届高三江苏新高考英语分项汇编1书面表达读后续写解析word版.docx

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届高三江苏新高考英语分项汇编1书面表达读后续写解析word版

2021届高三江苏好题速递分项汇编

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书面表达--读后续写

【2021届江苏省南京市高三学情调研】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Albertwasmadaboutcomputergames.Hecouldspendhoursandhoursinfrontofthescreen,andeventhoughhisparentsfoundithardtobelieve,hereallyenjoyedeveryminuteofit.Hehardlylefthisseat.Whenpeopleencouragedhimtogetinvolvedwithnormallife,hewouldrespond:

"Thisismydoorwaytotheworld,thereismuchmoreherethanyourealize."

Amongallhisgamestherewasoneheespeciallyliked.Inithewouldmoveacharacteraround,collectingturtles（乌龟）onaninfinity（无限）oflevelsandscreens.Hewasarealexpertatit.Maybetherewasnooneelseintheworldwhohadcollectedasmanyturtlesashehad,but,nevertheless,Albertstillwantedmoreandmoreandmore...

Oneday,whenhegothomefromschool,everythinghadchanged.Asusual,assoonashearrived,herantohisroomtoswitchthecomputeron.Butthistimeheheardsomestrangenoises,likebreakingglass.Suddenlythescreenbroke,andfrominsidecamedozens,thenhundreds,thenthousandsoflittleturtles.Andtheyfilledeverysquareinchofhisbedroom.Albertwasastonished.Hecouldn'tbelievewhatwashappening.Butafterpinching（掐）himself,heshutdownandstartedthecomputerupmanytimes,andcalledtohisparentstoseeifhewasdreamingaboutthis.Asithappens,hehadtoacceptthatonthatdaysomethingverystrangewashappening.

Onentering,hisparentsputtheirheadsintheirhands.SeeingthattheturtleswerestayinginAlbert'sroom,theydecidedtomakethemhisresponsibility.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Lookingafterthousandsofturtles,dayafterday,wasnoeasytask.

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WhenAlbertforgotabouthisbelovedcomputergames,theturtlesdisappeared.

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【答案】

Lookingafterthousandsofturtles,dayafterday,wasnoeasytask.Everydayafterschool,Albertwouldrushtotheturtletankandmadesureeveryoneofthemwasproperlyfedandcarefullyattended.Sometimes,afewnaughtylittleoneswouldcreepoutandleavetheirdroppingshitherandthither,whichmeantextracleaningandtamingfromAlbert'sside.Hewas,tosomeextent,afeeder,tamer,guardianandmentorforthebigturtlefamily.WhenalltheseresponsibilitiesweigheddownheavilyonAlbert’sfeebleshoulder,hecouldnolongersqueezetimeongames,whichhehadhelddearforlife.

WhenAlbertforgotabouthisbelovedcomputergames,theturtlesdisappeared.Almostovernight,Albertregainedhisliberty,whichmeanthecouldimmediatelyre-plungeintothecolorfulvirtualworld.However,thistime,theinternetlostallitscharmandAlbertjustwouldn'topenthemonitor.Instead,hekeptreminiscingaboutthegoodolddayswiththeturtletribeandclaimedtakingcareofrealturtleswasthebestdayseverinhislife.Obviously,thisunforgettableexperiencetaughtAlbertaninvaluablelesson:

reallifeexistsinreality,notonline.

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知，这篇读后续写讲了一个网瘾少年喜爱收集乌龟，当活的乌龟真正来到他的生活时，又会发生什么呢？

从给出来的2句话，我们可以推断出少年应该每天都在花大量的时间照顾这么多的乌龟，以致于没有时间再去玩游戏，当他忘记游戏时，乌龟们便消失了，同时少年也领悟到了真正生活的美好并不是在网络，而是在实际生活中，于是少年开始戒除网瘾，开始回归正常生活。

文章的主题应该是远离网络，回归正常生活。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：

日复一日地照顾成千上万只海龟并非易事。

所以后文应该是讲述Albert是如何照顾这些海龟的。

Albert每天都需要花很多时间和精力去喂养，清理乌龟的便便，给乌龟换水，打扫和整理房间等等琐碎的活儿。

Albert如此之忙碌以致于他完全没有时间上网，有时候网瘾又上来了，可是听到实体乌龟在召唤Albert要吃的，他又投身到喂养乌龟的任务中去了；第二段开头是：

当Albert忘记了他心爱的电脑游戏时，海龟们就消失了。

本段应该写Albert开始体会到真实生活也有很多美好，开始戒掉网瘾，回归正常生活。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。

如：

rushto，makesure，takecareof等高级词汇；Sometimes,afewnaughtylittleoneswouldcreepoutandleavetheirdroppingshitherandthither,whichmeantextracleaningandtamingfromAlbert'sside.非限制性定语从句等高级句式。

【2021届江苏省徐州市第一中学新高考全国卷第一次适应性考试】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

IhadbeenswimmingcompetitivelyforfiveyearsandwasreadytoquitbecauseIfeltIwashorribleatit.IwasoftentheonlyAfricanAmericanataswimmingcompetition.Ikeptreceiving“HonourableMentions”.Anyathleteknowsthatyoudon’twanttohaveabookshelffullof“HonourableMentions”,whichyougetjustbecauseyoushowedup.

Onesummerday,thedaybeforeabigswimmeet,IdecidedtobreakthenewstomygrandmathatIwasquittingtheswimteam.WhenItoldherofmydesiretoquitswimming,shelookedmeintomyface,sayingfirmlybutwarmly,“Baby,rememberthesewords‘Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.’Yourgrandmotherdidn’traiselosersorquitters.Yougotothatmeettomorrow,andyouswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine,youhear?

