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外研版八年级上册M1M5写作

M1HowtolearnEnglishwriting写作

假设你是Tony，你的中国笔友Daming给你来信了，请根据信的内容给他写一封70词左右的回信。

Howtimeflies!

WeareinGrade8now.IlikeEnglishverymuch,butIfindI'malittleweakinit.First,Ifinditdifferenttoremembernewwords.second,Ioftenmakegrammermistakesinmyhomework,pleasehelpme. 

                                                                    Yours                        

                                                                 Daming 

1开篇点题，由“Now，letmegiveyousomeadviceon…..”引起下文.

2根据信中提到的困难提出建议，在写作时可以使用First,Second，Finally等词，使文章结构清晰，层次分明.

3首尾呼应，在结束时表达祝愿“Ihope….“，并再次点题，和开头相呼应.

高分模板 

1开篇Enlishlearningisgettingmoreandmoreimportant. Now,letmegiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell 

2正文尽量使用建议的句型

First,youshouldreadsomeEnglisheveryday.Second,whynottryto-Finally,whynot 

3尾表达祝I开头相呼应I hope……couldbehelpfulin…..

DearDaming.

Thanksforyourletter.Englishlearningisgettingmoreandmoreimportant.Now,letmegiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.First,youshouldreadsomeEnglisheveryday.It'sgoodforyour vocabulary.Second,whynottrytoremembereightortenwordsaday?

It'sagoodideatolistentotheradioorreadnewspapersinEnglish.Finally,whydon'tyouwritethecorrectanswersnexttothemistakesinyournotebook?

Itcanhelpyoumakefewermistakes.IhopetheabovesuggestionscouldbehelpfulinimprovingyourEnglishlearning.

Bestwishes!

                                                          Tony

HowtolearnEnglishwell范文

.SomestudentsthinkthattheycanlearnEnglishwelliftheylearnthegrammarwellandrememberwordsasmanyaspossible.ButIdon'tquiteagreewiththem.Idon'tthinkit'senough.Weshould practisespeakingEnglishbothinandoutofclass.It'sagood ideatoread Englishnewspapersand magazines.TrytolistentoEnglishsongsandwatch Englishfilms.Besides,itisalsohelpfultokeepadiaryandwritelettersinEnglish.I'msurewecan learnEnglishwellinthisway. 

DearDaming

IheardthatyouhadsomeproblemsinlearnigEnglish.SoI'dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.First.youshouldspeakEnglishaloudandlearnsomeimportantphrasesandteatsbyhearteverymorning.Andit'sagoodideatospeakmoreEnglishinEnglishclassesSecond,trytolistentotheradioorreadnewspapersinEnglish.AndwhynotwatchEnglishTVprogrammes?

Itisalsoagoodway.Third,howaboutformingahabitofkeepinganEnglishdiaryeveryday?

IfyoucanchangethewaysoflearningEnglish.Ibelieveyou'llmakegreatprogresssoon

Yours.

LiHua

借鉴提升

①学习本文开门见山地引出同题，为下文提建议做铺垫。

②文中first、second、thid的运用使行文清晰且有条理，值得借鉴。

③文中youshould…，it'sagoodideato…。

等提建议句型的灵活运用显示出作者扎实的语言功底

④文章最后一段采用了主从复合句这一高级句式，鼓励对方学习英语，增强了对方的信心。

易错提醒：

动笔的时候一定要小心，千万别踩到下面这两颗地雷哦!

Aadvice为不可数名词，不能用advices

B表建议的句型whynot后要跟动词原形，而howabout后要跟动词ing形式。

在学习生活中，每个人都要面对各种困难。

如何应对这些困难呢?

请你根据以下思维导图所提供的信息，以“HowtoDealwithDifficultiesinLearning”为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文参考词汇：

参考书referencebook

1 引出话题  

2 自己的做法查阅参考书、网上搜寻,向老师、同学求助

3心得体会

HowtoDealwithDifficultiesinLearning

Everyone mayfacedifficultiesinlearning.OnceIcould hardlyfollowmy teachers inclassandImademanymistakesinmyhomeworkandtests.Ireallyfeltsad.

