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成人高考专升本英语作文写作要点分析
短文写作总分25分。
短文写作部分要求考生写出一篇100-120字左右的短文。
题材以记叙文为主，试卷可能给出题目或规定情景或段首句。
短文写作的要求为：
能够正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语言错误。
写作内容涉及生活，一般常识和私人信件。
短文写作中的题目我们也可以称作命题写作。
情景写作也就是便条写作。
段首句式的写作可以称为主题句式的写作。
一、英语写作训练的要点
英语写作最重要的一点是用英语思维进行写作。
通病：
习惯于先把作文翻译成汉语，然后逐字翻译成英语。
在理解和使用英语词汇时，要注意英语和汉语在意义上的不同。
所以我们在从事英语写作训练的时候：
1.要明确英语写作的意义。
2.要学习和掌握必要的写作理论。
3.要通过大量的阅读，新概念第二册比较适合。
写提纲的好处：
1.可以扩大思路
2.可以按次序排好素材
3.将文章分成段
4.明确写作的中心思想
“TheAdvantagesofTravel（旅行的益处。
）”
根据这一题目，在构思时可能会想到以下内容：
1.seeingstrangeanddifferentthings（看到各种奇异的东西）
2.meetingpeoplewithdifferentinterests（遇到有各种不同兴趣的人）
3.keepingusfitandhealthy（有助于身体健康）
4.enjoyingbeautifulscenery（欣赏各地美景）
5.understandinghowpeoplelive（了解人们怎样生活）
6.visitingfamouscitiesandscenicspots（浏览名城和名胜）
7.tastingdifferentfoodsandlocalflavors（品尝各地风味）
8.gettingideasoftheconditionsandcustomsofotherpeople
（了解各地风土人情）
9.arousingtheferventloveforourmotherland（激起对祖国的热爱）
10.gaingknowledgeofgeographyandhistory（获得地理历史知识）
11.makingonelessnarrowminded（使人心胸开阔）
12.gaingotherknowledge（获得其他方面知识）
13.seeingplacesreadofinbooks（目睹曾在书上读到过的地方）
TheAdvantagesofTravel
Travelisbeneficialtousinatleastthreeways.
First，bytravelingwecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryindifferentplaces.Wewillseewithourowneyesmanyplaces
readofinbooks，andvisitsomefamouscitiesandscenicspots.
Second，wewillmeetpeoplewithdifferentinterestsandseestrangeanddifferentthingswhenwetravel.Wecanget
ideasoftheconditionsandcustomsofotherpeople，tastedifferentfoodsandlocalflavorsifwelike.Inthisway，we
canunderstandhowdifferentlyotherpeoplelive.
Third，travelwillnotonlyhelpustogainknowledgeofgeographyandhistoryandotherknowledge，whicharousesthe
ferventloveforourmotherland，butwillalsohelpuskeephealthyandmakeuslessnarrow-minded.Traveldoesbenefit
usbothmentallyandphysically.
