托福写作高分满分范文点评.docx

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托福写作高分满分范文点评

托福写作高分满分范文点评

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托福写作难点话题一览

Isittruethatmediapaytoomuchattentiontothepersonallivesoffamouspeople?

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Television,newspapers,magazines,andothermediapaytoomuchattentiontothepersonallivesoffamouspeoplesuchaspublicfiguresandcelebrities.Usespecificreasonsanddetailstoexplainyouropinion.

写作思路展开结构分析

这个观点是比较片面的，当中忽略了一个大众的需求问题，所以选择不能同意这个观点。

有些媒体（大众传媒massmedia）表现得过于关注名人。

但是真正的起因（therealcause）却是大众（thepublic;thebroadmassesofthepeople）本身——大众过于关注名人以及名人的私生活。

媒体不过是在迎合大众（catertotheneedsofcustomers;过去几年里,电视一直迎合大众的口味。

Inthepastseveralyears,televisionhasbeenplayingtothegallery.），因为媒体也是商业机构（mercialorganization），也要盈利（profit-driving）。

不是所有媒体都在一味迎合大众，也不是所有的televisionprogram,newspapercolumn都在关注名人。

本话题高分范文赏析

Itistruethattelevisionprogramsconcerningpersonallivesofcelebritiesalwaysreceivethehighestaudiencerating.Itisalsotruethatnewspapersandmagazinesareconstantlyreportingstories,whichareusuallybeyondconfirmation,aboutfamouspeople,andthatautobiographieswrittenbypublicfiguresarealwaysonthetop10best-sellers'list.Itseemsthatweliveinaworldwhereafewindividualsaredrawingnearlyallattentions.Nevertheless,itisnotexactlyprecisetocriticizethemassmedia,includingtelevision,newspapers,magazinesandsoforth,forpayingtoomuchfocusonthepersonallivesoffamouspeoplesuchaspublicfiguresandcelebrities.Infact,itisthepublic,toalargeextent,ratherthanmassmedia,thatispayingtoomuchattentiononpersonallivesofcelebrities.

Mostorganizationsofmassmediaindustry,beinginherentlymercial,aredrivenbybusinessmotivations.Televisionprogramproducers,aswellascolumnistsandwriters,arealwaysawareofwhatthepublicwanttosee,thereforetendtopandertotastesofthepublic.Toputinanotherway,themassmediaisaudience-oriented,andthephenomenoniswellinterpretedandmanipulatedthatwhenfamouspeoplesuchasactors,athletesandrockstarsgivetheiropinions,manypeoplelisten.Itisthenatureofthepublic,whoarecuriousenoughaboutpersonallivesoffamouspeople,sincetheycanneverbefamous.

Ontheotherhand,itisholisticallydetrimentalforthesocietyifthemassmediapaytoomuchfocusonfamousfewsoastoignoretherestoftheindividuals.Afterall,themissionofthemassmediaisnotmerelytocatertotheneedsofcustomers,buthasamuchwiderscope,suchasto___thetruth,todefinewhatisgoodandwhatisbad;topromoteculturalvalues,andthelistcouldbeendless.Morepopularscienceprogramsshouldbeproducedbytelevision,morereportsonpoorrurallivesshouldbepublicized,morebooksconcerningnotfamousbutrespectablepeoplesuchas,nurseswhoarefightingSARSfearlessly,teacherswhoareperformingtheirdutiesregardlessofpovertyofremotevillages,journalistswhopublicizetheirpiecesunderpoliticalmenace,andthisisanotherendlesslistshouldbewritten.

托福写作难点话题一览

Thebestwaytheschoolspendsagiftofmoney

Yourschoolhasreceivedagiftofmoney.Whatdoyouthinkisthebestwayforyourschooltospendthismoney?

Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyourchoice.

写作思路展开结构分析

大家要注意审题，站在学生和老师的不同立场上，对于学校做法怎样才是best肯定是有所区别的，一般来说选择增设或是改善学校的设施会是比较好的展开角度，比如新建或者扩建一下图书馆就是很不错的选择。

本话题高分范文赏析

Itisaveryfortunateourrencewhenaschoolreceivesasizablegrant.Schoolofficialsmustmakethedifficultdecisionofwheretoallocatethefunds,andIwanttoproposethatspendingthemoneyonputerswouldbethemostutilitariandecision.

Computersarerapidlygrowinginpopularity,tosuchanextentthattheyaffectallaspectsofmodernlife.Itisrarethatonefindsstimulatingemploymentthatdoesnotrequireatleastbasicputerskills.Ifchildrenaretobeesuessfulintoday'ssociety,theymusthaveunderstandinginthisfield.Asputersarethefuture,itisimportantforstudentstobeeadeptusersearlyinlife.Notallchildrenhaveequalopportunitiestolearntheimportantskillsofusingaputer.Manylow-inefamiliescannotaffordtopurchasesuchanexpensiveitem,thuscontinuingacycleofsocialimmobility.Purchasingputersforpublicschoolsgiveschildrenfromlow-inefamiliestheopportunitytobreakoutofthiscycle.

Finallyputersallowstudentstoaessawealthofinformationthatcouldnotpossiblybestoredinalibrary,orefficientlybekeptuptodate.Oneofthemostmonactivitiesonaputeris"surfing"theInter.TheInterisupdatedbyliterallybillionsofpeopleeveryday,andthereforeoffersupanyinformationthatonecoulddreamof.TheInterisalsoanexcellentsourceofinspiration,assomanypeoplethatupdateithaveincredibleideas.

