英语雅思大作文.ppt

英语雅思大作文.ppt

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IELTS,大作文写作手法IDA,IELTS,IELTS,目录,Examinersassesstheanswersaccordingtothesecriteria,TaskResponse（i.e.howfullyandappropriatelythecandidatehasansweredallpartsofthetask;theextenttowhichthecandidatesideasarerelevant,developedandsupported;theextenttowhichthecandidatespositionisclearandeffective）,Examinersassesstheanswersaccordingtothesecriteria,Coherence连贯性andCohesion衔接（i.e.howwelltheinformationandideasareorganisedandpresentedi.e.paragraphing;howwelltheinformationislinked）,Examinersassesstheanswersaccordingtothesecriteria,LexicalResource词汇资源（i.e.therangeofvocabularyused,howaccuratelyitisusedandhowappropriateitisforthetask）,Examinersassesstheanswersaccordingtothesecriteria,GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy（i.e.therangeofstructuresused,howaccuratelytheyareusedandhowappropriatetheyareforthetask）,段落的组织,250字，4段至5段话，4段更容易操作第一段：

2至4句第二段：

4至6句第三段：

4至6句第四段：

2至4句Introduction:

stateyourviewBody:

supportyourviewwithreasons,arguments,examplesConclusion:

restateyourview主体段落：

Topicsentence+supportingsentences,Argumentativedevices-Waystodevelopaparagraph（论证方法）,exemplification（举例说明），explanation（解释说明），causeandeffect（因果论证），comparisonandcontrast（比较与对比）concessionandrefutation（让步与反驳），classification（分类）,Exemplification,Example:

aspecificfact,idea,person,orthingthatisusedtoexplainorsupportageneralidea,ortoshowwhatistypicalofalargergroup举例相关关联词：

ForexampleForinstanceTake（Consider）asanexampleAcaseinpointsuchasincluding,Somepeoplethinkthatanimalsshouldbetreatedasfriends.Yetothersonlyconsideranimalsassourcesoffoodandclothing.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

SampleAnswerThereisagrowingtendencynowadaysforsomepeopletotreatanimalsaslivingmeatandwalkingfur.Thisleadstothecruelslaughterofanimalsallovertheworldeveryyear.Yet,inmyopinion,insteadofkillinganimals,humanbeingsshouldtreatthemastheirfriends.Itisanundeniablefactthatanimalsplayavitalroleinmaintainingthesubtlebalanceoftheearthsecologicalsystem.Thelackofthisessentialpartwillbringaboutthedestructionofthewholeworld.Therefore,tosomeextent,killinganimalsisequaltodiggingourowngraves.Forthousandsofyears,manyanimalshavegivenloyalservicetohumans.Pigeonsconveymessagesinwartime,anddogshelptodetectcrime.Evenpigs,whichmanypeoplethinkarethemoststupidanimals,areusedinthebattleagainstdrugs.Thereisnodoubtthatourliveswouldbefarlessconvenientwithoutalittlehelpfromouranimalfriends.Animalsalsohelphumansinaspiritualway.Thereisnothingbetterthankeepingacatoradogifyouwantyourkidstobemoreindependentandresponsible.Itisalsonotedthatseniorcitizenslivelongeriftheykeeppetsaftertheirretirement.Tosumup,animalsarehumanbeingsfriends.Thosewhoregardanimalsasmerelyasourceoffoodandclothingshouldatleastbearonethinginmind:

Beingkindtoanimalsisbeingkindtoourselves.Therefore,forourownfuturebenefit,pleasetreatanimalswithloveandcare.,Topicsentence:

Agrowingnumberofenvironmentalproblemsarenolongerconfinedtoacertainregionorcountry.Forexample,oilspillscanpolluteinternationalwatersandthelossoftheozonelayermayleadtothemeltingoficecapsandglaciers,whichinturn,mayraisesealevelsworldwide.,练习,Topicsentence:

TheadvertisementsonTV,newspaperandotherkindsofmediamayconfuseconsumersandmakethemrushtopurchaseproductswhichtheydontreallyneed.Takethecellphoneforexample.Itsfunctionsandpracticaluseareoftenexaggeratedinadvertisements.Whatsmore,theadvertisementsevencreateafashionableatmosphereforcellphoneswhichappealstoyoungpeopletochangetheirphonescontinuouslywhileignoringthebasicserviceofcellphonesisjusttomakeaphonecall.,Explanation,解释：

ItmeansThatistosayInotherwordsToputitanotherwayBythatImean,Ibelievethetraditionalfamily,withbothparentsprovidingemotionalsupportandrole-modelsfortheirchildren,isthemostsatisfactorywayofbringingupchildren.Educationafterbirthplaysasignificantroleinonesdevelopment.Education,whichhelpschildrendeveloptheirthinkingandaccumulatetheirknowledge,isadecidingfactorofonessuccess.Forexample,ahigh-schoollevelpersoncommonlymaynotsucceedtotheextentofapersonwhohasreceivedauniversityeducation.Thisisnotonlybecauseofthegreaterbreadthofknowledgeacquired,butalsoduetoamorecriticalandfocusedwayofthinkingthatisimpartedandrefinedduringonessenioreducation.Ithinkanabilitytokeepclearperspectivesinlifeisamoreessentialfactorinachievinghappiness.BythatImeananabilitytohaveaclearsenseofwhatisimportantinourlives（thewelfareofourfamilies,thequalityofourrelationships,makingotherpeoplehappy,etc.）andwhatisnot（aproblematwork,gettingannoyedabouttrivialthings,etc.）,CauseandEffect,Cause:

becauseofasaresultofduetothankstoowingtobecauseassinceforResult:

asaresultasaconsequenceaccordinglyinthiswaythushencesotherefore,练习,妇女不应该当兵，因为她们的体力不如男子。

WomenshouldbejoininthearmyWomenshouldnotbeamemberofthearmyWomenshouldnottakeupamilitarycareerbecausetheyarenotasstrongasmenbecausetheyareinferiortomeninphysicalstrengthbecauseoftheirphysicalinadequacies,Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecausesofthis?

Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?

范文：

PoorstudentbehaviorseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadproblemandIthinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.Inmanycountries,thebirthrateisdecreasingsothatfamiliesaresmallerwithfewerchildren.Thesechildrenareoftenspoilt,notintermsofloveandattentionbecauseworkingparentsdonothavethetimeforthis,butinmorematerialways.Theyareallowedtohavewhatevertheywant,regardlessofprice,andtobehaveastheyplease.Thismeansthatthechildrengrowupwithoutconsiderationforothersandwithoutanyunderstandingofwheretheirstandardoflivingcomesfrom.Whentheygettoschoolagetheyhavenotlearntanyselfcontrolordiscipline.Theyhavelessrespectfortheirteachersandrefusetoobeyschoolrulesinthewaythattheirparentsdid.,ComparisonandContrast,similarlylikewiseinthesamemannerinthesamewaybutwhilewhereaswhilstonthecontraryincontrastbycontrastontheotherhandinsteadratherconversely,Planeisthefastestmeansoftransportation.Itusedtotakeusabout10hourstogotoaplacebycar.Now,wecangothereinnomorethan1hourbyair.Whatusedtotakeus10hoursbycarcannowbecoveredwithin1hourbyair.,ConcessionandRefutation,althoughwhileadmittedlyitistruethatitisoftenthecasethatbuthowevernevertheless,Althougholdpeopleareunlikelytofacephysicallychallengingtasks,therearemanyjobsthatareespeciallysuitableforoldpeople,suchasjobsthatcallformoreexperienceandwisdomthanphysicalpower.Withtheirrichexperienceinbothworkandlife,manyoldpeoplewouldmakegoodconsultants,instructors,coaches,doctorsandpsychologists,tomentiononlyafew.Girlsalsoappeartobelessaggressivethanboys.Inadulthood,itismen,notwomen,whoprovetobetheaggressorsincrimeandinwar.Obviously,inraisingchildren,amorepatient,gentlemannerispreferabletoamoreaggressiveone.Althoughtherearecertainlygentlemenandaggressivewomen,byandlarge,femalesarelesslikelytoresorttoviolenceinattemptingtosolveproblems.,论证方法总结及分类论证,妇女是否应当参军？

Inmanycountries,womenarenotabletojoininthearmytoshareequalbasiswithmenandsomepeoplethinkthatonlymenshouldbeamemberofthearmy,navyandairforce.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

应当；不应当；主体客体分类Whyshould?

战争的状态和要求Thewaybattlesarefoughthasundergonedramaticchangesandsowomenhaveanequalbasisasmen.参军的职责Justasmenhavetheresponsibilityofbringingupchildrenwithwomen,sowomenshouldbeartheburdenofprotectingtheirowncountrybyjoininginthearmy.Whyshouldnot?

（军人必备的条件？

物质/非物质？

）妇女体力不行（妇女不应当当兵是因为她们的体力不如男子。

）男女分工不同Culturallyspeaking,womenarenotfitforthepositionofkilling.分类：

主体/客体主体分类：

什么妇女？

客体分类：

当什么兵？

完整文章分析：

Manypeoplebelievethatwomenmakebetterparentsthanmenandthatthisiswhytheyhavethegreaterroleinraisingchildreninmostsocieties.Othersclaimthatmenarejustasgoodaswomenatparenting.Writeanessayexpressingyourpointofview.,SampleAnswer:

Theviewthatwomenarebetterparentsthanmenhasshownitselftobetruethroughouthistory.Thisisnottosaythatmenarenotofimportanceinchild-rearing;indeed,theyaremostnecessaryifchildrenaretoappreciatefullytherolesofbothsexes.Butwomenhaveproventhemselvessuperiorparentsasaresultoftheirconditioning,theirlessaggressivenatureandtheirgenerallybettercommunicationskills.Fromthetimetheyarelittlegirls,femaleslearnaboutnurturing.Firstwithdollsandlaterperhapswithyoungerbrothersandsisters,girlsaregiventheroleofcareer.Girlsseetheirmothersinthesamerolesandsoitisnaturalthattheyidentifythisasafemaleactivity.Boys,incontrast,learncompetitiverolefarremovedfromwhatitmeanstonurture.Whileboysmaydreamofadventures,girlsconditioningmeanstheytendtoseethefutureintermsofraisingfamilies.Girlsalsoappeartobelessaggressivethanboys.Inadulthood,itismen,notwomen,whoprovetobetheaggressorsincrimeandinwar.Obviously,inraisingchildren,amorepatient,gentlemannerispreferabletoamoreaggressiveone.Althoughtherecertainlyexistgentlemenandaggressivewomen,byandlarge,femalesarelesslikelytoresorttoviolenceinattemptingtosolveproblems.Finally,womentendtobebettercommunicat