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考研大作文指导及范文解析
大作文
六、考研大作文框架结构:
3段
12句左右
160-250词(英语二150-200词)
5-7个关联词(适可而止)
5-7个从句(多多益善)
1、Introduction:
第一段,提出问题,图画描述(图画作文)/图表描述(图表作文)/现状说明(情景或提纲作文),3句左右
1)图画/图表描述:
(1)Generaldescription:
总体描述,
人物+动作+环境或主题+对象+时间,1句
(2)Details1,2,3:
挖掘细节词,串联成句,1句
(3)Caption/Symbolicmeaning:
文字说明或象征寓意,1句
2)现状说明:
(1)Backgroundinformation:
背景交代
(2)Generaltalkofthetopic:
引出主题
(3)Thesis:
Statespecificallywhatyouropinionis,确立论点
2、Body:
第二段,分析问题,意义阐释(图画作文)或原因列举(图表、提纲或情景作文),5句左右
1)Topicsentence:
Symbolicmeaning,主题句,象征寓意,1句
2)Argument:
论证,3句左右,考研写作四大论证手段
(1)CauseandEffect:
因果论证
(2)Exemplification:
举例论证
A.Numerousexamplescanbegiven,butthis/thesewillsuffice.
B.Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthefollowingone(s).
C.This/Thesecase(s)effectivelyclarifythat…
(3)联系现实:
以小见大,把握象征寓意,个体想为群体,具体想为抽象
(4)正反论证:
3)Summary:
小结,概括论证,总结本段,1句
3、Conclusion:
第三段,解决问题,建议措施/归纳结论,4句左右
1)Concludingsentence:
结论句,呼应象征寓意,1句
2)Suggestions1、2:
两点建议(针对双方提建议)或两句评论,2句
3)包装结尾、展望未来:
1句,考研写作三大优秀句型
(1)倒装句:
Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvethisproblem.
只有这样我们才能解决这个问题。
(2)强调句:
Itispersistentworkthatisconducivetoyourgraspingaconsiderablevocabulary.只有长期学习才有助于你掌握大的词汇量。
(3)虚拟语气:
Itishightimethatwesolvedthisproblem.
我们早就该解决这个问题了。
七、大作文:
1.伦理道德:
冲刺班二十大必背范文之十一
Directions:
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and
3)giveyourcomments.
Inthepictureaboveisanoldmantumbledontheroadaccidentally.Unfortunately,agreatmanypassers-byarehesitantaboutgivingtheoldmanahand.Seeingthat,nobodywouldliketoberesponsiblefortheaccident.
Theabovepictureremindsmeoftherecentheateddiscussionaboutwhethertoassisttheseniorcitizenswhoaresuddenlysickorinjured.Suchdiscussionisashameforthesociety,forhelpingpeopleindistressshouldbeconsideredasthebasicsocialmoralityandtraditionalvirtue.Unfortunately,thedebateindeedbrokeoutafterseveralhelp-giversweresuccessivelyreportedtobefalselyidentifiedasoffendersandsentencedtopayeconomiccompensation.Duetothosecases,peopleworrythattheassistancerecipients,especiallyagedpeoplewithpoorjudgment,mayfailtotellrightfromwrongandhelpingthemwillprobablyincurtroubles.Thisthoughthaltspeople’sattempttohelpandhasindirectlymurderedsomeagedpeople.Severalmonthsago,anoldmandiedafterfallingbecausenobodydaredtoofferassistance.
Suchtragedyshouldneverrecur.Toachieveit,firstly,helpingagedpeopleinneedshouldbeadvocated.Moreimportantly,effortsshouldbemadetoprotectthebenefitsofthosewhoprovidehelp.Onlyintheseways,canwebesurethat,ononehand,theelderlyreceivetimelyaidandontheotherhand,warm-heartedpeopleneversufferfromloss.Afterall,justasErnestHemingway,thegreatAmericanwritersaid,“Iknowonlythatwhatismoraliswhatyoufeelgoodafterandwhatisimmoraliswhatyoufeelbadafter”.(272words)
2、图表作文:
经济问题,
2011年英语
(二)真题,冲刺班二十大必背范文之十二
Directions:
Writeanessaybasedonthefollowingchart.Inyourwriting,youshould
1)interpretthechartand
2)giveyourcomments.
Youshouldwriteatleast150words.
WriteyouressayonANSWERSHEET2.(15points)
2008、2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图
(从左至右:
国产品牌、日系品牌、美系品牌)
ThechartabovedemonstratesclearlythatsomechangeshavetakenplaceintermsofthecarmarketofChina.Baseduponthedataofthechart,onecanseethatthepercentageofdomesticcarshasbeenonarise,whilethesalespercentageofcarsmadeinJapanhaswitnessedbeenonadecline.Intheyearof2008,thepercentageofcarsmadeinChinawasnearly25%,whilewithinnomorethanayear,itwentuptonearly33%.ThepercentageofcarsmadeinJapanwas35%,whileitwentdownto25%in2009.
It’snodifficultyforustocomeupwithsomepossiblefactorstoaccountforthistrend.Atthetopofthelist,withtherapiddevelopmentofoureconomyandsociety,moreandmorepeopleprefercivilproductstoforeignones.It’sreportedthat,approximately55%offamiliesinChinesebigcitiesarefoundcarsmadeinChina.Inaddition,wemustadmitthatthegovernmentappealstoustosupportournativeindustries.Lastbutnottheleast,thefactcannotbeignoredthat,thecarsmadeinChinaareincreasinglyqualified.
