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【四川资阳2013届高三第一次高考模拟考试】

I’mverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweekago.Ihavebeenthinking

aboutaquestionyouaskedme.Inmyopinion,youshouldcomebackafterfinishyourstudies

abroad.Foronereason,thatyouarestudyingisbadneedednowadaysinourcountry.Itwillbe

quiteeasyforyoufindagoodjob.Infact,Iknewafewbigcompaniesinourcityhope

tohirepeoplelikeyou.Foranotheronereason,Ithinkitwillbemoreconvenientforyouto

lookafteryourparentsbuttheyaregettingold.Butthisisonlymypointofview.Itisupfor

youtomakearightchoice.

【答案】

I’mverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweekago.Ihavebeenthinking

weeks

aboutaquestionyouaskedme.Inmyopinion,youshouldcomebackafterfinishyourstudies

thefinishing

abroad.Foronereason,thatyouarestudyingisbadneedednowadaysinourcountry.Itwillbe

whatbadly

quiteeasyforyou∧findagoodjob.Infact,Iknewafewbigcompaniesinourcityhope

toknow

tohirepeoplelikeyou.Foranotheronereason,Ithinkitwillbemoreconvenientforyouto

lookafteryourparentsbuttheyaregettingold.Butthisisonlymypointofview.Itisupfor

asto

youtomakearightchoice.

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【黑龙江大庆第三十五中学2013届高三上学期期末考试】

Thedaybeforeyesterday,myclassmatesandmewenttotheparknearmyschool.Canyouguessthatwhatwedidthere?

Notforamusementbuttotakepartinavolunteerlabour.Theyreachedtheparkatnineo'clock.Thewholeclassdividedintothreegroups.GroupOneplantedtreesandwateredflowers.GroupTwowastoldtopickuplitter（垃圾）leavingbythetouristsandcleanedallthebenches.ThegroupwhereIwasinwipedalltheequipmentsintheChildren'sPlayground.Allofusworkedhardly.Beforenoonwefinishedworking.Eachofusfeelalittlebittired,sowewerehappybecausewehaddoneagooddeed.

【答案】

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【贵州湄潭中学2013届高三上学期期末考试】

DearBrad,

Iamaboyinthefirstgradesofaseniorhighschool.Ifeeluneasilyrecently.AthomeI

feellikeprisoner.IamnotallowedtowatchTVorsurftheInternet.TheonlythingIhaveto

doitisstudying.EverytimeIgotalowmark,myparentswillscoldmesharply.There'sa

generationgapamongmyparentsandme,butit'salwaysdifficulttocommunicate.Lifeare

supposedtobecolorfulandwonderful,isn'tit?

HowshouldIdevoteallmytimeandenergy

tothestudysoastoenteringagooduniversity?

Iamveryunhappyandlost.Ineedyourhelp.

Bestwishes,

LiPing

【答案】

1.grades---grade2.uneasily---uneasy3.prisoner前加a

4.去掉it5.got---get6.among---between

7.but---so/and8.are---is9.How----Why10.entering---enter

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【河北石家庄2013届高三下学期第二次质量检测】

I’mwritingtoinviteyoutovisitChinaandspendingtheSummervacationwithme．

Ihavemadewonderfulplanforit．First，wecangotoQingda0，thereitiscoolandmild，

andhavefunsattheseaside．ThenweweretoparticipateinaTaijicampintheWudangMountains．

YouarecuriousaboutChineseKongfu，butIbelievethisisagoodchancetolearnit．

Lastofall，Ihavealsobeenlongedtotakeyoutothecountryside．Wecanstaythereforafewdays

andvisittosomerelativesofme．IhopethisplansuitsyougoodandIamlookingforwardto

yourcoming．

【答案】

I’mwritingtoinviteyoutovisitChinaandspendingthesummervacationwithme.

spend

Ihavemade∧wonderfulplanforit.First,wecangotoQingdao,thereitiscoolandmild,

awhere

andhavefunsattheseaside.ThenweweretoparticipateinaTaijicampintheWudangMountains.

funare

YouarecuriousaboutChineseKongfu,butIbelievethisisagoodchancetolearnit.

so/and

Lastofall,Ihavealsobeenlongedtotakeyoutothecountryside.Wecanstaythereforafewdays

longing

andvisittosomerelativesofme.IhopethisplansuitsyougoodandIamlookingforwardto

minewell

yourcoming.

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【河南许昌2013届高三上学期期末教学质量评估】

Lastweek,I,togetherwithmyfriends,visitedMountYuntaiinHenanProvince.Itisfamousasitsbeautifulanduniquescenery.Wegatheredattheschoolgateat7:

00am.Twohourslatewearrivedbybus.Onarriving,wesetaboutclimbingroups.Atnoon,wegottogetherattheGeologicalMuseumtowatchsomeexhibits,whereshowhowgeologicalstructuresform.Thenwehadlunchandtakeabreak.At2:

00pm,wecontinuedmyexplorationregardlessoftiredness.WemetatthatiscalledZhuyuPeakat4:

00pm.Aftertakingsomephotos,wewalkeddownthemountain.At6:

00pm,wereturnedbacktoschool.Itwasunforgettabletrip.Ifeltexcitedbytheamazedbeautyofnature.

【答案】

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【四川南充2013届高三第一次高考适应性考试】

DearJim，

IamsoexcitingthatyouwillcometoChina.IwillfreefromDecember18andwillhave

aplentyoftimetobetogetherwithyou.Iwillmeetyouattheairportandthenyouwilltake

BusNo.8formyhome.YouworryabouttheweatherhereinyouremailInfact,theweather

hereisquitedifferentfromthatinyourcity.Itisn'tverycold,butyouneedn'tbringmany

clotheswithyou.Duringyourstayhere,FlItakeyoutosomeplacesofinterestsandyoucan

tastesomelocalsnacks.Iamsurewewillhavegreatlyfuntogether.

