浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习：写作提升练(五)+Word版含答案.doc
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写作提升练（五） 读后续写
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（2017·浙江普通高中学业水平考试仿真模拟）
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的短文。
Wanttoknowhowtosurviveaplanecrash?
Whataboutaterroristattack?
Toputyourmindateaseinnearlyanysituation,youcanalmostguaranteeyoursurvivalifyouneverleavethehousewithout3necessaryitems,i.e.alighter（打火机）,alifestraw（救命吸管）andaraincoat.
Rightofftheplacefullofdanger,yourfirstinstinct（本能）mightbetosearchforhelptheminuteyourealizeyou’reintrouble.Butsurvivalexpertsinsistyoushouldstaywhereyouareuntilhelpfindsyou,instead;doingsowillmakeiteasierforthesearchandrescueteamstolocateyourlocation.
Whatshouldyoudountilthen,youask?
Preparetohunkerdown（盘腿坐下）forthelongrun.That’swhereyourthreepiecesofsurvivalnecessitiescomeintoplay,Stewartsays.
Forone,youshouldhavesomethingtostartafireonyouatalltimes.Fire-startingtoolsareinexpensivetopurchase,andyoucaneasilycarrythemaroundinabackpackorpantpocket.Butevenwithoutafancyitem,allyoureallyneedissomethingtolightthefirstflame.
“Youcanusecottonballscoveredinpetroleumjelly（凡士林油）asafirestarter,”StewarttoldUSATODAY.“Theyarewaterresistantandwillstartafirewithjustaspark.”
Second,you’llneedsomethingtomakeyourdrinkingwaterfittodrink,suchasacanteen（饭盒）thatcanboilwater.Stewartrecommendsbuyinga$20lifestraw,which“canbestruckintothemuddiestpoolofwateryoucanfindandyousuckthewateroutlikeastraw.”Anydoubt?
Itcouldstillsaveyourlife,Stewartsays.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头词或句子已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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“Ialwayssaythatyourlifedependsonyourwatersource,”hesaid.
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Youcankeepallthreeitemswithyouwhenyouareawayfromyourhome.
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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Tomappearedonthesidewalkwithabucketofwhitewashandalong-handledbrush.HestoppedatthefenceinfrontofthehousewherehelivedwithhisauntPolly.Helookedatit,andalljoylefthim.Thefencewaslongandhigh.Heputthebrushintothewhitewashandmoveditalongthetopofthefence.Herepeatedtheoperation.Hefeltitwasdifficultforhimtocontinueandsatdown.
Heknewthathisfriendswouldarrivesoonwithallkindsofinterestingplansfortheday.Theywouldwalkpasthimandlaugh.TheywouldmakejokesabouthisworkonabeautifulsummerSaturday.Thethoughtburnedhimlikefire.
Heputhishandsintohispocketsandtookoutallthatbelongedtohim.Perhapshecouldfindsomewaytopaysomeonetodothewhitewashingforhim.Buttherewasnothingofvalueinhispockets—nothingthatcouldbuyevenhalfanhouroffreedom.Soheputthebitsoftoysbackintohispocketsandgaveuptheidea.
Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,awonderfulideacametohim.Itfilledhismindwithagreat,brightlight.Calmlyhepickedupthebrushandstartedagaintowhitewash.
WhileTomwasworking,BenRogersappeared.Benwaseatinganappleashewalkedalongthestreet.Ashewalkedalong,hewasmakingnoiseslikethesoundofariverboat.Firstheshoutedloudly,likeaboatcaptain.Thenhesaid“Ding-Dong-Dong”,“Ding-Dong-Dong”againandagain,likethebellofariverboat.Andhemadeotherstrangenoises.WhenhecameclosetoTom,hestopped.
Tomwentonwhitewashing.HedidnotlookatBen.Benstaredforamomentandthensaid:
“Hello!
I’mgoingswimming,butyoucan’tgo,canyou?
”
Noanswer.Tommovedhisbrushcarefullyalongthefenceandlookedattheresultwiththeeyeofanartist.Bencamenearer.Tom’smouthwateredfortheapple,buthekeptonworking.
