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1）a.Inmanycountries,moreandmorewomenareactingasworkers,farmers,scientistsandevenleaders.

b.Inmanycountries,moreandmorewomenarenowworkers,farmers,scientistsandevenleaders.

2）a.Itrippedonthewaytowardthepark,breathingthefreshairandfeelingextremelyhappy.

b.Istrolledonthewaytowardthepark,breathingthefreshairandfeelingextremelyhappy.

3）a.Ifnotcontrolled,thepopulationoftheworldwillamountto7,000millionin2000ascanbeseenfromthegraph.

b.Ifnotcontrolled,thepopulationoftheworldwillreach7,000millionin2000ascanbeseenfromthegraph.

4）a.Theycancleantheair,beautifythecity,developagoodclimateandweakennoise.

b.Theycancleantheair,beautifythecity,developahealthyclimateandreducenoise.

5）a.Andit’salsoeveryone’sobligationtopreservetrees.

b.Andit’salsoeveryone’sobligationtoprotecttrees.

6）a.Inthemeantime,Idon’tthinkdevelopingtotheundergroundwillhelpsolvetheproblem.

b.Inthemeantime,Idon’tthinkdevelopingtheundergroundwillhelpsolvetheproblem.

7）a.Aroadwhichcanonlyholdtwocarssidebysidecanallowmorethantenbicycles.

b.Aroadwhichcanonlyallowtwocarstopassmayallowmorethantenbicyclestorunsidebyside.

8）a.ManythingsaretobedonetomakecarspopularinChina.

b.ManythingsmustchangebeforecarsbecamecommoninChina.

9）a.Withthedevelopmentofoursociety,peoplearebecomingricherandricher,whichenablesthemtogetmorenutritiousfoodsuchasmeatandmilk.

b.Withthedevelopmentofoursociety,peoplearebecomingricherandricher,whichenablesthemtobuymorenutritiousfoodsuchasmeatandmilk.

10）a.Whatpeopleconcernisthequantityoffood,notitsquality.

b.Whatconcernedpeopleisthequantityoffood,notitsquality.

11）a.Milkandmeathavehighproteincontentandasfruitandvegetablesarevitamincontentingandtheycankeepfit.

b.Milkandmeathavehighproteincontentandasfruitandvegetablesarevitaminrichandtheycankeeppeoplefit.

12）a.Nowpeoplearenotsticktothequantityforthefoodisabundantandpeoplecangetenoughfoodtheywant.

b.Nowpeople’sattentionisnotfocusedonthequantityforthefoodisabundantandpeoplecangetallthefoodtheywant.

13）a.Wecandrawsomeconclusionsaccordingtothestatistics.

b.Wecandrawsomeconclusionsfrom/basedonthestatistics.

14）a.Thegrainhasalwaysactedasthemainfood,whilemilkandmeattakeupthesmallerproportion.

b.Thegrainhasalwaysservedasthemainfood,whilemilkandmeattakeupthesmallerproportion.

15）a.Thereasonforthedecreaseofcaraccidentsinthecityisthatthetrafficconditionhasbeendeveloped.

b.Thereasonforthedecreaseofcaraccidentsinthecityisthatthetrafficconditionhasbeenimproved.

16）a.Butsportscandoharmtothosepeoplewhocannotplantheiractivitiesproperly.

b.Butsportscandoharmtothosepeoplewhocannotbalancetheiractivitiesproperly.

17）a.Whiletakingpartinsports,peoplecanstrengthentheirmuscles,quickentheirspeedofresponseandincreasetheirabilityofresistingdiseases.

b.Beingactiveinsports,peoplecanstrengthentheirmuscles,increasetheirresponsespeedandbuilduptheirabilitytoresistdiseases.

18）a.Peoplemayhurtthemselvesorotherswhentheyjoininsports,especiallythosewhichareviolent.

b.Peoplemayhurtthemselvesorotherswhentheytakepartinsports,especiallythosewhichareviolent.

19）a.Inhistory,everyscientificandtechnologicalrevolutionledtoanimmensesurgeinsociety,pumpingtheproductiveforcetoahigherlevel.

b.Inhistory,everyscientificandtechnologicalrevolutionledtoanimmensesurgeinsociety,pushingtheproductiveforcetoahigherlevel.

20）a.Socialscienceandnaturalsciencearemixedwitheachothertoday.

b.Socialscienceandnaturalscienceareinseparablefromeachothertoday.

21）a.Anexampleofthisisthatifwemajorinhistoryandtrytodeterminethetimewhenanancientbookwaswritten,wecantakeadvantageofthePEXEtechniquewhichiscommonlyusedinnuclearscience.

b.Anexampleofthisisthatifwemajorinhistoryandtrytodeterminethetimewhenanancientbookwaswritten,wecanusethePEXEtechniquewhichiscommonlyusedinnuclearscience.

22）a.Beingateacherneedsknowledge,patience,skills,etc.

b.Beingateacherrequiresknowledge,patience,skills,etc.

