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四级作文三段法秘籍

图画作文三段法：

第一段，重点描述图画内容。

这点在题干中也有强调（withabriefdescriptionofthepicture）。

对图画内容的描述可以饮用图画中人物的对话。

简要描述即可，不用发散或挖掘。

第二段，阐明观点。

而观点在题干中事实上给得很清楚：

theimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.这进一步说明仔细审清题干比看懂图画中的对话更重要。

末段，除了总结观点外，一般还可以提出建议。

开篇：

1.Manynationshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof...thereisagrowingconcernover...

2.Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.

3.Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheatedtopic.

4.Recentlytheissuehasarousedgreatconcernamong...

6.Neverinourhistoryhastheideathat...beensopopular.

8.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,...

证明：

1.Noonecandenythefactthat...

2.Theideaishardlysupportedbyfacts.

3.Unfortunately,noneoftheavailabledatashows...

4.Recentstudiesindicatethat...

6.Accordingtostatisticsprovedby...,itcanbeseenthat...

举例：

1.Agoodcaseinpointis...

3.Suchexamplesmightbegiveneasily.

4....isoftencitedasanexample.

后果：

1.Itmaygiverisetoahostofproblems.

2.Theimmediateresultitproducesis...

3.Itwillexerciseaprofoundinfluenceupon...

4.Itsconsequencecanbesogreatthat...

批驳：

1.Itistruethat...,butonevitalpointisbeingleftout.

2.Thereisagrainoftruthinthesestatements,buttheyignoreamoreimportantfact.

3.Somepeoplesay...,butitdoesnotholdwater.

5.Acloseexaminationwouldrevealhowridiculousthestatementis.

6.Itmakesnosensetoarguefor...

7.Toomuchstressplacedon...mayleadto...

9.Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat...

比较：

1.Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.

3.AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...

4.Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...

9.However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.

10.AandBdifferinseveralways.

11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.

12.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.

15.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults（obviousdefects）are...

模板句型：

引出不同观点：

People'sviewson...varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat....However,othersbelievethat....

结尾部分：

Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat.../we'dbettercometotheconclusionthat...

Allinall,wecannotlivewithout...Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.

提出建议：

Itishightimethatweputanendtothe（trend）.

Itistimetotaketheadviceof...andtoputspecialemphasisontheimprovementof...

Thereisnodoubtthatenoughconcernmustbepaidtotheproblemof...

预示后果：

Obviously,ifwedon'tcontroltheproblem,thechancesarethat...willleadusindanger.

Nodoubt,unlesswetakeeffectivemeasures,itisverylikelythat...

Itisurgentthatimmediatemeasuresshouldbetakentostopthesituation.

论证部分：

Frommypointofview,itismorereasonabletosupportthefirstopinionratherthanthesecond.

Personally,Icannotentirelyagreewiththeideathat...

Finally,tospeakfrankly,thereisalsoamorepracticalreasonwhy...

列出解决办法:

Thebestwaytosolvethetroublesis...　

Peoplehavefiguredoutmanywaystosolvethisproblem.

批判错误观点和做法：

Asfarassomethingisconcerned,

Itwasobviousthat...

Itmaybetruethat...,butitdoesn'tmeanthat...　　

Itisnaturaltobelievethat...,butweshouldn'tignorethat...

Thereisnoevidencetosuggestthat...

作文中常用连接词的选择

表示强调的连接词：

still,Indeed,apparently,afterall,significantly,undoubtedly,inanycase,anyway,aboveall,infact,especially.Obviously,clearly.

表示比较的连接词：

similarly,likewise,inthesameway/manner,equally.

表示对比的连接词:

bycontrast,onthecontrary,while,whereas,unlike,instead,conversely,differentfrom,however,nevertheless,otherwise,whereas,yet,incontrast.

表示列举的连接词：

forinstance,suchas,take...forexample.Except（for）,toillustrate.

