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夏云辉老师考研作文1
溺爱下一代
不赡养父母80后闪离校园安全
增加保安的数量
减少相关的新闻报道以消除消极的影响
鼓励家长亲自接送小孩
加强相关的管理严厉惩罚犯罪者
房价高增加经济适用房惩罚炒房者
建立相关的体制加强相关的管理
鼓励青年人结婚租房假球黑哨
增加国外裁判员的数量改善足球裁判的待遇
限制裁判和俱乐部的交流建立相关的法规
大学生同居限制大学周边旅馆的数量
提高开房价格
减少网络上情色电影的数量以消除消极影响
改善宿舍的住宿条件限制学生出校
惩罚违纪者白色污染
限制塑料袋的使用鼓励低碳生活方式
提高塑料袋的价格增加环保袋的数量
交通堵塞
限制私家车的数量
提高鼓励拓宽建设增加
1寻找建议动词
高分性高频性
考研写作弊
首段描述图画
坚强
二段拍马屁三段狂举例
社会现象
世博会
二段分析利三段分析弊
社会问题类
校园安全
二段给原因三段给建议
不赡养父母
Communicate
Understanding
forgiveness
教育下一代
80闪离
大学生同居
环境污染
白色污染
限制一次性碗筷的使用
提高人们意识交通堵塞
多使用公共交通工具避开高峰期
不赡养父母教育下一代
校园犯罪
学生甲：
加大对学生的管理力度
增加心理辅导工作室
大学生同居
学生乙：
从思想深处提高认识
学校家庭增加沟通交流交通堵塞
制定有效的管理制度提高司机素质
原因在哪
1自我创造---熟悉话题同居
2经济社会环境生理心理
更多精彩内容见第二节利弊分析高频词
陕AAV520
31261067
3万能原因
缺乏必要，相关，足够能力ability、专业知识
Professionalknowledge
Expert、正确CORRECT
correct
proper
的教育、实际practical的经验
experience、完善计划completeplanschedule、经费
fee、investment、完善准备preparation、有效地交流effectivecommunication、必要警惕necessaryawareness、正确认识realization、严格监督strictsupervision、明确的目标clear
definiteexplicittargetgoal。
。
。
仔细揣摩合理搭配适当发挥乘法原则
Necessary
Sufficient
Plenty
Abundant
Correct
Proper
Effective
Efficient
Appropriate
Helpful
Complete
Definite
乘法原则
揣摩
环境污染是因为政府缺乏______的______,老百姓缺乏_____的_____
交通堵塞是因为有关部门缺乏lack____的____
2采取了错误的、不符实际的、无效的ineffective/useless、不合适的improper、不适合inappropriate的、不当unsuitable的方法
Take/useMethod
Takemeasures
持错误的态度holdattitude
设立setup了错误的目标goaltarget
付出了错误的努力
Makeefforts
选择了错误的时间
坚持insisthold了unreasonable观点opinion
采纳accept了错误的意见advise
利用了错误的经验
Followexperience
选择choose了错误的人选candidate
Takeincorrectmeasures
Makemeaninglessefforts
Usemethod/solution
Followimpracticalexperience
3受到了政策policy、环境environment/surrounding、条件condition、媒体media，TVprogram,soapopera,film，violencefilm/pornographicfilm,advertisement,他人others，families,strangers,co-workers,schoolmates,friends,companions,peers
Tradition,custom,educationlevel,academicbackground,
Status,…
的影响/influence/affect/impact/restrict/limit/mislead---misled,misguide/seducetempt/confuse/driven/inspire…
Areinfluencedbyfamilies,friendsandschoolmates.
Arerestrictedbypolicyandregulation
Carefuldeliberationofthisproblemhasgivenmeseveralideasastowhythisshouldbeso.
原因一：
Tobeginwith,undoubtedly,countlessuniversitiesandcollegeslackeffectiveandcompletemanagementofstudentsinmoderntimes.
