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【范文欣赏】
HowtoImproveEnglishWritingAbility
Hello,everyone!
I’mgladtosharewithyoumythoughtaboutEnglish.IoncethoughtitwasratherdifficulttowriteanEnglishcomposition,butnowIamconfidentthatIcandoagoodjob.Letmesharemyexperiencewithyou.
IhaveanotebookwhereIcollectallofthegoodsentencesIreadinthebooks.Idividethenotebookintoseveralparts,suchasTravel,Sports,Technology,andSchoolLifeandsoon.ThenIwritegoodsentencesineachpart.Mostimportantly,IreadthemeverynowandthensothatIcanremembermoreandmoregoodsentences.Asaresult,whenIbegintowriteacomposition,thesesentencesnaturallyflowout.
Ihopethatmyexperiencecanhelpyou.IalsohopethatIcanlearnmorefromeverybodyhere.Thankyouall.
【佳句背诵】
1.Usually,agoodlearnergetstwicetheresultwithhalftheeffort.
2.Oneshouldhaveagoodstudyplanandbegoodatthinking.
3.Youcansolvemanyproblemswiththehelpofbooks,suchasdictionariesandreferencebooks.
4.Inordertowritewell,youmustreadalot.
5.Ifyouwanttoimproveyourwriting,youcanstudyphrasesandsentencestructures,andtrytomakesentenceswiththem.
实例指导2—TheEnglishCorner
【写作任务】
自从实行素质教育以来,学生的课余时间多了。
为丰富学生课余生活,开展别具特色的第二课堂,许多学校组织了英语角活动。
请以TheEnglishCorner为题,用英语写一篇120――150词的短文,谈谈英语角的作用以及应该如何利用英语角。
文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作指导】
针对题目,先来个头脑风暴:
TheBnglishCorner
Withthechangeofeducationpolicies,manyschoolsorgamzetheEnglishCornertoenrichthestudentsschoollife.TheEnglishCornerprovidesasortofsituationwhereEnglishteachersandlearnerscanexchangetheirviewpointswitheachotherinEnglish.WestudentscantakeadvantageoftheseopportunitiestopracticeourEnglish.Therefore,manypeoplewouldliketoattendtheEnglishCorner.
TakingpartintheEnglishCornerishelpfultoourEnglishstudy.Firstly,by
目前全世界许多国家都开设了汉语课程,于是有人提出:
汉语的影响越来越大,中国人没有必要再学习英语。
请写一篇120—150词的英语短文,发表你对此观点发表你的看法。
【写作指导】
本文要求写一篇议论性质的文章,符合半开放式高考作文的命题特点;
根据写作要求,文章应该由以下几个部分组成:
一、提出论点。
赞成这种观点,可以用:
Iagree./Ithjnkso./Iaminfavorofthiskindofview./Isupportthisidea.等句型;
反对这种观点,可以用:
However,Idon'
tthinkso./Idon'
tagreewiththesepeople。
/Inmyopinion,thiskindofviewiswrong.等句型。
二、陈述理由。
支持观点,可以举下列理由:
1.汉语可以逐步走向世界;
2.学英语耗费时间、精力太大;
反对观点,可以举下列理由:
1.英语仍然是世界上使用最广泛的语言,目前无法取代;
2.学好英语可以使中国更好地走向世界,让汉语更加流行。
当然,这里只
是做个提示,同学们可以想出更多支持或者反对的理由,但在陈述的时候要注意条理性,使用表示顺序的连接词语,如:
firstofall;
secondly;
besides;
what'
smore;
ontheotherhand等。
三、总结全文。
支持观点:
Inawotd,itisnotnecessaryfortheChinesestudentstolearnEnglishanymore.反对观点:
Inconclusion,IlearningEnglishisstillamustforChinesestudentstoday.要简洁明了!