NowwheneverImeetdifficulties,I'll try hardtoovercome theminsteadofgivingup.  Sometime Ilookupin referencebooks orsearchtheInternet,whilesometimesIturntomyteachersorclassmates .Withhardwork,Ihavedonemuchbetterinmystudies

Nothingistoodifficult ifweputourheartsintoit.Whateverdifficultywemeet,there'salwaysawayforustodealwithit.

M2writing写作Myhometownandmycountry

Myhometown

1开篇点题，简单介绍家乡的地理位置

2介绍家乡的特点及著名的

3用简短的语言评价自己的家乡

1开头介绍家乡，地理位置。

Myhometownis.It'sintheofChina.Itisa……city

2中间介绍家乡的变化及特色Itwas.….inthepast.Nowit's…..than.….It'sfamousfor……

3结尾表达自己对家乡的热爱之情  Ilovemyhometown.AndIhopeitwill….

 范文1

Weifangismyhometown.It'sabeautifulcityinthenorthofChina.Ithasapopulationofaboutninemillion.Shang-haiislargerthanthatofmyhometownandBeijingisbusierthanmyhometown,Weifangisfamousforkites.Everyyear,manyvisitorscometomyhometowninApril.Ilikemyhometownverymuch.

范文2

Myhometown

MyhometownisChangchun.It'sinJilinProvince,northeastofChina.ItisthecapitalcityofJilinProvince.Itisabeautifulcity.Nowit'snicerthanbefore.Thestreetsarewiderandcleanerthanbefore.There aremoreshops,busesandcars.ManycarsaremadeinChangchun.Ilovemyhometownvery much.Ihopeitwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.!

该篇作文层次分明，条理清楚，表达通顺，感情真挚。

开篇介用了自已家乡的地理位置，接着介绍家乡的变化及特色，最后表达了自己的真挚感情。

范文3

Myhometown

IcomefromBeijing,abeautifulcityinthenorthofChina.ItisthecapitalofChina,andithasapopulationofabouttwenty-onepointsevenmillion.MyhometownisfamousforPekingUniversityandTsinghuaUniversity.Peopletherearekindandfriendly.Itsworldwell-knownfood—BeijingRoastDuckisreallydelicious.WelcometoBeijingandI'msureyou'llhaveagreattimehere.

范文4

假如你出国留学已有两年了，前天刚回到自己的家乡。

回到家乡后，你发现家乡发生了巨变。

请根据下面的要点提示，描述一下你回到家乡的见闻和感受。

提示:

1高楼林立，商业繁荣；2马路宽阔，街道整洁.3。

生活富裕，幸福健康；

要求:

语句通顺、语法正确，可适当发挥2。

不少于60词

I'vebeenawayfrommyhometownfortwoyears.I'mveryexcitedtoseealotofchangesinmyhometown whencomingback here.

It'sgettingbiggerandbusier.Tallbuildingsandtreesareoneithersideofstreets.Theroadsaremuchwiderandcleaner.Peoplebecomericherthanbefore.Andtheyliveahappierandhealthierlife.

IwilllivehereandworkhardtomakemyhometownanicerplacewhenIfinishmystudies.

M3writing写作sports

本模块谈论的是“运动”，这是大家非常熟悉的一个话题，也是各地中考英语真题中最常考的话题作文之,分绍自已或他人喜欢或从事的运动时，可以从运动项目的特点和影响等方面去写，此类话题作文吸引阅卷人眼球的亮点表达有:

（1）My/Hi/Herfavouritesportis....

（2）I/He/Shegoes/plays…in/on....

（3）Itis…than…..

（4）Itmakesme/him/herhealthy/strong…..

你喜欢运动吗?

课余时间你都做什么体育运动?

请写一篇70词左右的短文来介绍一下你的体育爱好

【运动项目】

【1】点明最喜爱的体育运动Myfavouritesportis

【2】如何做这项运动做这项运动Iplay…..withmy……

Weplayfor….. It's....than…….

【3】做这个动的好处Itmakesushealthy.

满分范文1

Doyoulikesports?

