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标志着中国科技和太空研究的重大突破；
使得中国为继美国后第二个成功登月的国家；
坚定了人们发展科技、探测太空，服务于人类的信心。
2．分析新闻报道的语言特点，选定本文的信息表达词句。
新闻报道类文章的用词准确，有时要用到专业术语，语句一般都很长，大都为结构复杂的复合句，以便包含大量精确的信息。
根据这尸特点，选定该文章的表达词句如下：
【学生
习作】
Xichang，Sichuan，Sep．25（Xinhua）－Chinasuccessfullylauncheditsanothermannedspacecraftat9:
10.onSept.25,2024.ThespaceshipisChang'
e-4,whichcarriesthreeChineseastronauts.ItwillhelpChinesepeopleto
cometruetheirdreamofspace-walkontheMoon.
TheastronautswillcollectrocksandsoilontheMoonforlaterstudy.Furthermore,theywillfixsomeequipmentthereforlaterusetosetupspacestations.
Thestateandpartyleadermadeanimportantspeech,
encourageandcom,ratulatethosewhoareworkinghardattheexploringofandresearchingintospace.
ThelaunchmarksamajorbreakthroughinChina'
sspaceprogram,makingChinathesecondnation,afterAmericaintheworld,towalkontheMoon.WeareconfidentthatChinawilldeveloptechnologiestomakefurtherexplorationoftheouterspace,benefitingthemankindinallaspects.
baordwillhelpChi
nesepeopletorelaizetheirdreamofspace-walkonthemoon。
2）文章的末
段表达成功发射的意义，如果其中一部分放到介绍完领导讲话之后，就不显得这么集中了。
【参考范文】
Xichang，Sichuan，Sep．25（Xinhua）－Chinasuccessfullylauncheditsanothermannedspacecraft,Chang'
e-4at9:
10.onSept.25,2024.ThethreeChineseastronautsonboardwillhelpChinesepeopletorealizetheirdreamofspace-walkontheMoon.
Thestateandpartyleaderdeliveredanimportant'
speech,offeringhisencouragementand
congratulationstothosewhohavedevotedalltheirtimetotheexploringofandresearchingintothespace.
sspaceprogram,makingChinathesecondnation,afterAmericaintheworld,towalkontheMoon.Ifitgoessmoothly,moreresearchwillbeattempte
dincludingcollectingrocksandsoilontheMoonforlaterstudy.Furthermore.theastronautswillfixsomeequipmentthereforlaterusetosetupspacestations.
WehavegreatconfidencethatChinaiscapableofmakingfurtherexplorationoftheouterspacebydevelopingtechnologies,benefitingthemankindbothineconomyandlifestyles.
【佳句欣赏】
1.ThethreeChineseastronautsonboardwillhelpChinesepeopletorealizetheirdreamofspace-walkontheMoon.
2.Thestateandpartyleaderdeliveredanimportantspeech,offeringhisencouragementandcongratulationstothosewhohavedevotedalltheirtimetotheexploringofandresearchingintothespace.
3.ThelaunchmarksamajorbreakthroughinChina'
sspaceprogram,makingChinathesecondnation;
afterAmermaintheworld,towalkontheMoon.
实例指导2—LifeIntheFuture
写作任务:
你校要举行一次英语演讲比赛,话题是"
畅想未来生活,享受人生欢乐"
。
假设你已报名,请用英语写一份
120-150词的演讲稿,准备参加比赛。
你可以从科技发展给人们未来的生活、学习和工作带来的影响,以及如何准备迎接挑战,适应新生活等方面展开描述和讨论。
注意:
演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Hello,everyone!
Iamgladtobeabletogiveatalkaboutthefuturelifeandstudyhere._______________________________________________________
That’sall.Thankyou!
3.遣词造句,灵活表达。
根据审题所得,将要表达的有效信息用灵活的句式表达出来,如:
1）作为演讲内容的总括和概述,也是文章的主题句,开篇可以表达"
科技发展给未来生活、学习和工作带来很大的影响"
可以运用如下几个句式:
Thankstothegreatdevelopmentinscienceandtechnology,wearesuretoliveahappierandmorewonderfullifeinthefuture.或Thegreatdevelopmentinscienceandtechnologywillhaveagreateffectonthefutureofourlives,workandstudy.等。
2）仔细分析未来生活及其巨大变化时,可以从人们的衣食住行以及学习、工作等方面加以分析与描述,可以运用notonly...butalso...
等来连接这些变化,例如:
Notonlywillwebeprovidedwithenoughfoodandclothing,wecanalsospendmoretimetravelingaroundtheworldandenjoyingotheramusements.以及Wewillhavelessstressinthefuture,eitherfromourstudyorfromthework.等。
3）在发挥个人观点,叙述"
准备迎接挑战,适应新生活"
的建议时,可以表达为:
Weshouldworkhardertoday,
makingpreparationstomakemorecontributionstothedevelopmentofthefuturesocietyandtheworld.等。
4.巧妙过渡,自然衔接。
将表达的信息用一些过渡词或短语连接成文,注意逻
辑思维和行文的连贯。
可以借鉴的表达有:
furthermore,however,therefore,onlyinthisway等。
初稿:
Iamgladtobeabletogiveatalkaboutthefuturelifeandstudyhere.Asweallknow,scienceandtechnologyhasgreatlydeveloped,sowearesuretoliveahappierandmorewonderfullifeinthefuture.Wewillbeprovidednotonlywithenoughfoodandclothing,butalsomoreconvenientwaysoftravelingandliving.Besides,wewillhavelessstressbothfromourstudyandfromwork,becausewecanworkandstudymoreefficiently.However,ourfutureisfullofchallengeaswell.Soweshouldworkhardertoday.Weshouldtrytobecomemoreknowledgeable.Onlyinthiswaycanwe
developmoreskillsandearnmoremoneyforthefutureuse.Wecanalsoenjoyamoreinterestingandcolorfullifeevenwhenweareold.That’sall.Thankyou!
