完整版英语短文写作句子改错练习高级综合英语含答案doc.docx

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英语短文写作句子改错练习<2>

1．指代方面

1）Sometimesteacherswillinformstudents

oftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear.

改为:

Sometimesteacherswillinformstudentsofthe

heavyburdenthestudentshavetobear.

2）PeoplehavebeenfightingagainsttheinfluenceofTVcommercials,butitoftenprovesuseless.

改为:

PeoplehavebeenfightingagainsttheinfluenceofTVcommercials,whichoftenprovesuseless.

3）Televisionprovidesuswithavivid,colorfulworld,whichenablesustoenjoylifethoroughly.

改为:

Television,whichenablesustoenjoy

lifethoroughly,providesuswithavivid,colorfulworld.

2．修饰方面

1）Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.

改为:

Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgases,tothecountryside.

2）Withouttelevision,peoplecan'tgetinformationwhichcomesfromotherpartsoftheworldimmediately.

改为:

Withouttelevision,peoplecan'timmediatelygetinformationwhichcomesfromotherpartsoftheworld.

3）Attheageofsix,myfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.

改为:

WhenIwassix,myfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.

4）Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people'slivingstandardhasgreatlyimprove

改为:

Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinour

country,peoplehavegreatlyimprovedliving

standard.

5）Toimproveone'swritingskill,regular

practiceisessential.

改为:

Toimproveone'swritingskill,weneedregularpractice.

3．平行方面

1）Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,thespeedoftrafficcanbeincreased.

改为:

Whilethenumberofvehiclesis

reduced,thespeedoftrafficcanbe

increased.

2）Thepriceofmilkisn'thigherthangrain.

改为:

Thepriceofmilkisn'thigherthanthatofgrain.

3）Theenergyproblemiscurrentlyofgreatconcerntoanation,theworld,andhumanbeings.

改为:

Theenergyproblemiscurrentlyofgreatconcerntoanation,totheworld,andtohumanbeings.

4）Butotherpeoplearguethateveryonehasacertainopportunityandawisemanwillneverloseitwheneveritarises.

改为:

Butotherpeoplearguethateveryonehasacertainopportunityandthatawisemanwillneverloseitwheneveritarises.

5）BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyofthecourseandhowlongitlasted.

改为:

BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyofthecourseandofthelengthofit.

6）Makingcitiesgreenerhasalotof

advantages,suchasitsimprovementof

ourenvironment,itscontributiontoourindustryanditsmakingourcitiesbeautiful.

改为:

Makingcitiesgreenerhasalotofadvantages,suchasitsimprovementofourenviron-ment,itscontributiontoourindustryanditsbeautificationofourcities

4.语法方面

1）Narrowstreetseasilycausetohappenmanytrafficaccidents.

改为:

Narrowstreetseasilycausemanytraffic

accidents.

2）Agreatchangehasbeentakenplacesincethen.

改为:

Agreatchangehastakenplacethen.

3）Butitmayoccursomenewproblems.

改为:

Butsomenewproblemsmayoccur.

4）Opportunitiesareonlybelongedtothosewhoworkhard.

改为:

Opportunitiesonlybelongtothosewho

workhard.

5）Greentreescanprotectourairfrompolluting.

改为:

Greentreescanprotectourairfrombeing

polluted.

6）Comparingwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.

改为:

Comparedwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.

5.搭配方面

1）Howeverthespeedofacarismuch

fasterthanthatofabicycle.

改为：

Howeverthespeedofacarismuchhigherthanthatofabicycle.

2）Inthepastthepriceofmilkwasso

expensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.

改为:

Inthepastthepriceofmilkwassohigh

thatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.

3）Weshouldstudy/learnasmuch

knowledgeaspossiblesothatwecanbe

fullypreparedforthefuture.

改为:

Weshouldgetasmuchknowledgeas

possiblesothatwecanbefullypreparedfor

thefuture.

4）Theopportunitytobepromotedina

jointventurewillbesmallerifone

cannotspeakEnglish.

改为:

Theopportunitytobepromotedinajoint

venturewillbelessifonecannotspeakEng-

lish.

6.赘言问题

1）Inmyopinion,Ibelievethefreemedicalsystemisinneedofreform.

改为:

Inmyopinion,thefreemedicalsystemisinneedofreform.

2）Peopletrytofindasolutiontosolvetheproblem.

改为:

Peopletrytofindasolutiontotheproblem.

3）Manyvisitorswhovisitourcityhavetheimpressionthattherearefewtrees

inthestreet.

改为:

Manyvisitorsofourcityhavetheimpressionthattherearefewtreesinthestreet.

4）Thereasonwhypeoplechoosetoliveinthecountryisbecausethereisno

pollutionornoisethere.

改为:

Thereasonwhypeoplechoosetoliveinthecountryisthatthereisnopollutionornoisethere.

5）1havetorewritemycompositionagain.

改为:

1havetorewritemycomposition.

7.汉化问题

1）Trafficisaseriousproblem,oneofthereasonsisthatShanghaihasovertenmillionpeople.改为:

Trafficisaseriousproblem,oneofthe

reasonsisthatthereareovertenmillionpeopleinShanghai.

2）MylevelofEnglishhasthusbeenimproved.

改为:

MyEnglishhasthusbeenimproved.

3）Nowadaysyoungpeoplewhoseektogoabroadarebecomingmoreandmore.

改为:

Nowadaysmoreandmoreyoungpeopleseektogoabroad.

4）Withthedevelopmentofcities,greenlandbecomesmoreandmoreless.

改为:

Withthedevelopmentofcities,thereislessandlessgreenland.

5）Smokingwilldoharmtoourbody.

改为:

Smokingwilldoharmtoheath.

6）Weshouldputoutheartsintothestudy.

改为:

Weshouldpayattentiontothestudy