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六级高分写作讲义
附录写作练习答案
二、写作常见错误分析
一、语法错误
（一）句子结构错误
1．主从句叠置
1）Therearemoreandmorestudentswholiketousethecomputer./Moreandmorestudentsliketousethecomputer.
2）Therearestillmanyproblemsthatshouldbenotedandresolved./Manyproblemsstillshouldbenotedandresolved.
2．简单句叠置
Ilikechattingonlineverymuch,soIgotothenetbaralmosteveryweekend./Ilikechattingonlineverymuch.Igotothenetbaralmosteveryweekend.
3．从句叠置
Itisknowntoallthatcomputersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife./Asisknowntoall,computersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife.
4．句子成分缺失
Ifweworkhard,wewillsurelybesuccessful./Workinghard,wewillsurelybesuccessful.
5．语序错误
1）Whydocollegestudentsspendmoreandmoretimeonthecomputer?
1）Ioftenwonderwheretheyhavegottheirmoney.
（二）动词形式错误
1．时态错误
ManypeoplethinkthattheInternetwillbemoreusefulinthefuture.
2．语态形式错误
1）Ihavebeenexcitedseveraldaysatthenewsthatyouwillcomehere.
2）Mostofthestudentsaresatisfiedwiththeserviceinthedininghall.
3．单复数形式错误
1）Wisemenseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem./Awisemanseeksopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.
2）Somepeopleareafraidthatcomputersmaycontrolmeninthefuture.
4．非谓语动词形式错误
1）Letmesay“hello”toyouonbehalfofeveryone.
2）Doingexerciseinthemorningisgoodforone’shealth.
3）Havingstudiedinourschoolfor3years,Ifindthatthecanteenservicehaschangedalot.
（三）代词错误
1）Wecanusecomputersindoingeverythingwelike.
2）Acollegestudentshouldbeabletodohiswashingonhisown.
（四）冠词错误
1）A/Thehorseisausefulanimal.
2）TheexamwillbeheldinDecember,2004.
（五）词性错误
1）Iwishyoucanconsidermysuggestions.
2）Ifapersonwantstosucceed,hemustlearntoenduresufferingsandsetbacks.
二、用词错误
1）Studentsmustknowhowtooperateacomputer./Studentsmustknowhowtoworkonacomputer.
2）PeoplecanbeexposedtomanynewthingsontheInternet./PeoplecanlearnmanynewthingsontheInternet.
3）Thepurposeofthisletteristoexpresssomeopinionsontheserviceinthedininghall./Thepurposeofthisletteristomakesomecomplaintsabouttheserviceinthedininghall.
三、表达习惯错误
1）Whatgeneratedsolargeachange?
/Whyistheresolargeachange?
2）Now6000yuanisenoughforyoutobuyaP4computer./NowyoucanbuyaP4computerfor6000yuan.
3）Inaroomoftenlive6-8students.
4）Ithinktherearethreereasonsforthisgreatchange.
5）Thepricesofthefoodaretoohigh./Thefoodistooexpensive.
6）Thereasonforthisisthatsomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard./Thisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.
四、标点符号及大小写错误
1）However,everycoinhastwosides.Ithinkthesurroundingsinourcanteenarethebestamongalluniversities.
2）Themanwasracingdownthestreetbecausehewaslatefortheclass.
3）AtlastIwanttoletyouknowthatIloveouruniversityverymuch.
4）Myfavoritesportsareswimming,jogging,mountaineeringandplayingtabletennis.
5）ThebestEnglishfilminmyeyesisForrestGump.
五、冠词用法讲练
EXERCISE1
A.1.a2.an
3.an4.an
5.an6.an
7.a8.an
B.1.anewofficebuilding2.travelagent
3.anAmericanscientist4.aday’souting
5.anIndianstamp6.aheartattack
7.anadvancedcountry8.aninterestingplay
EXERCISE2
1.A（telephone）;a2.x;x;x
3.a;a;an;a4.a;a;a;an
5.a;a;a;a;a6.an;a;x;an;x;a;a
7.a;an8.x
EXERCISE3
A.1.a（verybadnight）;a（wink）
2.an（honesty）
3.a（visionofanewandhappierEurope）
4.a（holiday）;a（dayoff）;a（month）
5.an（hourlyservice）
6.a（greathonour）;a（gathering）
7.a（mountain）;a（horror）
8.an（earlyage）
9.a（word）
10.a（boy）
B.1.a（bigproblem）;（nottoobig）a（problem）
2.a（squarenose）;（sohandsome）a（man）
3.（Howevergreat）a（disaster）
4.（Many）a（shipwreckedsailor）
5.（Such）an（urgentneed）
6.（Sourgent）a（need）
7.（aslovely）a（picture）
8.（what）a（seriouscrisis）
9.（many）a（greaterman）
10.（Howserious）a（crime）
EXERCISE4
1.the;x2.x;The（forests）
3.x;The（nature）4.The（education）;x
7.x;the8.the;x
EXERCISE5
A.1.x;a;the2.The（steam-engine）;the
3.The（bat）;a4.x;the;x;a
5.the6.a;the;x;x
7.The（prison）;a8.The（youngest）;x;the;x
B.1.The（horse）;a（nobleanimal）;a（faithfulservant）
2.a（game）
3.the（school）;the（behaviour）;the（pupils）
4.The（dinner）;the（speeches）
5.the（settingofgoals）
6.the（hospital）;（at）the（endof）the（week）
7.the（radio）
8.The（flute）
9.（have）a;the（citycenter）;（get）a;（on）the（bus）
10.the（ground）;the（wood）
EXERCISE6
A.1.The;the;the2.The;the
3.The;the4.The（wool）;the
5.x;the;x6.the;the;the;x
7.the;the8.x;x;x
9.the;the10.x
B.1.theBritishMuseum2.theSuezCanal
3.thedifferencebetween4.theWilsons
thesetwowords
5.inthefirstrow6.theyear1949
EXERCISE7
（The）Peopleeverywhere…When（the）strangers…（The）Goodmanners…in（the）differentparts…accepting（the）gifts…shows（the）badmanners…even（the）rudeness…with（the）goodmannersaccept（the）importantthingswith（the）bothhands…toaccept（the）importantthingsshowsnotonly（the）discourtesy…In（the）Europeand（the）NorthAmerica,however,（the）people…
六、标点符号用法讲练
EXERCISE1
1.The…identity:
Lt,HenryBedell,CompanyD,11thVermontVolunteers…old.
