高中英语新高考英语作文读后续写题型的写作兵法三招转折语言词库.docx

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高中英语新高考英语作文读后续写题型的写作兵法三招转折语言词库

高中英语新高考-英语作文：

读后续写题型的写作兵法三招：

转折,语言,词库

目前英语卷的题型的改革力度是够大的，说来就来。

这不，各种证据证明，未来作文会变成文章续写，即：

给一篇350词左右的记叙文给你，结尾没有，让考生自由发挥。

限制是:

需要用上文章里给定的五个左右的词语。

目前浙江已经明确在考试说明中说了，后面的高考就要采用这种形式。

（孙三五）

这种改革给考生一种恐慌，为什么呢？

因为从未写过这样的文章，而且续写听起来好高大上。

但是，我看来，这种作文最好发挥。

我给出的技巧是：

内容上要注意两个转折；语言上要注意倒装和非谓语动词；另外，我给考生们准备了万能的九个小词库。

一、何为内容上的两个转折

写记叙文，英汉是同理的。

故事要有曲折即：

twist。

而高考作文150作文只能让你写顶多两个曲折。

曲折分：

情节曲折和心理变化的曲折。

英语作文毕竟和语文作文有差别，我们的曲折不要一味追求离奇，而是讲究逻辑的连贯。

二、语言的运用

记叙文是动作和语言的干活，不需要你写复杂句，这是文体的需要。

常用的是：

非谓语动词和倒装句。

为什么呢？

因为只有这两种语法结构句子才能表达动作的多样性。

三、关于九个小词库

我认为记叙文的心情描写是伴随着动作一起的，你有什么样的心情就有什么样的动作。

笔者平时有摘抄各种文学作品的佳句和词块的习惯。

仅挑选一小部分，省略了伴随心情的手、脚、脸等词库，进行粗线条的概括。

虽然不多，但我认为也足够应付高考了。

我将它们分为九大类：

一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中：

二、如何表达同情和关心

三、如何表达轻松

四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情

五、如何表达胆小、害怕

六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬

七、如何表达悲伤

八、如何表达疲劳

九、如何表达疼痛

四、实战演练

（这道题是浙江考试说明上的例子，但没有给答案）

步骤一：

第一个转折：

Theyoungman;suitcasesinthebackseat;loudnoiseofanalarm;thebank;robbery;theshouts;people;thebankthief

报警：

群众拦阻；警察赶到

心情：

害怕；困惑；疼痛

第二个转折：

真相：

一箱书；赶往学校报到

心情：

生气；轻松；关心

步骤二：

Hedarednotstopanddashedtothecrowd.Hewasstruckdeadwithterror.Hisheartwasbeatingpainfullyfastandbangingagainsthisribs.However,hearingtheshouts,severalstrongyoungmeninfrontofthebankblockedandarrestedhim.Now,everynerveinAuthur’sbodywarnedhimnottogoanyfurther.“Idoubtthatguyisthebankthief.”saidAuthur,pointingthemanbehind.[用非谓语动词]Theangerhadreturnedlikeahardlumpatthebackofhisthroat.

Luckily,justthenupcamethepolicemen[倒装句].Authurbegantocalmdown,hisbreathinggrowingslower.[用非谓语动词]Hecouldfeelthebloodsurgingroundhisbodyandreleasingthetension.Whenthesuitcaseswereopened,manybookscameinsight.TheyoungmangaveAuthuralookofconcern,saying“Ireallyhopeyouarenothurt.Maybewecanbefriends.”Bothofthemsmiled.

（划线部分都是来自九小词库）

五、九小词库【以下均摘自文学作品，部分词汇需要你查词典理解】

一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中：

词语：

NounsThoughts,concentration,determination

VerbsFelt,tried,resolved,determined

Heard,remembered

词块：

*Deepinthought

*Lostinherownthoughts

*Trieddesperatelytoremember

*Heardlittleofwhatwasbeingsaidaroundher

*Nothingwasgoingtostophimnow

*Feltahardballofdeterminationtighteninginhisstomach

佳句：

Shetrieddesperatelytorememberwhereshehadseenhimbefore.

Shewasdeepinthoughtandheardlittleofwhatwasbeingsaidaroundher.

Heshudderedandtensed,asahardballofdeterminationtightenedinhisstomach.