Takingintoaccountwhathasbeenargued,wecancometotheconclusionthatthisestablishedtrendispositiveandthereforeacceptable.AndIamfirmlycertainthatthistrendwillcontinueintheyearstocome.(232words)
3、2000年真题:
环境问题,冲刺班二十大必背范文之十三
Directions:
A.Studythefollowingtwopicturescarefullyandwriteanessayinatleast150words.
B.YouressaymustbewrittenneatlyontheANSWERSHEET2.
C.Youressayshouldmeettherequirementsbelow:
1.Describethepictures.
2.Deducethepurposeofthepainterofthepictures.
3.Suggestcountermeasures.
Asisvividly/symbolicallyshown/described/depicted/illustrated/revealed/portrayedinthecartoons/drawings/portrayals/photos/photographs/pictures,withtherapid/speedysocialandeconomicdevelopment,thenumberoffisheshassharplydecreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyonefishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,butmanyfishing-boats.
Thepurpose/aimofthepicturesistoshowusthatdue/utmostattention/importance/significanceshould/must/hastobepaid/attachedtothedeclineofoceanresources.Owing/Dueto/Becauseofover-fishing,thenumberoffisheshasobviouslyshrunk.Ifweletthissituationgo/continueasitis,wedonotknowwherefishwillbeinthenear/forthcomingfuture.Bythattime,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.
Therefore/Hence/Accordingly,itisimperative/necessaryforustotakedrastic/effective/some/severalmeasures/steps/actions.Foronething,weshouldappealtoourgovernments/authoritiestomake/legislate/enact/issue/establishstrictlawsandregulationstocontrol/regulatecommercialfishing.Foranother,weshouldenhance/increase/cultivatetheawareness/senseofpeoplethattheoceanresourcesarevery/extremelyvital/essential/crucialtous.Onlyinthisway/bydoingsocanweprotectouroceanresources.Also,Iassume/maintain/reckonthatwehumanscanovercome/surmountthisdifficulty,andwewillhaveabright/brilliantfuture.
4.青年面对社会(自立)/两代关系:
2003年真题,二十大必背范文之十四
Directions:
Studythefollowingpicturescarefullyandwriteanessayabout200wordsbasedonthefollowing
1.describethesetofdrawingsandinterpretitsmeaning
2.pointoutitsimplicationsinourlife.
Thesetofdrawingsabovevividlydepictthedestinyofaflowerindifferentcircumstances.Asisshowninthefirstcartoon,theflowerisplacedinacomfortablegreenhousethatsheltersitfromthethreateninglightningandstorm.Withpropertemperature,moistureandfertilizer,theflowerisgrowinginfullbloom.Onthecontrary,whenremovedfromthegreenhouseandexposedtothedrivingrain,theflowersoonfadesandwithers,withthepetalsscatteredontheground.
Tobeginwith,thepurposeofthedrawingsistoshowusthattheflowergrowinginthegreenhousecannotwithstandthetestofthestorm,yetthesymbolicmeaningssubtlyconveyedshouldbetakenmoreseriously.Thedelicateflowerisnaturallyassociatedwithyoungpeople,tobespecific,theonlychildreninourcurrentsociety;thegreenhouseepitomizesparents’dotingcareandabundantmaterialsuppliesthatcanshieldthechildrenfromthestorms,ortheharshreality.Oncetheyoungpeoplebegintoseekindependenceandacceptchallengesfromtherealworld,theyarefoundtoospoiledtobestrongenoughinthefaceofdifficulties.
Accordingly,itisvitalforustoderivepositiveimplicationsfromthesethought-provokingdrawings.Ontheonehand,wecanfrequentlyusethemtoenlightentheyouthtobemoreindependentinlife.Ontheotherhand,parentsshouldbesensibleenoughtogivetheirchildrenmorefreedomtodealwithtroublesandproblems.Onlybyundergoingmorechallengesandtoilsinadversitycanyoungpeoplecultivatestrongpersonalityandability,andonlyinthiswaycantheybecomewinnersinthiscompetitiveworld.(271words)
5.青年面对社会(合作):
2008年真题,冲刺班二十大必背范文之十五
Directions:
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen
3)giveyourcomments.
YoushouldwriteneatlyonAnswerSheet2.
Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,twodisabledmenarerunningfastthroughteamworkalthougheachofthemhasonlyoneleg.Obviously,itisteamworkthatmakesitpossibleforthemtogoanywheretheywantto.
Simpleasitis,whatthepictureconveystousisthought-provoking.Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandsociety,competitionisincreasinglyfierce.Itisimpossibleforanyonetofinishaworkallbyhimself.Hence,peopleinmountingnumbersputgreatemphasisonteamwork.Infact,ithasbeenuniversallyacknowledgedthattheabilityofteamworkisthemostessentialqualificationthatanyonewhowantstoachievesuccessshouldpossess.
Accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakesomemeasurestoenhancethesenseofteamworkinoursociety.Weshouldbearinmindthatteamworkisofgreatsignificancetobothoursocietyandourselves.Everyoneshouldhavetheabilityofteamwork.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccessandonlyinthiswaycanoursocietybecomemoreharmonioustolivein.
6.流行文化(网络):
2009年真题,冲刺班二十大必背范文之十六
Directions:
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen
3)giveyourcommen