Iamlookingforwardtomeetyousoon.

John

【答案】

DearJim,

IamsoexcitingthatyouwillcometoChina.Iwill∧freefromDecember18andwillhave

excitedbe

aplentyoftimetobetogetherwithyou.Iwillmeetyouattheairportandthenyouwilltake

awe

BusNo.8formyhome.Youworryabouttheweatherhereinyouremail.Infact,theweather

toworried

hereisquitedifferentfromthatinyourcity.Itisn’tverycold,butyouneedn’tbringmany

so

clotheswithyou.Duringyourstayhere,I’lltakeyoutosomeplacesofinterestsandyoucan

interest

tastesomelocalsnacks.Iamsurewewillhavegreatlyfuntogether.

great

Iamlookingforwardtomeetyousoon.

meetingJohn

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【四川绵阳2013届高三第二次诊断性考试】

【答案】

LastSaturday,ourschoolhadorganizedalloftheSenior1studentstovisit

thechildrenatalocalorphanage.Wetookmanybooksthatwaspopularamong

were

children,aswellasmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoys,to∧children.They

the

weredelightedtoreceivethesegift.Weplayedsomegamestogetherandgave

giftsgive

performances.Beforeleavetheorphanagewetookphotoswiththemandgave

leaving

themourcontactdetailsbutwecouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.

so

Thatday,eachoneofushadanenjoyabletime.Wegavethechildrentheir

our

careandhelp;forreturn,theygaveustheirsmilesandlove.Thesevoluntary

in

activitiesmadeadeeplyimpressiononus.

deep

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【河南商丘2013届高三上学期期末考试】

【答案】

Thedaybeforeyesterday,Iwenttothebookstorewhereisnearourschooltobuyareferencebook.Itwas

which/that

Saturday,sotherewasmanypeople.Underthehelpoftheshopassistants,IquicklygotthebookIneeded.Iwas

wereWith

abouttoleavewhileIfoundsomeonetryingtostealaman’smoney.AlthoughIwasnervous,butItriedtothink

when

ofawaytohelp.Suddenly,agoodideaoccurred^me.Isteppedontheman’sfootonpurposes.Asexpected,the

topurpose

man’sscreamgivesthethiefafright,whoquicklywalkedoutoftheshop.Afterhearmyexplanation,theman

gavehearing

smiledandshowedgreatgratitudetohim.

me

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【吉林普通中学2012-2013学年度高中毕业班上学期期末复习检测】

AtChineseNewYear,myfamilyandIhaveaverybusytime.TwodaysbeforeNewYear’sDay,IwentoutwithmyfriendsfromschooltotheseafoodrestaurantinPudong.ItwasthenoisiestrestaurantwhichIhadeverbeento,andthefoodwascheapanddelicious.Afterthat,wewenttoshoppingfornewclothesandfoundlotsofbargain.Ivisitedmyoldteacher,Mr.Smith.Formysurprise,hesaidhedidn’tfindChineseNewYearveryexcited.Hewasevenwearingnewclothes!

Becausewehavesomanyteststhisweek,Ihavetostartstudyinghardagainnow.HowIwishtheholidaywerelongthaneverbefore!

【答案】

AtChineseNewYear,myfamilyandIhaveaverybusytime.TwodaysbeforeNew

had

Year’sDay,Iwentoutwithmyfriendsfromschooltotheseafoodrestaurantin

a

Pudong.ItwasthenoisiestrestaurantwhichIhadeverbeento,andthefoodwascheap

that/去掉but

anddelicious.Afterthat,wewenttoshoppingfornewclothesandfoundlotsof

（或把shopping改为shop或shops）

bargain.Ivisitedmyoldteacher,Mr.Smith.Formysurprise,hesaidhedidn’tfind

bargainsTo

ChineseNewYearveryexcited.Hewas∧evenwearingnewclothes!

Becausewehave

excitingnot/wasn’t

somanyteststhisweek,Ihavetostartstudyinghardagainnow.HowIwishthe

holidaywerelongthaneverbefore!

longer

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【辽宁东北育才双语学校2013届高三第三次模拟】

InrecentlyyearsmanyyoungpeopleprefertogoshoppingontheInternet.Peoplehavedifferentopinionaboutonlineshopping.Somethinkonlineshoppingwasmoreconvenientandthegoodsarecheap.However,otherbelieveitisunsafetobuygoodsbycreditcard.Anditispossibletocheckthequalityofthegoods.

AsfarasIamconcern,goingshoppinginastoreisabetterway.Itisafuntowalkaroundstoresandlookingatvariousgoodsonsale.Wecanchoosewhatwereallyneedandevenfindagoodbargain.However,wecanchatwiththeshopassistantandacquirealotofusefulinformation.

【答案】recently改成recent

【解析】形容词修饰名词

【考点定位】考查形容词和副词的词性。

【答案】opinion改成opinions

【解析】前面是different，故用复数形式。

【考点定位】考查名词单复数。

【答案】was改成is

【解析】全篇用的都是现在时态。

【考点定位】考查时态。

【答案】cheap改成cheaper

【解析】网上购物更方便更便宜，且前面用的是moreconvenient，故要用比较级。

【解析】and连接walkaround和lookat

【考点定位】考查非谓语动词。

【答案】however改成besides

【解析】前后是递进关系，故要用besides

【考点定位】考查逻辑。

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【河南郑州2013届高三第一次质量预测】

LastTuesday，theStudents’UnioninourschooladvisedthatSenior