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4．Withthedevelopmentofamarketeconomy.Advertisementshavebecomeadominantfeatureintelevisionindustry,despitetherichinformationbroughtbytelevision.Therestillexistsstrongcriticismagainsttelevisionadvertisement.Writeanarticleanalyzingthepositiveandnegativeeffectsoftelevisionadvertisement.

5．作业：

version:

000121（2005年G类新题）

Somepeoplethinkthatvisitorstoothercountriesimitatelocalcustomandbehaviors.Somepeopledisagree.Theythinkthehostcountryshouldwelcomeculturedifferent.Discussthetwoviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

主体和方向

例文讲解：

真题重现：

1．Somepeoplethinkthatpeopleattheageof55andovershouldbeencouragedtoretireinordertogiveopportunitiestoanewgeneration.Doyouagreeordisagree?

2．Areportindicatesthatnowadayschildrenarebecomingmoreandmorelazy,fatandunsociable.Givethereasonsforthisandaproposalforasolution.（2003）

主体相似方向不同：

3．Computersarewidelyusedforeducationandsomepeoplethinkthatteacherswillnotplayimportantroleintheclassroom.Disagreeoragree?

4．Peopleusecomputerswhentheywork,gobankingandsoon,butsomearguethatitwillmakepeopleisolatedanddecreasetheirsocialskills.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

5．Somepeoplethinkthattraditionaltechniquesandmoderntechnologyareincompatible.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

6．Orientalsession

7．Somepeoplethinkthatstrongtraditioncancivilizeacountryandthegovernmentshouldsubsidizemusicians,artists,actorsanddramacompanies.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?

whatshouldgovernmentdo?

8．Isitpossibleforawomantobeagoodmotherandasuccessfulcareerwomanatthesametime?

somepeopleagreethatgovernmentshouldpaysomemoneytowomensothattheycanstayathometolookaftertheirchildren.Doyouagreeordisagree?

9．Moderntechnology,suchasfertilizerandmachineryhaschangedourworldsomuch.Whataretheadvantagesanddisadvantages?

Discuss

10．Therehavebeenmanytechnologicaldevelopmentsinthe20thcentury.Forexample,computerandelectricpower.Chooseeitherofthem,describethechangeithasbroughtaboutanddiscusswhetherallthechangesarepositive.

11．作业：

Whatarethepurposesofplaces,suchasmuseumsandhowshouldtheybefunded?

审题和构思后如何展开段落

题目重现：

首段展开

1．电视对儿童的影响？

正面还是负面？

你的观点

A．Televisionisthemostpopularformofentertainmentinthemodernhousehold.（引入话题）peopleofallagesusethismediumtoentertainthemselvesforanaverageoffourhoursaday.（发展话题）thus,televisionhashadatremendousinfluenceonitsviewers,especiallychildren.（缩小话题范围指电视对孩子的影响）scientistsnowsaythatchildrencanbenegativelyeffectedbyconstantlywatchingtelevision.（继续缩小范围至电视对孩子的负面影响）。

Itaketheirside.

B．Wehearalotaboutnegativeeffectsoftelevisionontheviewers.Obviously,televisionscanbeharmfulifitiswatchedconstantly.However,whentelevisioniswatchedinmoderation,itisextremelyvaluable,（点名观点）as/foritprovidesrelaxationentertainmentandeducation.

2.Somepeoplethinkthatthegovernmentshouldnotputmoneyinbuildingtheatersandsportsstadium,theyshouldspendmoremoneyoneducationandmedicalcare.

a.Theatersandsportsstadiumarethemostpopularplacesinthemodernsociety.Peopleofallageslovetoentertainthemselvesandenjoytherelaxation.Plus,asthedesireformusicandsportsisincreasing,thegovernmentoughttospendmoremoneyonthat.

b.Mostpeopleholdthepointthattheatersandsportsarelosingtheirimportanceastimepassesby.Itisnodenyingthatmodernpeopleareleadinganincreasinglybusylife.Nevertheless,notasingleplacecanreplacethestatusinhelpingpeopledeveloptheirphysicalbodyandmentalconditionliketheatersandstadium.

理由段展开：

1．中西方思维差异：

讨论计算机重要性？

Wearenowlivinginhighdevelopingworld.Greatchangeshavetakenplace.Thecomputerwasbornin1946inAmericaandwasnamedENTACbyresearchers.It’sdevelopmentisveryquick.Ithadmadegreaterprogressrecentlyandplaysamoreimportantroleinoursociety.（汉语思维）

ItisofgreatvaluetomasternecessarycomputerknowledgeInworldtoday.（开门见山点名本段中心思想）。

Thatistosay,onecanneverlivewithoutsufficientknowledgeofcomputer.AswhathappensinBritain,acollegegraduateevenfromCambridgeUniversitymayfaceadifficultyinfindingajobifheorshedoesnotknowhowtomanagecomputers.Itistrueinothercountries.Therefore,itwillbeveryhardtolivefreefromcontactwithcomputers.

结尾段标志词：

Fromtheabove,inconclusion,inshort,allinall,onthewhole,inoneword

作业：

somepeopleclaimthatdisadvantagesofcarsaremorethanadvantages,doyouagreeordisagree?

