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高考英语满分作文

高考英语满分作文

08年作文题目

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。

请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：

1．词数：

100左右：

2．参考词汇：

房租—Tent（n.）.

I’mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andI’mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butI’lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.

Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!

Allthebest!

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。

作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以'which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

DearBob,

WelcometoChina!

Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.

IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere’rethreeroomsinit:

abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.

Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?

ThenI’Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport,seeyou.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

DearBob,

Howareyouthesedays?

I’msogladtoknowthatyou’llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI’vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.It’sjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.

Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyou’lllikeit.Ifnot,I’lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou.

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。

由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。

同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

DearBob,

I’msogladthatyouarecomingtolearnChinesehere.I’vealreadyfoundyouahousenearourschool.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutit.

YoumaygetonNo.llbusatFangCaoStreetandthenextstopisjustJianXinChineseSchool.Thehouseisneartheschool.Itisabout25squaremetres.Inthebedroom,thereisabed,asofastandingagainstthewallandatablenearthewindow.Youmayfindalightonthetableandachairnexttoit.Therearetwootherroomsconnectingthebedroom.Theleftoneisabathroomandtherightoneisakitchen.Soyoumaycookbyyourself.Therentforthehouseis500yuanpermonth.

Hopeyou’llenjoystayinghere!

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由

本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。

作文：

DearBob,

I’mgladtohearfromyou.

Welcometoourcityinseptember.I’vefoundasuitablehouseforyou.

ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.IfyoutaketheNo.11bus,itisjustonestop.

Itisaflatonthethirdfloorofabuilding.Ithasthreerooms,aliving-room,abathroomandakitchen.Youcancookyourself.Themirror,thebasinandthebathtubareveryconvenientforyou.Intheliving-room,thereisabed,asofaandadeskwithchair.Thedeskisnexttothewindow.Itwillbegoodforstudy.Thetotalsizeis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanamonth.

2007上海高考英语高分作文（gift）（2008-1-109:

1）

Gift

Confidence,whichmaycontributetoone’ssuccess,isregardedasoneofthemostimportantqualitiesinhumanbeingsnowadays.Hence,Iintendtomakeitapresenttosendtomydearsister.

Mysister,threeyearsjuniortome,willbefacedwithherentranceexaminationstoseniorhighschools.Asalessconfidentgirl,itmightbealittledifficultforhertoshowherbestinthetests.Asweallknow,confidencelaysavitalroleinone’sperformancesandenablespeopletobehavebetter.Withconfidencebroughttoher,shewillbemoreconfidentofherself.Asaresult,shecanperformherbestintheexamandenjoygoodmarks.Inaddition,filledwithfullconfidence,shewillbelieveinherownabilityandtryherbesttosolvealltheproblems.Moreover,confidencewillbringalotofbenefitstoherwholelife.

GiventhefactorsIhaveoutlined,Ihavemadeupmymindtosendtheunusualandpreciousgift---confidence,tomysister.

2006年高考作文范文

书面表达：

假设你的名字是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现招募志愿者。

你希望成为志愿者。

申请信的格式已经写好了，你直接写内容就可以。

你的个人情况：

年龄性别学历，个人条件。

英语好，爱好体育，擅长交际，乐于助人。

承诺提供最佳服务。

字数100左右。

范文：

IwasquiteexcitedwhenIheardtheAsianWinterGameswillbeheldinthecityIlive.MynameisLiHua.Iaman18-year-oldboystudentinaseniormiddleschool.AndIwanttobeavolunteerforthegames.IlikeEnglishandsportsverymuch.IlikemakingfriendsandIamreadytohelpothers.Icanbeagoodinterpreterineverysportsduringthetime.Hopethegameswillbeagreatsuccess.HopeIwillbechosentobeone.Thanks.LiHua

上海2005高考英语满分作文

June8th

DearHaiqing,

Ihearyouareveryunhappythesedaysbecauseyourparentscan’taffordtobuyyousomebrand-nameshoesandgarmentsyoulikeverymuch.AndIwriteyouthislettertosharewithyouwhatIthinkaboutthismatter.

Tobeginwith,beautyisjustskindeep.Don’tyouthinkitsillytopaysomuchattentiontoyourappearance?

