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雅思写作

雅思写作

1.小作文

1.Thetablesbelowgiveinformationabouttheamountofbeerandfruitjuiceconsumedpersonperyearindifferentcountries

Thetableillustratestheconsumptionofbeersandfruitjuicebyperpersonperyearin10differentcountries.

Thefirsttableprovideswithinformationofconsumptionofbearsinthesetencountries.ItisobviousthatIrelandconsumesthemostquantityofbeer,reachingto155litres.Germany,consuming119litresperwith36literslessthanthatofIreland,occupiesthesecondplaces（rankssecond）.With106litres’consumption,Autriacomesthethird.Itisnotable/remarkable/noticeablethatpeopleinDenmarkdrinkthesamequantityofbeerasthatinBelgium,whichis98litresperyear.ItisthenfollowedbyAustria,Belgium,Denmark,UnitedKingdom,Australia,UnitedStates,Netherlands.Finlandconsumesfewestquantityofbeersamongthese10countries,thatis79litres.（没有突出Belgium和Denmark的消耗量是相同的）

Whathasbeendisplayedinsecondtableistheconsumptionoffruitjuices.Itisclearthattheconsumptionoffruitjuiceisapproximatethreetimeslessthanthatofbeer,InsecondtableBelgium,DenmarkandIrelandarereplacedbyCanada,SwedenandNewZealandtobetakenintoconsideration.Canada,with52.6litresperpersonalperyearinconsumptionoffruitjuice,winsthefirstplace.ThenfollowedbyUnitedStateswith42.8litres.Followingdecreasingorder,thencomestoGermany,Austria,Sweden,Australia,Finland,UnitedKingdom,Netherlands,whileNewZealandhaslowestconsumption（isplacedatthebottomofthesecondtable）（24.8litres）.

Overall,thesetwotableslisttheconditionofconsumptionofbeersandfruitjuicein10countriesrespectively,andthereseemsnorelationshiphiddenwithconsumptionofbeerandfruitjuice.

剑5task4

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Thegiventablecomparestheconditionofundergroundrailwaysystemsintermofopendate,thelengthofrouteandthepassengerflowvolumesamongsixcities.

Comparedwithothercities,thecityfirstequippedwithundergroundrailwaysystemsisLondonin1863whileParisisthesecondin1900.ThenfollowsTokyo（1927）,WashingtonDC（1976）,Kyoto（1981）withLosAngelesbeingthelatestcitywhichownedundergroundrailwaysystem.

Beingtheearliestcityconstructedwithundergroundrailwaysystems,Londonalsohasthelongestroute（394kilometers）withParispositinginsecondwithlengthofroutein199kmaswell.Followingthedecreasingorder,thencomestoTokyo（155km）,WashingtonDC（126km）,LosAngeles，asthelastcityinconstruction,surpassingKyoto（11km）inpossessionof28kminlengthofroute.

Intermsofpassengerflowvolume,Tokyo,with1927millionpassengersperyear,（servesthelargestnumberofpassengersperyear）althoughitdoesn’thavethelongestroutenortheearliestsystems.ItisthenfollowedbyParis（1191）whileLondondropstothethirdwith775million.KyptoandLosAngeleshavefewestpassengerswith45and50millionrespectivelywhichissignificantlyfewerthanWashingtonDC（144millions）.

Overall,thedevelopmentofundergroundrailwaysystemsvariesalotwithinthegivensixcities.

2.linegraph

ThegraphcomparestherateofsmokinginmenandwomeninSomelandbetweentheyearsof1960and2000

ThelinegraphillustratesthecomparisonoftherateofsmokingbetweenmenandwomeninSomelandduringyearsfrom1960and2000.

Inthese40years,therateofsmokinginmenexperiencedangradualdecreasewhilethisratewasalwayshigherthanthatofwomen.In1960,approximate610menofevery1000wereinvolvedinsmokingwhichrankedthefirst.Subsequently,continuousdecreasewasnoticeableandin1995themenwhostillsmoked,declinedtoalmosthalfofthatin1960with300men.Finally,itwasendedat250meninevery1000menintermsofsmokingin2000.

Asfortherateofsmokinginwomen,differentfromtheconditionofmen,itsawanconsiderablerisingtrendatfirstandthendropped.In1960,womenwhoassociatedwithsmokingweremuchlessthan（around6times）men,with90inevery1000whichwereverylow.Afterfollowing15years’remarkableincreasing,peakingin1975（中间变化的快慢也要说一下）,thequantityofwomenwhosmokedinevery1000peoplewas320.Afterwards,thepopulationofwomenleveledoffat320insubsequent5yearsandthensteadilyfellto200withlesssignificancethanthatofmenin2000whichreachedtoitslowestpoint.

Overall,thisgraphdemonstratestheconditionofsmokinginmenandwomenexplicitly.Althoughthetransformationsofsmokinginmenandwomenhavetheirdistincttrend,thegapbetweenmenandwomenwereconstantlyeliminated.

