Aaixmbk雅思写作核心76题库及范文Word格式文档下载.docx

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Theprogressoftransportindustryisinevitableandundeniable.Whatisundercontroversyiswhetherthevolumeoftrafficisgrowingatanalarmingrate.Tobefrank,Iaminhighfavorthatwearewellawareofthetrafficproblem.

Inmypointofview,apossiblecauseoftheproblemisthatwelacktheinfrastructureconstruction.Alsotheoverpopulationisthecauseofthisproblem,especiallyinChina.Althoughthegrowthofthetransportisrapid,itstillcannotmeettheincreasingneedsofpeople.Furthermore,peopleabusetheprivatecarstotakepublictransportinstead,whichcausedmorecarsputintouse.Lastly,individualsarealsoresponsibleforthisproblem.Peoplearelackinginconsciousnessandawarenessfortrafficsituationinorder.Sometimes,peopledriveafterdrinking,whichcausesmoretrafficaccidents.

Thesolution,Ithink,isforgovernmenttoinjectmorefundsintotheconstructionofinfrastructure,increasemoreconstruction,suchastherestructuringofmetrosystem,elevatedways,Pearlline,andsuperhighway.Alsogovernmentshouldlevyheavytaxonluxuriousproducts,andencouragepeopletousebusserviceinsteadofprivatecars.Toindividuals,wemayestablishthefamilyplanningtocontrolthegrowthofthepopulation.Furthermore,weshouldpublicizetheimportanceofobeyingthetrafficregulationsamongpeoplebyeducation,andformthecivilhealthlifestyle.

Toconclude,withthejointeffortofpeopleandgovernments,Iamsurethetrafficproblemswillbeimproved.

Band7.5

这篇文章的缺点在于，结尾段比较短,应该按照我们上课讲的，把解决了交通问题的好处说说，例如让我们有一个更加舒适的生活。

另外，其实中间段列举出的原因和解决方式可以用一一对应的方式，层次会更清楚。

2教育

Manypeoplearguethatinordertoimproveeducationalqualitycontinuously,studentsareencouragedtomakecommentsorevencriticismonteachers.Othersthinktherespectanddisciplineintheclassroomwilldisappear.Whichopiniondoyouprefer?

Thereisdisputeoverwhetherornotstudentsareencouragedtomakecommentsorevencriticismonteachers.Somepeoplemaintainthatitisagoodwaytoimproveeducationalquality,whereasothersareconfidentthatifstudentsdoit,therespectanddisciplineintheclassroomwilldisappear.Everymanwillhesitatebutifaskedtomakeachoicebetweenthetwo.Iwouldnothesitatetochoosetheformeroverthelatter.

Therearesomemajorcausesforit.Inthefirstinstance,theimprovementofstudentsisthefinalgoalofeducation.Onlybygivingcommentonteachers’performancecanletteachersknowtheprocessofstudents’developmentclearly.Furthermore,thecriticismisthestimulustoteachers’self-perfectionandimprovementineducationalquality.Lastbutnotleast,thecriticismitselfisakindoffeedbackandcommunicationbetweenteachersandstudents,lackofwhichwillaffecttheeducationaloutcomeafterwards.

Althougheachcoinhastwosides,weighingtheprosandconsoftheargument,I’minclinedtoagreewiththeformerpointofviewalthoughithasposedatremendouschallengetoteachersandthustheentireeducationalsystem.

Ifthestudentshavecouragetomakecommentsontheirteachers,theywillhavemoreconfidencetoconquerthedifficultiesinthefuture.AsaChineseproverbsays,“thewavesbehinddriveonthosebehind,sothenewexcelstheold.”Teacherswillfindtheirowndisadvantageintheteachingagainandagain.

Band8

这个题目整体来说是比较难的，比较难于分析，作者的观点是非常精辟的，用词也比较到位

两点改动可以冲满分：

1.这篇文章是discussion，以作者的写作水平，完全可以把这篇写成四段平衡式，可以展现更高的技巧。

2.结尾段引用中国谚语长江后浪推前浪是个败笔，虽然这个谚语的翻译是准确的，但是，我还是非常非常的不推荐在文章中引用名人名言，正如上课讲的一样。

3动物实验

Scientistsaredoingexperimentsonliveanimalsforthepurposeofresearchnowadays.Somepeoplebelievethatthisisnotonlycruelbutalsounnecessary;

othersthinkitisintheinterestofmankindasawhole.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

Achimpanzeeisperhapstheanimalmostcloselyrelatedtohumans;

butinsteadoftreatingtheanimalwithloveandrespect,wesubjectittocruelandinhumanescientificandmedicalexperimentstofurtherhumandevelopment.Whatacruelfatefortheunfortunatechimpanzee.Orperhaps,inlifeasinthejungleitissurvivalofthefittest,andso,asthemostintelligentanimalwearejustexercisingourrighttodominateanduseotheranimalsaswewish.

Formanypeopletheissueofusinganimalsforscienceisblackandwhite;

eitherverypro-animalrights,orverymuchinfavourofusinganimalssincewearethehighestlevelcreature.Ontheonehand,somepeoplesaythatsubjectinganimalstopainandtortureistrulybarbaric;

higher-levelanimalssharewithusfeelings,thoughtsandbehaviorsandsoweshouldlookafterthemandrespectthem.Theymayalsofeelthatifwearesounsureabouttheeffectsofadrugforexamplethenweshoulddofurtherchemicaltestingbeforedoingliveandsometimescruelanimaltesting.