原因二：
Whatismore,theyaredeeplymisledbysoapoperasandpornographicfilmsontheinternet，accordingtosomeprofessionalpsychologists’suggestion.
提建议的灵魂是什么？
表现为什么词性？
这些词有没有重复？
他们是谁？
增加increasenumber/amount
Improvequalitymanagementenvironmentcondition
Enhancestrengthen
Foundationability夯实
Optimizesystemstructure
Promotedevelopmentcommunication
Growth/rise
Deepenreform
Broaden---widenroad---expandoutlook/horizon
Construct建设
Establish建立systemandregulation,systemoforganization
relationship,connection
confidence
Enlarge
Encourageinspire
鼓励development,innovation,reform
Enrich丰富resource…
Rise
Creategenerate
Conditionopportunity
Possibility…
在第三节课用于利的分析
反面
Punish惩罚incorrectbehavior/crime/illegalbehavior
Cancelplan
Delay
Correct纠正
Adjust调整structure
Targetgoalschedule
Changemethodsolution
Reverse
Forbidbanprohibit
Limitrestrict/scalesizeuse
Reducenumberamount
Diminishnegativeinfluence
加强strengthenmanagement
相关的管理
Investmentincreased
Establishsystem
Limitprivatecars
Constructroadhighway
Subway
Encouragesubwaybus
Bicycle
Widenroadandstreet
Increase
一周背一点1234
Localgovernment
Relativedepartment
Related,interrelated,
Concerned
Association协会
Organization组织
一周背一点
白色污染
Supermarketorshoppingmallshouldlimitplasticbags
Encouragelow-carbonlifestyle
PoliceLimithotelandmotel
Restricttheamountofpornographicfilms
Encourage
Increase
Correct
校园犯罪
Limitthenumberofviolencefilms
Increase
Punish
Increase
Encourage
Encourage
Increase
Change
引导句
EveryonesaysthatIloveyou
NoonecandenythatEnglishisdifficult
Manypeoplethinkthat
将people具体化
Expert
Economist
Environmentalist
ecologist
sociologist
psychologist
physiciandoctor
therapist
observer
researcher
scientist…
consider
maintain
believe
remain
holdtheopinionthat
agree
support
analyze
suggest
worry
concern
warn
estimate
predict
itisequallytruethat
thereisnodenyingthat
noonecandenythat
thereisnodoubtthat
noonecandoubtthat
itiswidelybelievedthat
universallycommonly
accepted
itissurprising/amazing/interesting…that
wearesurprised/glad/pleasedtofindthat
whatattracts/surprises/impressesusisthat
3形容词
Good:
Excellentoutstanding
Remarkablesignificant
Beautiful:
Charmingattractive
Fascinatingfantastic
Big:
Tremendous
Enormous
Immense
gigantic
important:
Pivotal
Essential
Critical
Crucial
Many:
Countlessvarious
Diversenumerous
Exceptional
Immediate
Impressive
30篇范文划出
排列出前20名---程度副词
Considerably
Awfully
Largely
Greatly
Extremely
Deeply
地点
生活
Downtown
Suburb
Metropolis
Countryside
Mountainousarea
City
Supermarket
Shoppingmall
Hospital
crowdedareaplaceregion
学习
Campus
University
College
Institute
Primaryschool
Library
Laboratory
Englishcorner
Bookstore…
Workplace
Meetingconference
Office
Firm
Corporation…
Inthepast20years
Since1978
Overthelasttenyears
During
Inthisageandday
Atpresent
Inthese10years
Inmodernsociety/time/life
Inthisgoldenage
Inthedifficulttimes
Ineverydaylife
未来
Inthenearfuture
Inthenot-too-distantfuture
Intheforeseeablefuture
Inthefollowing/next5years
Assoonaspossible…
并列
Historyandculture
Economyandpolitic
Customandtradition
Universityandcollege
Car
house
road
mind
computer
love
country
society
health
emotion
被动态
插入语
动名词ing
从句
交通堵塞
Someexpertssupportthattransportationdepartmentmustlargelyrestricttheuseofprivatecarsincrowdedareasinthedifficulttimes.
