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有整齐美观的书写
二,润色文章原则
用词“老辣”
用句经典:
倒装、强调、虚拟
名人名言
高考作文评分细目
1.对内容的要求
全面
2.对句式的要求
多样
3.对词汇的要求
丰富
4.对语篇的要求
流畅,顺畅的连接和转折
5.对书写的要求
正确,工整
6.对目的的要求
符合写作要求
1.整体谋篇,合理布局
开头部分(opening):
说出文中要叙说的中心问题
正文部分(body):
围绕主题开展叙述或讨论
结尾部分(conclusion):
对全文进行总结和概括。
开头句
论述的展开提出观点:
1.Noonewoulddenythat…
2.Nowitiswidelybelievedthat…
3.Whenitcomesto…,somethink…
4.Thereisapublicdebatetodaythat...
5.Aisacommonwayof…,butisitawiseone?
6.Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocusthat+同位语从句……
7.Opinionsaredivided.
8.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards…
9.Withtherapidimprovementin…/growingawarenessof…,moreandmore…(e.g.Withtherapidimprovementinbuildingindustry,moreandmorestructuresarebeingerectedtosetthepeople‘smindsatease.)
10.Recently,sth./theproblemof…hasbeenbroughttopopularattention/hasbecomethefocusofpublicconcern…(e.g.Recently,theproblemofunemploymenthasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthatgovernmentsworldwidearecommittedtofindingusefulsolutions.)
11.Inthepastfewyears,therehasbeenaboom/sharpgrowth/declinein…(e.g.Inthepasttenyears,therehasbeenasharpdeclineinthenumberofspecies.)
12.Itistimeweexplorethetruthof...
进一步提出观点:
1.However,eachcoinhastwosides.(不同观点)
2.Ontheotherhand,…peopleobjectthat(有些人反对道…).(不同观点)
3.Peoplehave(take,adopt,assume)differentattitudestowardssth.
提出假想例子的方式:
1.Justimaginewhatwouldbelikeif...
2.Itisreasonabletoexpect...
3.Itisnotsurprisingthat...
举普通例子:
1.Forexample(instance),...
2.Wecantakesomethingforexample.
引用:
1.Oneofthegreatestearlywriterssaid...
2.Assomebodyonceputit,“…”
3."
..."
.Howoftenwehearsuchwordslikethese.
4.Asaproverbsays,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.
提出原因:
1.Therearemanyreasonsfor...
2.Why....?
Foronething,...;
foranotherthing,…
3.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.
4.Somepeoplemayneglectthatinfact...
表示措施
1)Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.
2)Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome(conquer)thedifficulties.
3)Weshoulddoourutmostindoingsth.
进行对比:
1.TheadvantagesforAoutweighthedisadvantagesof...
2.Indeed,AhasmoreadvantagesthanBwhensthisconcerned.
承上启下:
3.Tounderstandthetruthof...,itisalsoimportanttosee...
4.Astudyof...willmakethispointclear
让步:
IdonotdenythatAhasitsownmerits(优点).
结尾:
1.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat...
2.Insummary,itiswiserofsomebodytodosomething
3.Inshort...Allinall/Inaword/Inconclusion/Toconclude/Tosumup(总而言之),Inmypersonalopinion…(在我自己看来……),Inbrief(简言之),Obviously…(显然……)
注(图表型)
1.Accordingtotheinformationgiveninthetable/graph,wecanfindthat...
2.Ascanbeseenfromthetable/graph/figure,thereisanobviousandrapidincrease/decrease/decline/favorable(anunfavorable)changein...
2.拓展主题句,注意连贯与流畅
主题句仅仅是文章的主旨和大意,要使文章变得有血有肉就要展开主题句,并考虑如何组织安排语句,用一些衔接手段使句子与句子、语段与语段之间建立起各种各样的语意关系,并使整个语篇在意义上具有连贯性。
(1)表示添加信息的过渡词语,常见的有:
also,besides,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,whatismore,what’sworse,worsestill,similarly
(2)表示转折关系的过渡词有:
but,yet,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,although,though,while,still,otherwise,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand
(3)表示因果关系的常用过渡词有:
so,fortherefore,asaresult,because,owingto,dueto,thanksto,onaccountof,nowthat,since,consequently,asaconsequence,thus
(4)表示解释、说明关系的常用过渡词有:
asamatteroffact,infact,surprisingly,suchasthatis,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellyouthetruth,accordingto,afterall
(5)表示条件关系的常用衔接词有:
as/solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless,suppose,supposing
(6)表示强调的常用的衔接词有:
aboveall,firstofall,indeed,surely,certainly,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,obviously,especially,inparticular
(7)表示时间顺序关系的衔接词有:
after,afterwards,afterthat,afterawhile,atfirst,inthebeginning,tobeginwith,later,next,finally,allofasudden,atthatmoment,assoonas,fromnowon,fromthenon,meanwhile,not…until,intheend,eventually
(8)表示空间顺序关系的常用的衔接词有:
ontheright/left,onthesideof,attheendof,ontheothersideof,inthemiddleof/center/back/frontof,nextto,above,below,beyond,nearby
提分技巧:
⑴学会使用丰富句式
方法一:
使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
方法二:
巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力
方法三:
尝试多样化表达方式,包括无灵主语
1.感叹句
1)HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter.2)Whatakindboyheis!
