考点12 书面表达读后续写解析版.docx

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考点12书面表达读后续写解析版

考点12书面表达读后续写

Writing1辽宁省六校2021届高三上学期期中联考

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Withabroadsmileonherlips,15-yearoldSirinrushedtohermomtoshowoffhernewpainting.Butmomraisedhereyebrowswitheyeswideopen,andspokeinanimpatienttone,“Notime,baby.RightnowIambusywithanimportanttalk.Justwaitforsometime,OK?

”

Holdingheroilpainting,shefrowned,andthensearchedforherdad.

“Dad,seewhatIhavedone,”Sirinannouncedaloudinathrillingvoice.Herdadturnedaroundwhileadjustinghistie,grinnedather,andshowedhisthumbsup!

Immediately，blowinghertwocheeks,Sirinrepliedangrily,“Dad,youhaven'tseenityet.”

Hesmiledathersaying,“Notime,baby.Iwillseeitlater.”Hejustpattedherbacklovingly，kissedherforehead,andrushedforhisoffice.

Shewasnotakidtobepleasedwithsimplegestureorsmile.Shestoodthereforafewseconds,andthenstormedofftoherownbedroom.Hotairwasblowingfromhernostrils（鼻孔）;herfaceturnedintoapplered.Shethrewthepaintingonthetable,slammed（把…砰地关上）thedoorandthrewherselfonherbed.

“Whyiseverybodysobusy?

”Sherecalledthousandsofincidentsthathurtherinpre-school,middleschoolandeveninhighschooltoo！

Sheassumedatleastherownfamilymemberswouldgivesomevaluestoherthoughts,buttheywerenoexception.Unconsciously,hereyeswerefilledwithtears.

Theknockingsoundonthedoorputasuddenbraketoherthought.Hermomwascallingherfordinner.Sirindeliberatelycamelatetojointhem.Shekeptsilentanddidn'tlookatanyone,scratchingthetablematwithhernail,hermomwaspuzzledattheunusualbehavior.Suddenly,themorningincidentclickedinhermind,Softly，sheasked,“Honey,didIdoanythingwrong?

”

注意：

1.所续写短文词数应为150左右

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好

Paragraph1:

Atthisverymoment,Sirincouldnolongerresistheranger._______________

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Paragraph2:

Whenbackfromschoolthenextday,Sirinwassurprisedtoseeherbeautifully-decoratedpaintingonthewall.__________________________________

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【参考范文】

Atthisverymoment,Sirincouldnolongerresistheranger. “Whyiseverybodysobusy?

”sheroared,tearsstreamingdown.Sheassumedthathermomanddadwouldfeelproudofhergreattalent,wouldappreciateherpaintingbutshewasdisgustedwitheverybodyhaving“notime”forher.“Ihateyou!

”Shescreamed，grabbedthepaintingonthetableandtoreitinhalf.Shocked,momthrewherarmsaroundhertightly,announcingregretfullyandfirmly,"Baby,Iamsosorry!

Ipromisethismistakewillnotberepeated.”

When backfromschoolthenextday,Sirinwassurprisedtoseeherbeautifully-decoratedpaintingonthewall.Itwasbeautifullyframedandjustbelowthepainting,itwaswritten“Wearesoproudofyou,ourlittleangle!

”Onseeingit,sheburstoutcrying.Sherantohermomandhuggedhertightlyaswell,fullyawareofhermom’slove.Recallinghermom'sstressfromworkanddailylife,shewasregrettingherpreviousbehavior.Sheduckedherhead,apologizing,“Sorry,mom!

”Itdawnedonthemthatthougheverythingcameandwent,mutualunderstandingwouldstayforeverintheirfamily.

Writing2（2020·浙江诸暨中学高三期中）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

LateNightattheZoo

Azookeeperhadbeenworkingatazoofor15yearsandneverexperiencedanyproblems.Healwaysworkedtheeveningshiftsbecausehewastrustedtoproperlylockupthezoo.OnawarmsummernightinlateJune,thezookeeperturnedoffthelightsandwishedallofhisanimalsagoodnight.Heleftthezooandwalkedtohiscarintheparkinglot.Ashereachedinhisbackpocketherealizedthathiskeyshadgonemissing.Herapidlyturnedaroundandrealizedhehadlefttheminsidethezoo.HequicklywalkedbacktowardstheZoo'sentrancehopinghewouldseethemalongtheway.

Whenhearrivedatthedoor,tohissurprise,thedoorwasunlocked.Infearofsettingoffthealarmthathehadjustset,hedidnotturnonthelights.Thezookeeperturnedontheflashlightonhisphoneandbegantomakehiswaytotheoffice.Helookedaroundatalltheanimalsintheircagesandthoughttohimselfhowdifferentthezoobecomesatnight.Whenhewalkedbythelion'scages,hecouldseetheyoungcubsplayingtogether.Helikedthezoobetteratthishourbecausenightwaswhentheanimalscometolife.

Atlast,hemadeitbacktotheoffice.Unfortunatelythistime,hewasnotsolucky.Theofficedoorwaslockedandheknewthatifheweretobreakthewindow,hewouldsetoffthealarm.Knowingtherewasnowayinside,thezookeeperbegantoweighhisoptions.Heknewhecouldnotgetintohishomewithouthiskeys,sohedecideditwouldbebesttospendthenightinsidethezoo.Thezookeeperwalkedtowardsthebirdcagesbecauseheknewhecouldsleepcomfortablyonthebenchesnearthestage.

