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讨论未取得一致意见
一、选择要点
1.赞同儿童时期开始学英语。
2.儿童记忆力好,记单词多。
3.为今后打基础。
4.反对从儿童时期开始学英语。
5.既学汉语拼音又学英语易混淆。
6.影响今后的汉语和英语的学习。
7.结论:
未取得一致意见
二、简译要点
1.agree/thinkthatchildrenshouldstarttolearnEnglishfromchildhood.
agree/thinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood
2.Childrenhaveaverygoodmemory.ThecanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart.
3.inordertolayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning
helpthemlayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning
4.notthink/agreethatchildrenshouldstarttolearnEnglishfromchildhood.
notthink/agreethatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood
5.studybothChinesepinyinandEnglishatthesametime,easytomixthemup
6.haveasideeffectnotonlyontheirfutureChineselearningbutalsoontheirfutureEnglishlearning
7.Inaword,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.
三、扩展合并要点
1.Someofthemagree/thinkthatchildrenshouldstarttolearnEnglishfromchildhood.
2/3.Aschildrenhaveaverygoodmemory,theycanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart,whichwillhelpthemlayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning.
4.Butothersdonotagree.YoungchildrenhavetolearnChinesepinyinatschool.
5.IftheystudyChinesepinyinandEnglishatthesametime,itwillbeveryeasyforthemtomixthemup.
6.ThiswillhaveasideeffectnotonlyontheirfutureChineselearningbutalsoontheirfutureEnglishlearning
7.Inaword,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.
四、整理成文
OnePossibleVersion
ThestudentsofClass2hadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearning
Englishfromchildhood.SomeofthemthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood.Aslittleboysandgirlshaveaverygoodmemory,theycanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart.ThiswillhelpthemlayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning.Butothersdonotagree.YoungchildrenhavetolearnChinesepinyinatschool.IftheystudyChinesepinyinandEnglishatthesametime,itwillbeveryeasyforthemtomixthemup.ThiswilldoalotofharmnotonlytotheirChineselearningbutalsototheirfutureEnglishlearning.Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.
书面表达
(2)评讲简案
试题:
五月四日,高三年级一班和二班之间将进行一次有关环保问题的演讲比赛(atalkshowonenvironmentprotection)。
此前,二班邀请清华大学的DrLi做相关内容的报告。
假定你是二班的班长,请你草拟一个有关报告会的口头通知。
注意:
内容应包括提示及表格内的全部要点;
词数在100左右;
开头己为你写好。
报告内容
近些年北京的环境问题及己取得的进步
地点
教学楼三楼会议厅auditorium
时间
4月30日,星期三下午2:
00
目的
帮助大家收集信息,为演讲做好准备
参加者
全班同学
其他安排
会后讨论
MayIhaveyourattention,please?
Asyouknow,ourclasswillhaveatalkshowonenvironmentprotectionwithClassOneonMay4th.Beforeittakesplace,we
一、选择要点
1.演讲比赛前,我班将邀请清华大学的DrLi做相关内容的报告
2.报告内容:
3.报告的地点:
4.报告的时间:
5.报告的目的:
6.全班同学参加听报告
7.报告会后讨论
二、译出要点
1.Beforethetalkshow,wewillinviteDr.LifromQinghuaUniversitytogiveusatalkontheenvironmentproblem.
2.HistalkwilltellusabouttheimprovementinenvironmentprotectioninrecentyearsinBeijing.
3.Thereport/talkwillbeginintheauditoriumonthethirdfloorintheteachingbuilding.
4.Thereport/talkwillbeginat2:
00pmonWednesday,April30th.
5.Thereport/talkwillhelpusgetenoughinformationtomakegoodpreparationsforthecomingtalkshow.
6.Everyoneofusshouldgetthereontimetolistentothereport.
7.Wewillhaveadiscussionafterthereport.
三、合并要点
1-2.Beforethetalkshow,wewillinviteDr.LifromQinghuaUniversitytogiveusatalkontheenvironmentproblemandhewilltellusabouttheimprovementinenvironmentprotectioninrecentyearsinBeijing.
3-4.Thereportwillbeginat2:
00pmonWednesday,April30th,intheauditoriumonthethirdfloorintheteachingbuilding.
5-6.Thereport/talkwillhelpusgetenoughinformationtomakegoodpreparationsforthecomingtalkshowsoeveryoneofusshouldgetthereontimetolistentoit.
四、增加要点
Pleasemakefullnoteswhilelisteningtothereportbecausewewillhaveadiscussionafterthereport.
五、整理修饰成文
MayIhaveyourattention,please?
Asyouknow,ourclasswillhaveatalkshowonenvironmentprotectionwithClassOneonMay4th.Beforeittakesplace,wewillinviteDr.LifromQinghuaUniversitytogiveusatalkontheenvironmentproblemandhewilltellusabouttheimprovementinenvironmentprotectioninrecentyearsinBeijing.Thereportwillbeginat2:
00pmonWednesday,April30th,intheauditoriumonthethirdfloorintheteachingbuilding.Thereportwillhelpusgetenoughinformationtomakegoodpreparationsforthecomingtalkshowsoeveryoneofusshouldgetthereontimetolistentoit.Bytheway,pleasemakefullnoteswhilelisteningtothereportbecausewewillhaveadiscussionafterthereport.
That’sall.Thankyou.