二、如何表达同情和关心

词语：

NounsFace,mouth,smile,eyebrows

Concern,sympathy,comfort,warmth

AdjectivesSoft,warm,calm,sympathetic,comforting

VerbsGave,flashed

Drew,turned

词块：

*Faceturnedsoftandsympathetic

*Gaveheralookofconcern

*Drewhereyebrowstogether

*Mouthturneddownatthecorners

*Flashedacomfortingsmile

佳句：

Hisfaceturnedsoftandsympatheticandhisvoicesanktoamurmur.

Shedrewhereyebrowstogetherandturnedhermouthdowninalookofconcern.

三、如何表达轻松

词语：

NounsHeart,pulse,blood

Chest,head,brow,scalp,sweat

AdjectivesCalm,grateful

VerbsEased,slowed,calmed,releasedached

词块：

*Poundingeasedinherchest

*Breathingslowed

*Rapidbeatofherheartbecamecalmer

*Sweatdriedonherbrow

*Bloodsurgedroundherbody

*Releasedthetensioninherbody

*Gratefulforhisnarrowescape

佳句：

Shebegantocalmdownandherheartstartedtoslow,butthepanichadleftanacheinherheadandaringinginherears.

Slowly,thepoundingeasedinherchestandthesweatdriedonherbrow.

Shecouldfeelthebloodsurgingroundherbodyandreleasingthetension.

Herbreathinggrewslower,asanewcalmsettledoverher.

四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情

词语：

NounsHeart,pulse,breath,throat

Anger,rage,fury,temper,wrath,disgust,contempt,resentment

AdjectivesCross,furious,raging

Jealous,envious,resentful

Irritating,frustrating

Bitter,vicious,poisonous

Breathless,sweating

VerbsSwept,poured

Pounded,exploded,erupted

Shook,trembled,writhed

Raced,hammered

Clenched,gripped

词块：

*Redmist

*Spittingbundleofrage

*Viciousflashoftemper

*Hardlumpatthebackofherthroat

*Lefthimbreathless

*Madehisheartrace

*Hammeredinhishead

*Sweptthroughhimlikeatidalwave

*Burningwithrage

*Wrathexplodedlikeavolcano

*Pouredfromherlikeanacid

*Surroundedhimlikeafoulstench

*Poisonedtheairaroundhim

佳句：

Hewassweatingandburningwithrage.

Shesawhisfacethroughnarrowedeyesandafogofrage.

Herreplyfuelledhisangerandheeruptedlikeavolcano.

Theangerhadreturnedlikeahardlumpatthebackofherthroat.

Hisfuryknewnolimits–oneviciousflashoftemperafteranother.

Herragesweptthroughherlikeatidalwave,surroundingherlikeafoulstench.

五、如何表达胆小、害怕

词语：

NounsFear,dread,panic,terror,horror,turmoil

Thoughts,instinct

Heart,chest,pulse,blood

Head,brain,temples,forehead

Breath,throat,windpipe,cheeks,tongue,bile

Stomach,gut,cramps

Skin,hair,shivers,tingle,prickle

AdjectivesNumb,sick,nervous,uneasy

Dry,tight,thick,heavy

Long,deep,short,shallow

Unsteady,shuddering,rasping

Quick,fast,painful

Cold,tingling

Hot,sweaty

VerbsFelt,thought,urged,warned,paralysed

Rose,grew,swept,surged,seized

Bubbled,gripped,clutched,choked,strangled

Breathed,blew,hissed,sucked,gulped,gasped,tasted

Beat,leapt,raced,banged,throbbed,pounded,hammered,quickened

Crept,crawled,prickled,scuttled

Ran,tore,pumped,drenched

Dropped,fluttered,squeezed,tightened,gripped,stabbed

词块：

*Sickwithfear

*Throatwasdryandtight

*Tonguefeltthickandheavyinhismouth

*Fearwaslikeabitterbileatthebackofhisthroat

*Coldsweat

*Prickleoffearinthebottomofhisspine

*Likeanelectricshock

*Likealeadballinhisstomach

*Numbandparalysedbyfear

*Dreadsweptthroughhimlikeatidalwave

*Fearsettledonhimlikeadarkfog

*Struckdeadwithterror

*Terrorsurgedthroughher

*Fearseizedhiminitsjaws

*Thoughtoftheconsequencesurgedhimon

*Instinctsscreamedathimto...

