雅思写作范文.docx

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雅思写作范文

6.Somepeoplethinkthatzoosarecruelandallthezoosshouldbeclosed.However,otherpeoplethinkthatzoosareusefultoprotecttherareanimals.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

Currently,thediscussionaboutwhethertoclosezoosisbecomingpopular.Somepeopleproclaimthatzoosarecruelandallshouldbeclosed,ontheotherhand,towardsthesameissue,someothersareconfidentthatzoosareusefultoprotectrareanimals.Itisquitenaturalthatpeoplefromdifferentbackgroundsmayhavedivergentattitudestowardsit.

People，whoadvocatethatcaginganimalsinzoosarecruelandthereforeallofthemshouldbeclosed,havetheirsoundreasons.Themainreasonisthatkeepinganimalsincaptivitygoesagainstanimalrights.Inaddition,manshouldnotbelievethathehasthedisposablepoweroftreatingotherspecies.Moreover,itwillgivebadinfluencestoanimals’evolutionifwekeepthemincagesfortheirwholelifeandtheywilllosetheabilityofseekingfoodthemselves.

Tobeginwith,cagedanimalsmaylosetheirnaturalinstincttoseekfood,toprotectthemagainstnaturalpredators,andtosolicitbreedingpartners.Accordingly,thiswillleadtoamiserablelifethattheyarecompelledtoaccept,ratherthanwillinglytolead.Inaddition,becausebaredanimalsarecarefree,theywouldagainlosetheirin-bornabilitiesthatwouldotherwiseenablethemtosurviveandthriveatanaturalhabitat.Consequently,evenwhentheyarefreedafterbeingkeptincageforsometimetheywillprobablydroptheabilitytoundergoanaturalevolution.

Thereisnodenyingthatthereissometruthintheabovepointofview.However,tosomepeople’smind,itisusefultoprotectrareanimalsofusingzoos.Aboveall,althoughmanisthedominantspeciesontheplanet,allspeciesenjoythesamerighttosurvivehere,weshouldrespectotherlifeformsbytakingeveryeffortwecantopreventtheextinctionofexistingspecies.Foranother,zoosaresuitablehabitatsforsomespecieswhichareonthevergeofdyingoutduetohunting.Finally,infact,farminganimalsismuchlessbrutalthanthepainandhardshipthatanimalsinflictoneachotherinthewild.

Tosumup,wecannotdenythatbothsidesarewell-grounded.Inmyopinion,thebestwayisbuildingnaturalprotectareatoreplacezoos.Then,wecanprotecteveryspeciesnomattertheyareinextinction,andchildrencanseethevividlifetoexpandtheirknowledge,alsocankeeptheabilityofanimalsofseekingfood.

Iftherearemorenaturalprotectareas,thatwillbetheperfectwayforoursustainabledevelopment.

7.StudiessuggestthatchildrenspendmoretimeonwatchingTVthantheydidinthepastandspendlessondoingactiveorcreativethings.Whydoyouthinkthisisthecase?

Suggestsomeideastosolvetheproblem.

这篇文章的思路：

首段：

交代背景，提出问题，表明写作态度。

第二部分：

分析这个现象的原因。

这里特别注意的是，我们要分析的是“孩子花更多的时间看电视而不去参与有活力有创造性的活动”的原因，而不是要分析“为什么孩子们花更多的时间看电视会失去创造力。

”这个一定要弄清楚，否则就跑题了。

1从电视节目自身的发展角度上分析——电视节目的发展比过去更吸引人，更能满足孩子的需求。

比如说电视的种类，内容更丰富；各种选秀节目；各种偶像剧等。

而过去电视节目比较单调，不足以吸引孩子。

2从社会的发展角度上分析——现代科技的应用使生活变得快捷方便但同时也使人们失去了思考的欲望，变得过分的被动和依赖。

这一点在孩子身上体现尤为明显，比如互联网。

3从教育的目的上分析——高度竞争的社会使学校老师更加关注孩子的学习成绩，教育变得更加“功利”，而忽视了孩子创造力的培养，而且也很少组织有意义的活动能激发孩子的热情。

第三部分：

给出解决方案

其实无非是家长，学校和社会的正确引导；创造条件激发孩子的创造力；组织有意义的活动；另外对于孩子看电视的问题进行合理的控制。

第四部分，总结全文。

8.Wecangetknowledgefromnews,butsomepeoplethinkwecan'ttrustthejournalist.Whatdoyouthink?

Whatqualitiesshouldajournalisthave?

Nowadays,wearefilledwithsomuchinformation,themajorityofwhichcomesfromjournalists.Butwhetherweshouldbelievethenewspresentedbythecorrespondentsdependsontheactualsituationinvolved.Wehavetothrowourownthoughtsonthenewsweheardandfindtheauthenticityinit.

Iwillpresentthreereasonswhyweshouldnottrustthenewsthoroughly.Initially,everyonehashisownviewsoveranewsstory,forwehavedifferenteducationsbackgroundsandupbringingenvironments.Journalistsjudgethingsbywhattheyexperienced;therefore,prejudicecannotbeavoided.Moreover,Mediasarealwayscontrolledbythegovernment.Newsmanneedtopresentthenewstothepublicundercertainrulescreatedbythegovernment,otherwisethepublishednewswillbecutdown.Finally,themostimportanttraitofnewsispromptness.Journalistshavetoreportthenewstotheworldwithinhoursevenminutes,thus,theiractiontimeistoolimitedtogetthewholepictureoftheemergencies,whichleadstotheimperfectinthereporting.

