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作文写作技巧

作文技巧

模式一：

观点型

1．观点陈述（A/B）

2．表明态度（A/B）

3．提出建议

Task1ShouldWePromoteCarOwnership?

1．有人主张大力发展私家车。

2．有人则认为应优先发展公共交通。

3．你的观点。

Whenitcomestocarownership,people’sviewsvarywidely.Promotersofprivatecarstakeitforgrantedthatowningacarisasymbolofpersonalprosperityandsocialprogress.Totheirmind,itisadvisableforeveryChinesefamilytohaveacar.Ontheotherhand,peopleinincreasingnumbersbegintobeawareofvarioushazardsofpromotingprivateautomobilesandappealtosocietytogiveprioritytopublictransportation.

Personally,Iaminfavorofthelatterview.Itistruethattheprivatecardoesprovideconvenienceandincreasepeople’smobilitysignificantly.Itisalsotruethatmanypeopleviewowninganexpensivecarasasignoftheirsocialstatus.However,thesideeffectsthecarcausesshouldnotbeunderestimated.Theincreaseinprivatecarsleadstopollutedair,trafficcongestion,andinjuriesandfatalities.Mostimportantofall,ifwetakeChina’ssituationsintoaccount,we’lldecidethatournationcannotaffordtoprovidemostofourpeoplewithacar.Wedon’thavesufficientparkingspaceinthecity;nordowehavecheapfueltofeedmillionsofcars.Ontheotherhand,promotingpublictransportrepairs/remediesthedeficienciesmentionedabove.

Inbrief,asIseeit,thedisadvantagesofpromotingprivatecarsfaroutweightheadvantages.SoIstronglyrecommendlimitingthenumberofprivatecarsandinvestingmoreresourcesinpublictransport.Onlyinthiswaycanwedevelopourtransportationandimproveourlives.

模式二：

现象型

1.现象描写a.举例法b.比较法c.引用法

2.分析利弊或原因

3.表明态度（三元分析法）

Task2CollegeGraduateSelf-employment

1．现在鼓励大学生自主创业。

2．自主创业的益处和挑战。

3．我的看法。

Thepastfewyearshaveseenaremarkableincreaseinthenumberofcollegestudentsasaresultofenlargedenrollment.However,youngcollegegraduatesfindthemselvesfacedwithatightjobmarketaftergraduation.Recently,thegovernmenthasissuedsomepoliciesencouragingcollegegraduatestoestablishtheirownbusinessesrightafterleavingschool.

Obviously,bothgraduatesandsocietycanbenefitalotfromthepolicies.Inthefirstplace,youngpeoplecanintegratethemselvesintosocietymorequicklyintheprocessofrunningabusiness.Moreover,theyoungcanenjoymorefreedomandaremorelikelytofulfilltheirideals.Mostimportantofall,thepracticewillhelprelievethepressureofemployment.

However,thispracticewillcreatesomeproblems.Thebiggestheadachecomesfromlackoffundandexperience,whichmayleadtofailureinrunningabusiness.Anotherbarrierliesintheyoungpeople’simpatience;theyareoftentoothirstyforsuccess,forgettingthatovernightsuccessisalmostimpossible.

AsIseeit,severalpartiesinvolvedshouldcoordinatetheireffortstocopewiththeissue.Onthepartoftheyoung,theyshouldpreparebetterintheircollegestudy.Ontheotherhand,universityauthoritiescanprovidemorepracticalprogramsaboutself-employment.Mostimportantofall,thegovernmentatalllevelsshouldissuemorefavorpoliciestomotivatetheyoungtoestablishandruntheirbusinesses.Onlyinthiswaycantheyoungpeoplefulfilltheirdreamofbecomingusefulpeopletosociety.

模式三：

混合型

Task3WillChineseBeLikelytoBecomeanInternationalLanguage?

1.现在有越来越多的外国人开始学中文。

2．有人认为汉语将会和英语一样成为通用语。

3．我的看法。

Therecent/lastdecadeshavewitnessedincreasingprosperityofChina.Asaresult,thereappearsatrendformoreandmoreforeignerstobeinterestedinlearningChinese.Interestingly,whilesomanyyoungChineseareinvestingenormoustimeandenergyinlearningforeignlanguages,thereisacorrespondingincreaseinthenumberofforeignnationalswholaborattheChineselanguage.Itisreportedthatover100ConfuciusCollegeshavebeensetupinmanypartsoftheworld.Obviously,theworldisfacedwithaboomintheChineselanguageandculture.

Amidtheboom,thereappearsaviewclaimingthattheChineselanguagewillbecomeaninternationallanguage,justastheEnglishlanguageis.PersonallyIdon’tthinkthisviewholdsmuchwater.First,theChineselanguagediffersenormouslyfromtheexistingwesternlanguages,particularlyinwritingandpronunciation.Thefourtonesinpinyinsystemcreategreatconfusionfortheforeignlearners.Second,languageiscloselyrelatedtocultureandmostforeignershaveverylittleknowledgeofourcultureandtradition.Lastbutnotleast,itwilltakehundredsofyearsforalanguagetobecomeauniversallanguage,asinthecaseofEnglish.Inconclusion,thereisalongwayfortheChineselanguagetobecomeagloballanguage,andatpresentwhatweshoulddoistakeadvantageofeveryopportunitytoincreaseourcommunicationwiththeworldbyintroducingmoreknowledgeofourcultureandtraditiontotheoutsideworld.

