北京高考开放作文主题态势Word格式.docx

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三、可能出现的立意:

1.遇到困难时应审时度势，尽可能找到解决办法。

2.要想成功，就不能害怕失败，尝试最重要。

3.不要被表面的困难吓倒，总会有办法。

4.每个人面前都有机会，重要的是能否抓住机会。

5.不同的人看待事物的角度不同（角度1：

悬崖角度2：

梯子）。

6.选用正确的办法是解决问题的关键（走下悬崖，从梯子爬上另一端，而不是跨过沟壑）。

Onepossibleversion:

Ascanbeseeninthepicture,thereisamanhesitatingbeforeagapwhichstopshiswaytothedestination.Thegapisdeepandwide,whichseemshardtocross.However,thereisaladderdowninthegap,whichprovidesaneasyaccesstotheotherside.

Thepictureconveysthemessagethatitisimportanttostudythesituationincaseofdifficulty.Theroadisstoppedbythegap.However,withthehelpoftheladder,onecangototheothersideandcontinuehisjourneytothedestination.Thisalsoappliestoourdailylife.Ifwestudywhatliesbeforeuscarefullywhenwemeetdifficulty,wemayfindawayout.Thus,itisnecessarytostudythesituationandfindasolution.

成功需要耐心

Theme:

Successneedsaperson’spatience.

观点2：

做事的正确方法:

waysofdoingsth

正确方法

Let’strytochoosetherightwaytodealwithdifferentproblems.Rightwaysmeanlessworkandbetterresults,whilewrongwaysleadtomoreworkandfailure.

onceaproblemcomes,itismoreimportantforustoanalyseitfirstandfindouthowtosolveit.Onlyinthiswaycanwereachourtarget.

5.东城（做事方法）

文中必须指出正确的做法

apropermethodplaysaveryimportantroleinachievingagoal

第二节开放作文（15分）

20090509

Ascanbeseeninthepicture,aboyisholdingapairofhugescissorstocutasmallpieceofpaper,butinvain.

Thepicturetriestotellusthatapropermethodplaysaveryimportantroleinachievingagoal（提出论点）.Inourdailylife,weconstantlyneedtocarryoutdifferenttasks,whethertheyaresimpleorcomplicated.Weshouldalwayskeepinmindthatadoptingapropermethodisthemostimportantthing.Ifnot,whatevereffortswemake,we’llaccomplishnothing,（联系自身，讲道理论证）justliketheboyinthepicture,whoisusingawrongwaytocutpaper.Itmaybewiseforhimtochangethescissorsintoasmallpairorjustusehisownfingers.Onlyinthisway,canhetearthepaperintopieces（建议正确的做法）.Inmyopinion,choosingasuitablemethodisveryimportantbothinourstudyandinourlife.（升华点题）

直接不行，间接来directway/indirectway（2011北京）

Inpursuingadream,wemightfocusononlyonesayofmakingitcometrue,forgettingthattheremaybealternatives.

2011年西城二模

Asisseenfromthepicture,aman,annoyedwithabigstoneaheadofhiminthemiddleofawideroad,istryinghisbesttokickthestoneaway,sweatingheavily.

Itseemsthattheman’spurposeistoclearthebarrierinhisway.However,hehasn’trealizedthathemaysolvetheprobleminanotherway.Withenoughspaceonbothsides,whynotwalkaroundthestoneandkeepgoing?

Thestoryofthemancanbealessontous.Wemayhavedifferentproblemsineverydaylife.Don’tjuststicktoonemethodonlyandgetyourselftrapped.Instead,weneedtolookaroundandtrytousewhatlifeofferstoachieveourgoals.

学生习作：

Inmyopinion,Ireallydon’tagreewiththepersoninthepicture.Weshoulddothingsstepbystep.Ithinkweshouldn’tthinkaboutanyideatomakesuccesseasier,orwemayfallintothetroublethatwehaven’texpected.

Geniusis1%inspirationand99%perspiration.IthinkweshouldlearnfromEdisonanddoeverythingcarefully.

Ithinkthemaninthepictureisclever.Choosingthisway,hecansaveenergyandfinishthetaskinashorttime.Forexample,inourlife,whenwemeetthemathsproblems,somepeoplemayanswertheminthewaytheteacherhastaughtuswhileotherstudentsmayuseaneasywaytosolvethem.Soitisnecessaryforustosetourmindfreeandnottofollowthecommonpractice.

Thewaysofbeingsuccessaredifferent,andweshouldtrytofindthebestwaytomakeit.

Inmyopinion,theroadstandsforsomethingwehavetodoinourlife,whoseprocessmaybelongandhard.Sosomepeoplealwayswanttotakeaneasywaytogoovertheroad,whichmaysavetheirtimeandenergy.ButIthinkit’stotallywrong.Manythingslikestudyandworkarereallydifficultforustoaccomplish.Buttheprocessofthemismoreimportantthantheresult,sincewemaygetmanybenefitsfromit.Soweshouldn’tpaytoomuchattentiontotheresults.Onlybyunderstandingthevalueofprocess,canwemakeourlifemoremeaningful.