Inconclusion,Ithinkthatspendingthegrantmoneytobuynewputerswouldbemostbeneficialfortheentireschool.Withtheadditionofnewputers,studentswillbeabletogetanedgeontheirpeersatdifferentschools,andbereadyforuniversityandtheworkforce.Thisisespeciallytrueforlow-inestudents.

Apersonyouknowisplanningtomovetoyourtownorcity.Whatdoyouthinkthispersonwouldlikeanddislikeaboutlivinginyourtownorcity?

Why?

Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyouressay.

写作思路展开结构分析

这是一道关系到大家实际情况的题目，但同时这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。

因此美征建议大家可以尽量展开想象。

注意：

不要只说mycity，要指出你所在城市的名字，比如：

Bei___g,Shanghai等等。

一般来说，人们会喜欢城市的原因有：

女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围。

而人们会讨厌的原因有：

交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义（exclusivism）、不友善（unfriendly）等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

IfmyfriendJoeywantstomovetoBei___g,Ithinkeventhoughshemightfindsomethingshedislikes,shewillultimatelylikethisgreatestcityinourcountry.Theweathermightbeonethingthatshedislikes.TheweatherinBei___gischaracterizedbydryclimateanditismuchwindyanddustythanthatofGuangzhoucity.Joeyisverysensitiveaboutherskin,soshewilldefinitelyhatedustywindsinBei___g.Moreover,Bei___g'swinterisfartoomuchcolderthanthatofGuangzhou,itmighttakeJoey,asmanyotherpeoplecamefromtheSouth,averylongtimetogetaustomedto.Nevertheless,shemightwellenjoywinterintheNorth,sinceshehasneverseensnowflakesinrealitybefore.IrememberedtheshiningofyearningandeagerinhereyeswhenIoncetoldherwhatthewinterintheNorthlookslike.

ShemightbealwaysirritatedbyheavytrafficinBei___g,thoughtaxisinBei___gcostmuchlessthaninGuangzhou.WhenIwasinGuangzhou,seldomwasItrappedbytrafficjams.Itmustberidiculousforhertohavespentmorethantwohoursandstilldidn'tarriveatthedestinationwhichismerely10kilometersaway.Andthemostludicrousthingis,evenifyoupossessaprivatecar,itismorelikelytobeuseless,forparkinglotsarealwayscrowded,whichmeansmoretimeistobewasted.GoodnewsforheristhatthebussystemandthatofsubwayinBei___garewelldevelopedandmoreconvenient,andshewon'thavetobearthatodorofbromhidrosisowingtoburningweatherassheonceexperiencedinbusesofGuangzhou.Whatshewilldefinitelyloveistheculturalethosofthecity.Bei___ghasahistoryprobablylongerthananyotherbigcityinChina.TovisitallhistoricallandscapesinBei___g,shewillneedatleastthreeyears,nokidding!

Bei___ghasthemostfamousandexcellentuniversities,thelargestlibraries,therichestmuseums,yetmostimportantofall,herbestfriend!

Amazingly,inthisagedcity,peoplearesometimesmoreinternational.Joeyisespeciallyfondofart,andBei___gistherightplaceforher,inwhichconcertsofinternationalsingersorothermusiciansaremuchfrequent,andshewillevenbeabletoattendCuiJian'scasualprivateconcertinacoffeeshoponarainyautumnweekend.

托福写作难点话题一览

Shouldschoolsaskstudentstoevaluatetheirteachers?

Schoolsshouldaskstudentstoevaluatetheirteachers.Doyouagreeordisagree?

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

写作思路展开结构分析

有保留地同意（agreewithreservations）。

学生在评判教师时，是否全部学生都可以客观评价（objectiveevaluation）?

是否有足够的能力（包括academicknowledge等等）去进行客观评价?

如果采取了这样的方式，就会出现老师迎合（caterto/panderto/playuptostudents'taste）学生而不是引导（guide;lead）学生，违背了教育的原则。

保留意见/这种方式：

允许学生进行评价，但是应该作为一个参考，同时要有其他的评判方式。

本话题高分范文赏析

Teachershaveaverydifficultjobinsociety.Theynotonlyhavetolearnhowtoteachmaterialeffectively,butalsomustlearnhowtodealwithawidevarietyofpersonalities.Whileteachingisadifficultjob,Ithinkitisimportantforschoolstoaskstudentstoevaluatetheirteachers.Ithinkthisistherightthingtodobecauseitencouragesteacherstotrytheirbest,itgivesstudentstheopportunitytochooseeffectiveteachers,anditallowstheschoolstohavethebestteacherspossibleteaching.Ifateacherknowsthatattheendoftheterm,thestudentswillbeevaluatinghis/herwork,thentheteacherwillbedriventodoaverygoodjob.Ifthereisnopressurefromevaluation,ateachermightbepronetodoingalessthanperfectjob.Ibelievethateveryoneneedsanoasionalevaluationtoensuretheyaredoingtheirjobcorrectly.Inthecaseofateacher,thestudentswillgivethemostimportantevaluations.Iftherewasapublicsummaryofwhichteacherscoredthehighestonhis/herevaluations,thenstudentswouldbeabletotakecoursesbasedonwhichteacherwasthebestatthejob.Thiswouldallowstudentstoexcelintheirstudies,andachievebettergrades.Finally,ifschoolsaskstudentstoevaluatetheirteachers,theschoolsthemselveswouldbeabletohavethebestteachersworkingoncampus.Ifateacherscoredtoolowonanevaluation,areplacementcouldbefound.Thisisamuchbettermethodthan