表示时间的连接词：

later,next,meanwhile,intheend,immediately,inthemeantime,inthemeanwhile,recently,soon,nowandthen,during,nowadays,since,lately,assoonas,afterwards,temporarily,earlier,now,afterawhile.

表示顺序的连接词：

then,finally,tobeginwith,inthefirstplace,last,next,aboveall,lastbutnottheleast,firstandmostimportant.

表示可能的连接词：

presumably,probably,perhaps.

用于解释的连接词：

inotherwords,infact,asamatteroffact,thatis,namely,insimplerterms.

表示递进的连接词：

Whatismore,inaddition,besides,also,furthermore,moreover,furthermore,aswellas,additionally,again.

表示让步的连接词：

although,afterall,inspiteof...,despite,evenif,eventhough,though,admittedly,whatevermayhappen.

表示转折的连接词：

however,ratherthan,insteadof,but,yet,ontheotherhand,unfortunately.whereas

表示原因的连接词：

forthisreason,dueto,thanksto,because,becauseof,as,since,owingto.

表示结果的连接词：

asaresult,thus,hence,so,therefore,accordingly,consequently,asconsequence.

用于总结的连接词：

onthewhole,inconclusion,inaword,tosumup,inbrief,insummary,toconclude,tosummarize,inshort.

其他类型连接词：

Mostly,occasionally,currently,naturally,mainly,exactly,evidently,frankly,commonly,forthispurpose,toalargeextent,formostofus,inmanycases,inthiscase,

图表作文常用句型

Ascanbeseenfromthetable/graph/chart.,...

Allthesedataclearlyprovethefactthat...

Theincreaseof....Inthecityhasreachedto20%...

In1985,thenumberremainedthesame.

Therewasagradualdeclinein1989.

写作佳句：

2.WhenitcomestotheincreasinguseofmotorvehiclesinBeijing,sompeoplethinkthatuseshouldbelimited.Othersarguethattheoppositeistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthtobotharguments,butemissioncontrolsmustbeinstitutedregardlessofthenumberofvehicles.

涉及北京机动车使用量增加这一问题，有的人认为应该限制使用。

另一些人持相反意见。

也许双方的观点都有一定道理，但是，无论车辆多少，必须对废气排放实行控制。

3.Thereisageneraldebatenowadaysabouttheproblemofitinerantworkers.Thosewhoobjecttotherisingmigrantpopulationarguethatincreasingnumbersleadtorisingcrimeratesandharmsocialstability.TheybelievethatstrictlimitsshouldbeplacedonmigrantsenteringChina’scities.Butpeoplewhofavortheinfluxofthecheaplaborforce,ontheotherhand,maintainthatmigrantsareneededtosupportthemassiveurbaninfrastructureconstructionprogram.

目前，针对流动工人的问题展开了普遍的争论。

反对流动工人增加的人认为这会导致犯罪率升高，从而危害社会稳定。

他们主张应该严格限制进入中国城市的流动工人。

但是，另一方面，支持廉价劳动力流入的人主张，为了支持大规模的城市基础设施建设规划，流动人口是必需的。

4.Itiswidelyacknowledgedthatextensivedeforestationcontributedtoheavysummerflooding.ExpertsarguethatChinamustintroduceamassiveafforestationprogram.ButIdoubtwhetherafforestationalonewillsolvetheproblem.

人们普遍认为过度砍伐造成了夏季特大洪水。

专家认为中国必须推行大规模的植树造林计划。

但我对仅仅植树造林就能解决问题表示怀疑。

5.Mostpeopleareoftheopinionthatwealthprovidessolutionstoallproblems.Butinspiteofthematerialbenefitswealthprovides,Ibelieveonshouldabandonthepursuitofmaterialismandinsteadconcentrateonthepursuitofhappiness.

