届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之七学案14页word版.docx

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2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟训练10篇之七

【一】

IaswellasmyparentsaregoingtoNewYorkCitythismonth.Ihadbeenlookingforwardtogoingthereforlongtime.Itisoneofthebeautifulcityallovertheworld.Therearemanyplacesofinterestswhereyoucanlearnsomethingyoucan’tlearnitinschool.I’dalsoliketoseetheEmpireStateBuilding.Unfortunately,theTwinTowersweredestroyedinSeptember11,2001,andIwouldhavethechancetoseethembyhimself.NowIamgettingreadyfortheexcitedtrip.Iamsureitwillbeanunforgettableexperience.

答案

…aregoingtoNewYorkCitythismonth.Ihad…amhave

…for^longtime.…beautifulcity…acities

placesofinterests…youcan’tlearnitinschool.interest删除it

…weredestroyedinSeptember11,2001,on

andIwouldhavethechancetoseethembyhimself.ormyself

NowIamgettingreadyfortheexcitedtrip.exciting

【二】

DearPeter,

Iamwritingtoaskthatyouareabletodomeafavor.Iwanttohaveapenfriend,hopefully,agirlinherearlytwenties,andwithinterestssimilarlytomine.Inmymind,heissomeoneinterestingintraveling,swimming,andplayingtabletennis.However,itwouldbebetterforhertohaveapetdogasIhavebeenkeptoneathomeforsometime.Withsuchapenfriend,IhopeIcansharewithherourexperiencesintraveling,takingcarepets,orwhateverwehaveincommon.IbelievedIwillimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearnmoreabouthercountries.Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyousoon.

Bestregards,

LiHua

答案

1.that-if\whether2.similarly-similar3.he-she4.Interesting-interested

5.However-Besides6.been7.care∧pets8.believed-believe

of

9.countries-country10hear-hearing

【三】

Wearenowlivinginainformationage,inwhichTV,cellsandtheWebarewide

used.Itseemthatmanypeoplecannotenjoythemselveswithoutit.However,ifI

weretogiveuponeofthem,1wouldturnoffTVratherthantoswitchoffmycellorcut

offtheInternet.IcoulddowithoutTVbecausefewshowstookmyfancyandtherearetoo

manycommercials.Besides,mostprogramsonTVareavailableelsewhere,either.Asfor

cellsandtheWeb,theyarelessnecessaryforme.Ineedacelltokeepintouchmy

friendandmyfamily.

答案

【四】

Itdoesn'tmattertofailaslongasyoudon'tgiveup.Tomyopinion,itishardtobesuccessful.Challengeswereanecessarypartofyourlifeasyougrowup.Andyouwon'tnecessarysucceedineverythingforthefirsttimeyoutry.That'sokay.Someofthemostsuccessfulpeopleintheworldaretheonewho'vehadthemostfailure.J．K.Rowling,whowroteHarryPotter,hadherfirstHarryPotterbookwasrejected12timesbeforeitwasfinallypublished.MichaelJordanwasremovedhishighschoolbasketballteam.Helosthundredsofgamesandmissthousandsofshotsduringhiscareer.Butheoncesaid,“Ihavefailedoverandoverandoveragaininmylife.Andthat'sbecauseIsucceed.”

答案

Itdoesn'tmattertofailaslongasyoudon'tgiveup.

myopinion,itishardtobesuccessful.Challenges

anecessarypartofyourlifeasyougrowup.Andyouwon't

succeedineverything

thefirsttimeyoutry.That'sokay.Someofthemostsuccessfulpeopleintheworldarethe

who'vehadthemost

.J．K.Rowling,whowroteHarryPotter,hadherfirstHarryPotterbook

rejected12timesbeforeitwasfinallypublished.MichaelJordanwasremoved

hishighschoolbasketballteam.Helosthundredsofgamesand

thousandsofshotsduringhiscareer.Butheoncesaid,“Ihavefailedoverandoverandoveragaininmylife.Andthat's

Isucceed.”

