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高考英语作文之建议信
高考英语作文之应用文“建议信
1.简介
建议信写作注意事项：
写作目的是针对某事向对方提出合理化的建议和忠告，使对方接受自己的想法、主张和建议，从而解决问题。
（常用一般现在时和一般将来时）
写作风格：
简明扼要、目标明确、条理清晰、逻辑性强、有说服力，语言文雅，礼貌当先
写作内容：
写信的原因+建议的内容+这样建议的理由
2.写作方法
首段1）自我介绍/问好（不要啰嗦）一两个句子，概括性
2）复述背景，表明目的
主体1）提出具体建议
2）篇幅允许的话，可适当先肯定对方优点，再提出建议
3）适当说明原因或这样做的好处
结尾1）总结建议，注意礼貌
2）希望采纳/希望建议有用
3.范文练习
假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Steven向你咨询怎样学好中文，请根据下列要点给他写封建议信：
1）参加中文学习班
2）看中文书刊，电视
3）学唱中文歌曲
4）交中国朋友
开头：
自我介绍/问好
认识→问好（可问可不问）
最近好吗？
Howareyoudoing?
Howareyouthesedays?
Howdoyoudo?
Howisitgoing?
Howiseverythinggoing?
好久不见
Longtimenosee.
收到你的来信真好!
Hownicetohearfromyou!
不认识→自我介绍
我是李华，育才学校学生会主席。
I'mLiHua,chairmanoftheStudentUnionofYucaiMiddleSchool.
我来自高二一班的李华，
I'mLiHuafromclassone,seniortwo.
复述背景，表明目的
1．收到来信，得知你在中文学习上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。
Ihavereceivedyourlettersayingyouhavedifficulty（in）learningChinesesoI'mw
offeryousomesuggestions.
2．得知你在学习中文上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。
LearningthatyouhavetroubleinlearningChinese,I'wrmitingtoprovideyouwithsomeadvice.
3．你询问我一些在中文学习上的事情，我会尽量给你一些建议。
YouhaveaskedmeforsomeadviceonChineselearning（howtolearnChinesewell/howtohaveagoodcommandofChinese）andIwilltrytogiveyousomesuggestions.
4．读了你的信后，我知道你在中文学习上有困难.
Iknowthatyouhavetroublewith/inChineselearningafterreadingyourletter.5．听说你中文不太好，我很抱歉。
I'msorrytohearthatyourChineseisnotverywell.
I'msorryyouarehavingtroubleinimprovingyourChinese.6．很高兴收到你的来信，这是我关于你中文不太好的建议
It'snicetoreceiveyourletter.HerearemyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.7．我写信来给你分享我的建议
I'mwritingtosharemyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChinese.
I'mwritingthisletterwiththeaim/purposeofsharingmyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChinese.
8．我想和你分享我提高中文的建议/经历。
I'dliketosharemypreviousexperience/processofmyimprovementinChinese.9．在我看来，如果你能采取以下措施/接受以下建议，将非常明智。
Inmypersonalview,itiswiseofyoutotakethefollowingactions/suggestions.10．下面是我的建议
Herearemysuggestions./Belowismysomesuggestions.
Hereissomeadvicethatmaybehelpfulforyou.
HereismyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.11．以下是总结的三条建议，希望对你的中文提高有所帮助
I'vecomplied3ofmybesttipswhichmightbehelpfulinyourimprovementofChinese.12．Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.
13．Thanksfortrustingme.
14．你不必为此事担心
Youdon'thavetoworryaboutit.
主体
提建议句型
1.Itisimportant/essentialforyouto...,asyouwillbeabletol
2.Italsohelpsto...wheneverpossible.
3.Itshouldbeagoodideatobecausebydoingsoyouwill
4.Youcanalso,
5.Isuggestthat...（should）do
6.Mysuggestionisthat...（should）do...
7.Whynotdo?
8.Whydon'tyou?
9.You'dbetterdosth
10.IfIwereyou,Iwould
11.Itwouldbemorebeneficialtoyouifyoucould...
12.Youmayconsiderdoing
13.Foronething,Foranother,
14.AsfarasI'mconcerned...
15.Itisbetterto...
16.Istronglyrecommendthatyou...
17.Itdoeshelpifyou...
要点间的衔接词
首先：
Firstly,...
递进：
Then,Secondly,
Atfirst,
Also,Next,
Aboveall,
Firstofall
其他：
asfor,至于，关于
Tobeginwith,
Tostartwith,
Anothersuggestionisthat.另一个建议是...
而且：
What'smore,
总的来说：
allinall
Besides,
toconclude
Furthermore,
inconclusion
Inaddition,
inaword
Moreover,
insum
Afterthat,
tosumup
Meanwhile,
ingeneral
Atthesametime
generally
asawhole
最后：
atlast,
onthewhole
atlength,
finally,
lastly,
ultimately,
intheend
Lastbutbutleast
结尾：
1.Thesearemypersonalsuggestions.Hopeyouwillfindthemuseful.
2.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfulforyou.
3.Wishyousucceedindoingsth...祝你成功...
4.Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionintoconsideration/seriousaccount.
5.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeyourimprovement.
6.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.
7.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.
8.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.
范文：
DearSteven
It'niscetohearfromyou.LearningthatyouhavemetsomeobstaclessinceyoustartedlearningChinese,IcannotwaittowritethislettertoprovideyouwithsomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourChinese.