3)Howdisappointedhewas!
2.强调句Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.
3.倒装句1)Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.2)Therecomesthepolicecar.
3)Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.
4.省略句Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.
5.with短语Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet,withahandbaginherhand.
6.定语从句,特别是高级定语从句,以及非限制性定语从句。
Inmyopinion,Internetbarsshouldbeplaceswherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.
7.各种名词性从句,包括主语从句,宾语从句,表语从句,同位语从句。
That’swhatIshoulddo.
⑵高级单词
英语写作高级词汇
第一first→tobegin/startwith☆第三third→lastbutnotleast
☆但是but→however☆选择choice→alternative
☆课程course→curriculum☆影响effect→influence
☆勤奋hardworking→diligent☆分发handout→distribute
☆替代replace→substitute☆应该should→besupposedto
☆理解understand→makesenseof/figureout
☆使用use→employ/makeuseof
☆第二second→inaddition/what'
smore
☆总之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary
☆机会chance→opportunity☆考虑consider→takeintoaccount/consideration
☆充足enough→adequate☆最终finally→eventually
☆帮助help→assist☆后果result→consequence
☆拒绝refuse→deny☆缺点shortcoming→drawback
☆可用useful→available☆艰难的difficult→painstaking
☆求同存异agreepartly→agreewithreserve/agreetodisagree
☆种类繁多allkindsof→awiderangeof
☆反对beagainst→objectto
☆忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with☆几乎不hardly→barely
☆重要important→vital☆不可能impossible→outofthequestion
☆参加join→participate☆巨大large→enormous
☆许多many→alargequantityof☆合适proper→appropriate
☆小心谨慎becareful→becautious
☆渴望做beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo
☆因为becauseof→onaccountof
☆闻名befamousfor→haveareputationfor
☆正在建设beingbuilt→underconstruction
☆感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease
☆美化学校☆故意onpurpose→deliberately/bydesign
☆成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit
☆无法描述的美丽toobeautifultodescribe→beautybeyonddescription
☆震区theareaswhicharehitbytheearthquake→thequakehitareas
☆一个表现好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperway→awellbehavedchild
☆一个脾气坏的人amanwhoeasilyloseshistemper→anilltemperedman
☆节能的房子ahousewhichsavesenergy→anenergysavinghouse
☆一位受到良好教育的妇女awomanwhohasreceivedgoodeducation→awelleducatedwoman
☆精心组织的活动anactivitythatisorganizedwell→awellorganizedactivity
☆悲痛欲绝的母亲themotherwhoisextremelyupset→theheartbrokenmother
☆一个爱好和平的人apersonwholovespeace→apeacelovingPerson
☆合作teamup→becooperative
☆伤心besad→becastdown
☆感到着急feelanxious→experienceanxiety
☆在我看来inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned
☆置若罔闻refusetolistento→turnadeafearto
☆也;
和aswellas→inadditionto/apartfrom
☆厌烦beboredwith→befedupwith
☆发生happen→occur/comeabout☆提高improve→promote
☆立即immediately→inaflash
☆有趣interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing
☆幸运lucky→fortunate☆有意义meaningful→rewarding
☆明显obvious→apparent☆丰富rich→abundant
☆与….不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrommakeourschoolbeautiful→beautifyourschool☆一件震惊世界的事情anincidentthatshakestheworld→aworldshakingincident
☆困难的difficult→challenging有挑战性
☆至关重要的important→vital至关重要的;
essential必不可少的;
significant有重要意义的;
☆美丽的beautiful→appealing动人的;
attractive吸引人的;
charming迷人的;
fascinating迷人的
☆参加join→takepartin☆使用use→makegooduseof☆拜访visit→payavisitto
☆veryimportant
重要的→ofgreatimportance
☆veryuseful
有用的→ofgreatuse
☆verysignificant
至关重要的→ofgreatsignificance
☆verynecessary
必要的→ofgreatnecessity
☆学习 learn→research研究;
pickup偶然学到,顺便学到,轻松学到;
master掌握
☆好老师agoodteacher→akind,patientandknowledgeableEnglishteacher
☆当然地certainly→obviously明显地;
undoubtedly毫无疑问地;
evidently显然地;
☆不开心的 sad→discouraged气馁的;
depressed沮丧的;
downhearted垂头丧气的;
low-spirited意志消沉的;
3.文末结论,首位呼应
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