名师整理最新英语中考写作《成长历程》专题精讲精练.docx

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名师整理最新英语中考写作《成长历程》专题精讲精练

主题训练11----成长历程

【名师点拨】

近年来，中考作文动向瞄准青少年素材的屡见不鲜。

此类话题谈人生、谈理想、谈成功经验、也谈青少年在成长过程中遇到的种种问题，贴近学生现实生活，帮助学生健康成长，平稳度过青春期，是十分有意义的主题训练。

【主题词汇】

●成长经历：

teenager,graduatefrom,allowsb.todo,askforadvice,one’sbestfriend,becuriousaboutsth.（对某事好奇）,doone’sbest,makeeffortstodosth.（尽力做某事）,littlebylittle

●校园生活：

understand,getonwellwithsb.（与某人相处得好）,raiseone’shand,takeanactivepartin

●业余爱好：

beinterestedin,befondof,enjoydoing,spend...doing,inone’ssparetime

●学习生活：

takecourses,putone’sheartinto,passanexam,failanexam,cheatintheexam（在考试中作弊）,subject,handin（上交）,payattentionto,fullofcompetition（充满竞争）

●人物偶像：

genius,respect,thinkhighlyofsb.（高度评价某人）,lookforwardtodoing

●学习策略：

express,explain,confidence,makeasurvey,collectinformation

【常用句型】

1.Toimprovethesituation,Isuggest.

2.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weoughttoberesponsibleforourselves.

3.It’salsoimportanttofindawaytobeinvolvedinsocialactivities.

4.HereIhavetwosuggestions.First...Second...

5.Yourlifetodayistheresultofyourattitudesandchoicesinthepast.Yourlifetomorrowwillbetheresultofyourattitudesandchoicestoday.

6.Sometimesyourbiggestweaknesscanbecomeyourbiggeststrength.

7.Someofthegreatestsuccessstorieshavefollowedawordofencouragement

8.Fromherconfidence,weknowthat...

9.Weshouldbelieveinourselves.

10.Justkeepontrying.Theprocessoftryingismuchmorevaluablethantheresults.

11.Smileonfailureandsmileonlife.

12.Actually,failureislikeanaughtyboywhoplayswithusonthewaytoourgoals.Ononehand,hewantstotestus.Ontheotherhand,hewantstohelpusbecomebraver.Themorewesmileonfailure,thebraverweshallbe.

13.Growingolderandgrowingup.Growingupdoesn’tneedanytalentorability.Growingupisalwaysfindingtheopportunityforchange.Nevergiveupdreaming.

14.Avolunteer’sworkisverygreatandhelpful.Ilearnresponsibilityandtobepatientfromit.Inopemoreandmoreyoungpeoplewillbevolunteers.

15.WhenIamtree,Ioftengotothenursinghometodosomethinggood,suchasreadingbooks,washingclothesanddoingsomecleaningfortheold.

16.Everyoneisnotperfecttodoeverything.Weoftengethelpfromothersinourdailylife.Inreturntothehelpfromothers,wemusthelpotherpeopleasoftenaspossible.

【模拟试题】

isthemostimportantthinginmylife

a.Whatisthemostimportantthinginyourlife?

（health,happiness,friendship,honesty...）

b.Whydoyouthinkso?

（Givetworeasons.）

C.Whatisyoursuggestion?

【要点分析】

1.在审题时,学生要注意“我生命中最重要的东西”，不是单指某一样东西或某一件

事，而是通过事例来突出某一项品质（如：

友谊、自信、助人、诚实，感恩等）

2.注意：

提出的建议要围绕主题来写，而不能前后脱节。

【写作思路】

围绕“友谊”，给出一些建议和保持谊的秘诀

1.Friendssharehappinesswithus.Inaddition,theykeepusfromsadness.

2.Withoutfriends,wefeellonelyandbored.However,withthemourlifewillbemoreandmorecolorful.

3.Inaword,friendsareourmostpreciouswealthandfriendshipisnecessarytoeveryone.

4.Friendshipislikealeafonthetree.Thoughtheyaresmallandordinarywithoutthemthetreewillbeugly.

5.Friendshipcanmakeourlifemorecolourfulandmeaningful.

6.Friendshipplaysanimportantroleinourlife.

7.Nobodycangetthroughlifewithoutfriendship.

8.I’mluckyenoughtomakemanykindsofactivefriendsaroundme.

9.WheneverIamblue,theycomfortmeandhelpmefindsolutionstomyproblems.

10.Ilikemyfriendsbecausewecanbelieveineachotherandhelpeachother.

11.Wedependonparentsathome,andwerelyonfriendswhenweareout.

12.Iregardhimasmybestfriend.Wealwaysdiscusstogetherandhavemanyactivitiesinoursparetime.

【范文评讲】

原文稿

Friendshipisthemostimportantthinginmylife

IfIdon’thavefriendship,myworldmaybecomecolourless.SoIthinkfriendshipisimportantthinginmylife.Noonecanliveintheworldlonely.Whenweareintrouble,friendscanhelpusovercomethosedifficultiesinlife.Whenwefeelhappy,wehopethereissomeonewhocanshareourhappiness.

Makingfriendswithpeople.weshouldbefrankandhonesttootherssothatpeoplecantrustus.What’smore,afriendneverhesitatestogivehisorherloveandcaretous.Let’stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwefindthatourlifemaybecomecolourfulwithsomanyfriendsaroundus.