成稿:
Iamgladtobeabletogiveatalkaboutthefuturelifeandstudyhere.Thankstothegreat
developmentinscienceandtechnology,wearesuretoliveahappierandmorewonderfullifeinthefuture.Notonlywillwebeprovidedwithenoughfoodandclothing,wecanalsospendmoretimetravelingaroundtheworldandenjoyingotheramusements.Itwillmakeoursparetimemoreinterestingandcolorful.Furthermore,wewillhavelessstresseitherfromour
studyorfromtheworksincewecanworkmoreefficiently.However,ourfuturelifeisnotjustfullofamusementandjoy,butalsoofchallenge.Therefore,weshouldworkhardertoday,makingpreparationstomakemorecontributionstothedevelopmentofthefuturesocietyandtheworld.Onlyinthiswaycanweadapttothefuturelifeandenjoyourselveswhenitcomes.
That’sall.Thankyou!
Powerfulsentences:
1.To
keepfit,weneedvariet
yinourdiets.Ahealthydietgenerallyincludesproperamountsoffish,meat,vegetablesandfruit.
2.Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsinthefutureifwekeeponplantingmoretreesaroundusbothinthecitiesandinthecountryside.
3.Comparedtothelifewelivetoday,thefuturewillbemoreconvenientandfast-pacedthankstotheadvanceinscienceandtechnology.
4.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologywillmakeitpossibleforhumanbeingstoflytootherplanetstostudythesituationsthe
re.
实例指导3—一千年之后
科技在高速发展，
人类在不断进步。
那么，一千年之后我们的生活会是什么样子呢?
请你充分展开想象，描述未来1000年后人类的生活。
词数：
120—150。
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Whatmaylifebelikeontheearthin1,000years'
time?
SoIbelievethatthesimpleandeffectivelifeinthefuturewillbemuchbetterthanitisnow.
Whatmaylifebelikeontheearthinyears’stime?
Supposingwearenowintheyear3009,andwearegoingtotraveltotheSaharafromChina.Doweneed
tobookaticketorshouldwebringenoughfoodandwatersupplies?
No.Allthatweneedtodoistosendeverythingintothecomputerandthengetitoutfromthecomputerrightatthedestination.Buthowdoesthatcomeabout?
Itisdonebythespacetunnel.Itisthedevelopmentoftechnologythatmakesitpossibleforhumanbeingstotraveleverywhere.
Robotswillbeevenmorepopular.Asaresult,humanbeingswillfreethemselvesfromthephysicalwork.Butthemostexcitingthingisthatnoonewillsufferfromillnessbecausetherearenomorediseases.
SoIbelievethatthesimpleandeffectivelifeinthefuturewillbemuchbetterthanitisnow
实例指导4—月球旅行
假如你要去月球旅行，那么，在月球上的衣食住行都需要进行特殊的设计。
本次写作任务是要求你充
分发挥自己的想象力，就自己这次旅行中可能遇到的问题提出解决的
方案。
Asweallknown
thetemperatureonthemoonisquitedifferentfromtheearth
.
Atdaytime,i
tismorethan100°
C,atnightitis－60°
C,bothofthem
cankillus.So,aspeciallydesignedsuitisofgreatimportance.Inthedaytimeitcanblockoutmostoftheheatfromthesun.Butatnightwecanjustpressabuttonandchangeitintoathicksuitwithwarmairinsidetoprotectus.Besides,there'
sasystemthatcanmakeourbodieshot
.Thisway,wecanhaveasafeandpleasanttripthere.
【教师点评】
本篇习作中作者根据写作提示和要点基本完成了写作任务。
丈中作者使用了许多较为高级的词汇、短语，及较复杂句式。
此外，文中还使有了一些连接词语如but，besides等，使得文章流畅、完整，体现了作者具有一定的语言运用能力。
当然，本文在行文中也有一些英、汉表达和词语使用等方面的错误，建议修改如下：
①为语法错误，应改为Asweallknow或Asisknowntoall…。
②为汉语式表达方式，应改为differentfromthatontheearth。
③为行文错误，应在atnight前加while一词。
④为语法错误，根据语境应改为bothofwhich．．．，为非限制性定语从句。
⑤为汉语式表达方式，而且意思与前句有些重复，可以去掉这句话。
Asweallknow.thetemperatureonthemoonisquitedifferentfromthatontheearth.
Inthedaytime,thetemperaturerisestomorethan100°
C,whileatnightitdropstoasIowas-60°
C.bothofwhicharejustunbearableforushumanbeings.So,aspeciallydesignedsuitisofgretaimportanceforus.Inthedaytimeitcanblockoutmostoftheheatfromthesun,butwhennightcomes,itcanchangeintoathicksuitwithwarmairinsidetoprotectus.Thisway,wecanhaveasafeandpleasanttripthere.
实例指导5—Howtodescribeyourfuturelifeform
【写作任务】
某校学生会对在校学生就“未来理想的工作”这一问题做了一份调查，下表显示了调查结果。
介绍图表的全部内容并发表你的自己的看法。
注意：
词数120左右。
【范文欣赏】
Thechartabovesh
owsuswhatkindofjobthestudentsprefertodowhentheygrowup.Morethan25
percentofthestudentswanttobeabossandabout25percentofthestudentswanttobeagovernmentofficialinthefuture.Whileover15percentofthestudentsareinfavourofbeingalawyer.Theleastnumberofstudents,lessthan5percentwouldliketobecomestarsandslightlymorethanten
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