【学生习作】
NowadaysChinesehas①spreadedtothewholeworld,andsomepeoplesaythereisnoneedtolearnEnglishanymore.Idon'
t②agreethesepeople.Firstly,Englishisstillthemostwidelyusedlanguageintheworldnow.About70③percentsofthearticlesarepublishedinEnglish.Chinaisopeningtotheoutsideworld.Englishisveryimportant;
Itcan'
tbereplacedbyChinese.Besides,learningEnglishcanhelptheChinesepeoplecommunicatewithpeopleinothe~
countries'
moreeasily.LearningEnglishwellcanhelpbringChinatotheworldandthewholeworldtoChina.ThentheinfluenceofChineseonthewholeworldwillbestrengthened.Inaword,learningEnglishisstillnecessaryfortheChinesepeopletoday.
【教师点评】
1.亮点点击:
这篇习作紧扣题目要求,有论点,有论据,较好地完成了写作要求规定的任务,使用了比较高级的句子如:
Besides,learningEnglishcanhelptheChinesepeoplecommunicatewithpeopleinothercountriesmoreeasily.显示了小作者不错的语言功底。
2.误点点拨:
语言错误影响了文章质量:
①处spreaded应改为spread,动词spread的过去时、过去分词都是spread②处agree后应力加wlth;
③处percents应改为percent。
3.画龙点睛:
Chinaisopeningtotheoutsideworld.Englishisveryimportant;
tbereplacedbyChinese.这几个句子太散了,可以合成一个句子:
SinceChinaisopenlngtotheoutsidewotld,EnglishisveryimportanttoChinaanditcan'
tbereplacedbyChinese.这样就通顺多了;
About70percentoftheartlclesarepublishedinEnglish.前边应该加上Forexample,Forinstance,使之更好地与上一句衔接。
【参考范文】
ItisreportedthatChineseisbeingtaughtinmanycountriesintheworldnow,whichmeanstheinfluenceofChineseisgrowing.SosomepeoplesayitisnotnecessaryfortheChinesestudentstolearnEnglishanymore.ButIdon'
tagreewiththesepeoplebecauseEnglishisstillthemostwidelyusedlanguageintheworldnowadays.Forinstance,about70percentofthearticlesintheworldtodayarepublishedinEnglish,whichsuggeststhatEnglishcan'
tbereplacedbyChineseandotherlanguages.Ontheotherhand,learningEnglishwillhelpustocommunicatewithpeopleinothercountriesmoreeasilyandhelptostrgthentheinfluenceofChineseontheotherpartoftheWorld.Inaword,learningEnglishisstillverynecessaryforusnow.
第一段:
先交代收到的情况(①很高兴收到你的邮件,从中获悉你校要开设汉语课,然后转移笔墨提及自己的看法(②选择该课程是个好主意)。
第二段:
具体分析其原因(③学习外语会使我们理解异域的文化④会帮助我们和更多的人交流)。
第三段:
提出学好外语的建议(⑤建议一:
需要兴趣和恒心,原因是⑥外语难学;
⑦建议二:
掌握丰富的汉字、词语和句型;
⑧建议三:
要抓住一切可能的机会练习)。
最后总结(⑨只有用这种方式,汉语才能学好)。
第三步分析要点及提纲,提炼关键单词和短语。
第四步恰当使用句型,连词成句。
①Gladtoreceiveyourlastemail,fromwhichIknowyourschooloffersChinesecoursesforallthestudents.
②Ithinkitisagoodideaforyoutochoosethem.
③Learningaforeignlanguagemakesushaveanaccesstoadifferentculture.
④ItgoeswithoutsayingthatlearningChinesecanhelpyoucommunicatewithmanypeopleeasily.
⑤Youcannotsucceedwithoutinterestorperseverance.
⑥Itisusuallyhardtolearnaforeignlanguage,especiallyChinese.
⑦YoualsoneedtopossessplentyofChinesecharactersaswellasphrasesandsentences
⑧ThemostimportantthingforyoutolearnChineseistopractiseitwheneverandwhereveryouhaveachance.
⑨OnlyinthiswaycanyoulearnChinesesuccessfully.
