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历届上海高考英语作文
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历届上海高考英语作文
2013高考上海卷英语作文点评
II.GuidedWriting
Directions:
WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiveninChinese.
上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。
你的信必须满足以下要求：
1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；
2.说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）
DearSir/Madam,
I’vejustlearnedthatShanghaiMuseumistoholdafamouspaintingexhibitionandyou’recollectingpublicsuggestionsaboutwhichlocationtoholdit.I’mwritingthislettertosharewithyoumyopinions.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itismorereasonabletoholdthepaintingexhibitioninShanghaiMuseumthanincommunitylibraries.Myreasonsareasfollows.
Ontheonehand,itismoreconvenientforpeopletoreachShanghaiMuseum,locatedinthecenterofthecity.Visitorscangotherebysubwayandbusandsoon.What’smore,ShanghaiMuseumismuchmoreextensivethancommunitylibraries,providingvisitorswithamorecomfortableenvironmenttoappreciatethefamouspaintings.
Ontheotherhand,ShanghaiMuseum,awell-knownanddistinguishedmuseumathomeandabroad,ismoreprofessionalinholdingpaintingexhibitions.What’sofgreatsignificanceisthatnotonlydoesitprovideadvancedfacilitiesandhigh-techmonitorsbutalsooffersprofessionalsecurityguardstoprotectthosefamouspaintingsfrombeingdamagedorstolenintheprocessofexhibition.
Consequently,IstronglyproposethatthepaintingexhibitionistobeheldintheShanghaiMuseum.
Yours,
WangMin
赏析：
今年上海市的高考英语作文话题贴近学生的生活实际，用书信的载体呈现，让考生对画展感觉到有话可以说，但是想要达到A类作文，不仅需要有扎实语言功底，还需要对博物馆和社区图书馆及画展等生活类的语言应用娴熟，更需要学生从专业一点的角度，深入分析其选择的理由，这个层面很多学生很难用专业的语言区描述，学生平时学习时间紧张，没有时间到社会上参加一些社会活动，而且在紧张的时间里，更别提用一些复杂的语言结构区展示自己的理由，所以学生写到高分不是很容易，大部分学生得到15/16分是没有问题的。
采取这样的命题思路对英语教学有较好的反馈作用，学校和家庭不仅仅督促学生的学习更要提供机会让孩子走出课堂，走向社会，培养学生创造性和批判性思维。
提示：
生活类词汇:
museumlibrarypaintingexhibitionadvancedfacilityhigh-techmonitorsecurityguard
分词的应用：
locatedprovidingdistinguished
句型：
主语从句标语从句倒装等
2012年上海高考英语作文
Directions:
WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven
belowinChinese.
上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：
●对两堂绘画课的具体描述；
●你从中获得的启发。
2012ShanghaiEnglishTestwritingsample3
（forreferenceonly）
TodayIhadanunusualexperience,whichrefreshedmymind.WithpupilsIspenttwoperiodsoftimeinaprimaryschool,watchingthemlearnhowtopaint.AlittlegirlnamedAmy,onestudentoftheclass,leftmeadeepimpressionwithheruniquepainting.
Inthefirstlessontheteacherrequiredthepupilstopaintfreely.Namely,inanywaytheycoulddrawwhateverthey’dliketo.Amywasthefirstonetohaveatry.Isawherthinkforalittlewhile,takeoffhershoes,thendipherfeetslightlyintothepaint/ink.Muchtomysurprise,inaflashshemanagedtomakeanicedesignonabroadpieceofwhitepaper/blanketwithbothofherfeet.Whathappenednext,variousoftypesofworkspaintedbyotherchildrenappearingbeforemyeyesonebyone,keptmelaughingwithjoyandamusement.
Followingabreak,thesecondclassbegan.smiling,theteachermadeabriefcomment,whichwasfullofpraiseaswellasappreciation.Afterthat,shegavethestudentssomeguidanceaboutthetraditionalwayofpainting.Withherteachers’wordsinmind,Amypracticedagain.Painting-brushinhand,shesatadeskproperly/straight,payingfullattentiontoherwork.Thistime，witheaseandexcitementshedrewsomebirdsflyinghighinthesky/sun.
Lookingbackatthetwowaysofgivingaclass,Ihavetoadmittheteacherwaswellworthfollowinginmattersofcultivating“flowers”inthespiritoforiginality.Giventhatchildrenareofgreatimaginationandelasticityintheirgrowth,theyaresupposedtobegivenasmanychancesandopportunitiesaspossibleinthecourseofbeingeducatedsoastodeveloptheirpotentialtothefull.Weretheyoungalwaysconfinedtotheestablishedwaysofdoingthingswithoutafreeworld,onethatisalsolongedforbytheambitiousbirdsdrawnbyAmy,howcanweexpectthenextgenerationourcivilizednationwouldbemoreinnovativeandcreative
2012ShanghaiEnglishTestwritingsample4
（forreferenceonly）
TodayIhadanunusualexperience,whichrefreshedmymind.WithpupilsIspenttwoperiodsoftimeinaprimaryschool,watchingthemlearnhowtopaint.AlittlegirlnamedAmy,onestudentoftheclass,leftmeadeepimpressionwithheruniquepainting.
Inthefirstlessontheteacherrequiredthepupilstopaintfreely.Namely,inanywaytheycoulddrawwhateverthey’dliketo.Amywasthefirstonetohaveatry.Isawherthinkforalittlewhile,takeoffhershoes,thendipherfeetslightlyintothepaint/ink.Muchtomysurprise,inaflashshemanagedtomakeanicedesignonabroadpieceofwhitepaper/blanketwithbothofherfeet.Whathappenednext,variousoftypesofworkspaintedbyotherchildrenappearingbeforemyeyesonebyone,keptmelaughingwithjoyandamusement.
