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Myhometownwasusedtobeabeautifulplace.Thicktreesandgrasscanbeseeneverywhere.Inordertobuildingmorehousesandgrowmorecrops,peoplecutdownmoreandmoretrees.Withtimewenton,thewholeforestalmostdestroyed.Gradually,greenhillshavechangedforwasteland.Asaresult,sandstormsstrikeusnowbutwesufferalot.SoIdidhopethatallthepeopleshouldrealizetheterribleresultofcuttingdowntreesandtakinggoodcareoftrees 

fromnowonsoasnottoimproveourlivingconditions. 

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Lastweek,whileweweretakenanEnglishexam,oneofmyfriendspassingmeapieceofpaperandaskedmetotellhertheanswersofsomequestions.Ididn’tthinkitwasrighttodothat,Irefused. 

Whenanexamwasover,Itriedtotalktoher,Butshejustwould’tlistenmeatall.Iknewshemustbeveryangryaboutme.Afterthinkingforawhile,Iwrotealettertoherandhopedtheycouldmakeherunderstandme.Finally,mylettersworkedandnowsheandIweregoodfriendsagain. 

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Itwasthefirsttimehehadgonetoworkinarestaurant.Mybosscompainedthattherewerefewcustomercomingfordinner.Iaminvitedtohaveamealthere.Afterorderedtwoicecreamsandasteak,andIbegantotimehowlongitwouldtakethecooktogetthemready.Itookoutabooktoreadit.Tomydisppointment.Iwaitedfor35minutesaftermymealwasready.Irealizedthatwaittoolongwasreasonwhybusinesswasnotgood.Iwroteareportofmyfindingsandpresentittotheboss. 

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Duringthevacation,theweatherwashotandIcoulddomuchwork,butIlivedhappily.OnthemorningIusuallygotupearlyandtakeawalkinthegarden.Afterthebreakfast,IbeganreadingEnglishanddidsomeexercisesinmaths.Iworkedquitehardlyandmadegoodprogress.Ispentnearlythewholeafternoonoutside.Iwentswimintheriveranddidn’tcomebackwhenitwasaboutfiveorsix.Sometimesafriendofmewouldcometoseemeandwewouldspendsomehourslistenedtomusic.InthiswayIspentmyvacationhappily.Inotonlystudiedwellandbutalsobecameagoodswimmer. 

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Thereisafamoussaying,“HewhohasneverbetotheGreatWallisnottrueman.”ThismorningmyclassmatesandIgetupearlytovisittheGreatWall.Wewentthereonbus.Onthewaythere,wesawmanytallbuildingsoneithersideoftheroad.Aboutanhours’drivebroughtustotheGreatWall.Whenitwasappearedinfrontofus,wecouldn'

thelpsaying,“Whatgreatitis!

”WhenwewalkedontheGreatWall,wefeltverypride.Todayithasbecomeaplaceofinteresttopeoplealltheworld.Weshoulddoourbesttoprotectthemasitis. 

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AfterIfinishedtheschoolthisyear,Ibegantolookforwork.Butseveralmonthlater,Istillhadn’tfoundthejobthatIwasinterested.OnlastSundaymorningIreceivedaphonecallfromamancallinghimMr.Smith.Hesaidtomeonthephone,“Ihearthatyoudoverywellinyourstudies.Imayhaveajobforyou.”Ienteredhisofficewithbeatingheart.HowIhopedthat 

Iwillgothroughthejob-huntingtalktodayandhewouldgivemethejobasalabassistant.Buttomysurprised,whatheneededwerejustamodel. 

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Manystudentsfindithardlytospeakorreadinfrontofothers.Trytakingadeepbreathe 

torelaxafteryoubegin,andthenreadslowlyandclearly.Itmighthelptopractisereadaloud 

tofamilymembersatthehome.Readingaloudisaopportunitytogetusedtospeakingtoanaudience.Themoreoftenyoudo,themorecomfortableandconfidentyouwillprobablefeel.Inthisway,notonlyyougainconfidence,butalsoyoucanreceiveadvicesfromyourparents. 

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Twoboyssatonabeachtalkinghappywhileeatingawatermelon.Whentheywentawaytheyleavethemelon’sskinsonthebeach,makingitverydirt.Theydidn’twanttotaketroublethrowingitintothedustbinthoughitwasverynearthattheyweresitting.Theysaidthat 

therewouldbesomeoneshouldcleantherubbish.Ifeveryonebehavesbythisway,theworldwillbeabigrubbishdumpwithfliesareflyingroundandpeoplewillliveinaworldofdiseases.Besides,itwillbemoredifficultfordustmentocleaningtheworldwherewelivein. 

参考答案

1.cost 

改为spend 

2.去掉but 

3.noisy改为noise 

4.quitely改为quite 

5.where改为there 

6.both改为all 

7.will后加be 

8.your改为my 

9.去掉nature前的the 

10.leave改为leaving

1.says改为said 

2.to后加be 

3.去掉contined后的to 

4.bored改为boring 

5.number改为deal 

6.everyday改为everyday 

7.many改为much 

8.that改为those 

9..he改为I 

10.real改为really

1．so---as 

2.去掉in 

3.Europe后was—is 

4.and—but 

5.every—each 

6.day—days 

7.in后加a 

8.去掉back或return—came 

9.去掉you后的can 

10.differently—different

1.去掉was 

2.building改为build 

3.With改为As 

4.almost后加was 

5.for改为into 

6.but改为and 

7.did改为do 

8.result改为results 

8.taking改为take 

9.去掉not

1.taken改为taking 

2.passing改为passed 

3.of改为to 

4.I前加so 

5.an改为the 

6.listen后加to 

7.about改为with 

8.they改为it 

9.letters改为letter 

10.were改为are.

1.he改为I 

2.customer改为customers 

3.am改为was 

4.ordered改为ordering 

5.去掉and 

6.去掉read后的it 

7.after改为before 

8.wait改为waiting

9.在reason前加the 

10.present改为presented

1.do前加not 

2.on改为in 

3.take改为took 

4.去掉breakfast前的the

5.hardly改为hard 

6.swim改为swimming 

7.when改为until 

8.me改为mine 

9.listen改为listening 

10.去掉and

1.be改为been 

2.not后加a 

3.get改为got 

4.on改为by 

5.hours’改为hour’s 

6.去掉was 

7.what改为How 

8.pride改为proud 

9.all后加over 

10.them改为it

1.去掉shool前的the 

2.month后加s 

3.interested后加in 

4.去掉last前的on

5.him改为himself 

6.do改为did 

7.with后加a 

8.will改为would 

9.surprised改为surprise 

10.were改为was

1.hardly改为hard 

2.breathe改为breath 

3.after改为before 

4.read改为reading 

5.去掉the 

6.a改为an 

7.do后改为it 

8.probable 

9.only后加can

10.advices改为advice

1.happy改为happiy 

2.leave改为left 

3.dirt改为dirty4.throwing后的it改为them 

5.第一个that改为where 

6.someone后加who 

7.by改为in 

8.去掉flies后的are 

9.cleaning改为clean 

10.where改为that/which或将in去掉