【学生习作】
DearJack,
Gladtoreceiveyourlastemail,fromwhichIknowyourschooloffersChinesecoursesforallthestudents.Ithinkitisagoodideaforyoutochoosethem.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,learningaforeignlanguagemakesushaveanaccesstoadifferentculture.AllowingforChineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular,itgoeswithoutsayingthatlearningChinesecanhelpyoucommunicatewithmanypeopleeasily.
However,itisusuallyhardtolearnaforeignlanguage,especiallyChinese.So,firstofall,youcannotsucceedwithoutinterestorperseverance.Besides,youalsoneedtopossessplentyofChinesecharactersaswellasphrasesandsentences,onwhichyourlearningisbased.Butinmyopinion,themostimportantthingforyoutolearnChineseistopracticeitwheneverandwhereveryouhaveachance.OnlyinthiswaycanyoulearnChinesesuccessfully.
Bestwishes.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
【范文点评】
该文要求就Jack的邮件回一封邮件,鼓励他学习汉语,并就此提几条建议,通读全文,可知该文很好地完成了写作任务。
作者注重使用地道的英语进行表达,如多次使用了精彩短语(下划线)、句型(斜体)。
为使文章连贯,作者增加了过渡词句(加粗)。
句式富有变化,注意了句式的多样性。
人称和时态使用恰当,措辞委婉客气,格式正确,称得上是篇佳作。
【句型拓展】写“社会问题”类的作文还可以用到以下句型:
1.ItisagessinceIreceivedyourlastletter.
2.Thankyouforyour….
3.Somepeoplewhoareveryintelligentandsuccessfulintheirfieldfinditdifficulttosucceedinlanguagelearning.
4.Practicespeakingthelanguageeveryday.
5.Successfullearnersdon’twaitforachancetousethelanguage.
6.It’smoreimportantforthemto…than…
7.Theywanttolearnthelanguagebecausetheyareinterestedinthelanguageandthepeoplewhospeakit.
实例指导5---如何写英语发言稿
[写作话题]
你班下周要举行一次英语班会,主题为“EnjoySpots,EnioyLife,请根据以下提示写一篇词数为120--150的英语发言稿,谈谈体育运动对健康的重要生。
提示:
1.体育运动能促进人体各系统器官的机能和协调,使我们更健康;
2.体育运动能促进大脑内啡肽(endorphins)分泌,这种物质会使人心情振奋、
fallill生病
formofrelaxation/entertainment休闲/娱乐形式
produce分泌;
产生
feelrelaxed/energetic感到轻松/精力充沛
getcloseto…接近……
takeinfreshair让呼吸新鲜空气
outdoorsports户外运动
takeanactivepartin…积极参与
benefitsb.对某人有益
clear-headed头脑清醒的
essential非常重要的
问候不同听众:
Hello,everyone./Ladiesandgentlemen/Dearfriends/Comradesandfriends/Dearclassmates/Boysandgirls/Myfellowclassmates等。
结束语:
Ihope.../Ithinkweshould...'
That'
sall.Thankyou.
EnjoySports,EnjoyLife
Dearclassmates,
Asisknowntoall,playingsportsregularlyisoneofthebestwaystokeephealthy.First,sportsgiveus,aluablepracticeinhelpingeverypartofourbodiesvorkingtogether.Therefore,sportscanhelpbuildourbodiesandpreventusfromfallingill.Also,sportscausehebodytoproduceendorphins,chemicalsthathelpusfeelpeacefulandhappy.Thisiswhysportshavebeomethemostpopularformofrelaxationthatalmosteveryonecanenjoy.Inaddition,takingpartinoutdoorsports,wegetclosertonatureandtakeinfreshair.Thebeautyofnaturewillkeepusclear-headed,whichisessenfialtoourhealthandhelpsusfeelenergeticinourstudyandwork.
Inshort,sportsbenefitusinmanyways.Ihopeevryonecantakeanactivepartinsportsandenjoylife