观点3：

个人力量/团队协作:

individual'

sstrengthandteamwork/cooperation

Cooperationneedseffectivecommunication,withoutwhichwe’lldothingsblindly.Sobeforetakingactions,planthingscarefullyandcommunicatewellwithyourpartners。

Unitybringspower.

Twoheadsarebetterthanone.

Unitedwestand,dividedwefall.

Inthepicture,twogoatsaretiedtoeachotherwitharope.Theybothseesomegrassinoppositedirections,andtrytopulltogettheirownfood.Theyareunsuccessful,becausetheropeistooshorttoallowthemtoeatthefoodatthesametime.

Thepictureistryingtotellusthatcooperationisbetterthanconflict.Bothofthegoatswanttheirfoodatthesametime,whichhasformedaconflictbetweenthem.However,iftheydecidetocooperateandeatthegrassontheleftfirst,andthenthegrassontheright,theywillbothbeabletogettheirfood.Thusthingswillturnintoa"

win-win"

situation.

Therefore,rememberthatsometimesourgoalisnotthatwegetsomethingandtheothergetsnothing,butthatallpeoplegetwhattheywant.Cooperationwillbenefiteveryone.

Ascanbeseeninthepicture,twomenareholdingsticksreadytokillthemouse.Whentheydrivethemousetothecommonarea,bothofthemexpecttheothertocatchit.Iftheyworktogether,theywillsurelykillthemouse.

Thepicturetellsusthatweshouldcooperatetoovercomethedifficulties.Thetwomenarejustlikewestudentsandthemouseisjustlikethedifficultiessharedbyus.Infaceofdifficulties,eachofusshouldtakeonourownresponsibilityandworktogethertoachievesuccess.

Justasanoldsayinggoes:

unityisstrength.Onlywhenweworktogetherwillsuccesscome.

2012.1月西城（团结就是力量）

答案：

Asdepictedinthepicture,somesmallfish,fleeinginalldirections,arebeingchasedbyalarge,fierceone.Afewminuteslater,however,thetablesareturned.Thesmallfish,alongwithalargenumberoftheirfellows,returnanddrivetheirenemyawaybyformingtheshapeofalargerfish.

Thehiddenmessagehereisobvious,thatis,unitybringsstrength.Toasmallfish,lifecanbeverytoughasthreatsfromthelargefisharealwaysthere.Thechanceforitssurvivalisslimwhenitfacesalargefishallbyitself.If,however,allthesmallfishformaunitedteam,theymaybecomestrongenoughtodefeattheenemy.Thesamethingwouldhappeninourlife.Forinstance,wesometimesfacethreatsortroublesthatmaybeunbearable,leavingeachofusinsecureandhelpless.Don’tforget,inthatcase,thatourfriendsandfamilyareasourceofstrength.Iflifeisapondandwearethefishinsideit,weshouldalwaysstayunitedtomeetitschallenges.

海淀一摸

三、Possibleversions

1．立意：

团结

Ascanbeseeninthepicture,somepeoplearestandinghand-in-hand,formingtheshapeofaheart.Theyareallsmilinghappily.

Thispictureconveysthemessagethatsometimesweneedtobeunited.Therearebasicallytwowaystoaccomplishthings:

workingaloneorworkingtogetherwithothers.Wearebornwithallkindsofambitions,toconquertheworld,forexample.Yetveryoftenweareawakenedupbytheplainfactthattherearecertainthingswecannotaccomplishalone.Therefore,itisessentialforustoworkinaunitedway.United,westand;

divided,wefall.

Weshouldbearinmindthatwecannotsurvivealoneandfrequentlyweneedtounitewithotherstoachieveourgoals.（124words）

观点4：

爱心传递devoteabitoflovetoothers

Ascanbeseeninthepicture,manychildrenarestandingmerrilyinacircle,hand-in-hand.Thecircleisheart-shaped.

Thesimplepictureconveysadeepmessagethattheworldwillbefulloflovewheneverybodypassestheirownlovetoothers.Loveisimportantforus.Justasthepictureabove,onlywhenloveisdeliveredfrompersontopersoncanwesenseeachother’strust,concern,warmth,friendship,etc,whicharevitalforeveryone’shappiness.

Inaword,ifeveryoneofuscandevoteabitoflovetoothers,ourliveswillbemorebeautiful.（100words）

2009年海淀二模

Onepossibleversion：

Inthepicture,wecanseeacircleofbricksstandingnexttoeachother.Thefirstbrickontherightisfallingdown,causingthefallingofthenextone.Intheend,thewholecirclewillberuined.

Thepictureconveysamessagethatthesuccessofaprojectdependsoneachindividualstep.Wheneachindividualstepisgivenfullattention,itisquitelikelythatthewholeprojectwillbeasuccess.Inthesameway,amistakeinonestepmayleadtoacompletefailureofthewholeproject,asisshowninthepicture.Soeachindividualstepcanmakethedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.

Weshouldtryourbesteverystepoftheway.

观点5：

注意细节

Thepictureconveysamessagethatthesuccessofaprojectdependsoneachindividualstep.Inthesameway,a