【五】

Withthedevelopmentofpeople’slivingcondition,moreandmorepeoplepossesstheirowncars.Someofusthinkitisgoodtoownacar.Forinstance,it’sconvenient,fastandcomfortablemeansoftransportation.Moreover,itshowsthatpeoplearebecomingricherandthecountryismuchmorestronger.Italsomaderelativebusinessesandindustriesdevelopfaster.

However,othershavedifferentopinions,thinkingthatcarsgiveupwastegasesandpollutetheenvironmentaround.Toomuchcarswillhavesomebadeffects,suchasmoreaccidentsandcrowdedness.Besides,lackparkinglotsisanotherbigproblem.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,weoughttothinkcarefulbeforebuyingcars.Asifwehavecars,wemayuseitless.

【答案】

1.condition改为conditions考查名词。

名词condition是可数名词，人们的生活条件有多种，所以使用复数形式conditions。

2.it’s后加a考查不定冠词。

本句中的it指“acar”汽车这种交通方式，这是单数名词，所以使用不定冠词a修饰名词meansoftransportation。

句意：

汽车是一个方便、迅速并且很舒适的交通方式。

3.muchmore删除more考查形容词比较级。

本句中stronger已经是比较级的形式了，所以more是多余的。

使用much修饰比较级。

4.made改为makes考查时态。

本文是一篇议论文，讨论汽车的话题，全文都使用一般现在时，所以本句使用makes。

5.up改为off考查固定搭配。

动词短语giveoff发出；giveup放弃；汽车发出废气并且污染了环境。

6.much改为many考查形容词。

形容词many修饰可数名词复数，much修饰不可数名词。

本句中的名词cars是可数名词复数修饰，所以使用many修饰cars。

7.lack改为lacking考查动名词。

本句中动名词短语lackingparkinglots在句中作主语，谓语动词使用单数形式。

8.careful改为carefully考查副词。

本句中分词carefully做状语修饰动词think。

9.As改为Even考查连词。

连词短语evenif即使，尽管；引导让步状语从句。

句意：

尽管我们有汽车，我还是少用。

10.it改为them考查代词。

本句中代词them指代复数名词cars，而it指代上文的单数名词。

【六】

Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaitedabustocomeatastop.30minutespast,butnobuscame.Bothupsetandannoyed,Idecidedtowalkonfeet.ButnosoonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIchosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforother30minutes.OnlythendoIrealizemyproblem.Beingimpatientwillpossiblewastealltheeffortthatwehaveputitin.NowwheneverIamclosetolosemypatience,I’llthinkofthisexperience.