Others,however,believethatwemustuseanimalsforthebenefitofourownspecies（humans）;

totestdrugs,cosmeticsandnewdevelopmentsinsciencewhichwillprovideasaferandbetterlifestyleforus.Veryfewpeopleareinherentlycruel,buttheystillbelieveitiseitherthemorus;

itisbettertotestthedrugsonamonkeyratherthanonaperson.

Beingcruelforthesakeofbeingcruelandwithnotangibleresultstoshowforitisdefinitelysteppingoveraboundaryofacceptablebehavior,butatothertimesifthebenefitsoftheresearchareexplicit,tangibleandvaluablethenIfeelthattheresearchisjustified.

Band9

这篇没什么可说的，大家一看就该知道是个母语人士写的，而且还是个有文化的母语人士，我很幸运能够找到这篇跟大家分享，非常牛逼的四段平衡式，观点也是中立的。

4压力问题

Manypeoplestayoffworkingandstudying.Whatreasonscausestressandhowtosolveit?

Ithasbeenwidelynotedthatnowadayspeopletendtofeelstressfulasaresultthattheystayoffworkingandstudying.Thishasbecomeaseriousproblemsowehavetopayattentiontoit.Inmyviewtherearetwomainfactorscontributingtothisproblem.

Inthefirstinstance,physicaldeficiencyleadstostress.Malnutritionandinsomniacancausebodydysfunctionforstress.Weallhaveanexperiencethatafterasleeplessnight,weareoftensionthewholeday.

Secondly,fiercecompetitioninworkandsocietycausespeople’sunevenmoodforarainingday.Peoplehavetoworkhardandlearnmoreinordertoadapttothefastpaceofmodernlifeandmakeenoughmoneytosupporttheirfamily.Noonewantstobeoutofdateandthusbeeliminatedbythesociety.

Intheviewofabove,Ithinksomemeasuresneedtobetakentosolvethisproblem.Firstandforemost,weshouldbuildupahealthylifestyle.Onehandwekeepearlyhours.Ontheotherhandweoughttoeatavarietyoffoodthenwecangetmorenutrition.

Furthermore,weneedtofinddifferentwaystorelaxourselveswhenwefaceseverecompetition.Wecanchoosementalabundancebyfilling-uporcover-uptorenewourknowledge.Wealsocanchoosetravel.Travelcanwidenourvisionandbroadenourminds.Adeepimpressionisleftonyoubytravelingwhichdispelsyourgloomymood.

Allinall,therearemanyreasonscausingpeopletostayoffstudyingandworking.Howeverpeoplewillcometoanewareathroughdifferentwaystorelaxthemselves

5工作问题

Theworldofworkischangingrapidly.Workingconditionstodayarenotthesameasbeforeandpeoplenolongerrelyontakingonejobforlife.Discussthepossiblecausesofthesechangesandgiveyoursuggestionsonhowpeopleshouldprepareforworkinthefuture.

Thereismuchdiscussionnowadaysastowhetherornottheworkingconditionstodayarethesameasbeforeandpeoplerelyontakingonejobforlife.Diversecontributingfactorscanbeidentified.Inthefollowing,Iwouldliketoshowmypointofview.

Mostimportantofall,withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,thestructureofworkforcehaschangedseriously.Forexample,peoplenolongerneedtodosomeheavyworkbythemselves.Instead,theycanusemachines.Thus,theycouldtransfertootherpositions.

Onthesecondthought,competitioninanyfieldshasbecomemoreandmoreintense,soitishardforonetokeephisorherpositionwithoutlearninganythingnewanduseful.Therefore,inordertofitthenewsituation,peopleshouldn’tbesatisfiedwiththeirpresentconditions.Theyshouldabsorbmanythingsthattheymayhavenoideabefore.Gratifyingly,moreandmorepeoplearenowtryingtoimprovethemselvesbyhavingcoursesafterworkandevensacrificetheirresttimeinpurposeofgainingagoodjob.

Asaproverbgoes,“Wherethere’sawill,there’saway.”Itisinevitablethattheworldofworkischangingrapidly.Nevertheless,ifwedeterminetoimproveandperfectourselvesvolitionally,I’msurethereisawayinfrontofus.

6垃圾问题

Manypeoplesaythatwehavedevelopedintoa“throw-awaysociety”,becausewearefillingupourenvironmentwithsomanyplasticbagsandrubbishthatwecannotfullydisposeof.Towantdegreedoyouagreewiththisopinionandwhatmeasurescanyourecommendreducingthisproblem?

Thereisgrowingtendencynowadaysforpeopletoproducemuchmoregarbagethanbefore.Somepeopleholdanopinionthatthisleadstoathrow-awaysociety,fortoomanyplasticbagsandrubbishthatcannotfullydisposeofthreatentooverwhelmus.Personally,Iagreewiththisopinionforthefollowingreasons.

Whenwecometothinkaboutit,thereareonlythreewayswecandealwithrubbish.Dumpit,burnitandchangeforsomethinguseful.However,nomatterwhichwaywechoose,onethingiscertainthatgarbageiseverywhere.Inthefirstins