英语考前冲刺Ⅳ专题26 短文改错.docx

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英语考前冲刺Ⅳ专题26短文改错

1.下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：

在缺词处加一个漏词符号【∧】，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线【﹨】划掉。

修改：

在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。

【2012.02·桐乡模拟】ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andsoIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:

beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.

Rosewantedajob.Shewenttomanyofficesandshedidn’tlikeanyofthem.Onedayshesawaboardinanofficeread:

“Thisofficeneedsatypistwhomcantype200wordsaminute.”Rosewasexciting.WhenRosewenttothemanager’soffice,themanwaswritingsomething.Roseknockedatthedoorandthemanagerraisedherhead.“Doyouneedatypist?

”askedRose.“Yes!

”hesaid.Roseclappedherhand.Shecouldn’thelpsaying,“OK!

Howmuchwillyoupayformeeverymonth?

”Themanagerthoughtforawhileandsaid,“Iwillpayyou77dollarsforfirstthreemonths.ThenIwillpayyou30dollarseverymonth.”Rosesmiledandanswer,“Great!

Iwillcomeandworkherethreemonthslate.”Themanagerwasspeechless.

V.短文改错:

Rosewantedajob.Shewenttomanyofficesandshedidn’tlikeanyofthem.

but

Onedayshesawaboardinanofficeread:

“Thisofficeneedsatypistwhomcan

readingwho

type200wordsaminute.”Rosewasexciting.WhenRosewenttothemanager’soffice,

excited

themanwaswritingsomething.Roseknockedatthedoorandthemanagerraised

herhead.“Doyouneedatypist?

”askedRose.“Yes!

”hesaid.Roseclappedherhand.

hishands

Shecouldn’thelpsaying,“OK!

Howmuchwillyoupayformeeverymonth?

”The

managerthoughtforawhileandsaid,“Iwillpayyou77dollarsfor∧firstthree

the

months.ThenIwillpayyou30dollarseverymonth.”Rosesmiledandanswer,“Great!

answered

Iwillcomeandworkherethreemonthslate.”Themanagerwasspeechless.

later

3.

【2012·宝鸡一次质检】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写

toldmehismotherwasillbuthehadtogetsomemedicineforher．Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness．Movedbyhisword,Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongwasnamed"Mother"forthestudents．Fromthenon,Ibegantorealizeweshouldrespectourparentsanddidourbesttohelpthem．Doyouthinkso?

I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply．

4.

【2012·西安一次质检】Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasgoodtripattebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendsuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandbecouldn’tmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewwhattodoit.Onegirltriedtocallhermuminhermobilepone,buttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestedinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedrinksomewater,andatesomefood.Afterwhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain.

5.

【2012.02·桐乡模拟】你的同学刘芳乐于助人（helpful），积极乐观（positive）。

她在上星期日下午回校途中帮助了一位受伤的老人。

请根据题示，用英语写一篇短文向英语报EnglishTimes投稿，简要叙述她做好事的经过，并谈谈你的感想。

Whathappened

·anoldmanseriouslyhurtintheleg

·whatLiuFangdid

Youropinion

·misunderstandingoreventrouble,ortherightthing?

·…

Nowadays,alotofpeoplearereportedlyunwillingtohelpothers.However,LiuFangacteddifferently.____________________________________________________________________

6.

【2012西安五校一模】Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.Ihavebeenlookingforwardatrelaxingmyself.I’dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveralmovie.IthinkIcanplaythebasketballwithmyclassmates.HowawonderfultimeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!

However,myparentsthinkdifferent.Theydon’twantmegoout.TheyareafraidI’llbeknockeddownbyatruck,fallenoffatree,orfightwithothers.Besides,theyareafraidIwilllosemyway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,soIwilltrytopersuadethem.

Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.Ihavebeenlookingforwardat

makesto

relaxingmyself.I’dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveralmovie.IthinkIcanplay

movies

thebasketballwithmyclassmates.HowawonderfultimeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!

theWhat

However,myparentsthinkdifferent.Theydon’twantme∧goout.TheyareafraidI’llbe

differentlyto

knockeddownbyatruck,fallenoffatree,orfightwithothers.Besides,theyareafraidIwilllose

fall

myway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,soIwilltryto

keptso

persuadethem.