*Everynerveinhisbodywarnedhimnotto...

*Couldtastethefearinthebackofhisthroat

*Gulpedair

*Letoutagasp

*Blewouthercheekstostopherselfhowling

*Tooklong,shudderingbreaths

*Panicroseinhischest

*Panicbubbledinherthroat

*Fearchokedhimwithitsmurderoushands

*Snakedroundhiswindpipe

*Heartpounded

*Pulseraced

*Missedabeat

*Bangedagainsthisribs

*Heartabandonedhischesttopoundinhisthroat

*Squeezedherheartlikeavice

*Bloodpoundedinhertemples

*Drenchedinsweat

*Coldsweatpoureddownhisforehead

*Skincrawled

*Hairsprickledonthebackofhisneck

*Shiverstoredownherspineandrackedherbody

*Likeahundredspiderswerescuttlingdownherback

*Stomachdropped

*Likeamothflutteringinsideherstomach

*Doubledoverwithcramps

*Grippedwithanxiety

*Likeavolcanoeruptinginsideher

佳句：

Everynerveinhisbodywarnedhimnottogoanyfurther.

Allhisinstinctsscreamedathimtoslipawaybeforehewasspotted.

Hewassickwithfear,butthethoughtoftheconsequencesurgedhimon.

Herthroatwasdry,hertonguethickandheavyinhermouth.

Fearchokedhimwithitsmurderoushands.Itgrippedathisthroatandstrangledhisbreathintoshort,shallowgasps.

Shewasstruckdeadwithterror.Herheartwasbeatingpainfullyfastandbangingagainstherribs.

Herheartmissedabeat,squeezedlikeavicebytheshock.

Asthebloodpoundedinhertemples,herbrainquickenedandallhersenseswerealert.

Blowingouthercheeks,shedrewalong,shudderingbreathandtriedtodampenthesenseofimpendingdoom.

Hefeltuneasy.Thehairsonthebackofhisneckprickledwithdreadandhewasdrenchedinsweat.

Fearsettledonherlikeadarkfog,bringingachillthatcreptoverherandthatnoamountofheatcoulddriveaway.

Thefearwaslikeanelectricshock,pumpingshiveringwavestearingthroughhisbodyandmakinghishairstandonend.

Hedoubledoverwithcramps.Itwasasifaleadballhadbeendroppedinhisstomachandwasblockinghisgut.

Herstomachwasgrippedwithanxiety,likeavolcanoeruptinginsideher.

Somethingwasmakingherfeelveryuneasy.Itwasgnawingatherstomachandflutteringasifshehadswallowedabutterfly.

六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬

词语：

NounsMind,senses,nerves,confusion,embarrassment

Body,heart,breath,throat,tongue,mouth

Hands,palms,stomach

AdjectivesThick,dry,fuzzy

Tense,sharp,alert

Sweaty,breathless

VerbsShook,trembled

Pounded,fluttered

Gulped,swallowed

Shrunk,shrivelled

词块：

*Tonguewasthickandfuzzy

*Throatwasdry

*Likeanervousrabbitcaughtintheheadlights

*Blizzardofnervesandconfusion

*Heartpounded

*Heartfluttered

*Heldtheirbreath

*Watchedwithbatedbreath

*Trembledlikeanervousrabbit

*Butterfliesflutteredinherstomach

*Bodywastenseandhersensesalert

*Feltasifthewholeworldwaswatching

*Insidesshrivelledwithembarrassment

*Mistdescendedonhismind

佳句：

Herhandswereshaking.Butterfliesflutteredinherheartandstomach.

Amistdescendedonhermind.Shefeltasifshewaswalkinginablizzardofnervesandconfusion.

Shefeltherbodytenseandhersensessharpen,asshewatchedwithbatedbreath.

Hetriedtospeak,buthistonguewasthickandfuzzyandpastedtotheroofofhismouth.

Hefeltasifthewholeworldwaswatchinghim,andhisinsidesshrivelledwithembarrassment.

七、如何表达悲伤

词语：

NounsSadness,misery,grief,despair,loneliness,regret

Heart,throat,lump,sobs

AdjectivesCold,hollow

Painful,horrible

VerbsFilled,welled,choked,broke

词块：

*Silent,shudd