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短文改错专练1

短文改错专练

1.短文改错

ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andsoIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:

beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.

2短文改错

Rosewantedajob.Shewenttomanyofficesandshedidn’tlikeanyofthem.Onedayshesawaboardinanofficeread:

“Thisofficeneedsatypistwhomcantype200wordsaminute.”Rosewasexciting.WhenRosewenttothemanager’soffice,themanwaswritingsomething.Roseknockedatthedoorandthemanagerraisedherhead.“Doyouneedatypist?

”askedRose.“Yes!

”hesaid.Roseclappedherhand.Shecouldn’thelpsaying,“OK!

Howmuchwillyoupayformeeverymonth?

”Themanagerthoughtforawhileandsaid,“Iwillpayyou77dollarsforfirstthreemonths.ThenIwillpayyou30dollarseverymonth.”Rosesmiledandanswer,“Great!

Iwillcomeandworkherethreemonthslate.”Themanagerwasspeechless.

3.短文改错

DearWeiFang,

ItsalongtimesinceIheardfromyouinlastlime．NowI'dliketotellyouaimpressivestorythathappenedonthefirstdayofmyteachingcareer．

Aboy,LiMing,whomfatherdiedamonthago,waslateforschool．Hestoodoutsidetheclassroomsilent．Ismiledtohimandlethimcome．

Afterawhile,hebegantocry．Seeingthis,Iwalkedtohimandaskedwhathashappened．Hetoldmehismotherwasillbuthehadtogetsomemedicineforher．Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness．Movedbyhisword,Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongwasnamed"Mother"forthestudents．Fromthenon,Ibegantorealizeweshouldrespectourparentsanddidourbesttohelpthem．Doyouthinkso?

I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply．

4.短文改错

Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasgoodtripattebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendsuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandbecouldn’tmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewwhattodoit.Onegirltriedtocallhermuminhermobilepone,buttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestedinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedrinksomewater,andatesomefood.Afterwhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain.

5短文改错

LastSundayafternoon,onherwaybacktoschool,LiuFangcameacrossanoldmanlyingontheground,seriouslyhurtintheleg.Sheimmediatelystopped,called120andpracticedfirstaid.Soon,theambulancecameandtookthemantohospital.WheneverythingwasOK,sheleftforschool.SuchisLiuFang,ahelpful,positiveanddeterminedperson.Thoughtheremightbemisunderstandingoreventroublewhenwedogood,Istronglybelievethatshehasdonetherightthing.Asresponsiblecitizens,itisourdutytohelppeopleinneed.Also,ifyoudon’tofferyourhelpwhenothersareintrouble,howcanyouexpecthelpfromotherswhenyouareintrouble?

Therefore,helpingothersmeanshelpingourselvesinasense,doesn’tit?

6.短文改错

Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.Ihavebeenlookingforwardatrelaxingmyself.I’dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveralmovie.IthinkIcanplaythebasketballwithmyclassmates.HowawonderfultimeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!

However,myparentsthinkdifferent.Theydon’twantmegoout.TheyareafraidI’llbeknockeddownbyatruck,fallenoffatree,orfightwithothers.Besides,theyareafraidIwilllosemyway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,soIwilltrytopersuadethem.

7.短文改错

OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavingan

environmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.Theypickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Undertheirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,theyfeltabitofpitybutverydelightfulIthinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthepublictoshowrespectsforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwegetalongwellwithit.

8.短文改错

OurEnglishteacherisamiddle-agedwoman，whohadbeenteachingEnglishformorethan20years．Sheisalwaysworkinghard．Foramodelteacherformanyyears，sheiskindandfriendlytousandverystrictwithus.Inclass，shealwaysencouragesusspeakandreadEnglishasmuchaspossible．Sheisquitegoodatteachingandtrytomakeherlessonsliveandinteresting．InherspareSheIntime，sheoftenteachesusEnglishsongandhelpsustoputonEnglishshortplays．Shelovesusso10muchassheisalwaysreadytohelpus．Inthefact，sheisnotonlyourgoodteacherbutalsoourgoodfriend．Weallrespectandlovehim．

9.短文改错

ThedayismyDad’sbirthday.ThisafternoonIwenttotheshoppingcenterdowntown,andboughtpresentforhim.ThenItookthesubwaytraintohome.Sittingonthetrain,Ithoughtmydadwillbeveryhappywhenshesawthepresent.Atthenextstation,anoldladywithtwoheavybaggotintothetrainandstoodinfrontofme.Shelookedtiring.Ihesitatedforamoment,andthenofferedmyseattoher.Theoldladythankedmealotandsatdown.Seenhersmile,Ifelthappily.Iwillalwaysreadytohelpothersinthefuture.