书面表达(3)评讲简案
根据下列六幅图所反映的内容,结合写作提示,以“ChangesInOurLife”为题写一篇
120左右的短文。
写作要点提示:
过去寄信、听收音机、住房拥挤
现在打电话、看电视、住房宽敞
设想一下图中所反映的过去到现在的变化就发生在你的家里。
图中人物就是你、你的父母。
还要讲明变化的大体时间(可根据常识)
一、提炼要点
1、与外界联系方式上的变化
过去:
父辈寄信与别人联系
现在:
我们可以在家里打电话与别人联系
2、获取信息方面的变化
父辈听收音机获取信息
我们看电视获取信息
3、居住条件方面的变化
父辈结婚时住在一间挤满家具的小房间里
我们已经搬进了两层楼的楼房里了(可以设想)
总结点题:
过去二十年的变化给我们带来了什么(可以设想)
二、简要译出要点
1、Inthepastmyparentsgotintouchwithothersbysendinglettersbutnowwecangetintouchwithothersoverthetelephoneathome.
2、Inthepastmyparentslistenedtotheradiofornewsandotherinformation,butnowwecangetmuchnewsandinformationbywatchingTV.
3、Inthepastwhenmyparentsgotmarriedabouttwentyyearsago,theyhadtoliveinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture,butnowwehavemovedintoatwo-storeyedbuildingwith
quiteafewroomsinsideit.
Inshort,changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtusalotofhappinessandconvenience.
三、增加要点
Overthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.Takemyfamilyforexample.
Anotherbigchangeisthatourhousingconditionshavebeenimproved
四、修饰成文
ChangesInOurLife
Overthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.Takemyfamilyforexample.Inthepastmyparentsgotintouchwithothersbysendinglettersbutnowwecangetintouchwithothersoverthetelephoneathome.Andmyparentsusedtolistentotheradiofornewsandotherinformation,butnowwecangetmuchmorenewsandinformationbywatchingTV.Anotherbigchangeisthatourhousingconditionshavebeenimproved.Whentheygotmarriedabouttwentyyearsago,myparentshadtoliveinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture,butnowwehavemovedintoatwo-storeyedbuildingwithquiteafewroomsinsideit.
书面表达(4)评讲简案
假如你叫李华,2003年1月20日下午3:
00去长城宾馆通知Smith先生去听演讲,不巧Smith先生不在,请你给他留个便条,按活动日程表简述活动内容,按所给路线图写明步行去科学宫的路线。
(词数:
100左右)
时间:
明天上午8点地点:
科学宫
主讲人:
南京大学王教授内容:
污染问题
(1)theGreatWallHotel
(2)trafficlight
(3)post-office(4)theSciencePalace
1、来通知你有关演讲的事,碰巧出去了,得留个便条给你。
2、交代演讲时间、地点、演讲人、演讲内容
明天上午8点、科学宫、南京大学王教授、污染问题
3、告诉到科学宫怎么去:
步行去,出了旅馆左拐弯、沿路走,来到有交通灯的地方。
然后右拐弯,穿过第一个
十字路口,往前走,穿过第二个十字路口。
看到一家邮局,科学宫就在邮局的对面。
二、简单翻译
1.cometoinformyouofaspeech,happentobeout,leaveyouthenote
2.alecture/aspeech
at8:
00tomorrowmorning,intheSciencePalace,ProfessorWangfromNanjingUniversity,on/aboutpollution
3.walkthere/gothereonfoot,getoutofthehotel,turnleft,walkdown/alongthestreet,cometoatrafficlight,turnright,crossthefirstcrossing,goforward/straightahead,goacrossthesecondcrossing,seeapostoffice,theSciencePalacerightoppositetoit/ontheotherside.
三、扩展成句
Icametoinformyouofaspeech.Youhappenedtobeout.Ihavetoleaveyouthenote.
TherewillbeaspeechonpollutionintheSciencePalaceat8:
00tomorrowmorning.Itwillbemade/given/diliveredbyProfessorWangfromNanjingUniversity.
Youcangothereonfoot.Getoutofthehotel.Turnleft.Walkdownthestreet.Cometoatrafficlight.Turnright.Crossthefirstcrossing.Goforward.Goacrossthesecondcrossing.Seeapostoffice.TheSciencePalaceisrightoppositetoit/ontheothersideofthestreet.
四、合并要点
Icametoinformyouofaspeechbutyouhappenedtobeout.SoIhavetoleaveyouthenote.
TherewillbeaspeechonpollutiongivenbyProfessorWangfromNanjingUniversityintheSciencePalaceat8:
00tomorrowmorning.
Youcangothereonfoot.Whenyougetoutofthehotel,turnleftandwalkdownthestreetuntilyoucometoatrafficlight,andthereturnright,crossthefirstcrossingandgostraightahead.Thengoacrossthesecondcrossingandyou’llseeapostoffice.TheSciencePalaceisrightoppositetoit.
五、增加要点
Ifyouareinterestedinthelecture,pleasegettotheSciencePalacebefore8:
00./Youareexpectedtolistentothespeech.
TheSciencePalaceisnotfarfromtheGreatWallHotel
六、整理成文(注意便条的格式)
January20,2003
DearMr.Smith,
TodayIcametoinformyouofaspeechbutyouhappenedtobeout.SoIhavetoleaveyouthenote.
TherewillbeaspeechonpollutionmadebyProfessorWangfromNanjingUniversityintheSciencePalaceat8:
00tomorrowmorning.Ifyouareinterestedinthelecture,pleasegettotheSciencePalacebefore8:
00.
TheSciencePalaceisnotfarfromtheGreatWallHotel.Youcangothereonfoot.Whenyougetoutofthehotel,turnleftandwalkdownthestreetuntilyoucometoatrafficlight,andthereturnright,crossthefirstcrossingandgostraightahead.Thengoacrosst