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Somepeoplethinkthatstudentswhodon’ttakeabreakinstudiesbetweenahighschoolandauniversityareatdisadvantagecomparedtostudentsthattravelandworkafterhighschoolbeforefurtheringtheireducation.Doyouagreeordisagree?

Nowadays,inourcompetitiveworld,tosucceed,knowledgefromschoolanduniversityisnotenough.Therefore,thestudentwhostudyfromtheschooltouniversitygetbenefitlessandcontributelesstoo,thanthoseofstudentwhogototravelorjobandgetexperienceandskillsbeforegoinghighereducation.Therearetwofollowingreasonstoproveformyopinion.IcallthegroupofpeoplewhostudyfromschooltouniversityisgroupAandtheothergroupisgroupB.

Firstly,atschoolanduniversity,whatgroupAgainisalmosttheory,theoryandtheory.Ofcourse,theoryisveryneccessary,however,youcan’tdoeverythingwiththeory.Youmusthavepraticalexperience.ThisiswhatgroupAlackverymuch.Althoughinthethirdofforthyearatuniversity,groupAcanbeapprenticesinsomecompanies,tohelpthemapproachtheirfuturejobs,theyaren’ttrainedwellbecauseofshorttime.Andtherealjobisstillverystrangefor/to/withthem.Aftergraduating,withoutexperience,groupAcan’taccomplishtheirworkperfectly.Ontheotherhand,ittakethemtimeandmoneytokeepupwithotherexperiencedonesandmaybescorned.Therefore,groupAcancontributelessthangroupBwhohavethemosttwoimportantthings:

skillsandexperience.

Secondly,asgroupAiscontributeless,theysurelygetlessbenefit.Moreover,manycompanieswhichemploypeopleingroupAhavetotrainthemfromtheback-ground.ThesecompaniestakethiscostfromgroupA’ssalarytogetridofthefactthattheiremployeesmayleaveafterbeingtrainedtoothercompanies.So,lessbenefitisunavoidableandcertain,WhereasgroupBaremoreloyalandeffectiveworkers.Theyalsohaveusefulexperienceandskills.Besides,theireducationisthesameasorevenhigherthangroupA.Astheresult,groupBgetmorebenefitabsolutely.

Inconclusion,Ithinkstudentshouldgototravelorjobbeforegoinghigh.Therefore,theycan’tonlyhavebasicknowledgebutalsoskillsandexperiencewhichareusefulforthemtogetagoodjobandabrilliantfuture.

Thisessayistoolong（350wordsinsteadof250）.Tofightthisproblem,trytowritemoreingeneralandprovidefewerdetails.Thelanguageandideasaregoodandsoistheessay?

sstructure.LookslikeBand7tome.

Wearebecomingincreasinglydependentoncomputers.Theyareusedinbusiness,crimedetectionandeventoflyplanes.Whatthingswilltheybeusedforinfuture?

Isthisdependenceoncomputersagoodthingorshouldwebemoresuspiciousoftheirbenefits?

Todaycomputersareusedalmosteverywhere,itisimpossibletoimagineourlifewithoutPCs,Internet,handphonesandothercomputerdevices.Itisreasonablethatpeoplelooktothefutureofcomputers.Inwhatfieldwillbecomputersusedforandwhatrolewillhumanhasinthisworldinfuture?

Besides,computersmakeourlifeeasier,wecaneasilygetinformationaboutanyproductweplantobuyorplaceweplantovisitoverasecondusingpersonalcomputerandInternet.ScientistspredictthatinthenearestfutureitwillbepossibletosmellanewperfumeusingInternetandwatch3Dscenesathomelikewedointhetheater.AccordingtoforecastsofHRagenciesmachineswillreplacejobofcashiers,civilandmilitarypilots.SomecorporationsinJapanalreadysellinghousewife-robots,whichhelpoldpeopletokeeptheirhomeclean.

Despitethefactthatcomputershelpus,theymakeusdependent.Apparently,peoplespendmoretimebehindmonitorsthateverbefore.Andsomeofthemfeelaneedformoretimetobespentwithpeopleinlivecontact.Inaddition,falloutofoneoftheimportantmodulesofspecificcomputercanentailseriousconsequences.Sufficetomentioncomputerproblem,occurredintheendof1990s,problemconcernedwithcomingyear2000（Y2K）andcatastrophesthatwerepredicted.Fortunatelyimminentdisastersdidnothappen.However,itisdifficulttoimaginewhatcouldbeifallthepredictionshadoccurred.

Weliveintechnologicalera,computerspenetratedeverywherewithallbenefitstheyprovideandalldangerstheyhide.Howeverwearesatisfiedwiththemandsometimesweeventhankthembecausetheyhelpusincommunicating,studying,doingbusiness,entertainingandsavinglivesincriticalsituations.

Greatessay,allthetaskpointsarecovered,goodlanguageandstructure.LookslikeBand7tome.

Inmanycountrieschildrenareengagedinsomekindofpaidwork.Somepeopleregardthisascompletelywrong,whileothersconsideritasvaluableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility.Whatisyouropiniononthis?