Inordertobeanoutstandingjournalist,asfarasIamconcerned,onemustlearntobeneutral,bywhichImeanthemaindutyforthejournalismistopresentthefacts,sojournalistsshouldn’tinstillwhatisrightandwhatiswrongonaudiences.Theyshouldconcealtheirownfeelingswhiledoingtheirjobs.Then,ajournalistoughttohavethecouragetobreakthroughtheruleswhichpreventthepublicfromlearningthetruth.Thestrongwilltopursuetruthprovestobemorevitalthananyotherqualities.Ultimately,journalists,whilethenewseventsoccur,havetoactquickly.Theymustforgetthefoodandsleeptemporarilyandrushtotheprimaryscene.Duringthisprocess,theymaygetinvolvedindangers,whichtesttheirnerves,butthatmaybethepleasuretobeajournalist.

Inanutshell,beingpartofthejournalism,oneshouldsacrificealotbutreceivealittle,ifyouwanttorealizeyourdreamtobeajournalist,youhavetoundergoeverythingImentionedabove.

9.Today,peoplecanworkandliveinanywheretheywant,becauseoftheimprovementofcommunicationtechnologyandtransport.Doadvantagesofthisdevelopmentoutweighthedisadvantages?

①Howteleworkbenefitstheindividual,business,economy,environmentandsociety

Therearemanydefinitionsof‘Telework’and‘Teleworker’andweareoftenaskedthequestion“HowdoIbecomeaTeleworker?

”.Ourviewisthat‘Telework’islike‘Television’or‘Telephone’,itisanyworkcarriedoutatadistance.Onecommonformofteleworkisworkingathome,butworkinginanylocationawayfromtheemployerormanagerorcolleaguescanbeincluded.Theterm‘Teleworker’canapplytosomeonewhoisanemployeeorself-employedandcoverspeopleinawidevarietyofoccupations.Soteleworkingisawayofgettingworkdonenotajoboroccupationorcareer.Itdoesn’tevenhavetobedependentontheuseoftechnologyalthoughmostteleworkerstakeadvantageofITtoenablethemtokeepintouchwithcolleagues.

Teleworkingisoneofthefewcaseswhichdeliverawin-winscenarioforemployers,employeesandtheself-employed.Itimprovestheoutputofemployees,bothinqualityandquantity,whilstimprovingthework-lifebalanceoftheindividual.Ithelpstorejuvenatelocalcommunitiesandreducethewasteandpollutionofcommuting.Soateverylevel,individual,business,industry,societyoreventhewholeeconomy,itbringsbenefits.Someofthesearehighlyquantifiable,suchascostsavings,whilstothers,suchasthequalityoflife,maybelesstangiblebutarecertainlynolessimportant.

②BenefitsfortheindividualTheindividualteleworkerisabletoeliminateorreducethehassleofcommuting.Thissavesasignificantamountofwastedtimeandmoneyaswellasreducingstress.Whencombinedwithotherformsofflexibleworkingitcanallowpeopletoimprovetheirwork-lifebalance.Beingabletopickupthechildrenfromschool,shopoutsidepeakhoursandtakeamoreactiveroleinthelocalcommunityareotherpossibilities.

Howeveroneofthekeybenefitsofworkingfromhomeisthatpeoplefinditmuchmoreproductivethangoingintoaconventionalworkplace.Teleworkersareabletoworkinsurroundingstheyhavechosenwithouttheinterruptionsoftenfoundintheopenplanofficesoftoday.Withbroadbandcommunicationsandelectroniccommunicationstheyareabletoachievemanytasksthathaveconventionallybeendoneattheofficedeskandnowwithwebmeetingtechnologytheycanhavevideomeetingswithouthavingtotravel.

③BusinessBenefitsWhilstteleworkingandotherformsofflexibleworkingareoftenviewedas‘familyfriendly’ratherthan‘businessfriendly’infacttheyareboth.Thereisstrongresearchevidencetoshowthatremoteandflexibleworkersaremoreproductivemorereliableandmoreloyalthantheirofficebasedcounterparts.Theyhaveabetterwork-lifebalance,wastelesstimeandmoneyonunnecessarytravelandthereforeare‘greener’.Indifficulteconomictimesemployersarelookingforwaystoreducethecostoftheworkforceandincreaseefficiency.Encouragingteleworkdoesbothbyreducingtheamountofofficespacerequiredwhilstincreasingtheoutputfromemployees.

④BenefitstotheEconomyThewholeprocessofcommutingtoworkishighlywasteful.Thedirectcostoftransportandthecostoftheinfrastructuretosupportitisexacerbatedbythepeak-hournatureofcommutingandthecongestionthatresults.Teleworkingreducesthedemandfortravelatthesepeaktimesandreducesthepressureonthetransportsystems.Italsoreducesthewasteofproductivetimeandthestressinvolved.HoweverthebiggestpotentialbenefittotheUKeconomyistheincreaseinproductivity.Aswellassavingwastedtraveltimeteleworkingincreasesworkoutputduringthehoursworkedathome.Manyorganisationsthathaveembracedteleworkinghavebeenabletoincreaseoutputwiththesamenumberofstafforreduceheadcountandstillprovidethesamelevelofcustomerservice.

⑤BenefitstoSocietyTeleworkingallowspeopletointegratetheirpersonalliveswiththeirworkresponsibilitiesinamuchmoreeffectivewaythanconventionalworkpatterns.Whilstmostflexibleworkingpatternsareseenasbeinggoodforfamiliestheyarealsoagreatimprovementinlifestyleforothers.Stress