作业2：

2005真题version00110

Manyoftheworld’slanguagesandculturesaredyingout.Givepossiblereasonsandyourrecommendations.

1．抱怨信：

2．抱歉和解释信

首段：

DearMr.Wang:

Iamawfullysorryaboutwhatmydogdidtoyourgardenthedaybeforeyesterday,IwantyouknowhowbadlyIfeelaboutit.Iassureyouthatitwillnothappenagain.

经过：

因为狗链段了，家人不知道，跑去邻院，糟蹋了花草，我知道那是邻居爷爷精心培育的，感觉更对不起，对生起能理解，主动要求赔钱赔花，问还有什么别的要求）

结尾：

Beingsorryisnotenough.Butwehonestlythankyouforbeingsogenerouswithusandourdog.

Yourssincerely

Lynn

3.感谢词：

thankyoufromthebottomofmyheart

thanksamillion

Isincerelyappreciate

Manythanksforyourkindness

Writealettertothankyourfriendsforcaringforyouwhenyouwereinhospitalafteranaccident.

4.要求和申请信：

例：

WritealettertoMr.Wangwhoworksinadministrationofficetoaskforanincreaseinfinancialaid.

IamwritingtoyoutoseewhetherornotIcangetanincreaseinfinancialaid.Astheadministrationofficehaddonealotinhelpingpeoplewithfinancialneed.Itendtoaskanotherhelpfromyou.

5.邀请信和拒绝信：

youhavecomebacktoyourhometownafterthefirstterminCanada.Writealettertoyourgoodfriend,Mike,invitinghimtovisityourhometowninsummervacation.

Oneofyourfriendsinvitesyoutovisithishometown.Butyouhavemadeyourplans.Writealettertorefusehisinvitation.

Version00113

Somepeoplethinkthatuniversityshouldnotprovidetheoreticalknowledge,buttogivepracticaltrainingbeneficialtothesociety.Doyouagreeordisagree?

Useyourownexperienceandknowledgetosupportyouidea.

范文5：

Mostuniversitiesandcollegesspendratherlongperiodinfundamentaltheoriesandelementarycourse.Butstudentsregardthesekindsofknowledgeuseless,andpaylessattentiontoit.Somepeoplethinkthatuniversityshouldnotprovidetheoreticalknowledge,buttogivepracticaltrainingbeneficialtothesociety.Asforme,Ithinkthisviewisreasonableinsomeaspects.

Firstofall,thetheoreticalknowledgejusthandlesproblemisanabstractconcept.Itmustcombinewithrealjob.Forinstance,aseveryoneknow,withthedevelopmentofsociety,workpositionmoreandmoreneedexperiencedandtechnicaltalent,especiallyinShanghaiofChina,oneofthebiggestcitythroughouttheworld.So,moreofferingpracticetrainingtouniversitystudentscanhelpthemtoadapttothesocietybetter.Therefore,thetheoreticalknowledgelosingcontactwithrealityisnonsensical.

Secondly,thetheoreticalknowledgecomesfrompractice.Anytheoreticalknowledgeisobtainedformtheworkofpracticing.Theuniversitiesprovidepracticaltrainingtostudents,makingthemunderstandthetheoreticalknowledgedeeply.Justbecauseofthis,ouruniversitiesbelievethatstudentsshouldparticipateinsocialworkatleastoneyearinthefouryearsinordertogetpracticaltraining.

However,thetheoreticalknowledgeistheessenceofpractice,anditistheimportantcoursethatwecan’tignoretoo.So,theoreticalknowledgeandpracticehavetheequalstatusinourstudy.

Inaword,theoreticalknowledgeandpracticaltrainingisallourrequirecourses.Weshouldstudytheoryknowledge,andthenapplyittopractice.

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version00121（2005年G类真题）

Somepeoplethinkvisitorstoothercountriesshouldimitatelocalcustomandbehaviors.Somepeopledisagree.theythinkthehostcountryshouldwelcomeculturedifferent.Discussthetowviews,andgiveyourownopinion.

范文4：

Recentyears,becausetrafficisconvenientday-by-day,peoplehavemorechancestotravelaroundtheworld.Theplanecanmakeusreachanycorneroftheearthinashorttime.Somepeoplethinkvisitorstoothercountriesshouldimitatelocalcustomandbehaviors,butsomepeopledisagree.AsfarasIamconcerned,necessaryimitationis,incontrast,awiserchoice.

Asafamoussayinggoes,doastheydowheninRoom.Theknowledgeoflocalcustomcanhelpoutsidepeopleadapttothenewenvironmentrapidly.Forinstance,aChinesestudentcametoBritain,hecanimitateBritishlifestyle.Inthisway,hecanunderstandBritishhabitmorethoroughly,thus,makehimselfliveamorecomfortablelifeinBritain.

Inaddition,theculturaluniquenessthatshouldbemaintainedneedmoreattention.Ifpeopledidnotadheretotheirnationalsymbolespeciallyinforeigncountry,thesetreasureswoulddisappear.TakeAmericanhugforinstance.Opposedtoit,Chinesepeoplegreeteachotherwithaformalhandshakeinsteadofwarmhug.Becauseofthis,differentcountriesknoweachothertoagreaterextent.

Ontheotherhand,itisgenerallybelievedthatoutsideculturestakeas