Heisashallowpersonwhojudgesothersbytheirappearance;inthesamesense,heisashallowpersonwhothinksthatabrand-namegarmentcanaddtohisglamour.Soplease,justforgetaboutthosebrand-namethings.Whatreallymattersisnotwhetheryouwearbrand-nameshoesorgarmentsbutwhetheryourclothesfityou.Asastudent,youhavetoweartheschooluniformontheweekdaysandtobehonest,youlookverysmartinit.Thenwhydoyouhavetobothertobuytheexpensivebrand-namethings?

Secondly,Iknowyourparentsarebothaverageworkers.Hardastheywork,theydon’tearnmuch.Despitethis,theydotheirbesttogiveyoualotofthingsondemand.Lookatthecallusontheirhandsandwrinklesontheirfaces,howcanyouhavethehearttoaskformorethantheycanafford,whichwillsurelybreaktheirhearts?

Remember,parentsdon’toweusexpensivesummercamps;theydon’toweusSonyWalkman;nordotheyoweusNikeshoes,Ifyoureallywantthosefancythings,youshouldtakeapart-timejobtocontributetotheirpurchaseratherthanaskyourparentsformoneytoaddtotheiralreadyheavyburden.Don’tyouthinkso?

Thirdly,wehavesuchawidevarietyofthingsavailablethesedayswhicharebothniceandinexpensive.What’sthepointofpayingmuchmoreforthosebrand-namethingsthatarenotmuchbetter?

Myfriend,takemyadvice,andyou’llbeawiserconsumeraswellasamoreconsideratechildtoyourparents.

Poverty,sometimes,isagoodthing.Itcantestaperson’scharacteranditmakesamanoutofaboyfasterthananythingelse.Keepworkinghard,andyouareboundtobeabletoaffordthosethingsinthenearfuture.Nowyoumayaswellfocusonyourstudy.Anyway,wouldn’titbefunnyforawould-beachievertobesopreoccupiedwithbrand-namethingsalldaylong?

Keepintouch.

Yours

Huangping

NMET2004

（1）

假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。

其间，AndySmith将借住你家。

请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。

信的要点如下：

※上午：

学校活动

※下午：

游览市区

※晚上：

看电视，玩游戏，聊天

注意：

1．词数：

100左右

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3，参考词汇：

安排—arrange

DearAndy,

IamgladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinaandwillstayatmyhome.

MyparentsandIareverypleasedtohaveyouwithus.Nowletmetellyouwhatwehavearrangedforyou.Iknowtheschoolwillorganizealotofthingsforyoutodointhemorning,butintheafternoon,I’llshowyouaroundandtakeyoutosomeplacesofinterest.We’llmostlystayathomeintheeveningwatchingTV,playinggames,andmeetingpeople.I’msurewe’llhaveawonderfultimeandenjoyeachother’scompany.

I’mlookingforwardverymuchtomeetingyousoon.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

NMET2004

（2）

假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。

你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。

请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。

比赛时间：

7月18日

报名时间：

截止到6月30日

报名地点：

北京电视台

注意：

1.词数：

100左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3.参考词汇：

才艺大赛—talentshow

DearPeter,

Ireadinanewspapertodaythata“LearnChinese,SingChineseSongs”Foreigners’TalentShowwillbeheldinBeijingTelevisionStationonJuly18.Iknowyoulikesinging,andyouareinBeijingduringthatperiod.Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyou’velearnedChinese.Ifyouwouldliketotry,you'llhavetogototheTVstationtosignupbeforetheendofJune.IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,Iwouldbemorethangladtohelp.

Yours,

LiHua

NMET2004（3）

假设你是李华，你的美国老师MissMorgan要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。

你因故不能参加。

请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向MissMorgan请假。

内容要点：

*表示歉意

*理由：

去机场接人

*询问：

是否有录音，以便补听讲座

注意：

1.词数：

100左右

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

DearMissMorgan,

IamsosorrythatIwon’tbeabletoattendthelectureonAmericanhistorytomorrowafternoon.MyuncleisreturninghomefromFrance,andIhavepromisedtomeethimattheairportat3:

30tomorrowafternoon.

IamverymuchinterestedinAmericansocietyandhistory.Iwonderifitispossibleforthetalktoberecorded,andifso,couldIborrowthetape?

Itwouldmeanagreatdeal