高考英语专题六 短文改错.docx

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高考英语专题六短文改错

短文改错专项训练

（一）：

近年浙江省高考真题实战

1.（2015浙江）Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemorning,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Onrightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.

2.（2014浙江）IwastakingatraintoLondon’sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.

Beforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckouttickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn’tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.

Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yet,theyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.

3.（2013年浙江）HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?

Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofindotherone.”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowIwillneverfallsleep.Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.

4.（2012年浙江）Twoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBraziland1rentedforacar.Unfortunate,1hadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.Icalledmyparents,so1didnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,Itoldtheminterestedstoriesandhow1wasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.

5.（2011年浙江）Iwasplayingatmycousinhouse.Sincehisfamilywasrichthanmine,hehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneonparticularI'dalwayswanted.Iputintomypocketwhenhewasn'tlooking.Iguessed,evenatthatage,Iwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain;Iwouldalwaysknow,I'ddonesomethingwrong.Lateon,myauntdrovemehome.Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.Sheknowswhathadhappened,butshethankedmeandevermentioneditagain.

6.（2010年浙江）Aftershopping,MotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.InoticeMotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandyoungcouple.Theyatesilently,anditwasclearlythatthingswerenotgoingwell.Asweleft,Motherstoppedontheirtable."Excuseme,"shesaid,putherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwoman."Youremindmesomanyofmymother.MayIhug（拥抱）you?

"Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedtoit.Afterweleft,Isaid,"Thatwasveryniceofyou,Mother.SoIdidn'tthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.""Neitherdidme,"saidMothercheerfully.

7.（2009年浙江）OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend,atrunkcametoastopbesidesus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough.Istoodthereandcouldn’tbelieveinthatacompletestrangerissothoughtful.Themaninsisted,soIgratefulacceptedtheoffer,thankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad.Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimself,andhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse.Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn.

短文改错专项训练

（二）：

2015各省高考真题练手

（2015陕西卷）

Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.

Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”

Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!

（2015四川卷）

Hi,Janice,

It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It'sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime—wastingactivity!

Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?

Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?

Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.

Grave（2015新课标卷1）

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we‟lllivetoregretit.

（2015新课标卷2）

One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again!

 Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

改错口诀：

代词格，连词悟，还要注意形和副，

名词爱考数与格，冠词在前错多少，

动词时态和语态，非谓搭配细辨别，

介词多半考搭配，多用漏用想周到，

句法涉及到一致，从句多考关系词，

语法句法均未错，逻辑推理想清楚。

短文改错专项训练（三）：

明确考点趋势

题目展示：

【2015·浙江】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：

在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：

在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

例如：

Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospent∧weekendwithyou.Luckily

the

Iwascompletelyfreethen,soI’lltosay“yes”.I’llarriveinBristolataround8:

00p.m.

am

inFridayevening.

on

Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemorning,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Onrightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.

1.OnceIhadtoreadatext-bookwhichwassoexpensiveformetobuyit.Icouldn’tobtainitfromthelibraryandanonlycopyIcouldfindwasinacertainbookshop.SoIwillgoalongtotheshopeveryafternoonandreadalittleofthebookinatime.Oneday,therefore,Iwasdisappointedtofindthebookmissingfromitsusuallyplace.Hewasabouttoleavewhentheowneroftheshopwavedatme.Expectingtobetoldoff,Iwenttowardshim.Tomysurprise,theownerpointedtothebookwhichplacedinacorner.“Iputitthereincaseanyoneshouldbuyit.”Hesaidkindly,leftmetocontinuemyread

ing.

2.Ihaveagoodfriendwho'snameisHanMeimei.Sheisourmonitorandoneoftheexcellentstudentsinourclass.Althoughsheisclever,butsheworksveryhard.Wehavealotoncommonandhavealottotalkabout.Oneeveningshetoldmethatsomethinghappenedwhenherparentswasout.Shewasdoingherhomeworkswhenshesmeltsomethingburning.Shestoppedlookoutofthewindowandfindacloudofsmokecomingoutofherneighbor'shouse.Shecalled119immediate.Tenminuteslater,thefiremencameandputoutfire.Hisneighborwasverythankfulforherhelp.

3.LastweekIwenttovisittomyformerneighbor,MrYang.HeandIusedtolivingnexttoeachotherformanyyears.Abouthalfayearago,anordercamewhichtheoldbuilding,alongwithmanyothersimilarones,weregoingtobepulleddowntomakeroomforamainstreet.

SoIhadtomoveapart.Mr.Yangnowlivesinthesuburbsnearabeautifulpark.Hisnewapartmentismuchbigthanbefore.Theonlyproblemisthatittookquitealongtimetogettothedowntownarea.Therefore,Mr.Yangdoesn’tseemtoworryaboutthelongdistance.Hesaysthatnewsubwaylineistobebuiltinafewyearandheissurelifewillbebetterinthefuture.

4.Patienceisofgreatimportanceino