1Aboveall,thereisnodoubtthattakingaChinesecourseisanawesomechoiceforyou,whichwillhelpyougetprofessionaltrainingandeducationwiththeassistanceofyourteacher.
2What'smore,itwillbebeneficialtoyouifyouarewillingtosparesometimetowatchTV,readbooks、magazinesandnewspapersinChinese.
3Also,itishightimethatyoulearntsomeChinesesongs,whichwillabsolutelymakeiteasiertolearnChinesewellwithinashorttime.
4Atlast,youcouldconsidermakingsomeChinesefriends.OnlyinthiswaycanyouspeakChinesemorefluently.Afterall,itispracticethatmakesperfect.
Hopemyadvicewillbehelpfulforyou.
Yours
LiHua
1.
假如你是李华，你刚收到了你朋友王梅的电子邮件，他在邮件里向你咨询在高中如何学好英语，请你根据下列的内容给他写封回信：
1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记课后及时复习，
2.词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文，
3.课外都与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力，
4.每天坚持写日记，
DearWangMei,
I'mverygladtohavereceivedyour-email.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.
1Firstofall,youshouldlistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclasssothatyoucangooveryourlessonsassoonasyoucan.
（可用regularlyafterclass替代assoonasyoucan.）
2Asisknowtoall/Asweallknow,vocabularyisofgreatimportanceinEnglishlearning.
Youshouldspendhalfanhourinthemorningrecitingwordsandreadingtextsaloud.
3What'smore,trytocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.OnlyinthiswaycanyouimproveyourabilityoflisteningandspeakingEnglish.
4Lastbutnotleast,youshoulddevelopthehabitofkeepingadiary,whichhelpsimproveyourwrittenEnglishandhelpsyougoover/reviewthewordsandexpressionsthatyouhavelearnt.
Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofuseofyou.Remember:
wherethereisawill,thereisaway./Themanwhomadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”.
Bestwishes!
Yours
LiHua
2.
假如你是红星中学高三的学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文
化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。
他向你咨询相关信息。
请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1表示欢迎
2推荐他上哪所大学
3建议他做哪些准备工作
DearJim,
I'msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyoulastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.（表示欢迎）
LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.（推荐大学）
ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoaked/absorbedin（沉浸于，专注于）Chineseprofound（深厚的，意义深远的）historyandrichculture.Asforpreparation,somereadinginadvanceisneededlikeTheStoryoftheStone（《石头记/红楼梦》）whilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.（准备工作）
Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit'smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijing
whenthatdaycomes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.
Yourstruly,
LiHua
3.
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Ann最近因为父母工作的关系转到了新的班级,她在与朋
友相处方面遇到了一些问题,因此向你寻求交到好朋友且维持友谊的方法。
你的建议内容如下:
1.学会倾听
2.有分歧时让步
3.多陪伴
参考词汇:
compromise让步
DearAnn,
Iamdelightedtohavereceivedyourletter.Inyourlastletteryoumentionedthatyouhadsomeproblemsinmakingandmaintainingnewfriendsinanewclass.
FromwhereIamstanding,Isuggestthatoneimportantthingtorememberwhentryingtogetalongwithotheristolisten.Whensomeoneistalkingtoyou,lookatthem.Aboveall,don'tinterruptthem.AnotherthingIwanttoremindyouisthatyoushouldcompromise,whenyoudon'tagreewitheachother,oneorbothofyoushouldagreetogiveupsomethingtofindasolution.Lastbutnotleastyoushouldkeepinmindthatittakestimeandenergytobuildnewandgood
tspendtimewith
relationship.Youcannotexpecttobecomefriendswithsomeoneifyoudonthem.
IsincerelyhopethatwhatIhavesuggestedcanbehelpfulforyou.amlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Sincerelyyours,
LiHua
4.
假定你是李华,你的好友Jim在暑假期间痴迷于微信朋友圈,经常发照片分享生活中的所有细节,请根据以下要点提示,给Jim写一封信:
（1）对分享行为表示理解;
（2）阐述过度分享的危害;
（3）提出建议。
参考词汇:
微信朋友圈WeChatcircle;过度分享oversharing
DearJim,
I'mworriedthatyou'vebeenaddictedtosharingallsortsofphotosinWeChatcirclerecently.
Undeniably,WeChatmakescommunicationconvenientandleisuretimecolorful.However,thereexistsomepotentialrisksifweovershare.Onesevereproblemisleakingprivacy,whichmaycauseeconomiclosses.Besides,oversharingcanmakeothersuncomfortable,fortheythinkyouareshowingoff.
Thus,nevershouldwepostourpersonalinformation,norshouldwerashlyaddstrangerstothelistoffriends.It'swisertosetasidesometimetoaccompanyparentsordosomethingmoremeaningful.
Bestwishes!
Yourstruly,
LiHua
5.
（2017·北京卷）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：
“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。
Jim来信希望你能给些建议。
请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
DearJim,
I'mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou'recomingtoChina.
OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyrecommended.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.
Hopeyou'llhaveagoodtimeinChina.
Yours,
LiHua
6.
假如你是黎斌老师,一个名叫李华的学生来信询问如何学好英语。
请你根据以下提示给他写一封建议信：
1.词汇对提高英语听、说、读、写的技能起到重要的作用。
2.养成学练结合的习惯。
3.培养兴趣
DearLiHua,
Iamsosorrytohearthat
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