Nowadays,manychildreninvolvedindifferenttypesofjobstohavesomekindoffinancialassuranceforthemselves.However,whetherthisisgoodfortheirdevelopmentandpersonalityisamuchdebatableissue.Ipersonallybelievethatpaidworksisharmfulforchildrenforseveralreasons.

Itissaidthatchildrenlearnvaluableexperienceintheworkplace.Thismaybetrue.However,Iwouldarguethatchildrenaremainlyemployedforjobsthatrequiremanualworkandarelowpaid.Therecentstatisticrevealsthecommontasksthatchildrenareassignedarewashingdishes,cleaningfloorsorservingfoodinrestaurants.Meanwhile,thiskindofjobsactuallydonotprovidechildrenwithnecessaryandusefulskillssothattheycanapplyintheirfuturecarrer.

Thisbringsmetothesecondpoint.Defendersofchildworkarguesthatitisaneffectivemethodoflearning.Thepointischildrenshouldbeabletoapplyknowledgetaughttotheminareallifeworkingenvironment.Althoughthisisundoubtedlytrue,italsomeansthatchildrenmayneglecttheclassroomstudyandevenfailtheclass.Theworstthingisyettocome.Theymaybecomesooccupiedwiththebenefitsaheadofthemlikesmallsalaryandleaveschool.

Finally,supporterssaidthatithelpsthemtobuildresponsibilityinthefamily.Theywillunderstandhowitisdifficulttoearnmoneyandthereforehaveacompassionateviewwiththeirparents.Thisistruetoacertainextent,butmayhaveatotallyadverseeffectonchildren.Aschildrencanmakemoneyatanearlyage,theywouldfeelthatitisappropriatetospendonluxurythingsbytheirownmoney,whichcouldberecoveredlater.

Inconclusion,Ithinkthatparentsshouldtakemeasurestorestricttheirchildtowork,otherwiseitwouldhaveanegativeconsequencesontheirfutures.

Thisisagreatessay,Band7+candidate.Myonlysuggestionistodivideyourargumentssothatyouhave2paragraphscoveringarguments?

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Somesaythattheinternetismakingtheworldsmallerbybringingpeopletogether.Towhatextentdotoyouagreethattheinternetismakingiteasierforpeopletocommunicatewithoneanother.

Aglobalvillage,thatiscertainlywhattheworldfeelslikenowadays.Withthehelpoftheworldwideweb,youcanreachoutandgettoknowpeopleyoumightnevermeetinperson.Articlescanbecoauthored,businessdealscanbefinalized,degreescanbeearnedandattimesevenmedicaladvicecanbegiven?

andallofthisisjustaclickaway.

Electronicmail,instantmessages,webcamerasandmicrophones;allthesegadgetsandprogramsmakethepresenceoftheotherthepersonmorereal.Whoknows;withthehelpofvisualrealityyoumightevengeta3-Dimageofthespeaker!

Ibelievethattheinternetisonethebestinventionsofthelastcentury,youcanhardlygettomissanyoneandnobodyisreallyoutofreach.Youwillgettokeepthechannelspatentwithyourfriends,andwillbeabletodoyourworkfromyourbedroominyourpajamas!

However,theinternetcanalsobeamajorsourceofharassment.Spammersandhackerscaninvadeyourprivacyandgetpersonal/confidentialinformation,whichotherwisetheywillnevergetaccessto.Youareneveroutofanybody’sreach,unlessyoumakeaconsciousdecisionofnotcheckingyouremail,therecanbealwaysmoreworkwaitingforyouinyourinboxandyoumightneverhaveamomentforyourself.Worse,ifyouwereaworkaholic,youmightneverexperiencethatstress-freevacationeveragaininyourlife?

Simply,becauseyouhaveyourmobileworkplacewithyou.

Asaromantic,Iwillalwayslookforwardtogettinganoccasionalletterinthesnailmail.Apersonalletter,whereIcansensethemoodofthewriterbytheslantsinhis/herhandwritingandgettoknowhim/herbetter.ButasatypeApersonalityperson,theinternetgivesmeallwhatIdreamofincommunication?

speed,reliability,andconvenienceoftimeandplace.Icancertainlytolerateitsshortcomingsanyday,aslongasitkeepsmeclosetomylovedones.

Thisisagreatessay,atleastband7andmaybeeven8.Itislongerthanrequired（340wordsinsteadof250）whichmeansthatittookyoumoretimetowriteandlesstimetocheckyourwork.

Newseditorsdecidewhattobroadcastontelevisionandwhattoprintinnewspaper.Whatfactordoyouthinkinfluencetheirdecisions?

Dowebecomeusedtobadnews?

Woulditbebetterifmoregoodnewswasreported?

Newseditorsdecidewhattobroadcastontelevisionandwhattoprintinnewspapers.Therearetwofactorsthatinfluencetheirdecisions.Thefirstisthekindofcustomerstheytendon.Becauseeachkindofreadersandwatchershasitsownfeatures.Ifyourcustomersarealmostteenagers,forexample,youhavetoconcentrateonsomethingattractingthemsuchasstories,photographsaboutsi