英语作文评语大全Word下载.doc

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Wonderful！

Fantastic！

Marvelous！

采用整体印象类评语对于起始阶段的学生有较好的激励作用，但若千篇一律使用此类评语，就会使学生无法正确认识自己的写作水平，最终导致教师的评语失去应有的作用。

2.规范导知类评语

Beautiful.Clear.Wonderful.Goodhand-writing.

You’recarefulofusingpronunciation.

Gladtoseeyourimprovementinhandwriting.

I’mexpectingclearer/morebeautifulhand-writingfromyounexttime.

You’dbetterpaymoreattentiontowordorder.

Betterbemorecarefulofyourspelling.

It’simportanttocomposeagraftbeforehand.

3.情感调控类评语

Iappreciateyourhandwriting.

YouhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishproverbs.

Youarequiteawareofmakingmeaningfulsentences.

Youarericherthanothersincollectingandusingtypicalsentencesandidioms.

I’mexpectinggreaterprogressfromyouinwriting.Comeon.

Ifyouneedmyhelp,neverhesitatetocometome.

警句：

Hardworkleadstosuccess.

Nottoadvanceistogoback.

Nooneiswithoutfaults.

Keepingisharderthanwinning.Keepitup.

二、微观写作技能方面的评语

1.专项点拨类评语

It’spropertousetheproverbinPara.2quiteclever.

Youaregoodatusingattributiveclausesinyourwriting.

The“struck”sentenceisperfectlyused.

You’dbetteruse“thirdperson”inthefirstpara.

It’sgoodtousethepasttenseinyourwriting.

2.佳句欣赏类评语

教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的符号（如E—Excellent）或标识不同星级等。

Whatawonderfulsentenceusing“cover”.

It’sreallycleverofyoutousethisbeautifulsentence.

Theinvertedsentenceiswellwtitten.

3.谋篇布局类评语

Agoodbeginning.

Aperfectending.

Well-organized.Perfectly-expanded.

Thefirstpara.makesagoodbeginning.

Thelastpara.makesaperfectending.

Allthepointshavebeencovered.

It’scleverofyoutouseatopicsentenceatthebeginningofapara.

It’swonderfultouseproperconjunctionsbetweensentences.

Youaregoodatdevelopingpara.

Youhavemadegreatprogressindevelopingpassage.

Iamgladtoseethesentenceconherenceinyourlastpara.

Betterpaymoreattentiontotherelationshipbetweensentences.

It’sreallywonderfultostart/endyoursentenceswithadverbials.

在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为规范的引领，重在对学生进行词语方面的引导；

对高年级学生则应侧重对文章的结构、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方面的指点和引导。

虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来说不太适合，以为他们连老师评他们什么都看不懂，但我们平时对作文的批改确实没做到这么仔细，有很大启发。

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