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TryingToBeaGoodUniversityStudent

1）做合格大学生的必要性（议论文，从正反两个方面）

2）做合格大学生的必要条件（可从德智体等方面谈）（说明文）

3）我打算这样做（描写文）

二、确定主题句

8分作文最保险的做法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。

如：

1）Itisverynecessarytobeagoodunversitystudent.

2）Thereareseveralrespectsofnecessitiestobeagooduniversitystudent.（moralqualities,intellectualability,physicalfitness）

3）WhatIwilldointhefutureisasfollows.

三、三段十二句作文法

1、开头段。

引用法，提问法，定义法，数字法，故事法，开门见山法，间接开头法，概括法。

2、中间段。

例证法，比较与对比法，因果法。

3、结尾段。

总结法或重述法，建议法，评价法，引语法，预测法，展望或期望法，反问法。

四、修改完善。

1、语篇水平上的检查；

2、段落水平上的检查；

3、句子水平上的检查。

（大小写，单词拼写，词性，动词的时态语态、人称是否正确，主谓关系是否一致，名词的单复数、代词及指代关系是否一致，句子是否完整，标点符号是否正确）

四级作文模板参考

（I）说明原因型模块Currently,XXhasbeentheorderoftheday.Thisdoesdemonstratethetheory---nothingismorevaluablethanXXItisclearthat

（1）.Ifyou

（2）,asaresult,yourdreamswillcometrue.Onthecontrary,ifyou（3）.Failurewillbefollowingwithyou.Itturnsoutthatallyourplanfallsthrough.Noonecandenyanotherfactthat（4）.Youdon'

thavetolookveryfartofindoutthetruth,inrespectthatweallknow（5）.Itwillexertaprofoundinfluenceupon（6）.Withreferencetomystandpoint,Ithink（7）.注释:

1:

XX第一个优点2:

支持XX做法3:

不支持XX做法4:

XX第二个优点5:

举例证明优点二6:

说明XX优点三影响

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Theimportanceofself-confidenceCurrently,self-confidencehasbeentheorderoftheday.Thisdoesdemonstratethetheory---nothingismorevaluablethanself-confidence.Itisclearthat（self-confidencemeanstrustinone'

sabilities）.Ifyou（arefullofself-confidence,itwillbringyourcreativepowertoplay,arouseyourenthusiasmforwork,andhelpyouovercomedifficulties）,asaresult,yourdreamswillcometrue.Onthecontrary,ifyou（havenoconfidenceinyourself,thereislittlepossibilitythatyouwouldeverachieveanything）.Failurewillbefollowingwithyou。

Itturnsoutthatallyourplanfallsthrough.Noonecandenyanotherfactthat（self-confidencegivesyoulightwhenyouareindarkandencouragementwhenyouaredismayed）.Youdon'

thavetolookveryfartofindoutthetruth,inrespectthatweallknow（thesecretofMMe.Curieliesinperseveranceandself-confidence,thelatterinparticular）.Itwillexertaprofoundinfluenceupon（theachievementofone'

sambitions）.Withreferencetomystandpoint,Ithink（hethatcanhaveself-confidencecanhavewhathewill）.

（I）说明原因型模块

（2）Inrecentyears,XXhascausedaheateddebateon

（1）.Thefactorsfor

（2）.Firstofall,（3）.Then,therecomesacasethat（4）.Moreover,（5）.Especiallywhen（6）.Indeed,theseuniquepointscanbecollectedtheremindpeoplethat（7）.Inthisway,weshouldbehavejustlike（8）.

TheimpactofTelevisionInrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,80percentofallhomesinChinahavesatelliteTV,offeringasmanyas50channels.Ithascausedaheateddebateon（theimpactoftelevisiononchildren）.Manyparentsareworriedabouttheimpactofsomuchtelevisiononchildren.Thefactorsfor（parents'

worryisthatchildrenareindulgeintelevisionandspendtoomuchtimeonit.）.Firstofall,（withsomanyprogramstochoosefrom,childrenarenotgettingasmuchexerciseastheyshould）.Then,therecomesacasethat（somestudieshaveshowthatexcessivewatchingoftelevisionbymillionsofchildrenhasloweredtheirabilitytoachieveinschool）.Moreover,（theeffectonchildren'

smindsaremoreseriousthantheeffectonchildren'

sbodies）.Especiallywhen（thechildrenaretoosmalltojudgewhatprogramsaresuittothem）.Indeed,theseuniquepointscanbeconnectedtoremindparentsthat（theyshouldpaycloseattentiontoandresponsibilitiesforsupervisingtheirchildren'

sTVviewing）.Inthisway,childrenwillnotbeinfluencedtoodeeply.

