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届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之三十四13页word版

2019届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之三十四

【1】

Nowadaysmanysingersandbandshavelittletodowithgoodmusic.Theyknowlittleaboutwhatgoodmusicmean.Whatisthecause?

Sofarmostofthesesingershaveseemusicasa“job”becauseitisagoodsourceofmakingmoney.Andifyouhavegoodappearanceandsomeexpensiveclothestoshowoffatyourconcerts,thenyouvoiceisnotsoimportantasitshouldbe.Thepublicwillprefertoadmiremoreaboutthemostinterestedpartsofyourbodyandevenforgotthatyouaretheretoshowyourmusicskills,notyourdancing,whichisimportanttoo,butnotatsuchahighlevel.However,theyounggenerationshouldbeunderstandtalentandagoodvoicemattermoreintheirmusicalcareer.Alltheperformanceswhichhavelittletodowithgoodmusicfailinbewelcomedonstage.Ifayoungmanhasagreatvoiceandwantstobecomeasuccessfullysinger,heshouldtakesomespecialcoursesinthisareabecausetheywillhelphimimprovesingingabilities.

答案

Nowadaysmanysingersandbandshavelittletodowithgoodmusic.Theyknowlittleaboutwhatgoodmusic

.Whatisthecause?

Sofarmostofthesesingershave

musicasa“job”becauseitisagoodsourceofmakingmoney.Andifyouhave

goodappearanceandsomeexpensiveclothestoshowoffatyourconcerts,then

voiceisnotsoimportantasitshouldbe.Thepublicwillprefertoadmiremoreaboutthemost

partsofyourbodyandeven

thatyouaretheretoshowyourmusicskills,notyourdancing,whichisimportanttoo,butnotatsuchahighlevel.However,theyounggenerationshould

understandtalentandagoodvoicemattermoreintheirmusicalcareer.Alltheperformances

havelittletodowithgoodmusicfail

bewelcomedonstage.Ifayoungmanhasagreatvoiceandwantstobecomea

singer,heshouldtakesomespecialcoursesinthisareabecausetheywillhelphimimprovesingingabilities.

【2】

Ithinkhaveatleastonegoodteacherisveryimportant.Heorshecangivethemmotivationtodowell,eveninasubjectwemaynotalwaysfindeasy.Ifwegetonwellourteachers,learningbecomesafun.Ontheotherhand,ifwefindithardtolikeourteachers,lifeatschoolwillbeawfulbutwe'llfeelwecan'tsucceedatanything,nomatterwhathardwetry.TheteacherwhohelpsmemostwasmyEnglishteacher,MrsKelly.Shealwaysmadethelessonsinterested.Irememberwelaughedalotinherclassesandlookedforwardforthem.IhopethatIcanbeagoodteacherjustasherinthefuture.

答案

Ithink

atleastonegoodteacherisveryimportant.Heorshecangive

motivationtodowell,eveninasubjectwemaynotalwaysfindeasy.Ifwegetonwell

ourteachers,learningbecomes

fun.Ontheotherhand,ifwefindithardtolikeourteachers,lifeatschoolwillbeawful

we'llfeelwecan'tsucceedatanything,nomatter

hardwetry.Theteacherwho

memostwasmyEnglishteacher,MrsKelly.Shealwaysmadethelessons

.Irememberwelaughedalotinherclassesandlookedforward

them.IhopethatIcanbeagoodteacherjust

herinthefuture.

【3】

Inordertostrengtheningoursenseofsocialresponsibility,thestudentsinourschoollaunchedanactivityofdonatingbookstothechildreninpoorareas.WegatherinfrontoftheschoollibraryintheafternoonofJan.15th.Eachofthemgaveawaysomebookswhatwetreasured.Weevenwroteournamesandaddressonthefrontpages,hopetobecontactedandmakefriendswiththechildrenwhowouldreceivethebooks.Abouttwothousandbookswerecollectedinandsentaway.Anactivitynotonlyprovidedagoodchanceforusshowloveforothers,butalsohelpedustomakenewfriends.

答案

Inorderto

oursenseofsocialresponsibility,thestudentsinourschoollaunchedanactivityofdonatingbookstothechildreninpoorareas.We

infrontoftheschoollibrary

theafternoonofJan.15th.Eachof

gaveawaysomebooks

或

或

wetreasured.Weevenwroteournamesand

onthefrontpages,

tobecontactedandmakefriendswiththechildrenwhowouldreceivethebooks.Abouttwothousandbookswerecollected

andsentaway.

activitynotonlyprovidedagoodchanceforus

showloveforothers,butalsohelpedustomakenewfriends.

【4】

Thismorning,intheEnglishclass,ourteachershowedtousamovieABeautifulMind.ThemovietoldhimastoryaboutabrilliantprofessorJohnNash.Hemadesomanybrilliantachievementsinseveralfield.HefinallywontheNobelPrize,whatprovedthathisgreatbreakthroughhadgreataffectedpeople.Johnhadaseriousmentalillnessifhewasyoung,soherefusedtotakemedicinewhichcouldmakehismindthinkingslowly;hekeptdoinghisresearchwhilestrugglingwithhismentalillness.Theluckythingwasthathiswifesupportedhimalltime.Becauseofthesupportfromhisfamily,Johncanworkonhisjob.AfterwinningtheNobelPrize,hethankedhiswife.