在写100字左右的作文，我们也强调三段论。
第一句话或第一段我们强调我们要写的内容，第二段找一些例子阐述一下。
第三段再次把我们
强调的内容引申的说一下。
二．文章的三个部分
引言introduction
正文body
结束语conclusion
专升本英语作文考试中，语法一定要简明扼要，而且要正确。
写好主题句的三条原则
1.要能说明段落中心思想的内容。
2.要有能体现中心思想的关键词。
3.尽量使用简洁明了的句子。
以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1－2个，做到能够
熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1．表示原因
1）Therearethreereasonsforthis．
2）Thereasonsforthisareasfollows．
3）Thereasonforthisisobvious．
4）Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek．
5）Thereasonforthisisthat．．．
6）Wehavegoodreasontobelievethat．．．
例如：
Therearethreereasonsforthechangesthathavetakenplaceinourlife．Firstly，people’slivingstandardhasbeen
greatlyimproved．Secondly，mostpeoplearewellpaid，andtheycanaffordwhattheyneedorlike．Lastbutnotleast，
moreandmorepeopleprefertoenjoymodernlife．
如写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。
如：
Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife．Therearethreereasonsfor
this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2．表示好处
1）Ithasthefollowingadvantages．
2）Itdoesusalotofgood．
3）Itbenefitsusquitealot．
4）Itisbeneficialtous．
5）Itisofgreatbenefittous．
例如：
Booksarelikefriends．Theycanhelpusknowtheworldbetter，andtheycanopenourmindsandwidenourhorizons．
Therefore，readingextensivelyisofgreatbenefittous．
3．表示坏处
1）Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages．
2）Itdoesusmuchharm．
3）Itisharmfultous．
例如：
However，everythingdividesintotwo．Televisioncanalsobeharmfultous．Itcandoharmtoourhealthandmakeuslazy
ifwespendtoomuchtimewatchingtelevision．
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）Itisimportant（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）forsb．todosth．2）Wethinkitnecessarytodosth．
3）Itplaysanimportantroleinourlife．
例如：
andwehavesteppedintotheComputerAge．
5．表示措施
1）Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures．
3）Weshoulddoourutmostindoingsth．
4）Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatweareconfronted（faced）with．
例如：
measurestosolveit.
6．表示变化
1）Somechangeshavetakenplaceinthepastfiveyears．
例如：
Somechangeshavetakenplaceinpeople’sdietinthepastfiveyears．Themajorreasonsforthesechangesarenotfarto
seek．Nowadays，moreandmorepeopleareswitchingfromgraintomeatforprotein，andfromfruitandvegetabletomilk
forvitamins．
7．表示事实、现状
1）Wecannotignorethefactthat．．．
2）Noonecandenythefactthat．．．
3）Thereisnodenyingthefactthat．．．
4）Thisisaphenomenonthatmanypeopleareinterestedin．
5）However，that’snotthecase．
例如：
Wecannotignorethefactthatindustrializationbringswithittheproblemsofpollution．Tosolvetheseproblems，we
canstartbyeducatingthepublicaboutthehazardsofpollution．Thegovernmentonitspartshouldalsodesignstricter
lawstopromoteacleanerenvironment．
8．表示比较
1）ComparedwithA，
B．．．
2）IprefertoreadratherthanwatchTV．
3）Thereisastrikingcontrastbetweenthem．
例如：
Comparedwithcars，bicycleshaveseveraladvantagesbesidesbeingaffordable．Firstly，theydonotconsumenatural
resourcesofpetroleum．Secondly，theydonotcausethepollutionproblem．Lastbutnotleast，theycontributetopeople’
shealthbygivingthemduephysicalexercise．
9．表示数量
1）Ithasincreased（decreased）from．．．to．．．
2）Thepopulationinthiscityhasnowincreased（decreased）to800，
000．
spentoneducationhasincreased．
再如：
hoursperweekin2008to20hoursin2009.
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PracticalWritingSamples英语应用文写作范文
1.ALetterofApology道歉信
由于未能及时赴约，给老师写一封道歉信，解释原因请求原谅同时提出希望下一次约会。
Youhavemadeanappointmentwithyourteacher,butfailedtokeepit.Writealettertoyourteacherto
1）Apologizeforyourfailuretokeeptheappointment,
2）Explainyourreasontoyourteacher,and
3）Expressyourwishtomakeanotherappointment.
DearProf.Wang,
I’mwritingtoaskyoutoexcusemefornotbeingabletokeepourappointment.Idoknowthatthisisveryimpolite
andmusthavecausedyoumuchtrouble.
Idoreckonthatatpresentanyexplanationispaleandfutile.HoweverIdonotwantyoutomisunderstandme.Onmy
waytoyouroffice,anoldladysuddenlyfaintedduetoheartattackonthebus.Istoppedataxiandsentherintoa
nearbyhospital.Istayedthereuntilhersoncame,whichspoiledourappointment.