（I）说明原因型模块（4）Formostofustoday,

（1）.Fromabove,wecanfindthatthereasonswhy

（2）areasfollows.Theprimaryreason,Ithink,is（3）.Second,（4）.Thethirdreason,actually,is（5）.Thesignificancefor（6）。

Therefore,（7）.注释:

（1）人们针对XX态度和举措

（2）归纳现状（3）第一个原因（4）第二个原因（5）第三个原因（6）重申造成现状最重要原因

PollutionMostofustoday（recognizethatenvironmentalpollutionhasbeenagreatlyseriousproblem.lotsofplantstreescorpsaredestroyedbybadair.manyfishdieofpoisonouswater.thousandsofpeoplediefromeatingpoisonedfishorbreathingingas.therefore,environmentalpollutionshouldberesponsibleforthesediseasesthataredisabling,orbringingdeathnotonlytohumanbeings,butalsotowildlife.）Fromabove,wecanfindthatthereasonswhy（environmentarepollutedmoreandmoreseriously）areasfollows.theprimaryreason,Ithink,is（thereasonofharmfulsubstancesintoenvironment.forexample,topreventinsects,farmersmakeuseofgreatamountsofinsecticides,soastohavebumperharvests.however,theypolluteair,waterandland）.Second,（thegascomingfromthecarenginesandfactoriesalsomakeenvironmentpollutedbadly）.thethirdreasonactuallyis（theresultofagrowingpopulationintheworld.everyday,somuchlitterandwastearepouredoutfromhouses,alsopollutetheenvironment）.Thesignificancefor（controllingpollution）notedthatit'

shightimethatmoreeffectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.Therefore,（newlawsshouldbepassedtolimittheamountofpollutantsfromfactories.moreover,inthehouseholds,thereisanobviousneedtoreducelitterandwaste.let'

smakeourgoodefforts,andtheworldwillbeasaferplacetoliveforus）.

（I）说明原因型模块（5）Thesedaysweoftenhearthat

（1）.Itiscommonthat

（2）.Whydoessuchcircumstanceoccurinspiteofsocialprotects?

Foronething,（3）.Foranother,（4）.Whatismore,since（5）,itisnaturalthat（6）.Tosolvetheproblemisnoteasyatall,butisworthtrying.Weshoulddosomethingsuchas（7）toimprovehepresentsituation,andIdobelieveeverythingwillbebetterinthefuture.

（1）提出论题

（2）说明现状（3）理由一（4）理由二（5）理由三（6）理由三引起后果（7）解决方法

PollutionofenvironmentThesedaysweoftenhearthat（ourlivingconditionsaregettingmoreandmoreseriousbecauseofthedestructionofourenvironment）.Itiscommonthat（manytreesandanimalsarenearextinction,andtheall-importantfoodchainhasbeendestroyed.）.Whydoessuchcircumstanceoccurinspiteofsocialprotects?

Foronething,（thepopulationoftheworldisincreasingsorapidlythattheworldhasbeensocrowded.）.Foranother,（theoveruseofnaturalresourceshasinfluencedthebalanceofnaturalecology）.Whatismore,since（theindustrialrevolution）,itisnaturalthat（agreatnumberoffactorieshavebeenspringinguplikemushrooms.Thesmokeandharmfulchemicalsreleasedfromfactoriesalsopollutetheenvironment）.Tosolvetheproblemisnoteasyatall,butisworthing.Weshoulddosomethingsuchas（plantingmoretrees,equippingcarswithpollution-controldevicesandlearningtorecyclingnaturalresources）toimprovethepresentsituation,andIdobelieveeverythingwillbebetterinthefuture.

写作模板——图表式作文Itisobviousinthegraphic/tablethattherate/number/amountofYhasundergonedramaticchanges.Ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears（asXvaries）.AtthepointofX1,Yreachesitspeakvalueof…（多少）.Whatisthereasonforthischange?

Mainlythereare…（多少）reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraphic/table.Firstofall,…（第一个原因）.Moreimportantly,…（第二个原因）.Mostimportantofall,…（第三个原因）.Fromtheabovediscussions,wehaveenoughreasontopredictwhatwillhappeninthenearfuture.Thetrenddescribedinthegraphic/tablewillcontinueforquitealongtime（ifnecessarymeasuresarenottaken括号里使用于那些不太好变化趋势）.

写作模板——提纲式作文

1．对立观点式

A.有人认为X是好事，赞成X，为什么？

B.有人认为X是坏事，反对X，为什么？

C.我看法。

SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat支持X第一个原因。

Theyalsoarguethat支持X另一个原因。

However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheyconsideritharmfultodoX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat反对X第一个理由。

Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:

Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofXoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabove-mentionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,XalsomayX有一个坏处。

2．批驳观点式

A．一个错误观点。

B．我不同意。

Manypeoplearguethat错误观点。

Bysayingthat,theymean对这个观点进一步解释。

Anexampletheyhavepresentedisthat一个例子。

（AccordingtoasurveyperformedbyXonagroupofY,almost80%ofthem赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点影响）。

Theremightbesomeelementoftruthinthesepeople’sbelief.Butifweconsideritindepth,wewillfeelnoreservationtoconcludethat与错误观点相反观点。

Thereareanumberofreasonsbehindmybelief.（以下参照辩论文议论文写法）。

3．社会问题（现象）式

4．A．一个社会问题或者现象B．产生原因C．对社会和我们生活影响D．如何杜绝。

（如果是问题话）E．前景预测。

Nowadays,thereexistsanincreasinglyserioussocial/economic/environmentalproblem.（Xhasincreasinglybecomeacommonconcernofthepublic）.Accordingtoasurvey,调查内容说明这种现象情况。

（或者是一个例子）。

Thereareacoupleofreasonsboomingthisproblem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。

Xhascausedsubstantialimpactonthesocietyandourdailylife,whichhasbeenarticulatedinthefollowingaspects.参照辩论式议论文写法。

AdozenofmeasuresaresupposedtotaketopreventXfrombringingusmoreharm.同上Basedontheabovediscussions,Icaneasilyforecastthatmoreandmorepeoplewill……..

4.辩论式议论文模版

1Somepeoplebelieve（argue,recognize,think）that观点1.Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat观点2.Asforme,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.Therear