7.【2012辽宁重点中学协作体期末】

OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavingan

environmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.They

pickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Under

theirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,they

feltabitofpitybutverydelightfulIthinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthe

publictoshowrespectsforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwe

getalongwellwithit.

【答案】

OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavingan

were

environmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.They

caught

pickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Under

upmight/could

theirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,they

feltabitofpitybutverydelightfulIthinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthe

去掉ofdelightedthem

publictoshowrespectsforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwe

去掉theinwhich/that/去掉

getalongwellwithit.

8.

【2012郑州预测】

OurEnglishteacherisamiddle-agedwoman，whohadbeenteachingEnglishformorethan20years．Sheisalwaysworkinghard．Foramodelteacherformanyyears，sheiskindandfriendlytousandverystrictwithus.Inclass，shealwaysencouragesusspeakandreadEnglishasmuchaspossible．Sheisquitegoodatteachingandtrytomakeherlessonsliveandinteresting．InherspareSheIntime，sheoftenteachesusEnglishsongandhelpsustoputonEnglishshortplays．Shelovesusso10muchassheisalwaysreadytohelpus．Inthefact，sheis

9.

【2012·南阳期终】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：

在缺词处加上一个漏词符号【∧】，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线【＼】划掉。

修改：

在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。

ThedayismyDad’sbirthday.ThisafternoonIwenttotheshoppingcenterdowntown,andboughtpresentforhim.ThenItookthesubwaytraintohome.Sittingonthetrain,Ithoughtmydadwillbeveryhappywhenshesawthepresent.Atthenextstation,anoldladywithtwoheavybaggotintothetrainandstoodinfrontofme.Shelookedtiring.Ihesitatedforamoment,andthenofferedmyseattoher.Theoldladythankedmealotandsatdown.Seenhersmile,Ifelthappily.Iwillalwaysreadytohelpothersinthefuture.

第二句present前加a；第三句home前的to去掉；第四句will改为would,she改为he;第五句bag改为bags,into改为on;第六句tiring改为tired;第九句Seen改为Seeing,happily改为happy;第十句always后加be

10．

【2012·银川一中模拟】IjustcomebackfromBritainlastweek.IwasluckilyenoughtobeoneofthestudentfromdifferentcountriestovisittheUKfromFeb.16to28.Wepaidavisittomanyplaces,likeLondon,OxfordortheLakeDistrict.IlearnedmuchaboutBritishcultureandhistoryinLondon,wherewasmyfavorite.IalsolikedOxford,inwhichIsawmuchmoreoldbuildings.TheLakeDistrictwasbeautiful,butitwaspitythatitrainedheavilywhentheywerethere.ThemostexcitedthingformeintheBritainwasthatImadealotoffriendsthere.

11.

【2012陕西澄城期末】Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcerningabouttheirhealth,buthowtokeephealth?

First,

itisnecessarytotakeanyexerciseeveryday．Researchshowsthatgetplentyofexercisemakes

theheartbeatfastandthelungsworkharder．Second,eatmorefruits,vegetableandlessmeat．

Third,gettingridofbadhabitsassmokinganddrinkingisalsoimportantwaytokeephealthy．

Smokingandalcoholdrinkinginjuresone’shealthagreatdeal,andthereforeshouldbegivenup．

Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,they’llgreatimprovetheirhealth．

【参考答案】

第一句中的concerning改为concerned，考察词组beconcernedaboutsb．/sth．关心、挂念某人/某事；health改为healthy，因为keep为连系动词，后面要跟形容词。

第二句中any改为some，any一般用于疑问句或否定句中，在肯定句中意为“任何”。

第三句中get改为getting，在句中作宾语从句的主语；fast改为faster，与harder保持一致。

第四句中改为vegetables，这是可数名词

第五句中as改为like，as作介词用意为“作为，当……时候”，like作介词用意为“像，比如，诸如……之类”；important前加an，因为way是可数名词。

第六句中injures改为injure，smokingandalcoholdrinking为并列主语，动词要用复数。

第七句中great改为greatly，修饰动词improve要使用副词。

12.

【2012杭州十四中期中】OnedayTomandIwerewalkingdownthestreetwhilewesawanoldmanfalloffhisbike.Hewasbadlyhurt.Manypeoplecrowdedaroundus.Someonesuggestedcarryingtheoldmantotheroadside,soTomdisagreed.Hehaslearnedfirstaid.Hesaidthattheyoughttoleavehimwherehewasandcheckedhimfirst.Atth