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《美国大学英语写作》课后习题答案PART1
ANSWERKEY
PartOne:
EssayWriting
1AnIntroductiontoWriting
Activity(PointandSupportinaParagraph),pages5–6
Point:
Therearedrawbackstomoviegoing.
Support:
1.Inconvenience
b.Longtimetofindparkingspotandlongwalktotheater
d.Stickyfloor
3.Othermoviegoers
a.Runningkids
b.Laughing,shoutingteenagers
Activity(IntroductoryParagraph),8
1.c
2.b
3.a
4.a.Inconvenienceofgoingout
b.Temptationsofthetheater
c.Behaviorofsomepatrons
Activity(Body:
SupportingParagraphs),9–10
1.Tobeginwith,Ijustdon’tenjoythegeneralhassleoftheevening.
2.b.Parkinglotisalwaysjammed
d.Ticketsmaysellout,andtheateriscrowded
e.Ticketscostupto$8each
3.Second,thetheaterofferstemptingsnacksthatIreallydon’tneed.
4.b.2)chocolatebars
3)MilkDuds
5.Manyoftheotherpatronsareevenmoreofaproblemthantheconcessionstand.
6.a.Littlekidsraceupanddowntheaisles
b.Teenagerstalkbacktothescreen,whistle,makefunnynoises
Activity(ConcludingParagraph),10
1.a
2.c
ReviewActivities,18–20
Answerswillvary.
2TheWritingProcess
Activities(Freewriting,Questioning,MakingaList,Clustering,ScratchOutline),25–31
Answerswillvary.
Activity(WritingaFirstDraft),33
1.thesis5.specific
2.first6.bs
3.equiped(otheranswersarepossible)7.conclusion
4.secondandthird
Activity(RevisingwithaSecondDraft),36–37
1.Second5.watchingwhatIkeepinthehouse
2.however6.comfortableseats
3.unity...MyfriendsareasbadasIam.7.As
4.support...snackslikeceleryandcarrot8.jumpintomyhands
sticks...noicecreaminthefreezer...9.disgusted
drippingwithbutter...riskpullingout
myfillingsasIchew
Activity(TakingaWritingInventory),39–40
Answerswillvary.
Activity(Prewriting),41–43
L,Q,SO,C,F
Activity1(Outlining),43–45
1.Thesis:
Myhighschoolhadthreeproblemareas.
a.Students
(1)Involvedwithdrugs
(2)Formedcliques
b.Teachers
(1)Unwillingtohelpafterclass
(2)Muchtoostrict
c.Buildings
(1)Leakyceilings
(2)Ill-equippedgym
2.Thesis:
Workingasadishwasherinarestaurantwasmyworstjob.
a.Workingconditions
(1)Heatinkitchen
(2)Noisyworkarea
b.Hours
(1)Ten-hourshifts
(2)Hourschangedeveryweek
c.Pay
(1)Minimumwage
(2)Nobonusforovertime
3.Thesis:
Joininganaerobicsclasshasmanybenefits.
a.Socialbenefits
(1)Makenewfriends
(2)Meetinterestinginstructors
b.Mentalbenefits
(1)Reducesmentalstress
(2)Improvesself-image
c.Physicalbenefits
(1)Strengthensheart
(2)Tonesmuscles
4.Thesis:
Myfavoritetimesinschoolwerethedaysbeforeholidayvacations.
a.Lighterworkload
(1)Lessworkinclass
(2)Lesshomework
b.Friendlieratmosphere
(1)Teachersmorerelaxed
(2)Studentshappyaboutvacation
c.Specialevents
(1)Peprallies
(2)Holidayconcerts
Activity2(Outlining),45–47
Thesis:
Moreandmore,theinventionsofmoderntechnologyseemtobecuttingusofffromcontactwithourfellowhumanbeings.
Firsttopicsentence:
Theworldofbusinessisoneareainwhichtechnologyisisolatingus.
Support:
2.Workers’salariesareautomaticallycreditedtotheirbankaccounts.
3.Personalbankingisbecomingadetachedprocess.
a.Customersinteractwithmachinesratherthanpeople.
b.Someloansareacceptedorrejectedbycomputers,notloanofficers.
Secondtopicsentence:
Anotherareathattechnologyischangingisentertainment.
Support:
1.Formanypeoplenow,musicisasolitaryexperience.
2.Fewerpeoplegoouttowatchmovies.
Thirdtopicsentence:
Educationisathirdimportantareainwhichtechnologyisseparatingusfromothers.
Support:
1.Studentssitaloneinfrontofcomputers.
2.Studentsusesoftwareathomeinsteadofinteractingwithothers.
3.Videotapesarereplacingclassinstruction.
Activity(Revising),47–48
2,1,4,3
3TheFirstandSecondStepsinEssayWriting
Activity(WritingaGoodThesis),50–51
List1List2
2Teachers3Bicycles
lEducation4Dangersofbikeriding
3MathteacherlRecreation
5Myhighschoolmath2Recreationalvehicles
teacherwasincompetent.5Bikeridinginthecityisa
4Highschoolmathteacherdangerousexperience.
List3List4
1Retailcompanies3Camping
2Supermarkets4Firstcampingtrip
4Dealingwithcustomers2Summervacation
3Workinginasupermarket5Myfirstcampingtripwasa
5I’velearnedhowtohandledisastrousexperience.
unpleasantsupermarketcustomers.lVacations
Activity(CommonErrorsinWritingaThesis),53
A.1.TBB.6.2
2.TN7.A
3.TB8.2
4.TN9.A
5.TB10.2
Activity(SupporttheThesiswithSpecificEvidence),54–55
Answersforthisactivitywillvary;apossiblethirdpointforeachoutlineislistedbelow.