【答案】

1.waited后加for2.past改为passed3.feet改为foot4.when改为than5.a改为the

6.other改为another7.do改为did8.possible改为possibly9.去掉it10.lose改为losing

试题难点分析：

本文中作者通过讲述自己等待公交车的事情，说明了耐心在我们生活中的重要作用。

1.waited后加for动词wait是不及物动词，不能直接加宾语，需要在其后加介词for。

2.past改为passed介词past是不能充当谓语动词的，应该使用动词pass，本文叙述的是过去发生的事情，所以使用一般过去式passed。

3.feet改为foot本句是一个固定搭配onfoot步行；句意：

又生气有难过，我决定步行前往。

4.when改为than本句是一个固定句式：

nosooner…than…一…就…；句意：

我一离开公交车就到了。

5.a改为the本句中bus前面有next修饰，说明特指下一班公交车，所以要使用定冠词the表示特指。

6.other改为another考查固定搭配。

短语“another+数字”表示“再…又…”。

句意：

如果我选择乘坐下一班公交车，我就不得不再等30分钟。

7.do改为did本文叙述的是过去发生的事情，所以都使用的是过去式。

8.possible改为possibly本句中使用副词possibly修饰谓语动词wastealltheeffort。

形容词possible通常充当定语或表语。

【七】

Hello,everyone.Inrecentyearspeoplearoundtheworldmayfeel itthattheclimatehasbeengettingwarmerandwarmer.Places whichusedtoberichsnowfallhavenosnowinwinters.However,insomeareasdryweatherlastedlongerandpeoplefindtheycan hardlyworkorfallsleep withoutairconditioners.Thesideeffectsofglobalwarmingarefrightened.Itmeltstheicecaps,causingsealevelstoriserapid.Italsodisturbsweatherpatterns,whereresultsinmanynaturaldisaster. Globalwarming hasanbadeffectonbothusand our next generations. Weshould devoteourselvestostopglobalwarming.

答案

1.it去掉2.rich—richin3.lasted—lasts4.sleep—asleep5.frightened—frightening6.rapid—rapidly7.where—which8.disaster—disasters9.an—a10.stop—stopping

【八】

DearTom,

Asweknow,thePalaceMuseumisalsocalltheForbiddenCity.Ittook200,000workersmorethan13yearsbuildtheForbiddenCity.TheForbiddenCitywasfinishedfor1420.Themostlargestmuseumintheworld,thePalaceMuseum,holdculturaltreasuresfromthepast5,000yearsofChinesehistory.Thecity’spalaceshave9,999roomsintotal.Chinesepeopletraditionalhavethoughtofnineasalucknumber.StudentsfromalloverChinanowvisitedingroupsatnochargeveryTuesday.

IhopeyoucancometoChinaandtakingalookatthismuseumwithourowneyes.

Bestwishes.

Yours,

LiMing

答案

DearTom,

Asweknow,thePalaceMuseumisalsocalltheForbiddenCity.Ittook200,000workersmorethan

called

13years^buildtheForbiddenCity.TheForbiddenCitywasfinishedfor1420.Themostlargestmuseum

Toin删除most

intheworld,thePalaceMuseum,holdculturaltreasuresfromthepast5,000yearsofChinesehistory.The

holds

city’spalaceshave9,999roomsintotal.Chinesepeopletraditionalhavethoughtofnineasalucknumber.

traditionallylucky

StudentsfromalloverChinanowvisiteditingroupsatnochargeeveryTuesday.

visit

IhopeyoucancometoChinaandtakingalookatthismuseumwithourowneyes.

takeyour

Bestwishes.

Yours.

LiMing

【九】

Lastsummerholidaymyunclecametovisitus.Atthefirstdayofhisvisit,wewenoutwithoneofmyfather'sfriendforlunchatanoutdoorcafé.Wewalkedalongthatafternoon，chatfreelyandhadgoodtimetogetherThenextdaymyunclepulledouhischildhoodpicturesandtoldquiteafewspeciallystoriesabouthischildhoodAlthoughwedidn'tspendmuchtimehavefuntogether,,butIneverfeltclosertohimatthatmoment.Hetalkedwithmeexcitinglyandgavemeagift.Iopenedthegiftcarefullyintheevening,thatwashispreciousdairy.Hepassedthemtomeandencouragedmetovaluethepast.

答案

Lastsummerholidaymyunclecametovisitus.Atthefirstdayofhisvisit,wewenoutwithoneofmy

On

father'sfriendforlunchatanoutdoorcafé.Wewalkedalongthatafternoon，chatfreelyandhad∧goodtimetogether

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Thenextdaymyunclepulledouhischildhoodpicturesandtoldquiteafewspeciallystoriesabouthischildhood

special

Althoughwedidn'tspendmuchtimehavefuntogether,butIneverfeltclosertohimatthatmoment.Hetalkedwith

having

meexcitinglyandgavemeagift.Iopenedthegiftcarefullyintheevening,thatwashispreciousdairy.Hepassed

excitedlywhich

themtomeandencouragedmetovaluethepast.

it

【十】

Doyouknowanythingaboutdrinks?

Tea,coffeebutcocoaarethethr