（2）剑九test4

TheprovidedlinegraphcomparestheconsumptionofdifferentkindsofenergyintheUSAbetween1980and2030.（ThegraphshowsenergyconsumptionintheUSfrom1980to2012,andprojectedconsumptionto2030.）

Throughouttheperiod,,petrolandoilwereofthemostprevailingusage（arethedominantfuelsourcesthroughoutthisperiod）andexperiencedaupwardtrend,startingfrom35quadrillionunitsin1980andbeingexpectedtoreachapproximately48in2030.Followingthesametendencyasthepetrolandoil,theutilityofcoalandnaturalgaswasalsoincreasingandthistrendwasalsoprojectedtocontinueto2030.In1980,theconsumptionofcoalandnaturalgaswere17and20quadrillionunitsrespectivelyandwouldincreaseto33and26in2030.Withconsumptionincoalincreasingmoresignificantly,itlwasprojectedtooutweightheconsumptionofnaturalgasin2015.Inlast15years,thethegrowthofcoalwasexpectedtobemorenoticeablewhiletheconsumptionofnaturalgaswouldremainstable.

Thegeneralusageofclearenergywascomparativelylow.Withthesimilarconsumptionin1980,theusageoftheNuclear,solar/windandhydropowerwasabout3quadrillionunits.Thegrowthinnuclearwasmostsignificantincomparisonwiththeothertwo,withitsconsumptionwouldnearlytriplein2030（8quadrillion）.Theincreasingrateforsolar/windwasrelativelymarginalwith6quadrillionunitsin2030whileusageforhydropowerremainedatitsoriginalfiguresafterexperiencingaperiodoffluctuation.

Overall,itisnoticeablethattheusageoffossilfuels,suchaspetrolandoil,coalandnaturalgas,wasconstantlymorepopularthanemergingenergies.

ThegraphshowsenergyconsumptionintheUSfrom1980to2012,andprojectedconsumptionto2030（带有预测性质）

Petrolandoilarethedominantfuelssourcesthroughoutthisperiod,with35quadrillionunitsin1980,risingto42qin2012.Despitesomeinitialfluctuation,from1995therewasasteadyincrease.Thisisexpectedtocontinue,reaching47qin2030.

Consumptionofenergyderivedfromnaturalgasandcoalissimilarovertheperiod.From20qand15qrespectivelyin1980,gasshowedaninitialfallandcoalagradualincrease,withthetwofuelsequalbetween1985and1990.Consumptionhasfluctuatedsince1990butbothnowprovide24q.Coalispredictedtoincreasesteadilyto31qin2013,whereasafter2014,gaswillremainstableat25q.

In1980,energyfromnuclear,hydro-andsolar/windpowerwasequalatonly4q.Nuclearhasrisenby3q,andsolar/windby2.Afterslightincreases,hydropowerhasfallenbacktothe1980figure.Itisexpectedtomaintainthisleveluntil2030,whiletheothersshouldriseslightlyafter2025.

描述总趋势时，用一般现在时，然后若有预期到未来在现在时停顿一下，然后再描述趋势

（3）OGtest2

Thegivenlinegraphillustratestheaveragetemperaturesatmonthlybaseamongthreedifferentmajorcitieswhilethetableshowsthetimeofsunshineinthesecities.

（ThetemperaturepatternsforLondonandNewYorkaresimilar）Fromthefirstgraph,itisnoticeablethatNewYorkandLondonhavesimilartransformationtendencyintermsofaveragetemperatureswhereasSydneypossessestheconversetrend.InJanuary,bothNewYorkandLondonreachtheirlowesttemperatureswithtemperatureinLondonsightlyhigherthanNewYork（8and4respectively）.Astimepasses,thesetwocitiesexperienceanupwardtrend,thoughthegrowthinNewYorkismoresignificant,thetemperatureofwhichsurpassesthatofLondonafterApril.AfterpeakingatJulywith29degreeand23degreerespectively,thetemperaturesofNewYorkandLondoninitiatetodecreaseandthefallingtrendofLondoniscomparativelymoreobviouswiththesecondequaltemperaturesofthesetwocities（11degree）occurringinlateNovember.InDecember,thetemperatureofNewYorkisover9degree,marginallyhigherthatthatofLondon（5degree）.Incontrast,SydneyhashighesttemperatureinJanuary（26degree）andwitnessesadownwardtendencythen.InJuly,itreacheslowesttemperatureat16degreeandstartstorise.Itscomesbackto25degreeinDecemberjustslightlylowerthanitsJanuaryfigure.

Fromthesecondtable,wecanseethatNewYorkownsthelongesttimeofannualsunshine（2535hours）whichslightlymorethanthatofSydney（2473hours）whereasLondononlyhas1180hourswhichislessthanhalfoftheaforementionedtwocities.

Overall,fromthegraphandthetable,wecannoticethatthetotalannualhoursofsunshineamongthesethreecitiesdohavesomerelationshipswiththeirtemperaturesinceamongthesecities,theorderoftimeinobtainingsunshineisinaccordancewiththatofhighesttemperatures.Meanwhile,NewYorkhasthemostsignificantdifferenceintemperaturecomparedwiththeothertwo.

3.barchart

Giventwobarchartsprovidewithinformationintwoaspects.FirstgraphdisplaystheratesofUSAmarriageanddivorcebetween1970and2000whilethesecondoneillustratesthemaritalstatusofadultAmericansntowoftheyears.

Infirstgraph,therateofmarriageinUSAexperiencedafallingtrendduring4decadeswhereastherateofdivorcefluctuatedmuchmoremargina