2.It…thatDad…already－farming80acres…job.
3.NowI’m…point－butwhat…there?
4.Rain,snow,sleet,fog…world.
5.During…tourists;duringthewinter…beach.
6.To…extent,mankind…earth.
7.Like…wildlife,…reproduce,grow…fall.
8.The…JimThorpe,thegreatestAmerican…times.
9.The…enormous,juicy…appetizing.
10.I…kids－educated…theWest…movies－wouldbedisappointed.
11.I…statue.Itssoul,sotospeak,is…beauty.
12.The…students,teachers,doctors,businessmen,factoryworkers－people…life.
13.Is…underground－innew…caves?
14.I…－bycorrespondence－thatI…heratBeijingHotel…Thursday.
15.Passengers…beverages:
coffee,tea,milkorsoda.
16.Present…Mr.Ho,Chairman…EnglishDepartment;Mr.Brown,avisiting…Denmark;and…us.
17.The…patients;it…of“defensivemedicine”.
18.His…withthem－hehad…oncemade…help.
EXERCISE2
1….work,for…
2….down;asaresult,we…
3….note;it…
4….watch,yet…
5…..tired,so…
6.…booming;consequently,thecompany…
7.…init,anditwas…
8.…looking;thefood,however,is…
9….compulsory;thestudents…choice,therefore
10…coffee;others…
11…costly;nevertheless,we…
12…weightlessness;moreover,they…
EXERCISE3
1.…death;…
2.…sunlight.We…/…sunlight;we…
3.…May,yet/butsnow…
4.…years;forexample,…
5.…quiet;…
6.…night;I…/….night,and/soI…
7.…punished;infact…/…punished.Infact…
8.…food,andso…./food;therefore,I….
9.…very;what…./…vary.What…
10.…TV;Marie…/…TV,andMarie…
EXERCISE4
1.“OnFriday,”theteacherannounced,“we’lltakeupanewlesson.”
2.“What,”heasked,“dowehavetoprepareforthecampingtrip?
”
3.C
4.Hegreetseveryonewith“Hi!
”
5.“YoumaythinkIhavealotofgarbageinthesebags,”oneshopping-bagladyvolunteeredinachurchsoupkitchen,“butit’severythingIneed.”
6.C
7.“Itpainsme,”Isaid,“tofindthatyoubothhavebeenpanhandlingsolongthatitnolongerembarrassesyou.”
8.Retirementoftenbringsmanyproblemssurroundingthe“WhatdoIdowithmyself?
”question,eventhoughtheremaybenofinancialworries.
EXERCISE5
1.Atoneo’clockonSeptember2,1666,theGreatFireofLondonstartedinsideabaker’sshopinPuddingLane.Itlastedfivedays,andnearly80%ofallthebuildingswithintheLondonWallwererazed.Accordingtotheofficialreport,13,200houses,87parishchurches,over400streets,andtheenormousoldSt.Paul’sCathedral－oneofthewondersofthemedievalworld－wereinruins.OutofLondon’s450acres,only75remaineduntouched.
RobertHubert,aFrenchwatchmakerfromRouen,wasaccusedofthefire.Thesentencesaidhe“haddeliberatelystartedthefire”.Afterhewashanged,itwasconclusivelyprovedthathehadnotevenarrivedinLondonuntiltwodaysafterthefirebrokeout.
2.Mr.Joneswasveryfondofclimbingmountains,sooneyearhewenttoSwitzerlandforhisholidays.Afterhehadclimbedsomeeasymountains,hedecidedonedaytoclimbamoredifficultone;buthedidnotwanttogoupitalone,sohefoundagoodSwissguide,whohadoftenclimbedthatmountain.
Atfirstitwasnotadifficultclimb,butthentheycametoaplacewhichwasnotsoeasy.Theguidestopped,turnedroundandwarnedMrJones.“Becarefulhere,”hesaid“Thisisadangerousplace.Youcaneasilyfall,andifyoudo,youwillfallstraightdownaverylongway.”“But,”hecontinuedcalmly,“ifyoudofallhere,don’tforgettolooktotherightwhileyouaregoingdown.Thereisaquiteextraordinarilybeautifulviewthere－muchmorebeautifulthantheoneyoucanseefromhere.”
3.Itisthesimplethingsthatreallymatter.Ifamandelightsinhiswifeandchildren,hassuccessinwork,andfindspleasureinthealternationofdayandnight,springandautumn,hewillbehappywhateverhisphilosophymaybe.If,ontheotherhand,hefindshiswifehateful,hischildren’snoiseunendurable,andtheofficeanightmare,ifinthedaytimehelongsfornight,andatnighthesighsforthelightofday－thenwhatheneedsisnotanewphilosophybutanewpatternoflife－adifferentdi
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