1.c.Learningnewrulesandprocedures4.c.Savemoney
2.c.Senseofhumor5.c.Longhours
3.c.Toocoldinthewinter6.c.Worryaboutfinances
Activity(TheImportanceofSpecificDetails),57
S1.Theparagraphlistsspecificprecautions:
gettingapermitandbuying
pressure-treatedlumber.
X2.Whatkindsofthingsdidthewriterdowrong?
Whatspecificruleswereenforced?
Howdidthisparentpunishthewriter?
S3Theparagraphlistsspecificexamplesofitemsthatshouldnotbeimproved:
cheesecakeandjeans.
X4.Whatkindsofproblemsdoesthedoghave?
Howdoesthedogmisbehavewhentheownersareaway?
Howdidtheownerstrytotrainthedog?
Activity1(TheImportanceofAdequateDetails),58
Answersaregiveninthetextaftertheactivity.
Activity(IdentifyingthePartsofanEssay),61
Thesisstatement:
4
Topicsentenceoffirstsupportingparagraph:
5
Topicsentenceofsecondsupportingparagraph:
15
Topicsentenceofthirdsupportingparagraph:
22
Firstsentenceoftheconclusion:
34
Activity1(EvaluatingThesisStatements),61–62Activity2(EvaluatingThesisStatements),62
1.Aa.1.TNa.
OKb.OKb.
2.OKa.2.TNa.
Ab.OKb.
3.OKa.3.TNa.
Ab.OKb.
4.Aa.4.OKa.
OKb.TNb.
5.Aa.5.OKa.
OKb.TNb.
Activity3(EvaluatingThesisStatements),62–63Activity4(EvaluatingThesisStatements),63
1.TBa.1.OKa.
OKb.2b.
2.TBa.2.2a.
OKb.OKb.
3.OKa.3.OKa.
TBb.2b.
4.TBa.4.2a.
OKb.OKb.
5.TBa.5.2a.
OKb.OKb.
Activity(CompletingThesisStatements),64
Answersforthisactivitywillvary;apossiblethirdpointofdevelopmentforeachthesisstatementislistedbelow.
1.science.6.coach
2.tobeenthusiastic.7.wewereemotionallyimmature.
3.myboyfriend.8.manners
4.money.9.myrelationshipswithothers.
5.breaksdownregularly.10.thetimeIdentedmyfriend’scar.
Activity(WritingaThesisStatement),65
Answersmayvaryslightly.
1.ThecarsI’veownedhavereflectedthechangesinmypersonality.
2.Attendingatwo-yearcollegehasseveraladvantages.
3.Ihavetriedseveralwaystogiveupsnacks.
4.Halloweenisnotallfun.
5.Threefactorscontributedtomyheartattack.
Activity1(LimitingaTopicandWritingaThesis),66
Answerswillvary;apossiblethesisforeachlimitedsubjectislistedbelow.
1.Sharinganapartmentwitharoommatehelpedmeadjusttoanewcity.
2.Decidingtobelesscriticalofyourspousecanhelpamarriage.
3.Mymother’stidinessdrivesuscrazy.
4.Fast-foodrestaurantsarecheaper,cleaner,andfriendlierthanotherrestaurants.
5.MycousinMyrahasseveralbaddrivinghabits.
6.Regularexercisecanhelpeaseemotionalproblems.
7.Do-it-yourselfrepairsalwaysendupcostingmemoremoneythanthey’resupposedto.
8.Thefree-agentsystemhasmadebaseballabigbusiness,notasport.
9.Beingasingleparentcanbeexhausting,frustrating,andintimidating.
10.Noisepollutionisagrowingprobleminourcity.
Activity2(LimitingaTopicandWritingaThesis),67
Answerswillvary;somepossiblelimitedsubjectsandthesisstatementsarelistedbelow.
1.Exoticanimalsaspets
Peopleshouldnotbeallowedtokeepexoticanimalsaspets.
2.Teensandbirthcontrol
Parentsshouldbenotifiediftheirdaughtersvisitabirthcontrolclinic.
3.Thenewseason’sTVprogramming
Thenewtelevisionprogramsarecarboncopiesoflastyear’ssuccessfulshows.
4.Computerizedoffices
Computersinofficesarecreatingnewhealthproblemsforemployees.
5.Majorfieldsofstudy
Choosingamajordoesnothavetobedoneblindly.
6.Housecalls
Doctorsshouldbecompelledtomakehousecalls.
7.Summervacations
Summeristheworsttimeofyeartotakeavacation.
8.Barbecuing
Therearethreekindsofpeoplewhowillbefoundbehindabarbecuegrill.
9.Children’sallowances
Gettinganallowanceteachesachildtoberesponsible,mature,andthrifty.
10.Christmasshopping
OneyearImadethemistakeofdoingmyChristmasshoppingmonthsinadvance.
Activity(ProvidingSpecificEvidence),68–69
Answerswillvary;somepossibilitiesarelistedbelow.
1.Guestsarrivedtwohourslate;roastwasburned;hostandhostessgotintoahugefight
2.Collectsdeadfrogs,birds,andworms;lovestodunkpizzainhischocolatemilk;combshishairwithhistoothbrush
3.Tootired;toohungry;toodisorganized
4.Chosemyfriendsforme;chosemyclothesforme;chosemycollegeforme
5.Baby-sitting,gardening,bakingcookies
6.Newignition,newbrakes,newheater
7.Catgotsick;kidsgotsick;roofstartedtoleak
8.Sleptathisdesk;gavesixhoursofhomeworkpernight;hadanastytemper
Activity(IdentifyingAdequateSupportingEvidence),69–70
AD1.
U2.Whatarespecificexamplesofhowpeoplearet