Iamawarethatourappointmentisofimportance.Idohopethatyouwouldbekindenoughtospareyourvaluableto
meetme.
Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.
SincerelyYours
LiMing
2.ALetterofThanks感谢信
生病住院两周，老师和同学过来看望你，为此你给他们写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。
Youhavebeenillandhospitalizedfortwoweeks.Yourteachersandclassmateswenttoseeyou.Writealettertothemto
2）Describeyourfeeling,and
3）Stateyourpresentcondition.
DearTeachersandClassmates,
Firstofall,pleaseallowmetosay“Thankyou”toallofyou.Itisverykindofyoutospareyourvaluabletime
notpoorandlonelyintheworldandinfactIamlivinginaworldoflove,whichhasbroughtmemuchconfidenceand
Thesedays,myconditionhasbeenobviouslyimprovedduetothecarefultreatmentofferedbydoctorsandnurses.
Again,specialthanksgotoallofyou.
SincerelyYours
LiMing
3.ALetterofInvitation邀请信
春节即将来临，你写信邀请外国朋友来中国过春节。
ChineseFestivaltogether.Writealettertohim/herto
1）Expressyourwarminvitationtohim/her,
2）IntroducetheSpringFestival,and
DearBeckham,
SpringFestivalisofmuchimportancetoChinesepeople.IthasalonghistoryandChinesehaveattachedmuchimportance
totheholiday.Tobeexact,theSpringFestivalhasbeenthemostsignificantholiday.TheSpringFestivalistoChinese
whatChristmasistotheWesterners.
traditions.
Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.
SincerelyYours
LiMin
4．ALetterofSuggestion建议信
给北京市市长王岐山写信，希望自己能成为2008年奥运会的志愿者，同时提出自己的看法。
WritealattertoWangQishan,mayorofthecapitalcity,to
1）Makesuggestionsforthe2008preparationwork,
2）Expressyourwishtobeavolunteer.
DearWangQishan,
AthensOlympicGames,Icannothelpwritingtoyou.
Firstofall,hereismysuggestionforthepreparationworkofthe2008BeijingOlympicGames.Theconstructionwork
mustfinishourpreparationworkwellandintime.
Lastbutnotleastimportant,Iwanttoexpressmywishtobeavolunteer.Inthefirstplace,itisthedutyofevery
speakEnglish,Russian,andJapanese.ThereforeIcanbeaqualifiedvolunteer.
Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply
SincerelyYours
LiMing
5．ALetterofComplaint投诉信
你新买的电脑出了问题，为此你写信给经理投诉。
yougotitback.Writealettertothemanager:
2）Describingtheproblems,
Dearmanager,
There’ssomethingwrongwithit.Thatmakesmeextremelyunhappy.
thatthemachinegivesnoresponse.AndI'msoannoyedwithit.
It'sobviousthatyoudidn’t'carefullyexaminethemachinebeforeyousoldit.Ithinkyourstoreshouldtakefull
responsibilityforsellingmethedefectivemachine.Iinsistthatyougivemeasatisfactoryreply.Idowantyoutogive
backmymoneyassoonaspossible.
Sincerelyyours,
Tom
6．ALetterofJobApplication求职信
假如你马上要毕业了，现给一个公司的人力资源经理写一封求职信。
Youwillgraduatefromuniversityandarehuntingforajob.Afterreadingajobads,writealettertothePersonnel
ResourcesDepartmentto
1）Stateyourreasontowritetheapplication,
2）describeyourrelevanteducationbackground,
3）IntroduceyourEnglishlevel,and
4）Stateyourwayofcontact.
DearSir/Madam,
IamrespondingtoyouradintheJune20th,2005,issueoftheSundayTalentJournalforthepositionofproduction
coordinator.Ifeelthatmybackgroundinelectronicsandmanufacturingwillfitinwell.IwillgraduatefromtheBeijingScience&TechnologyUniversityinJunewithaBachelorofSciencedegreein
IpassedCET-6in2004.NotonlydoIpaymuchatten
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