Afewhourslater,thezookeeperheardadoorslamthatwokehimup.

“Quiet!

”avoicewhispered.

“What?

There'snoonehere”anothervoicesaid,“Theoldmanlefthoursago.”

“Alright,let'sjustgrabtheanimalsandgetoutofhere.”

Thezookeeperdidn'tknowwhattodo.“Whatiftheywerearmed?

”thezookeeperthoughttohimself.Helistenedcloselyandrealizedtherewasagroupofburglarsinthezoo.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Thezookeeperquietlygotupanddecidedtoinvestigatewhatwasgoingoninthezoo.

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Paragraph2:

Thezookeepersawtwopeopleinfrontofabirdcagetryingtobreakthelock.

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【参考范文】

Thezookeeperquietlygotupanddecidedtoinvestigatewhatwasgoingoninthezoo.Heknewhehadtobecarefulbecausehewasunsureofwhatthesepeopleweredoing.Thezookeeperbegantoweighhisoptions,hecouldsetoffthealarmbutthatwouldalerttheburglars,orhecouldconfrontthembutthatcouldpotentiallyputhimindanger.Heturnedthecornerbutmadesurenottobeseensothathecouldseewhohadenteredthezoo.

Thezookeepersawtwopeopleinfrontofabirdcagetryingtobreakthelock.Bothoftheburglarslookedupatthezookeeperinshock.Thebirdtriedtogetawayandbitoneoftheburglars.Thezookeepertriggeredthealarmwhichturnedonallofthelightsinthezoo.Thezookeeperrecognizedtheburglarstobetwoofthenewinterns.Whenthepolicearrived,thezookeeperexplainedwhathadhappenedduringthenight.Theburglarwhohadbeenbitbythebirdwasbadlyinjuredandrequiredmedicaltreatmentandtheotherwasarrestedforbreakingintothezoo.

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个动物园饲养员总是被安排值夜班，因为他被信任能够总是锁好动物园的门。

一天晚上，他发现钥匙忘记放在办公室里了，返回地时候发现动物园的门没有关，可到了办公室门口发现办公室的门已经关了，他知道如果他破窗而入会引发报警器，于是决定在动物园呆一晚上。

几个小时后饲养员听见砰的一声，门响动的声音惊醒了他，他意识到有一伙窃贼想到动物园偷动物。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“动物园管理员悄悄地站了起来，决定去看看动物园里到底发生了什么事。

”可知，第一段可描写动物园管理员权衡如何选择以及最终决定的过程。

②由第二段首句内容“动物园管理员看到有两个人在鸟笼前试图撬开锁。

”可知，第二段可描写两个窃贼的身份以及他们的最终结果。

2.续写线索：

权衡——决策——触发警报——窃贼被抓

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.不确定：

beunsureof/beunsurethat/beuncertainof/beuncertainthat

②.开始做：

begintodo/starttodo

③.逃跑：

getaway/escape/flee

情绪类

震惊：

inshock/givesb.ashock/agreatshocktosb.

【点睛】

高分句型1].Heknewhehadtobecarefulbecausehewasunsureofwhatthesepeopleweredoing.这句话运用了because引导的原因状语从句和what引导的宾语从句。

[高分句型2].Heturnedthecornerbutmadesurenottobeseensothathecouldseewhohadenteredthezoo.这句话运用了sothat引导的目的状语从句和who引导的宾语从句。

[高分句型3].Theburglarwhohadbeenbitbythebirdwasbadlyinjuredandrequiredmedicaltreatmentandtheotherwasarrestedforbreakingintothezoo.这句话运用了who引导的定语从句。

Writing3（2020·浙江大学附属中学高二期中）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Hannahtightenedherhelmet,aman'svoiceboomedfromthelouder-speakers:

"ParticipantsintheFive-MileJuniorFat-tireRace.Pleasegatherbehindtheorangeflags."

Herheartwasfilledwithexcitement.Firstprizewasamountainbike.Onabikelikethat,she'dflythroughthewoods.

"Three,two,one,go!

"

Thelead--dut（引路人）madeturnontosectionofsingletrack（小道）andgatheredspeed.girlwithredhairrolledinbehindhim.Thelead-outspedupagain.Hannahsloweddownforthehill,followingclosebehindthered-hairedgirl,butthegirlwasgainingspeed.

Hannahspedupandpedaled（骑行）thedownhillsection.Still,thered-haired-girlbikedfaster.Theycrossedwoodenbridge.Thelead-outandthegirldisappearedbehindathickstandoftrees.WhenHannahglancedoverhershoulder,shesawnobodybehindher.

Hannahwatchedfortheorangearrows（箭头）markingthecourseandbikedthroughthemuddyfields."Thegirlmightstillgettired,"shethought.ThenHannahsawher.Attheedgeoftheforest,thegirlwasbendingherkneesbyherbike,thelead-outnexttoher.Thegirlmusthavegottenaflat.Hannahbikedfaster.Shedidn'tslowdownthehillbutpedaledharder.Shewipedthesweatfromhereyes,breathless.Thelead-outnoticedherandjumpedonhisbike.Hannahwascloseenoughnowtoseethegirlputtingthechainonthechainring

Hannahfeltenergyflowingthroughherasshefollowedthelead-outpastthegirlintothewoods.Maybeshecouldwin.

Inthemiddleofasmallgrassland,Hannahlookedback.Thegirlwascomingupbehindheratcrazyspeed.

Hannahreachedfor