveralmeetingsandexhibitionsonbehalfofouruniversitytointroduceproductstopotentialcustomers.
MyreferencesareavailableandIcansendassoonaspossibleuponnotice.
Thankyouforyourconsiderationofmyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
【文章点评】
首段说明自己应聘的职位及个人的基本情况。
次段首句是段落主题句,之后说明自己的学习和工作经历。
第三段说明自己备有推荐信(references)可供参考。
最后表示感谢并期待回复。
首段首句即写明所应聘职位和从何处获知信息,条理非常清晰。
句中使用定语从句,相当恰当。
第二段首句的qualifications指"条件",即"工作所需的资质和技能",specify表示"指明"。
2011考研预测作文:
感谢信
Directions:
SupposeyouwererecommendedbyProfessorLiangtogetfurthereducationinSydneyUniversitylastJuneandnowyouhavebeenadmittedbythatuniversity.WritealettertoProfessorLiangtoexpressyourgratitudeinabout100words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,use"LiMing"instead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.
【经典范文】
DearProfessorLiang,
IamwritingtoextendmygratitudetoyoubecausewithyourhelpIamnowastudentofChemistryDepartmentofSydneyUniversity.
LastJune,whenIappliedtobecomeagraduatestudentofSydneyUniversity,youreallygavemealotofvaluablehelp.YounotonlywrotearecommendationformetoProfessorWellswhoworksintheSydneyUniversityandalsogavemecarefulandpatientinstructionsonhowtofilltheapplicationformsandwritetheapplicationletters.
Itisyourunreservedhelpthatenablesmetoobtainthissplendidopportunityoffurthereducation.ForthefollowingtwoyearsIwillstudyhardtoreciprocateyoursincerehelpandexpectationswithexcellentgrades.
Yourstruly,
LiMing
【文章点评】
第一段说明因对方帮助自己成为悉尼大学化学系学生而表示感谢。
第二段具体谈了自己在大学申请过程中所受到的对方的帮助。
第三段再次表示感谢并决心以优异的成绩来回报对方的真诚帮助和期望。
第二段中的applicationform指"申请表"。
第三段首句中的unreserved表示"无保留的,坦率的"。
次句中的reciprocate表示"回报,报答"。
2011考研预测作文:
申请信
Directions:
Youareasecretaryofacompanythatislookingforasalesmanager.Writeanapplicationforatransfertothenewposition.Youshouldwriteabout100words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,use"LiMing"instead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.
【经典范文】
DearSirs,
Havinglearnedthatourcompanyislookingforasalesmanger,Iventuretowritetoseekthisvacancy.
IamatpresentasecretaryintheAdvertisingDepartmentwhereIhavebeenworkingfornearlythreeyears.ButmymajorinuniversitywasmarketingresearchandItookpartinvariouspracticesininternationaltrade.SoIhavebeenfeelingverymuchlikeworkingintheSalesDepartment.Besides,thethreeyearsworkingexperienceasasecretaryenablesmetobefluentinbothChineseandEnglishandhavestronginterpersonalskills.Ibelievetheseabilities,asshownindetailintheresumeIenclose,shouldqualifymeforthepositionasasalesmanager.
Myleadership,fullyawarethatIammoresuitableasasalesmanager,hasapprovedofmytransfershouldyoufinditdesirable.
Iwouldliketoextendmyappreciationinadvanceifyoucouldgrantmeaninterview.
Cordially,
LiMing
【文章点评】
这封信第一段说明申请的内容--本公司一个销售经理的职位。
第二段说明自己想从广告部秘书的职位调到销售部任经理的理由以及自己胜任这一职位的相关条