10.短文改错

IjustcomebackfromBritainlastweek.IwasluckilyenoughtobeoneofthestudentfromdifferentcountriestovisittheUKfromFeb.16to28.Wepaidavisittomanyplaces,likeLondon,OxfordortheLakeDistrict.IlearnedmuchaboutBritishcultureandhistoryinLondon,wherewasmyfavorite.IalsolikedOxford,inwhichIsawmuchmoreoldbuildings.TheLakeDistrictwasbeautiful,butitwaspitythatitrainedheavilywhentheywerethere.ThemostexcitedthingformeintheBritainwasthatImadealotoffriendsthere.

11.短文改错

Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcerningabouttheirhealth,buthowtokeephealth?

First,itisnecessarytotakeanyexerciseeveryday．Researchshowsthatgetplentyofexercisemakestheheartbeatfastandthelungsworkharder．Second,eatmorefruits,vegetableandlessmeat．Third,gettingridofbadhabitsassmokinganddrinkingisalsoimportantwaytokeephealthy．Smokingandalcoholdrinkinginjuresone’shealthagreatdeal,andthereforeshouldbegivenup．Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,they’llgreatimprovetheirhealth．

12.短文改错

OnedayTomandIwerewalkingdownthestreetwhilewesawanoldmanfalloffhisbike.Hewasbadlyhurt.Manypeoplecrowdedaroundus.Someonesuggestedcarryingtheoldmantotheroadside,soTomdisagreed.Hehaslearnedfirstaid.Hesaidthattheyoughttoleavehimwherehewasandcheckedhimfirst.Atthattimetheoldmanwasn'tbreathing.TomaskedmetocallintheFirstAidCenteratonceandhebegantostarttheoldman'sbreathing,usethemouth-to-mouthway.Withinfiveminutes,theoldmanbegantomovelittleanddoctorsalsoarrived.Theysaidthatwehaddonewascorrect.Ihavelearnedfromthisexperiencethataknowledgeoffirstaidcanmakeareallydifference.

13.短文改错

LikemanyteenagersinChina,mostofmysparetimewasspentdoingmyhomework.Asaresult,Idon’thaveenoughtimestodothatI’minterestedinevenonweekendsoronholiday.ThefirstthingwhichIenjoywhenIhaveafewspareminuteistolistentomusic.It’sthebestwayformetoescapethestressoftheirstudy.WhenIlistentomusic,itislikegotoanotherworld.Sometimes,thewordsofthesongsseemtoexpressexacthowI’mfeeling.Besides,I’malsointerestedinafashionandI’malwayssearchingsomethingspecialthatcanreflectmypersonality.

14.短文改错

Thewaterwedrinkandusewasrunningshort.Weallhavetolearnwhattostopwastingwater.Oneofthestepthatweshouldtakeistofindwaysofreusingit.Todayinthemostlargecities,freshwaterisusedonlyonceandthenitrunsinwastesystem.Butthatispossibletopipetheusedwatertoapurifyingfactory,theretheusedwatercanbetreatedwithchemicalmaterialsbytheworkerssothatitcanreused.Butevenifeverylargecitypurifiedandreusedit’swater,westillwouldhaveenoughwater.

15.短文改错

Oneday,Iwenttotherailwaystationtobuyatickettomyaunt.WhenIgotthere,Itoldthatthe

tickethadallbeensoldout.JustthenamancameupandsaidwithastronglyZhejiangaccent

thathehadaspareticket.Ididn’tknowthatifIcouldbelievehimornot.Afterhesitatefora

while,Idecidedtotakeit.Soassoonasthemanleft,Ibegantoregret.Ifhewasnothonest,what

shallIdo?

Onathirdday,Iwenttothestationtoseemyauntaway.AsIwaswavinggoodbyeto

her,Isawthemansittingnexttomyaunt,smilingatme.

16.短文改错

Inrecentyears,thevolunteeringspirithasspreadamongtheChinesepeople,especiallyamongyoungsters.MoreandmoreschoolinChinarequirestudentstotakepartcommunityserviceduringthevocations.Studentsareoftenseeingtosweepthestreets,planttreesandvisitorphanages.Communityserviceisofthegreatbenefittoboththoseinneedandsociety.Moreover,communityserviceishelpfultocultivateoursociallyresponsibility.Asmodernmi