23）a.Nomattertheyareacceptedornot,theinterviewisagoodoccasionforthemtopracticetheirabilityofintroducingthemselvestoothers.

b.Nomatterwhethertheyareacceptedornot,theinterviewisagoodoccasionforthemtopracticetheirabilityofpackagingandsellingthemselves.

24）a.Theinterviewerandtheintervieweecanknowabouteachotherthroughit.

b.Theinterviewerandtheintervieweecanlearnabouteachotherthroughit.

25）a.Itistruethatfirecrackersmakeourfestivalsmoreenjoyable,but,Ithink,wecanthinkoutotherentertainments.

b.Itistruethatfirecrackersmakeourfestivalsmoreenjoyable,but,Ithink,wecanfindoutotherentertainments.

26）a.Andalso,wecanappreciatethesoundoffirecrackersbylisteningtoataperecorderinsteadofsettingthemoff.

b.Andalso,wecanenjoythesoundoffirecrackersbylisteningtoataperecorderinsteadofsettingthemoff.

27）a.Inconclusion,moststudentsstilldon’tknowhowtosparethetimeandmakeitvaluable.

b.Inconclusion,moststudentsstilldon’tknowhowtousethetwo-dayweekendtotheirbestadvantage.

28）a....takeupsomehobbies,suchasfishing,reading,plantingandsoon.

b....takeupsomehobbies,suchasfishing,reading,orgardening.

29）a.Anotherreasonmaybethattheyhavenoconfidenceinpassingthroughthetest.

b.Anotherreasonmaybethattheyhavenoconfidenceinpassingthetest.

30）a.Whenyougraduateyou’llhavemorechancestocontactwithforeigners,soit’snecessaryforthosestudentstogain“excellent”inthetest,not“pass”.

b.Whenyougraduateyou’llhavemorechancestocontactforeigners,soit’snecessaryforthosestudentstogain“excellent”inthetest,not“pass”.

31）a.WhetheryouwillapplyEnglishornotinthefuture,Englishhasundoubtedlybeenthemostimportantlanguageinoursociety.

b.WhetheryouwilluseEnglishornotinthefuture,Englishhasundoubtedlybeenoneofthemostimportantlanguagesinoursociety.

32）a.Itiswidelyknownthatthefreshwaterwillneverbeusedupbecausewecangetitfromtherain,theriversandthewells.

b.Itiswidelyassumedthattheworld’sfreshwatersupplywillneverbeusedupbecausewecangetitfromtherain,riversandwells.

33）a.Ontheotherhand,theinfantmortalitywasabout200deathsper1000birthsin1960andthefigurearrivedat100in1990.

b.Ontheotherhand,theinfantmortalitywasabout200deathsper1000birthsin1960andthefiguredroppedto100in1990.

34）a.Ontheotherhand,theinfantmortalityhasbeendecreasedfromabout200deathsper1000birthsin1960toabout100deathsper1000birthsin1990.

b.Ontheotherhand,theinfantmortalityhasdecreasedfromabout200deathsper1000birthsin1960toabout100deathsper1000birthsin1990.

35）a.Withthemedicalandlivingconditionsdeveloping,thelifeexpectancywillbelongerandtheinfantmortalitywillbelowerinthedevelopingcountriesinthefuture.

b.Withthemedicalandlivingconditionsimproving,thelifeexpectancywillbelongerandtheinfantmortalitywillbelowerinthedevelopingcountriesinthefuture.

36）a.Manystudentscomplainthattorecitesomanywordsisreallyagreatheadachetothem.

b.Manystudentscomplainthattomemorizesomanywordsisreallyagreatheadachetothem.

37）a.Weneedmuchpracticetoobtaintheseabilities.

b.Weneedmuchpracticetoacquiretheseabilities.

38）a.Ifyouemphasizeonlyonspeedbutignorethequalityofyourwork,youwillgettheoppositeeffect.

b.Ifyouemphasizeonlyspeedbutneglectthequalityofyourwork,youwillgettheoppositeeffect.

39）a.Hastemayallowaccidentstotakeplace.

b.Hastemaycauseaccidentstotakeplace.

40）a.Therefore,IwillnothesitateamomentwhenconfrontedwithachancetoknowthesocietyforIhavereallybenefitedalotfromit.

b.Therefore,Iwillnothesitateamomentwhenpresentedwithachancetoknowsociety,forIhavereallybenefitedalotfromit.

41）a.It’sagoodchanceformetogettoknowthesociety,tolearnhowtogetalongwithmycolleaguesandtoseehowmyknowledgeisputintopractice.

b.It’sagoodchanceformetoexperiencetheworkingworld,tolearnhowtogetalongwithmycolleagues,andtoseehowmyknowledgecanbeputintopractice.

42）a.Itwillhelpmetoknowtheworldoutsidethecampusbetter.

b.Itwillhelpmetoexperiencetheworldoutsidethecampusbetter.

43）a.Theyoftensaylikethis:

Takeuponething,likeitandbegoodatit.