读后续写原创课件Buck Attack及范文Word文件下载.docx

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AlexisVaughan,17,satquietlyinthepassengerseatofherdad'

scar.ShestaredoutthewindowatthePreston,Idaho, 

cornfields.

Alexis,ahighschoolstudent,lethereyeslazilyscanthelandscapeforwildlife.Still,shewas 

terrified 

whenadeercameintoviewabout200yardsinfrontofthem,justafewfeetoff 

theroad."

Dad,there'

sadeer,there!

"

Alexissaid,rollingdownthewindowforabetterlook.Itwasathree-point 

buck（雄鹿）---amaledeerwithsharp,three-prongedantlers（角）oneachsideofitshead．

As 

thecar 

movedcloser,Alexissawthatthebuck'

sheadwasbenttoward 

theground．Thensheheardascream.Afewsecondslater,shesawanarmflyupnearthebuck'

shead．Alexisrealizedthebuckwasattackingawoman. 

SuePanter,a44-year-oldmother,hadbeenoutforhermorningrun.Thebuckhadcomeoutfromthetallcornandbeganfollowingher.HavinglivedinruralIdahoforyears,Sueknewthatmostbucksgotfrightenedbyhumans.Butthisbuckedgedcloser,evenwhenshethrewatitwithahandfulofgravels（石子）.

Suewenttopickupalogtouseforself-defense,andthebuckcharged．Itliftedherwithitsantlersandthrewherintotheair.Suecouldfeelthehornspunctured（刺穿）herlegandbloodfloweddownherleg．Withinseconds,thebuckhadpushedherofftheroadandintothecornfield.

WhenAlexisandherfatherpulledup,thebuckwasrollingSuelikearagdoll．Alexislookedintothewoman'

s 

eyes,andbeforeherfatherhadevenstoppedthecar,the104poundteenagerjumpedquicklyoutofthecaranddowntheslopetowardthebuck.Shewaskickingandhittingittogetitsattention.ThenMichael,herfather,whohadfollowedhisdaughter,wrestledthebuckawayfromthewomenbyholdingtheantlers.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

AlexishelpedSueuptheslope. 

Paragraph2:

Thensheheardherfatheryell. 

这个文本跟高考的骑车遇狼很类似，也是属于problem-solving这个类型，同时弘扬真善美的主题---路人挺身而出救人于危难中。

课件如下：

参考范文：

Para1:

AlexishelpedSueuptheslope.Sheimmediatelyseatedherintotheircar,andthenappliedacleantowelfromherbagtoSue'

srightlegtightly,whichwouldhelptostopitsbleeding.Suewascoveredwithwoundsfromheadtotoeandshewasinragsbecauseofthesevereattacks.ApparentlySuewastooshockedbytheaccidenttoletoutaword.Alexistalkedsoftlytocomforttheterrifiedwomanandthoughtabouthowtohelpherfather.

Para2:

Thensheheardherfatheryell.Michaelhadbeenknockedtotheground,hisrightlegspearedbythebuck.AlexisgrabbedahammerfromthecarandrantowhereMichaellayonhisbackinthedirt.Shebeatthebucksheadandneck,buttheblowsdidn'

twork.Standingoverherfather,Alexiscouldseethathewasstrugglingtobreathe.Turningthehammeraround,Alexissqueezedhereyesshutandhitthebuck'

sneck.Whensheopenedhereyes,thebuckwasrunningaway.Alexisgotinthedriver’sseatandspedtowardthehospital.