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一、画面定格
01人物动作的画面定格
如：
（2020杭州高级中学等五校联考）Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingforthe rushing holidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedher mother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother’sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.
如：
Hishardworkpaidoff!
Holdingthe sodatin firmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora’shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift. Speechlessand happy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.
如：
Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface，“No.”Godfeltabitrelievedandsaid，“Tomorrowyoucanbecome humanagain.”Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobeabutterflyfortherestofmylife...”Thenthebutterflywouldstaytogetherwithherloverforever.Onthetopofthemountain,sheseemedto enjoy thesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（1）Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.
天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。
黎明已经来临。
（黎明到来的画面）
（2） Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshoretothehorizon.
黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。
（黎明到来的画面）
（3） ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。
（美好日落时的画面）
（4）Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。
（日落时的画面）
（5）Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.
被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。
无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。
（描写夜空的画面）
（6）Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.
抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。
我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。
我的意识随着热度而衰退。
我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。
（特殊寓意）
（7）Dottedwithglittering stars,thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。
（神话般美丽的夜空画面）
（8）Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。
一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
（雨后清新的画面）
Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。
（雨水来临的画面）
（9）TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。
偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。
（描写落叶的画面）
二、对话收尾
（1） Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearchforhimandhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheirlastnames.“Hedoesremembermeandmyolderbrotherandhetoldmethathe’sbeenlookingforuseversincewelost contact，”hesaid.ChestersaidhisbrotherhassinceflowntoColombiatobe reunited withUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthereunionwithhisfatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid，“Igotfamilyeverywhere,soitmightleadtomanymoretripsnow.”
（2） WhatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthatShavialsomovesothers.Nina’sfamilyhadmovedtoabigger apartment.“I’veheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs’loyalty,butIneverimaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappentome.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdogtraveledsuchalongdistancetofindus，” saidNina，“Iwouldnevergivethiskindof friend awayagain.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis—animalsarethemostdevotedandloving creatures.They need ourloveandcare.”
（3） HerhusbandspoketothedirectorofHeightvale,DoloresHaworth. Soonsheofferedhima job workingforthecompany.Shesaid，“Hejusthadabrilliantworkingattitudeandisdefinitelythetypeofemployeewearelookingfor.Iwastold,‘Ifhedoesthisforfree,imaginehis jobs ifhewasbeingpaid.’Imethimandhewasalovelyandpoliteyoungmanandhehasalreadystartedworkingforus.”
（4）…Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.JackaskedPaisley,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithme？
”Shepattedawaytheashesonhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying，“Yes!
Forme，itisnotasufferingtolive.”
三、主题升华
（1） Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel. Tomethereisnoneotherthanmymom.Shehas beauty, brains,andoneofthebestheartsIknow.Withoutherinmylife,IwouldhavenoideawhetherIcanbe afamousdancer.Someday, whenIamolder andhavechildrenofmyown,IhopeIcanbejustasgreataparentasmymom.（母爱的深远影响）
（2）….Iamextremelyunhappyaboutit.Ithinkmoneydoesn’tequalhappiness.Andfreelife stylealsodoesn’tequalhappiness.Therealhappinessisthateveryoneloveseachother,anddoeseverythingusefulforoursociety.Mostofmyclassmatessupportme.Butsomeofthemthinkmoneyiseverything. Inmyopinion,moneycan’ttaketheplaceofeverything,suchasyourlife,yourtimeandyourhappiness.（表达自己的价值观）
（3）“Tworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon，”theteacheranswered.“First,you’vealmostmasteredoneofthemostdifficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second,theonlyknowndefenseforthatmoveisforyouropponenttograbyourleftarm.Itisyourbiggestweaknessthatmakesyouwinthematch.Asaproverbsays,‘Everycoinhastwosides.’Makingfulluseofyourstrengthisyourachievement.Pleaserememberthatinnocasewillyougiveupespeciallyintrouble.Godisfairtoeveryone.”（借用名言警句来升华主题）
四、结尾留白
（1） Whileshewrappedthem,ItookadeepbreathandaskedJoy,“Doyouhavedinnerplans?
” IexplainedthatI’dliketowaitabitbeforeIwentbacktothe hospital –gaveGraceandherhusbandsometimealonewithbaby.“Wouldyoubeinterestedinjoiningmeinabitetoeat?
”Iasked.“I’dloveto,”shereplied,hereyessparklinglike diamonds.And,thiswasthebeginningoftheendtomymonthsofheartbreakfollowingBetsy’sdeath.（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间）
（2）Thebeggarhesitatedforamoment,thenhedecidedtoopenit.Hedeclaredaloud,“Whocares?
Hewantedmetohaveitanyway.Imightaswellenjoyitnow.”Withthat,heunwrappedthewhitetissuepaper,buttohissurprise, therewasnohardrock candy inside.Instead,intohisfingersfellashinywhitepearlworththousandsofdollars.
五、首尾呼应
（1） 2017年浙江高考题
开头：
Ihadaninteresting childhood.Itwasfilledwithsuprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefaimlytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.
结尾：
Despitemom'sbeingabsent-mindedandforgetful,
shewasstillakindandnicemom.
（2）2018年浙江高考题
开头：
Itwassummerandmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.
结尾：
NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerousvacationbefore.ThespecialtriptotheWildWestwasdeeplyengravedinmymind.
（3）2016年浙江高考题
开头：
AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.
结尾：
Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughingwheneverhelookedbackonthishilarious搞笑的experience.
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