Followingabreak,thesecondclassbegan.Withasmile,theteachermadeabriefcomment,whichwasfullofpraiseaswellasappreciation.Afterthat,shegavethestudentssomeguidanceaboutthetraditionalwayofpainting.Withherteachers’wordsinmind,Amypracticedagain.Painting-brushinhand,shesatadeskproperly/straight,payingfullattentiontoherwork.Thistime，witheaseandexcitementshedrewsomebirdsflyinghighinthesky/sun.
Simpleandamusingasitseemed,thetwowaysofpaintingarethought-provoking.Asisgenerallyaccepted,students,especially,childrenhavegreatpotentialintheirgrowthanddevelopment.Asamatteroffact,whethertheirtalentscanbedevelopedtothefull,toagreatdegree,dependsonhowchildrenareeducated.Whilesomevaluabletraditionsarewellworthcherishing,thinkinginanoriginalwayshouldbeencouragedandemphasizedamongchildrenwhenitcomestoteachingoreducation,whoaresupposedtobecharacterizedby“innovationandcreation”.Onlyinthisway,cantheykeepinpacewiththefast-developingmodernworld.
2011年上海卷高考英语作文范话题：
向一个基金会申请2000元做个项目来支持贫困学生，需要包含以下的一些要点1.介绍自己2.项目具体实施方案元如何利用
Dearfoundationorganizers,
MynameisJerryLu,astudentcurrentlystudyingatShanghaiXXHighschool.Iamwriting,onbehalfofmyclassmates,toapplyforthe2000yuanworthoffundinabidtoinitiateaprogramaimedathelpingthosestudentswhoarefinanciallydisadvantaged.
Beingraisedinfamiliesthatdon’thavetoworryaboutputtingfoodonthetableneednotmeanobliviontoourlessfortunatepeers.Onthisaccount,wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldsponsorourpoverty-reliefendeavor.Thefollowingishowwewouldgoaboutusingthemoney.Wewouldspend1500yuanpurchasingsomestationeryfortheneedystudentsatourschool.Itisworthnotingthatwewouldinformthemtopickuptheschoolsuppliesthemselvesinsteadofus“dolingout”thesuppliessothatwewouldn’tembarrassthosewhowewanttohelp.Theremainderofthefundwouldbeusedtoinviteamotivationalspeakerwhowastotalkabouthowtoliftoneselfoutofpovertybymakingrightacademicandprofessionaldecisions.
Modestasoureffortsmaysound,webelievetheywillwarmsomehearts.Muchobligedifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.
YoursSincerely,
JerryLu
2010年上海高考作文及范例
下图是小学新生的课堂一脚，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。
你的作文必须包括：
●描述图片里学生上课的场景
●比较你同时期的上课情况
●简单谈谈你的感受
Asisdescribedinthepicture,agroupofforeignstudentsareraisingtheirhandstogiveanswerstothequestioninajoyfulandactiveway.Thepurposeofthepictureistoshowushowactivetheclassperformanceisintheforeigncountry.
Westernstudentsaremorelikelytobeopen-mindedandwillingtoexpresstheiruniqueideasinclass.Justasthepictureshows:
Whentheteacherisaskingaquestion,everychildraisestheirhandsandiseagertoanswerthequestion.Theydonotfeargivingthein-classperformancewhileothersarewatching.
ThissceneremindsmeofmyownclasssituationwhenIwasatelementaryschool.AsChinesechildrenaremoreoftenthannotveryconservativeandmodest,therefore,myteachersusuallycalledastudent'snameifnobodydaredtoanswerthequestions.Thentheappointedchildbehavedawkwardlyandwasreluctanttosayjustafewwords.
Thisrecollectionmakesmefeelratherdisappointed.Infact,weshouldatleastgiveatry,whethertheanswerisperfectornot.It'sachanceoflearning,morespecifically,ifwearewell-done,wewillgainconfidence;ifnot,wewillgetinformedofabettersolution,whichwillprovideusexperienceinthelatersituation.Allinall,it'smoresensibletobeactiveinclass.
图画式议论文
1.特点：
是通过观察和分析单幅或一组画，把图画内容转化成文
字信息。
2.注意点：
（1）.要认真审图
（2）.需从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要内容，处理好人物与时空的
关系及局部与整体的关系，找出文章的线索或主题。
（3）.“丰满的想象+变化的表达”
3.结构：
第一段描述图画，一般不超过三分之一篇幅
第二段揭示画旨（一般一言即可）
第三段发表感想、评论或提出建议（占主要篇幅）
第四段简单谈谈自己的感受
注意：
二三两段可合成一段
2009年上海高考作文及范例
某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：
园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self-defence），护理（nursing）。
假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。
信的内容必须包括：
1、你感兴趣的课程
2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么
3、为什么想学这些内容
Itissaidthatasummercampistobeheldbyyourschoolandafewcoursesareavailabletochoosefrom.Iaminterestedingardening,inthatIbelieveitfeaturesmycharacterandpersonalbenefits.
Duringthelearningperiod,Iexpecttogainsomeunexpectedknowledge.AradicaltechniqueI’dliketoobtainistoknowhowtotelldifferentspeciesofplantsandflowersapart.Thishelpsmetohaveaclearoutlookofthoseinmygarden.Furthermore,thepropercuttingtimeandfrequencytowateraresomeotherskillsIwanttolearn.Alittleknowledgeconcerningchoosingsuitablesoi
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