Bensaid,“Hello,oldfellow,you’vegottowork,hey?
”
Tomturnedsuddenlyandsaid,“Why,it’syou,Ben!
Iwasn’tnoticing.”
“Say—I’mgoingswimming.Don’tyouwishyoucould?
Butofcourseyou’dratherwork—wouldn’tyou?
Ofcourseyouwould.”
Tomlookedattheboyabit,andsaid“Whydoyoucallwork?
”
“Why,isn’tthatwork?
”Tomwentbacktohiswhitewashing,andansweredcarelessly.
“Well,maybeitis,andmaybeitisn’t.AllIknowis,itsuitsTomSawyer.”
“Ohcome,now,youdon’tmeantosaythatyoulikeit?
”Thebrushcontinuedtomove.
“Likeit?
Well,Idon’tseewhyIshouldn’tlikeit.Doesaboygetachancetowhitewashafenceeveryday?
”
Benstoppedeatinghisapple.Tommovedhisbrushbackandforth,steppedbacktolookattheresult,addedatouchhereandthere,andsteppedbackagain.Benwatchedeverymoveandgotmoreandmoreinterested.Soonhesaid,“Say,Tom,letmewhitewashalittle.”
Tomthoughtforamoment,wasabouttoagree;buthechangedhismind.
“No—no—itwon’tdo,Ben.Yousee,AuntPollywantsthisfencetobeperfect.Ithasgottobedoneverycarefully.Idon’tthinkthereisoneboyinathousand,maybetwothousand,thatcandoitwellenough.”
“No—isthatso?
Ohcome,now—letmejusttry.Onlyjustalittle.”“Ben,I’dliketo,butifitisn’tdoneright,I’mafraidAuntPolly...”
“Oh,I’llbecareful.Nowletmetry.Say—I’llgiveyouthecoreofmyapple.”
“Well,here—No,Ben,nowdon’t.I’mafraid...”
“I’llgiveyouallofit.”
注意:
1.所叙写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Tomgaveupthebrushwithunwillingnessonhisface,butjoyinhisheart.
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Andhehadnotworked.Hehadhadaniceidletimeallthetime,
参考答案
写作提升练五 读后续写
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“Ialwayssaythatyourlifedependsonyourwatersource,”hesaid.“Ifyouareinabadsituationandhavetodrinkwaternotfittodrink,youtaketheriskofdrinkingwildpoisonouswater,whichcanquicklykillyou.”Inthiscase,alifestrawwillcomeintoplay.Finally,Stewartrecommendshavingaraincoat,oranythingthatcanbeusedtoprotectyouagainsttheweather.Evenfoodshouldtakeabackseattothesethreenecessaryitems,hesays.“Everyonegetsreallyworriedaboutfood,butthehumanbodyisdesignedtolastalongtimewithoutfood.Whenitcomestosurvivalnecessaryitems,food’sonthebottomofthelist,”hesaid.
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Youcankeepallthreeitemswithyouwhenyouareawayfromyourhome.Youcankeeptheminabackpackifyou’rehikingorcamping,orevenacarifyou’retravelingontheroad.Butinaword,thebestthingyoucandotoensureyourownsurvivalhappensbeforeyouevenleave.
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Tomgaveupthebrushwithunwillingnessonhisface,butjoyinhisheart.AndwhileBenworkedatthefenceinthehotsun,Tomsatunderatree,eatingtheapple,andplanninghowtogetmorehelp.Therewereenoughboys.Eachonecametolaugh,butremainedtowhitewash.BythetimeBenwastired,TomsoldthenextchancetoBillyforakite;andwhenBillywastired,Johnnyboughtinforadeadratandsoon,hourafterhour.Andwhenthemiddleoftheafternooncame,Tomhadwonmanytreasures.
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Andhehadnotworked.Hehadhadaniceidletimeallthetime,withplentyofcompany—andthefencehadbeenwhitewashedthreetimes.Ifhehadn’trunoutofwhitewash,Tomwouldhaveownedeverythingbelongingtohisfriends.Hehaddiscoveredagreatlawofhumanaction,namely,thatinordertomakeamanoraboywantathing,itisonlynecessarytomakethethingdifficulttoget.
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