Ido.Myfavouritesportistabletennis.Iplaytabletenniswithmyfriendseveryday.Weplayforaboutanhoureachtime.Playingtabletennisissaferandmoreenjoyablethanplayingfootballorbasketball.Itmakesushealthy.Themoreweplaytabletennis,thestrongerwewillbecome.Tabletennisisgreat.Comeandjoinus!

I'msureyou'lllikeit.

借鉴提升

①以自问自答的方式开头，使文章显得更加活泼。

②点明自己最喜欢的体育运动，为下文做了铺垫。

③与其他运动进行对比，突出了这一运动的特点。

④恰当运用了“the+比较级。

。

，the+比较级…。

”

句式易错提醒：

动笔的时候一定要小心，千万别踩到下面两颗地雷哦！

A.favourite意为“最喜爱的”，无最高级形式

B.every day意为“每天”，作状语。

此处不要everyday。

everyday意为“每天的”，作定语。

满分范文2

开篇点题.Myfavouritesportis……中间陈述喜欢的原因Ithinkit's…...It'smore...than……结尾评价运动Stayingfitisveryimportant,so…

Myfavouritesport

Ilikesportsverymuch,suchasfootballandbasketball.Ofallthesports,Iliketabletennisbest.Ithinkplayingtabletennisisinterestingandrelaxing.It'smoreexcitingthanfootball.Iusuallyplaytabletenniswithmyclassmatesafterschool.Lastweektherewasatabletennismatchinourschool.Itookpartinthematchandwonthefirstprize.Stayingfitisimportant,sochooseasportthatyoulike.

名师点评:

全文句式丰富。

“…playingtabletennisis…"是动名词短语作主语，从而表达自己的观点；“

moreexcitingthan…”成功地运用了本模块所学的比较级句型；还运用了therebe句型。

而且，文章还运用了加分词汇，如:

like….best，suchas，takepartin，win，stayfit等，从而使文章流光溢彩。

佳句:

1Myfavouritesportis…..我最喜爱的运动是…

2Ofallthesports,Ilike……best在所有运动中，我最喜欢…

3Ithink我认为

4Itismore…..than….比起……它更

5Stayingfitisimportant，sochooseasportthatyoulike保持健康是重要的，所以选择一项你喜欢的.

满分范文3

Wealllovesports,Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Everyonelovessportsverymuch.Myfatherlikesplayingfootballandbasketball.Hethinksplayingfootballandbasketballcanmakehimexcited.Mymotherlikesrunningbecauseitischeapandrelaxing.Sherunsslowlyinthemorningsorintheevenings.Mysisterenjoysswimming,becauseitisveryinterestingandpopular.Ilikeplayingtabletennis.Itiseasierandmorerelaxingthanfootball.Weoftentalkaboutsports.Sportsmakeushappyandhealthy,soweoftendosomesports.

 范文4

Ilikesportsverymuch,suchasplayingtabletennis,swimmingandsoon.Butmyfavouritesportisjogging.Joggingisthesameasrunningbutyourunslowly.It'squitealotfasterthanwalking.Ilikeitbestbecauseit'smucheasierthanplayingbasketballortennis.Anditischeaperthanothersports.Ioftengojoggingintheparkwith

myfriendsintheearlymornings.Themoreyougojogging,thehealthieryouwillfeelJusttryit.

范文5

Doingsports/Takingexerciseisgoodforusinmanyways/aspects.Itcanhelpusbuildstrongbodies/buildupourbodiesandkeephealthy/keepfit/stayhealthy/stayfit.Itcanalsomakeusmorerelaxedafterstudyingforalongtime.Ididn'tlikedoingsports/takingexerciseinthepast/Inthepast/PreviouslyIdidn'tlikedoingsports/takingexercise./Idislikeddoingsports/takingexerciseinthepast./Inthepast/PreviouslyIdislikedlikedoingsports/takingexercise.ButafterIjoinedthesports/athleticclub,IfounditmoreexcitingthanwatchingTV./ButIfounditmoreexcitingthanwatchingTVafterIjoinedthesports/athleticclub.Now,chooseone（kindof）sportandhavefunoutdoors./Chooseone（kindof）sportandhavefunnow.I'msureit'smoreenjoyable/happy/cheerful/pleasantthanstayingintheroom.Remembertowarmupbeforedoingsports/tak