答案

Thismorning,intheEnglishclass,ourteachershowed

usamovieABeautifulMind.Themovietold

astoryaboutabrilliantprofessorJohnNash.Hemadesomanybrilliantachievementsinseveral

.HefinallywontheNobelPrize,

provedthathisgreatbreakthroughhad

affectedpeople.Johnhadaseriousmentalillness

hewasyoung,

herefusedtotakemedicinewhichcouldmakehismind

slowly;hekeptdoinghisresearchwhilestrugglingwithhismentalillness.Theluckythingwasthathiswifesupportedhimall

time.Becauseofthesupportfromhisfamily,John

workonhisjob.AfterwinningtheNobelPrize,hethankedhiswife.

【5】

Afewdaysagowhentakingthewalkwithmymotherinthepark,Icameacrossaforeigner.Judgedbyhispuzzledexpression,Ithoughthemightinneedofhelp.SoIwentupandaskedwhetherIcouldhelphiminEnglish.Hetoldmehehadgotlost.Hehadturnedtoseveralpasserbyforhelp,andtheycouldn'tspeakEnglish.Thenhetoldmehisdestination.Fortunately,Iwasquitefamiliartotheplace.Inordertomakemyselfunderstand,Itoldhimhowtogothereasclearaspossible.AlthoughitwasthefirsttimethatIhavetalkedtoaforeignerfacetofacehetotallyunderstoodwhatIsaidandthankedforme.

答案

Afewdaysagowhentaking

walkwithmymotherinthepark,Icameacrossaforeigner.

byhispuzzledexpression,Ithoughthemight

inneedofhelp.SoIwentupandaskedwhetherIcouldhelphiminEnglish.Hetoldmehehadgotlost.Hehadturnedtoseveral

forhelp,

theycouldn'tspeakEnglish.Thenhetoldmehisdestination.Fortunately,Iwasquitefamiliar

theplace.Inordertomakemyself

，Itoldhimhowtogothereas

aspossible.AlthoughitwasthefirsttimethatI

talkedtoaforeignerfacetofacehetotallyunderstoodwhatIsaidandthanked

me.

【6】

Thefirstdaywegotohighschool,ourheadteachertoldusthenewswhichweneededtotakethemilitarytraining.Wewereallshockingatthenews,becauseofitwassohotoutside.Howterriblyitwas!

Thenextday,wemetourtraininginstructor,whowereyoungandhandsome.Hewasstrict,buthumorous,tellinghimjokeswhenwerested.Atnight,heaskedussingmilitarysongs.Weevencompetedwithotherteams.Thedaysofthemilitarytrainingswerebeautiful,andwefoundthetrainingwasnotthathard.Webecamestrongerandmadefriendstoourmilitaryinstructor.

答案

Thefirstdaywe

tohighschool,ourheadteachertoldusthenews

weneededtotakethemilitarytraining.Wewereall

atthenews,because

itwassohotoutside.How

itwas!

Thenextday,wemetourtraininginstructor,who

youngandhandsome.Hewasstrict,buthumorous,telling

jokeswhenwerested.Atnight,heaskedus

singmilitarysongs.Weevencompetedwithotherteams.Thedaysofthemilitary

werebeautiful,andwefoundthetrainingwasnotthathard.Webecamestrongerandmadefriends

ourmilitaryinstructor.

【7】

Whiletakingawalkwithmypetdogthismorning,Ifoundthemiddleagedmannearbywasshoutingonhisphone.Obvious,hehadabadday.Beforeheleft,Inoticedhiskeyswereontheground.SoIimmediatelypickedupandranawaytofindtheman.Severalminuteslater,Ifoundhim,whomwasstillshoutingonhisphonebesidehiscar.Iwalkedtohimandaskedifhecouldholdonalittleseconds.Atfirst,hewasangryaboutmyinterrupt.ThenIshowedtohiskeysandexplainedthewholething.Onheardmywords,heimmediatelyhanguphisphoneandapologizedforhisrudeness.

答案

Whiletakingawalkwithmypetdogthismorning,Ifound

middleagedmannearbywasshoutingonhisphone.

，hehadabadday.

heleft,Inoticedhiskeyswereontheground.SoIimmediatelypicked

upandranawaytofindtheman.Severalminuteslater,Ifoundhim,

wasstillshoutingonhisphonebesidehiscar.Iwalkedtohimandaskedifhecouldholdona

seconds.Atfirst,hewasangryaboutmy

.ThenIshowed

hiskeysandexplainedthewholething.On

mywords,heimmediately

uphisphoneandapologizedforhisrudeness.

【8】

Yesterday,asIwasqueuingatthecheckoutatastore,therewasanoldladyinthefrontofmeinline.SheseemedveryconfusingwhenthecashieraskedherpayUS$38.ShehadaboutUS$5inherwallet.Thecashiertoldherthatshecouldnotbuytheitemsbecauseshedidn'thaveenoughmoney.So,ItoldthecashierIwouldpayforthatshebought.Afterwards,Ipaidforalltheitems.WhenIgotoutside,theladywasstandingthere.WhileIwastalkingabouther,herdaughterappeared.ShetoldmethathermotherhadAlzheimer'sdisease.Thenshenoticedthathermotherhadthreebagofgroceriesandwonderedhowshemanagedtopayforthemwithenoughmoney.ItoldherthatIhadpaidforit