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基本的句型写作方法-素材及写作指导
基本的句型写作方法
１、不要连续使用几个简单句，要学会使用复杂句
a）
Teenagers
are
pressured
by
school
work.
They
are
also
encouraged
by
their
peers.
Under
such
circumstances,
they
resort
to
smoking.
But
sometimes
they
feel
a
little
guilty.
b）Pressured
by
school
work
and
encouraged
by
their
peers,
teenagers
often
resort
to
smoking,
thought
they
feel
a
little
guilty
sometimes.
（非谓语形式作为开端，增加了句子结构的复杂性）
下面的是顶级的复杂句：
a）
College
students
now
are
primarily
interested
in
grades
and
economic
success.
They
are
expected
to
cheat
on
exams
more
frequently.
This
is
not
like
those
who
graduated
10
years
ago.
They
are
only
concerned
with
their
own
personal
future.
They
consider
little
problems
of
the
society.
All
these
are
reported
by
a
recent
study.
b）
those
who
graduated
10
years
ago,
they
are
more
concerned
with
their
own
personal
future
than
with
problems
of
society.
２、不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词开头
a）
Many
people
think
birth
control
is
quite
necessary
in
China.
b）
It
is
widely（commonly）
thought/believed/held/accepted）
that
birth
control
is
quite
necessary
in
China.
a）
More
and
more
people
agree
（realize/are
aware）
that
women
should
enjoy
full
equality
with
men.
b）
There
is
a
growing
agreement
（realization/awareness）
that
women
should
enjoy
full
equality
with
men.
a）
Many
Chinese
people
have
gone
to
the
U.S.
in
the
past
15
years.
b）
（9月11号witnessed
the
clapse1949
saw
the
founding
of
…见证了…）
a）
We
almost
forget
this
event.
b）
This
event
is
now
almost
fading
from
our
memory.
（逐渐消退）
a）
Students
should
certainly
make
continuous
efforts.
b）
on
the
part
of
=of
a）
We
easily
drew
the
conclusion
through
the
investigation.
b）
The
investigation
easily
led
us
to
the
conclusion.
Hungry
to
discover
what
the
forest
was
like,
the
group
of
up
to
10
young
people,
led
by
two
dogs,
started
their
first
exploration.
It
seems
that
our
idea
of
what
the
language
is
is
something
that
we
learn
at
the
age
of
five.
It
will
prove
to
him
that
it
is
not
easy
as
he
might
think
to
keep
the
rules
of
grammar.
３、不要千篇一律的使用主动态
a）
We
may
think
more
of
the
elderly
who
live
apart
from
their
children.
b）
More
thoughts
may
be
given
to
the
elderly
who
live
apart
from
their
children.
４、不要总是用ifbecausethen这样的句子，口语味道太浓,要注意使用书面英语。
a）
If
you
compare
bicycles
with
cars
carefully,
you
will
find
bicycles
are
superior
to
cars.
b）
Careful
comparison
of
bicycles
with
cars
will
show
the
superiority
of
the
former
over
the
latter.（作为单词来记）
a）
If
we
only
apply
book
knowledge,
we
will
not
get
good
results.
b）
The
application
of
book
knowledge
alone
won’t
bring
you
good
results.
a）
If
we
can
better
understand
the
greater
pressure
of
population
growth,
we
will
have
a
correct
attitude
towards
family
planning.
b）
A
better
understanding
of
the
greater
pressure
of
population
growth
is
essential
to
a
correct
attitude
towards
family
planning.（套话）
a）
When
a
woman
sees
that
she
is
going
to
be
laid
off,
she
begins
to
worry
all
day
and
night.
b）
The
mere
prospect
of
lay-off
would
set
a
woman
to
worry
all
day
and
night.
５、不要对动词过分依赖，要学会用名词结构来表达意思。
a）
The
style
of
living
has
become
more
and
more
popular
and
accepted
by
more
and
more
and
more
young
people.
b）
The
style
of
living
has
found
its
growing
popularity
and
acceptance
among
young
people.
a）
It
is
time
for
us
to
revise
educational
system
and
then
provide
it
to
our
society.
b
）It
is
time
for
us
to
provide
our
society
a
revised
educational
system.
a
）
If
we
are
watching
too
much
TV,
our
reading
ability
will
be
seriously
affected.
b）
Heavy
exposure
to
TV
will
exert
an
negative
effect
on
out
reading
ability.
a）
If
we
don’t
recognize
the
serious
problem
of
growing
population,
we
will
make
a
big
mistake.
６、不要总是用肯定句来表达，要学会用否定句来表达肯定的意思。
即双重否定＝肯定
a）
Every
young
boy
and
girl
wants
to
earn
a
little
money
to
help
cover
higher
college
cost.
b）
There
is
hardly
a
young
boy
and
girl
who
don’t
want
to
earn
a
little
money
to
help
cover
higher
college
cost.
a）
Whenever
you
pick
up
a
newspaper,
you
will
always
find
advertisements.
b）
It
is
impossible
to
pick
up
a
newspaper
without
finding
advertisements.
a）
Gathering
around
and
listening
to
mother
or
father
read
a
good
story
is
the
best
pastimes
to
bring
a
family
closer
together.
b）
Few
pastimes
bring
a
family
closer
together
than
gathering
around
and
listening
to
mother
or
father
read
a
good
story.
a）
Food
is
the
most
basic
issue
to
individual
and
national
survival.
b）
No
issue
is
as
basic
to
individual
and
national
survival
as
food.
７、恰当使用排比、平行句（有修辞效果，一次作文最多用一次）
a）
I
am
in
favor
of
equal
rights
for
women.
I
think
women
should
especially
have
the
right
to
compete
with
men
for
jobs
on
equal
terms.
They
should
get
the
same
pay
as
men
for
the
same
job.
They
should
also
have
equal
opportunities
for
promotion.
b）
I
am
in
favor
of
equal
rights
for
women,
especially
the
right
to
compete
with
men
for
jobs
on
equal
terms,
the
right
to
get
the
same
pay
as
men
for
the
same
job,
and
the
right
to
equal
opportunities
for
promotion.
a）
The
nationwide
controversy
over
the
current
reforms
will
test
the
courage
of
our
people.
Though
the
controversy
we
can
also
see
the
determination
of
our
government.
b）
The
nationwide
controversy
over
the
current
reforms
will
test
the
courage
of
our
people
and
the
determination
of
our
government.
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