Itisimperativeforustoimprovethesituation.Ononehand,
Someexpertssupportthattheuseofprivatecarsincrowdedareasmustbelargelyrestrictedbytransportationdepartmentinthedifficulttimes.ontheotherhand,
Noonecandenythatadvertisementscanencouragetheuseofbuses,bikesandsubwayinmetropolisesatpresent.
Itisimperativeforustoimprovethesituation.Ononehand,someobserversholdtheopinionthatthenumberofhotelsandinnsaroundcampusshouldbereducedbydepartmentconcernedinmodernsociety.Ontheotherhand,undoubtedly,variousuniversitiesmustestablishrulesandregulationstoimprovethesituation.
白色污染两个建议
Itisimperativeforustoimprovethissituation.
Foronething,manyenvironmentalistsagreethattheuseofplasticbagsinsupermarketsandshoppingmallsshouldbelargelyrestrictedbylocalgovernment.Foranother,lowcarbonlifestyledowntownshouldbeencouragedbyadvertisementsandsoapoperas.metropolisesdormitory
Itisimperativeforustoimprovethissituation.Foronething,Itisuniversallyacceptedthatthenumberofhotelsandinnsaroundthecampusshouldbelargelylimitedbyrelativedepartment.Foranother,correctandhealthylifestyleinuniversitymustbeencouragedbyfilmsandtvshows.
Carefuldeliberationofthisproblemhasgivenmeseveralideasastowhythisshouldbeso.Tobeginwith,obviously,relativedepartmenttakeinappropriatemeasuresinsolvingtrafficjams.Whatismore,accordingtosomesocialists’analyze,manyteenagersareinfluencedbytheirfriendsorco-workerssothattheyarewillingtobuyprivatecars.Finally,trafficinsomemetropoliseslacknecessaryandeffectivemanagement.
Itisimperativeforustoimprovethissituation.Foronething,undoubtedly,thenumberofprivatecarsinmetropolis（大城市）shouldbelargelyrestrictedbyrelativedepartment.Foranother,theuseofsubway,busandbicycleindowntownisaneffectivesolutionandprescription.Itisimperativeforustotakedrasticnmeasurestoreverse（好词）thisscaredtrend.
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女：
有利于沟通
辐射有害于身体，影响正常工作学习
有利于经济交流
沟通加强
沟通方便
黄氏响声丸
疏风伤害身体
利咽
有利于中国和世界的交流
开音
化痰散结
利
经济方向
Economy
Economic
Economically
Finance
Financial
Financially
Unemploymentposition
/rate/opportunity
Profit
Benefit
Income
wage
Tax
Debt
DomesticglobalMarket
Investinsth/doingsth
Investment
Cost
Spend
LivingExpense
Crisis/storm/tsunami
Bubble
Economicgrowth/rise/increase
Bankruptcy
Stock
fund
Promoteeconomicdevelopment
Generate/createemploymentopportunities
Cutdowntheexpenseofsth/doingsth
Internationaltrade
e-business
inflation
consumption
grouppurchase…
环境方向
Environment
Environmentalprotection/damage
Deterioration
Deteriorate
Destroy
Ecology
Wildlifeanimals
Commercialkilling
Low-carbonlifestyle
Globalwarming
Greenhousegasemission
afforest
Trafficcongestion
Resource
Trash…
（chinadaily背）
社会方向
Social
Sociologist
Community
Communicate
InterpersonalRelationship
Culture
Tradition
Custom
MiddleClassupperclass
Thegapbetweenthepoorandtherich
Securitysecure
Crimerate
Stable稳定的
Harmonious和谐的
生理方向
Health
Body
Disease
Cancer
Exhausted
Comfortable
Relaxed…
心理方向
喜cheerfuljoyful
Excitedsatisfiedrelaxedproudamused…
怒
Indignantwrathful
Annoyed
哀
Mournful
Sorrowful
忧
Worriedconcerned
Stressful
Anxious
恐
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