”Iwastooafraidtosayanythingbut“Yes,ma’am.”

Thenextdaywearrivedattheswimmeetlate,missingmygroupofswimmersinthe15/16agegroup.MycoachinsistedIbeallowedtoswimwiththeoldergroup.Iknewshewasincludingmeintheracesoourlongdrivewouldnotbewasted,andshehadnoexpectationswhatsoeverthatIwouldcomeinanythingbuteighthplaceandonlythatbecausetherewerenotninelanes.

AsIwasmountingtheboard,alltheothergirlslookedatme.Iquicklynoticedthatthesegirlswereheretodoonething—beatme!

Allofasuddenmygrandma’swordsranginmyhead：

“Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.Youswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine.Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit...”“Yes,grandma,IwillswimlikeIamagrandchildofyours,”Isaidtomyself.

Paragraph1：

SPLASH!

IwasswimmingharderthanI’deverswumbefore.

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Paragraph2：

Justthen,cheersandclapsoverwhelmedme.

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【答案】OnePossibleVersion：

SPLASH（扑通一声）!

IwasswimmingharderthanI’deverswumbefore.AsIdrewmyrightarmback,InoticedIwastiedwithoneperson.IassumedwewerebattlingforeighthplaceandIrefusedtofinishdeadlast,soIaddedmorekickonthelast200yards.Ihitthewallandlookedtotheleftandtotherightfortheswimmerswhohadbeatme,butnoonewasthere.Theymusthavegottenoutofthewateralready.

Justthen,cheersandclapsoverwhelmedme.Iraisedmyheadtoseemycoachscreaminghysterically.MyeyesfollowedherpointingfingerandIcouldn’tbelievewhatIsaw.Theotherswimmershadjustreachedthehalfwaypointofthepool!

Thatday,atage15,Ibrokethenational17/18yearold400freestylerecord.Ihungupmyhonourablementionsandreplacedthemwithahugetrophy.“Yes,grandma,you’reright.Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.”

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知，上文讲述了作者已经参加了五年的游泳比赛，准备退出，因为觉得自己很糟糕。

一个夏天的一天，在一个大型游泳比赛的前一天，作者把决定退出游泳队的消息告诉了奶奶，结果奶奶让作者坚持下去。

第二天作者和奶奶来到比赛地点，没有赶上作者15/16岁年龄组的游泳选手。

教练坚持允许作者和年龄大一些的人一起游泳。

当作者登上跳板时，其他所有的女孩都看着自己。

作者很快注意到这些女孩是来做一件事的——打败自己！

突然，奶奶的话在作者的脑海里回响：

“放弃者永不成功，胜利者永不放弃。

”

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：

扑通一声！

我游得比以前任何时候都努力。

所以后文应该是讲述作者比赛的经过和心理活动；第二段开头是：

就在那时，欢呼声和掌声淹没了我。

本段应该写作者打破了17/18400自由泳的全国纪录，以及作者获胜后的感想。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。

如：

addon，hysterically，honourable等高级词汇；AsIdrewmyrightarmback,InoticedIwastiedwithoneperson.运用时间状语从句；MyeyesfollowedherpointingfingerandIcouldn’tbelievewhatIsaw.运用宾语从句等高级句式。

【2021届江苏省苏州四市五区高三上学期期初调研英语】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

JustafterNewYear's,beforeschoolvacationended.Iwentoutforawalk.ItwasawalkI’dbeenmeaningtotakeeversincewemovedtothehouse.

Itookmycamera-thefirsttimeI'dtakenmycameraoutsincewecametothecountry-andwent,dressedinmydownjacketandwearingheavyboots.IwalkedtowardtheseeminglyabandonedhousethatIcouldseeacrossthefieldsfromtheupstairswindow.

Atruckwasparkedattheendoftheroad,besideatiny.weather-beatenhouse.Therewassmokecomingoutofthechimney,andcurtainsinthetwolittlewindowsoneithersideofthedoor.Adogwasintheyard,whobarkedwhenhesawmecoming.Andbesidethetruck-no,actuallyinthetruck,oratleastwithhisheadinsideit,wasaman.

“Hi,"Icalled.Itwouldhavebeensillytoturnaroundandstartwalkinghomewithoutsayinganything,eventhoughI'vepromisedmyparentsallmylifethatIwouldnevertalktostrangemen.

Heliftedouthishead,agrayhead,smiled-anicesmile-andsaid,"MissChalmers.I'mgladyou'vecometovisit."

“Meg,"Isaid.Iwaspuzzled.HowdidheknowwhoIwas?

＂ForMargaret?

"heasked,comingoverandshakingmyhand."Forgiveme.Myhandsareverydirty.Mybatterydiesinthiscoldweather."

＂HowdidyouknowmynamewasChalmers?

"

Hewipedhishandsonatowelthatwashangingfromthedoorhandleofthetruck."Mydear,Iapologize.Ihavenotevenintroducedmyself.MynameisWillBanks.Andit'smuchtoocoldtostandouthere.Yourfeetmustbefrozen,eveninthoseboots.Comeinside,andI'llmakeuseachacupoftea.AndI'lltellyouhowIknowyourname.”

Istoodunmoved.Hesawmehesitate,andsmiled."Meg,"hesaid,“I'mseventyyearsold.Completelyharmless,eventoabeautifulyounggirllikeyou.Comeoninandkeepmecompanyforabit,andgetwarm."

Ilaughed,becauseheknewwhatIwasthinking,andveryfewpeopleeverkno