点评与评分

作者在整篇文章中,紧紧围绕友谊是生命中最重要的部分来描写。

从引出主题一分析原因一分享方法，层层深入，最后点题。

其中，运用了When...的排比句恰到好处，按中考作文20分计算，属于第二档的文章，可得16分左右。

需改进之处：

1.SoIthinkfriendshipisimportantthinginmylife.这句话应改为oneofthemostimportantthings,表明友谊是生命中最重要的东西之一，但不是唯一的。

2.要表达“单独居住”，应用词组liveintheworldalone。

3.表示目的的语句，句首用动词不定式Tomakefriendswithpeople...。

4....afriendneverhesitatesto...在这句话中，写明“一个真正的（real）朋友”更好。

5.Let’stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwewillfindthatourlifemaybecomecolourfulwithsomanyfriendsaroundus.并列句中时态应用一般将来时。

修改稿

Friendshipisthemostimportantthinginmylife

IfIdon’thavefriendshipisthemostimportantthinginmylife,myworldmaybecomecolourless.SoIthinkfriendshipisoneofthemostimportantthingsinmylife.Noonecanliveintheworldalone,Whenweareintrouble,friendscanhelpusovercomedifficultiesinlife.Whenwefeelhappy,wehopethereissomeonewhocanshareourhappiness.

Tomakefriendswithpeople,weshouldbefrankandhonesttootherssothatpeoplecantrustus.What’smore,arealfriendneverhesitatestogivehisorherloveandcaretous.Let’stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwewillfindthatourlifemaybecomecolourfulwithsomanyfriendsaroundus.

【范文选登】

1.

Happinessisthemostimportantthinginmylife

Happinessisimportanttous.Whenwefeelhappy.theworldfeelslikeabetterplace.First,wearingasmilewillmakeusmorecharmingandhelpustowinlotsoffriends.Agoodmoodalwaysgivesushope.Second,rememberlifeisfullofupsanddowns.Wecan’tchangethewaylifeis,butwecandoourbesttobehappy.Third,weshouldalwaysbeconfident.Confidenceishalfsuccess.Whenwesmile,theworldsmileswithus.Let’smakeourworldfullofhappiness.

2.

Confidenceisthemostimportantthinginmylife

Therearealotofimportantthingsinmylife,suchasfriendship,money,familyandtime.ButIthinkthemostimportantthingisconfidence.Confidenceisthefirststeptosuccess.Itmakesyounotafraidofdifficulties.WhenIwasinGradeFour,Imadeaspeechintheschoolhall,andallofthestudentslistenedcarefully.IfIdidn’thaveconfidence,Icouldn’tmakethatspeechsofluently.Confidencemakesmeshinebrightly.Itisthemostimportantthingtome.

3.

Independenceisthemastimportantthinginmylife

Asweallknow,independenceisasymbolofgrowingup.I’mindependentonmystudyandIdon’tneedmyparentstoworryaboutmystudy.Inmyopinion.weshouldlearntodosomethingbyourselvesbecausewecanlearnaboutresponsibilityandgetreadyforbecominganadult.

Torealizethisgoal/achievetheaim,weshouldtrytostudybyourselvesandlearntodosomehouseworkasoftenaspossible.Tosumup,wecanbebravetofaceourfuturelifeifwelearntobeindependent.

【范文链接】

1.

Growingup

Growingupisnodoubthardbutunforgettable.Amongalltheseexperiencesthatmademegrowup,thePElessonisthemostunforgettableone.Iusedtobepooratphysicalactivities.Whentheteachertoldustojumphighinthelesson.Ifeltafraidandshyatfirst.ThoughIfixedmyeyesontheteacher’sperformanceandlistenedcarefully,Istillfailedinmyfirstjump.Ialmostwantedtogiveup,buttheteacherencouragedmealot.Withthehelpoftheteacherandmyhardwork,Isucceededatlast.ThisexperiencetaughtmenevertogiveupwhenImeetdifficulties.Igrewup

afterthisunforgettablelesson.“Nopains,nogains”.That’swhatIlearnedfrommyprocessofgrowingup.

2.

Howtogetonwellwithothers?

a.Gettingonwellwithothersisveryimportantinourdailylife.IcangetonwellwithotherseasilybecauseIamalwayskindandfriendly.Besides,Ihavemanyfriendsaswell.Toachieveit,firstyoushouldtalktootherswithsmileandneverbeimpolite.Otherpeoplewillthinkyouareagoodboy/girl.Second.youshouldthinkaboutothersmorethanyourselves.Ifyoudothis,everyonewouldliketomakefriendswithyou.Allinall,weoughttotryourbesttogetonwellwithothers.

b.Asweallliveinsuchamoderncity,gettingonwellwithothershasbecomeanecessaryabilityinourdailylife.Igetonwellwithothersbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

Firstly,weshouldbehelpfultoothers.Whensomepeoplehavetrouble,Ialwaysgiveahandtothem.Thenwecansetupstrongrelationshipbetweeneachother.Secondly,honestyisimportanttoeveryone.Noonewantstomakefriendsdishonestpersons,soweshouldnevertelllies.Finally,weshouldtrustonothers’mannersandalwaysbegeneroustogiveourbesttoothersandexpectfornothing.

Ibelievewellallgetonwellwithothersbyfollowingtheabovetips.Let’sspreadwarmthandlovearoundusandsetupstrongrelationshiptogether.

c.Relationshipsbetweenoneandanotherhavestrongeffectsonourlives.Ithinkitisnecessarytogetonwellwithothers.I’mgettingonwellwithothersbecauseIamalwaysfriendlyandhelpfultoothers.AnotherreasonisthatIdon’tgetangryeasily.Herearesomesuggestionsonnowtogetonwellwithothers.First,keepgoodmood.Peoplewouldnotliketobefriendswithapersonwhohasbadtemper.Second,bewillingtohelpothers.Wegivethemahandwhenother

provethatweareatruefriendworthgettingalongwith.Third,complimentsarewelcomed.Praiseourfriendsmoreoften.Inthatway,theyw