大多数人认为财富为所有问题提供解决的办法。

但是，我认为，尽管财富提供物质上的利益，一个人应该放弃物质至上的追求，而是集中精力追求幸福。

6.Manypeoplebelievethatcapitalpunishmentdeterscrime.Butalthougcriminologistshaveconductedexhaustiveresearchregardingthesubject,littleevidenceexiststosupporttheclaim.

很多人相信极刑能阻止犯罪。

但是，虽然刑事学家就这一课题做了详尽的研究，几乎没有证据能支持这种说法。

7.Anincreasingnumberofpeoplearejoiningthe"InformationAge"viatheInternet.Inreactiontothephenomenon,somesaytheInternethasremovedbarriesandprovidedpeoplewithimmediateaccesstotheworld.Butdotheyrealizethatrapidlyadvancinginformationtechnologycanalsoleadtointrusionsofprivacy?

越来越多的人通过互联网进入了“信息时代”。

针对这一现象，一些人认为互联网消除了障碍，为人们提供了与世界即时链接的途径。

但是，他们有没有意识到迅速发展的信息技术也能导致侵犯隐私?

8.Theuseofrelationshipisawidespreadmethodforconductingbusiness,butisitawiseone?

Themethodisnowbeingchallengedbymoreandmorepeople.利用关系是做生意的普遍做法，但这种做法明智吗?

现在，越来越多的人对这种方法提出了质疑。

9.Thesedaysweoftenhearaboutthewideninggapbetweentherichandpoor.Somearguethedevelopedworldhastotallyignoredtheproblem.Buthasit?

Closeexaminationfailstobearouttheargument.

最近，我们经常听到贫富差距扩大了的说法。

一些人认为发达世界完全忽略了这个问题。

事实是这样吗?

细致的调查无法证实这一观点。

11.Oneofthepressingproblemafacingournation（China）todayisovercomingdisparitiesinurbanandruralincomelevels.

我们国家（中国）如今面临的紧迫问题之一是克服城乡收入水平之间的差距。

12.Oneofthemostseriousproblemsmanypeopletalkaboutcentersonthelackofadequatehousingspace.

许多人谈论的一个最严重的问题集中在缺乏足够的居住空间。

13.Perhapsthemostdangerousphenomenongrippingthenationtodayisofficialcorruption,whichispervasiveinalllevelsofgovernment.

也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是遍布各级政府的官员腐败。

14.Inflationisyetanothernewandbittertruthwemustlearntoface.

通货膨胀又是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。

15.Therapidexpansionofurbanareashasinmanycasesencroachedonvaluablecultivatableland,andledtoageneralrecognitionthatdevelopmentmustnotbecarriedatthecostofagriculture.Thegovernmenthasattachedgreaterimportancetotheproblemandanincreasingnumberofredundantprojectsarebeingterminated.

城区的迅速扩大在很多情况下侵占了宝贵的可耕地，使人们普遍认识到发展不能以牺牲农业为代价。

政府更加重视这个问题，越来越多的不必要的工程被终止。

16.Thereisagrowingworldwideawarenessoftheneedforstrengthenedenvironmentalprotection.

世界上越来越多的人认识到加强环境保护的必要性。

17.TherehasbeenadramaticincreaseinthespreadofHIV/AIDSinrecenyears,withanewstudyprojectingthatthedreadeddiseasewillaffectover30millionpeopleworldwidebytheyear2005.

近年来，艾滋病蔓延的幅度进一步扩大，一项新的研究预测，到2005年，世界上有超过三千万人将感染这一可怕的疾病。

18.Workingwiththedisabledcannothelpbutleaveoneimpressedwiththeirindefatigabledesire.

与残疾人一起工作使一个人不得不对他们坚持不懈的渴望印象深刻。

19.Perhapsnoissuesaremorecontroversialthaneuthanasiaandabortion,bothofwhichinvolvetakingthelifeofahumanbeing.

也许没有问题比安乐死和人工流产更有争议性，它们都涉及结束一个人的生命。

20.Neverbeforeinhistoryhastheissueofoverpopulati