Task4ShouldPopStarsBeBannedfromCommercials?

1．现在明星商业广告泛滥。

2．你认为明星商业广告应禁止吗？

Thecommercialadvertisingbystarsisgettingmoreandmorepervasive.TurnonyourTVandchancesarethatafamousmovieactorisboastingoftheenormousbenefitsofusingashampooorapopsingerisconvincingushowamedicinecureshissorethroat.Obviously,theimpactonthepubliccannotbeignoredanddueconsiderationshouldbegiventothisrampantphenomenon.

Itistruethatthestarscantakeadvantageoftheirpopularitytoinfluencecustomers,andinthiswaythemanufacturesarelikelytomakehugeprofits.However,problemsarisewhenthefamousfiguremakesirresponsibleadvertisingbyexaggeratingtheperformanceandeffectofaproductorservice.Infact,thestars’actionofthiskindmisleadstheconsumersandrepresentsabreachoftheirrights.

Personally,Iamagainststarsadvertisinginpublicmedia.Itishightimesomethingwasdonetoremedythesituation.First,thepublicfiguresshouldgiveprioritytothepublic’sinterestandpracticeself-disciplineinfaceoftemptation.Moreover,consumersshouldbecomemoresensibleandrationalbydevelopinggoodshoppingskillsandidentifyingthetrapssetinsomecommercials.Mostimportantofall,thegovernmentandrelevantinstitutionsshouldsetuplawsandregulationstobansomestar-centeredadvertising,suchasmedicinesanddrugs.Onlyinthiswaycanwecreateahealthyshoppingenvironment.

Task5RushforCivilService

1.很多在读和应届大学生热衷于考公务员。

2.分析其原因。

3.我的看法。

Therecentyearshaveseenaremarkablegrowthinthenumberofcollegestudentswhoenterforthequalificationtestforcivilservants.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,thepercentageisstrikinglyhigh:

nearlyhalfoftheseniorstudentshavetheintensionofworkinginagovernmentagency.

Thefactorsforthisphenomenonarecomplex.Foronething,acivilservanthasahighsocialstatus.Youngpeoplethinkiteasiertomakecontributionstoournationthantheyworkinacompany.Anditisassociatedwith“guan”—anall-too-traditionalimageinnumerouspeople’sminds.Second,itiscomparativelysecurer.Agovernmentemployeemaystayinthejobforlife,freeofthefearofbeinglaidoff,andenjoyacarefreeretiredlife.Third,itoffersappealingprospectsofadvancementandpromotion.Usuallygovernmentagenciesaremoregenerousthanbusinessesinsendingemployeestohaveon-the-jobretraining.Lastbutnotleast,thepayandbenefitsareverysatisfactory.

AsIseeit,itisahealthytrendforyounggraduatestotakecivilservantjobs.Anyway,everyonehashisownidealandambition.However,thereexistotheralternativestoit,forpathtoagovernmentagencyisnotwideenoughtoaccommodateafloodofpeople.AsfarasI’mconcerned,Iwillchoosetoworkwithabusinessorcorporation,forIfeelmypersonalityenablesmetobebettersuitedtoanon-governmentorganization.Ican’tstandinefficiency,andIwelcomechallengeandvariety.IamconvincedaslongasItakearesponsibleattitudetowardsthisissue,Ibesuretobecomeausefulpersontosociety.

注意：

如下平衡法表态（折中法）

Inmyview,weshouldgivegoodconsiderationtotwofactorsbeforedecidingonourcareer.Foronething,ourpersonalidealsshouldbecombinedwiththerealityofourcountry.Theinterestofournationshouldberankedfirst.Foranother,startingupabusinessofone’sownshouldbeencouraged,fornowlaborsupplyovertakesthedemandofjobmarket.Beingaself-employedworkermeanssharingtheburdenofourcountry.

Doyouthinkfreshcollegegradsshouldbeexcludedfromgovernmentjobs?

Yes:

1.Entry-leveljobsinthepublicsectorinparticularrequirelotsofinteractionwithordinarypeople.Freshgraduateslackinginsocialexperienceandinterpersonalskillscoldeasilymakemistakesandhurttheimageofthegovernment.

2.Collegestudentsmayfindgovernmentjobsmorecomplexthantheyexpect;asaresult,thefrustratingstressthiscomplexityentailsismorethantheycanmangetodealwith.

No:

1.Whileyounggraduatesingeneralmaynothavealotofsocialexperience,manyofthemhavedevelopedinternshipsandon-campusemployment.Moreover,theirintegritymakesthemevenbettercandidatesforgovernmentjobs.

2.Allfreshgraduateshavetostartgainingexperienceandexpertisefromsomewhere.Ifallemployersturnthemdownwiththesameexcuse,theywillneverhaveanopportunitytogetafootonthecareerladderandproperlyentersociety.Governmentjobsareagoodwaytoimprovetheirinterpersonalandservicesectorskills.Soitissimplyunfairtodenycollegegradstheopportunitytohavepublicemploymentwithoutgivingthematry.

Task6MyViewonIdolWorshipping

1.许多青少年将娱乐明星当作崇拜偶像。

2.分析此现象的原因。

3.你的建议。

Idolworshippingisnotanewphenomenon,butcurrentlythereisatrendfor