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英语高考写作句子多样性

书面表达思维拓展：

一句多译练习

例一.情景：

我生病了，明天不能上学。

1.I’mill.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.（太简单！

句子松散）

2.Whycan’tIgotoschooltomorrow?

BecauseI’mill!

（疑问句）

3.I’millandIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.（并列句）

4.I’llbeabsentfromschooltomorrowjustbecauseI’mill.

5.I’msoseriouslyillthatIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.（so….that句型）

6.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowbecauseI’mill.（表原因的复合句）

7.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowbecauseofillness.（用Owingto或者dueto）

8.Owingtoillness,Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.

9.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowduetoillness,

10.Myabsencefromschooltomorrowisduetomyillness.

11.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowonaccountofillness.（用介词短语）

12.I’millsoIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.（用so、thus或者therefore等）

13.I’mill,asaresult,Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.

14.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowasaresultofmyillness.

15.Beingill,Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.（用分词作原因状语）

16.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.That’sbecauseI’mill.（用表语从句）

17.I’mill.That’swhyIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.（用表语从句）

18.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.ThereasonisthatI’mill.（用表语从句）

19.I’mseriouslyill,whichmakesmeunabletogotoschool.（用定语从句）

20.I’mseriouslyill,whichmakesitimpossibleformetogotoschool.

21.I’mseriouslyill,thusmakingitformegotoschool.（用分词作结果状语）

22.HowIwishIcouldgotoschooltomorrow!

ButIcan’tbecauseI’mseriouslyill.（用虚拟语气）

23.I’mill.That’sthereasonwhyIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.（用定语从句）

24.ItisbecauseI’millthatIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.（强调句型）

25.ThereasonformyabsencefromschooltomorrowisthatI’mill.（用表语从句）

26.WhatIwanttotellyouisthatI’millandIcan’tgoschooltomorrow.（用主语从句、表语从句、并列句）

27.Myillnesspreventsmefromgoingtoschooltomorrow.

28.Ihavedisease,whichpreventsmefromgoingtoschooltomorrow.

例二.他说英语太快了！

让我大吃一惊！

1.HespeaksEnglishsofast,andIamsurprised.

2.HespeaksEnglishsofastanditissurprisingtome.

3.HespeaksEnglishsofastanditisasurprisetome.

4.HespeaksEnglishsofast,atwhichIamsurprised.

5.HespeaksEnglishsofast,whichisasurprisetome.

6.HespeaksEnglishsofast,whichissurprisingtome.

7.HespeaksEnglishsofast,whichmakesmesurprised.

8.HespeaksEnglishsofastthatIamsurprised.

9.SofastdoeshespeakEnglishthatIamsurprised.

10.SofastdoeshespeakEnglishthatitsurprisesme.

11.HisfastEnglishspeakingissurprisingtome.

12.HisfastEnglishspeakingisasurprisetome.

13.HisfastEnglishspeakingmakesmesurprised.

14.HisfastEnglishspeakingsurprisesme.

15.HowfasthespeaksEnglish,whichissurprisingtome.

16.HowfasthespeaksEnglish,whichisasurprisetome.

17.HowfasthespeaksEnglish,anditisasurprisetome.

18.HowfasthespeaksEnglish,anditissurprisingtome.

19.WhatafastEnglishspeakerheis!

Itdoessurpriseme.

20.ItishewhospeaksEnglishsofast,whichsurprisesme.

21.ItishisfastEnglishspeakingthatsurprisesme.

22.ThathespeaksEnglishsofastissurprisingtome.

23.ThathespeaksEnglishsofastsurprisesme.

24.ThathespeaksEnglishsofastisasurprisetome.

25.IamsurprisedthathespeaksEnglishsofast.

26.IamsurprisedthathespeakssuchfastEnglish.

27.IamsurprisedthathespeaksEnglishwithfastspeed.

28.IamsurprisedbyhisfastEnglishspeaking.

29.IamsurprisedbyhisEnglishspeakingwithfastspeed.

30.Itissurprisingtomethathe（should）speakEnglishsofast.

31.Itissurprisingtomethathe（should）speaksuchfastEnglish.

32.Itissurprisingtomethathe（should）speakEnglishwithfastspeed.

33.ItissurprisingtomethathisspokenEnglishissofast.

34.Itisasurprisetomethathe（should）speakEnglishsofast.

35.Tomysurprise,hespeaksEnglishsofast.

36.Tomysurprise,hespeakssuchfastEnglish.

37.Tomysurprise,hespeaksEnglishwithfastspeed.

38.Tomysurprise,hisspokenEnglishissofast.

39.WhenhespeaksfastEnglish,Iamsurprised.

40.WhenhespeaksEnglishfast,Iamsurprised.

例三.

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。

讨论的主题是：

公园要不要收门票？

请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60%的同学认为

1、不应收门票

2、公园是公众休闲的地方

3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象

40%的同学认为

1、应收门票，但票价不宜高

2、支付园林工人工资

3、购新花木

注意：

1、信的开头已为你写好。

2、词数：

100左右。

3、参考词汇：

门票：

entrancefee

请至少写出三个句子替换

1．60％的同学认为公园不应该收费。

2．公园是公众休闲的地方。

3．如收门票，需建大门﹑围墙，会影响城市形象。

4．40％的同学认为应收门票，但票价不宜高。

5．门票收入支付园林工人工资﹑购买新花木。

整合后参考范文：

DearEditor,

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.

Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelievedapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Whatismore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.

Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkersandtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.

Yourstruly,

LiHua

你能用多少种方式把下面这两句话串联成一句话？

写出你可能写出的所有句子：

Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.

Hefeltveryuneasy.

（一）句子开头“去人化”

（1）用形式主语it开头

1.ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.

2.Collegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesandeconomicsuccessaccordingtoarecentreport.

◆拓展：

形式主语it开头的常见句型：

（2）以状语开头，具体来说可用形容词、副词、分词短语、介词短语、不定式、从句等做开头。

1.Manypeoplehaveambitiousplansbutnoability,sotheyaccomplishlittle.

2.Schoolworkexertspressureonteenagers,andtheirpeersalsoencouragethem.Undersuchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.

3.Themanwasindespairandturnedtohisfriendsforhelp.

4.Wehavetocontinuallyupdateourknowledgetoacclimatize（适应新气候或环境）totheever-changingworld.

5.WeneedtouseEnglishtocommunicatewithmoreandmoreforeignerswhocometoChina,solearningEnglishhasbecomeincreasinglyimportantinourlife.

（3）表示某人拥有的“sb.have……”句型变成therebe句型

Moreandmoreyoungstudentsgoabroadbecausetheywanttogetbettereducationandfindabetterjobinthefuture.Ithinkthattheymayhaveproblemsinstudyandalsoinlife.

（4）以“某人”作主语使用情态动词（can,may,should等）时，建议前两个改成Itislikely/possibletodo/that….；后一个改成Itisnecessary/imperative/highlyexpected/suggestedthatsth.bedone.的句式：

　　Wecangoanywherewelikewithourbicycle.

Tocurbglobalwarming,ourgovernmentshouldpromulgatenewlawstogovernthefellingoftrees.

（5）使用被动句式

在比较正式的新闻、商务、法律等英语文体中，被动句式因为其更突出客观性的宾语或者事实被广为使用。

图表分析和议论文都是比较正式的文体，所以我们也应该注意多用被动句式。

尤其是在以下两个方面：

　　1.主语不确定

　　Someonemurderedthemillionairelastnight.

2.主语是泛指很多人或者大部分人

　　Toimprovetheairquality,weshouldreducetheuseofprivatecars.

Mostpeoplethinkthatwecangetalargeshareofbenefitinthesalescampaign.

◆被动句的用法不仅体现在主句中，在从句、非谓语动词短语中都有可能用到，如：

　　Itisimportantfornationsallovertheworldtojoinhandstocontrolthesoftwarepiracy.

　　Idon’texpectthatshereturned.

Iamnotsurewhetherthecollegegraduateswillfindjobsinthefinanciallydifficultyear.

（二）名词化

　　写作中把原本用动词或者形容词表达的地方换成名词叫做名词化（nominalization）。

名词化是为了避免太多动词造成的句法处理上的困难，同时也可以把某些陈述型的句式转化成更客观的评价句，更符合议论文的文体要求。

如：

　　Ourmonitordidn’tcometoday.Hehasgotaflu.

常见的名词化用法：

ifthereisno…→lackof,

don’tknow…→ignoranceof,

can’tread…/can’tuse…→illiteracyin,

didn’tdo…→failure

Lackoftheknowledgewouldmakeitimpossibleforyoutogetthatjob

Myignoranceofitsimportanceatlastputmeintotrouble

Myilliteracyofcomputerpreventedmefromgettingabetterjob

在具体的使用过程中可以结合介词with使用，使得句法更加凝练。

此外个别单词也可以利用动词的名词性后缀如：

-tion，-ment,-isation,-ness,-ity等或者变成动名词形式-ing。

如：

　　Moreyoungergenerationscelebratethewesternfestivals.

→Thecelebrationofthewesternfestivalswasenjoyedbymoreyoungergenerations

35%ofthestudentsdidhomeworkathomeintheSpringFestival.

→DoinghomeworkathomeintheSpringFestivalaccountsfor35%amongthestudents.

（三）长短句交插

（1）Wecanimaginethebeautifulsurroundings.

（2）Therearemanytreesalongthestreets.（3）Thereisacleanriverinthecity.（4）Therearemanyfishesintheriver.（5）Therearewillowtreesontheoneside.（6）Therearesomepiecesofgrasslandontheotherside.（7）Therearemanyflowersonthem.

文中七个句子都是简单句，句型结构单一，而且句子长短同一，都在七、八词左右，十分单调。

下面是修改后的段落：

（1）Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsifwemakeourcitiesgreener.

（2）Greentreeslinethestreets.（3）Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity，inwhichalotoffishesabound.（4）Ontheonesidestandrowsofwillowtrees.（5）Ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslandsprinkledwithmanyyellowandredflowers.