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有整齐美观的书写
二，润色文章原则
用词“老辣”
用句经典:
倒装、强调、虚拟
名人名言
高考作文评分细目
1.对内容的要求
全面
2.对句式的要求
多样
3.对词汇的要求
丰富
4.对语篇的要求
流畅，顺畅的连接和转折
5.对书写的要求
正确，工整
6.对目的的要求
符合写作要求
1.整体谋篇，合理布局
开头部分（opening）：
说出文中要叙说的中心问题
正文部分（body）：
围绕主题开展叙述或讨论
结尾部分（conclusion）：
对全文进行总结和概括。
开头句
论述的展开提出观点：
1.Noonewoulddenythat…
2.Nowitiswidelybelievedthat…
3.Whenitcomesto…,somethink…
4.Thereisapublicdebatetodaythat...
5.Aisacommonwayof…,butisitawiseone?
6.Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocusthat+同位语从句……
7.Opinionsaredivided.
8.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards…
9.Withtherapidimprovementin…/growingawarenessof…,moreandmore…（e.g.Withtherapidimprovementinbuildingindustry,moreandmorestructuresarebeingerectedtosetthepeople‘smindsatease.）
10.Recently,sth./theproblemof…hasbeenbroughttopopularattention/hasbecomethefocusofpublicconcern…（e.g.Recently,theproblemofunemploymenthasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthatgovernmentsworldwidearecommittedtofindingusefulsolutions.）
11.Inthepastfewyears，therehasbeenaboom/sharpgrowth/declinein…（e.g.Inthepasttenyears,therehasbeenasharpdeclineinthenumberofspecies.）
12.Itistimeweexplorethetruthof...
进一步提出观点：
1.However,eachcoinhastwosides.（不同观点）
2.Ontheotherhand,…peopleobjectthat（有些人反对道…）.（不同观点）
3.Peoplehave（take，adopt，assume）differentattitudestowardssth.
提出假想例子的方式：
1.Justimaginewhatwouldbelikeif...
2.Itisreasonabletoexpect...
3.Itisnotsurprisingthat...
举普通例子：
1.Forexample（instance）,...
2.Wecantakesomethingforexample.
引用：
1.Oneofthegreatestearlywriterssaid...
2.Assomebodyonceputit,“…”
3."
..."
.Howoftenwehearsuchwordslikethese.
4.Asaproverbsays，“Wherethereisawill，thereisaway.
提出原因：
1.Therearemanyreasonsfor...
2.Why....?
Foronething,...;
foranotherthing,…
3.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.
4.Somepeoplemayneglectthatinfact...
表示措施
1）Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.
2）Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome（conquer）thedifficulties.
3）Weshoulddoourutmostindoingsth.
进行对比：
1.TheadvantagesforAoutweighthedisadvantagesof...
2.Indeed,AhasmoreadvantagesthanBwhensthisconcerned.
承上启下：
3.Tounderstandthetruthof...,itisalsoimportanttosee...
4.Astudyof...willmakethispointclear
让步：
IdonotdenythatAhasitsownmerits（优点）.
结尾：
1.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat...
2.Insummary,itiswiserofsomebodytodosomething
3.Inshort...Allinall/Inaword/Inconclusion/Toconclude/Tosumup（总而言之）,Inmypersonalopinion…（在我自己看来……）,Inbrief（简言之）,Obviously…（显然……）
注（图表型）
1.Accordingtotheinformationgiveninthetable/graph,wecanfindthat...
2.Ascanbeseenfromthetable/graph/figure,thereisanobviousandrapidincrease/decrease/decline/favorable（anunfavorable）changein...
2.拓展主题句，注意连贯与流畅
主题句仅仅是文章的主旨和大意，要使文章变得有血有肉就要展开主题句，并考虑如何组织安排语句，用一些衔接手段使句子与句子、语段与语段之间建立起各种各样的语意关系，并使整个语篇在意义上具有连贯性。
（1）表示添加信息的过渡词语，常见的有：
also,besides,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,whatismore,what’sworse,worsestill,similarly
（2）表示转折关系的过渡词有：
but,yet,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,although,though,while,still,otherwise,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand
（3）表示因果关系的常用过渡词有：
so,fortherefore,asaresult,because,owingto,dueto,thanksto,onaccountof,nowthat,since,consequently,asaconsequence,thus
（4）表示解释、说明关系的常用过渡词有：
asamatteroffact,infact,surprisingly,suchasthatis,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellyouthetruth,accordingto,afterall
（5）表示条件关系的常用衔接词有：
as/solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless,suppose,supposing
（6）表示强调的常用的衔接词有：
aboveall,firstofall,indeed,surely,certainly,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,obviously,especially,inparticular
（7）表示时间顺序关系的衔接词有：
after,afterwards,afterthat,afterawhile,atfirst,inthebeginning,tobeginwith,later,next,finally,allofasudden,atthatmoment,assoonas,fromnowon,fromthenon,meanwhile,not…until,intheend,eventually
（8）表示空间顺序关系的常用的衔接词有：
ontheright/left,onthesideof,attheendof,ontheothersideof,inthemiddleof/center/back/frontof,nextto,above,below,beyond,nearby
提分技巧：
⑴学会使用丰富句式
方法一：
使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
方法二：
巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力
方法三：
尝试多样化表达方式，包括无灵主语
1.感叹句
1）HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter.2）Whatakindboyheis!
3）Howdisappointedhewas!
2.强调句Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.
3.倒装句1）Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.2）Therecomesthepolicecar.
3）Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.
4.省略句Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.
5.with短语Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet,withahandbaginherhand.
6.定语从句，特别是高级定语从句，以及非限制性定语从句。
Inmyopinion,Internetbarsshouldbeplaceswherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.
7.各种名词性从句，包括主语从句，宾语从句，表语从句，同位语从句。
That’swhatIshoulddo.
⑵高级单词
英语写作高级词汇
第一first→tobegin/startwith☆第三third→lastbutnotleast
☆但是but→however☆选择choice→alternative
☆课程course→curriculum☆影响effect→influence
☆勤奋hardworking→diligent☆分发handout→distribute
☆替代replace→substitute☆应该should→besupposedto
☆理解understand→makesenseof/figureout
☆使用use→employ/makeuseof
☆第二second→inaddition/what'
smore
☆总之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary
☆机会chance→opportunity☆考虑consider→takeintoaccount/consideration
☆充足enough→adequate☆最终finally→eventually
☆帮助help→assist☆后果result→consequence
☆拒绝refuse→deny☆缺点shortcoming→drawback
☆可用useful→available☆艰难的difficult→painstaking
☆求同存异agreepartly→agreewithreserve/agreetodisagree
☆种类繁多allkindsof→awiderangeof
☆反对beagainst→objectto
☆忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with☆几乎不hardly→barely
☆重要important→vital☆不可能impossible→outofthequestion
☆参加join→participate☆巨大large→enormous
☆许多many→alargequantityof☆合适proper→appropriate
☆小心谨慎becareful→becautious
☆渴望做beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo
☆因为becauseof→onaccountof
☆闻名befamousfor→haveareputationfor
☆正在建设beingbuilt→underconstruction
☆感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease
☆美化学校☆故意onpurpose→deliberately/bydesign
☆成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit
☆无法描述的美丽toobeautifultodescribe→beautybeyonddescription
☆震区theareaswhicharehitbytheearthquake→thequakehitareas
☆一个表现好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperway→awellbehavedchild
☆一个脾气坏的人amanwhoeasilyloseshistemper→anilltemperedman
☆节能的房子ahousewhichsavesenergy→anenergysavinghouse
☆一位受到良好教育的妇女awomanwhohasreceivedgoodeducation→awelleducatedwoman
☆精心组织的活动anactivitythatisorganizedwell→awellorganizedactivity
☆悲痛欲绝的母亲themotherwhoisextremelyupset→theheartbrokenmother
☆一个爱好和平的人apersonwholovespeace→apeacelovingPerson
☆合作teamup→becooperative
☆伤心besad→becastdown
☆感到着急feelanxious→experienceanxiety
☆在我看来inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned
☆置若罔闻refusetolistento→turnadeafearto
☆也；
和aswellas→inadditionto/apartfrom
☆厌烦beboredwith→befedupwith
☆发生happen→occur/comeabout☆提高improve→promote
☆立即immediately→inaflash
☆有趣interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing
☆幸运lucky→fortunate☆有意义meaningful→rewarding
☆明显obvious→apparent☆丰富rich→abundant
☆与….不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrommakeourschoolbeautiful→beautifyourschool☆一件震惊世界的事情anincidentthatshakestheworld→aworldshakingincident
☆困难的difficult→challenging有挑战性
☆至关重要的important→vital至关重要的;
essential必不可少的;
significant有重要意义的;
☆美丽的beautiful→appealing动人的;
attractive吸引人的;
charming迷人的;
fascinating迷人的
☆参加join→takepartin☆使用use→makegooduseof☆拜访visit→payavisitto
☆veryimportant
重要的→ofgreatimportance
☆veryuseful
有用的→ofgreatuse
☆verysignificant
至关重要的→ofgreatsignificance
☆verynecessary
必要的→ofgreatnecessity
☆学习 learn→research研究;
pickup偶然学到，顺便学到，轻松学到;
master掌握
☆好老师agoodteacher→akind,patientandknowledgeableEnglishteacher
☆当然地certainly→obviously明显地;
undoubtedly毫无疑问地;
evidently显然地;
☆不开心的 sad→discouraged气馁的;
depressed沮丧的;
downhearted垂头丧气的;
low-spirited意志消沉的;
3.文末结论，首位呼应
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