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北京高考英语应用文写作
应用文写作
基本要求:
1.明确应用文写作的功能性——流畅性、逻辑性首位,难词难句一两个点睛即可
2.应用文必要的结构(套话)
3.审题:
注意材料的特殊性(例:
故宫…)
4.细节相关度relevantdetails
5.着重体现中国文化的部分
•lettersofcomplaint
A.Opening
Introducingthetopic
1.Iamwritingtoplaceacomplaintagainsttheserviceofyourcompany,concerning
B.Body
describingtheproblem-Strongadjectives:
shocked,disgusted,disappointed,dissatisfied.
1.outofyourwordson
2.Obviously,theproductfailstokeepthepromiseintheadvertisement,whichdisappointsmealot.
C.Body
whatyouwant?
-afull/partialrefund/compensation;areplacement;anapology
1.I’dappreciateitverymuchifyourefundthemoneyI’vepaidorexchangeitforanewone.
2.soIrequirenotonlyaformalapologybutalso
3.Ifmydemandisnotacceptedandputintopractice,IwilltakeactivestepstomakesuretheConsumers'Associationhearaboutit.
D.Endings
1.Ilookforwardtoyourswiftreply.
2.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouatyourearliestconvenience.
3.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouwithoutdelay.
4.Iverymuchhopetohearfromyoushortly
5.Iawaityourpromptreply
•lettersofrequest
A.Opening
Giveabriefself-introduction
Statethepurposeofwriting(Whatkindofrequest)
1.Iamwritingtoformallyrequesttodo…
2.Iamwritingtoaskifyoucandomeafavor
3.Iamwritingtoseekforyourassistancein…
4.Wouldyoubekindenoughto…?
5.Iwouldverymuchliketoaskforyourpermissionwiththislettersoastoallowme…
6.Iwouldbemuchobligedtoyouifyou
7.I'mdeeplyindebtedto
B.Body
Makeyourrequestclearlyandpolitely
Givereasonsofyourrequest
C.Ending
Politeconclusionexpectingafavorablereply
1.Iwouldliketothankyouforyourgeneroushelpinthismatter.
2.Ishallremaingratefultoyouforthegreathelp.
3.Idoappreciatethefavorableconsiderationyouhaveshowntome.
4.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.
•lettersofsuggestion
A.Opening
Self-introduction
thepurposeofwriting
1.Iamwritingwithmysuggestionproposalabout…
2.IamwritingtopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementof
3.youshouldn'tbesoworriedabouttheproblemyou'refacing,forIhavesometipsforyouto
4.Youhaveaskedmyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.
5.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…
6.I'mheretoinformyousomedetailsconcerningthecomingbigday.
7.Ihighlyrecommendyouto...
B.Body
Givesuggestionsoradvice
1.Itwouldseemtomethatyoucould…
2.therearemeritsanddemeritsoftheserviceof
3.propermeasuresshouldbetakento
4.thisisamatteroftheutmostimportance
5.tracethecauseof...,themainpointsareasfollowed/sth.waseventuallytracedto
6.onthisaccount,itisbestto
7.conditionspermitting,youcan...
8....putusinaworryof...
9....becomeone'sbiggestconcern
10.anoptimisticattitude\approachtowards
11.it'shightimethatwewere/did
12.Asyoumayagreethat…
C.Ending
Sumupyoursuggestions.
1.asamatteroffact,Itrulyappreciateyourpassionfor...andhopemysuggestioncanbeofsomevaluetoyou.
2.abovemyheartfeltsuggestions
3.Itrustyouwilltakemysuggestionintoaccount.
4.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.
5.Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismattertofurtherdetails.
•lettersofapplication
A.说明写信目的
3.Iamwritingtoapplyforthepostofadvertisedin
4.IfeltitwasjustthekindofpostforwhichIhavethequalificationsandforwhichIhavebeenlookingforsometime
5.onhearingthatyou'reinshortageof…,I'mwritingtoapplyforit
6.Iwouldbeinterestedinexploringthepossibilityofobtainingsuchapositionwithinyourfirm.
7.Ihavereadtheannualprospectusissuedbyyouruniversityandfoundthatithasthebestgraduateprogramofchemistry.Iamgreatlyinterestedintheprogram.
8.ImmediatelyIsawyouradvertisementinthepaperfor…IfeltitwasjustthekindofpostforwhichIhavethequalificationsandforwhichIhavebeenlookingforsometime.
B.介绍详情
思路:
经历→对你造成的影响→在所申请的工作的优势
材料的顺序——相关度越高越靠前写
注意:
不要提到broadenthehorizon等对自己的好处
应聘工作类
1.IthinkI'mamorethandecentchoiceforthejob,forIhaveeverythingitrequires:
motivation,experienceandskills.
2.Extra-curricularactivities….whichhavedefinitelycontributedtotheimprovementofmysocialskills
3.WhichprovesthatIhaveallthecompetencetodo…
4.…neverlosesitsappealtome
5.bornwithanoutgoingcharacter
6.Ipossessastrongabilitytoadapttonewenvironment
7.longfor
8.wellknowingthatamancanneverachievehisgoalwithoutothers'help,Ialwayscooperatewithmyteammatesinextracurricularactivities.
9.Ifeelthatmyqualificationisideallysuitedfortherequirements.
10.Iwilltrymyutmosttobuildabridgeoffriendshipbetween
11.byvirtueofthisexperience
12.eagertointroducethesplendidChineseculturetoforeignguests
13.whichmakesmewelluptothetaskof…
14.whichgivesmeanedgeonoralEnglish
申请学位类
1.Mymajorinterestare…,andIunderstandyouuniversityhasagoodprograminthosefields.
2.UndertheinfluenceofthecoursesIhavetaken,Ihavedevelopedasocialinterestin…
C.恳请招聘单位考虑自己的申请,表示谢意,期望回复
1.Ihopethatyoucantakemyqualificationsintoconsideration,andIcanneverappreciateitmoreifIcangetthechance
2.IdohopemyapplicationcouldbeinyourseriousconsiderationforI
3.Ifyouwouldlikemetoattendaninterview,Iwouldbeabletocomeatanytimeconvenienttoyou
4.Iwouldbemostobligedifyoucouldgivemethisgoldenopportunity
5.Iyearnfor…
6.Shouldyouthinkfavorablyofmyapplication,pleasekindlyoffermeachance.
7.IhopeImaybegrantedaninterview,whenIcanexplainmyqualificationsmorefully.
•lettersofintroduction
A.Opening
Giveabriefself-introduction;
Statethepurposeofwriting
1.Iamwritingtoyouinconnectionwith…programs
2.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldsendmefurtherinformationaboutthem.
3.Iamwritingtoyouwithreferenceto…
4.Iwasveryinterestedtoseeyouradvertisementin….
B.Body
Backgroundandreasonsofinquiry;
Detailsofyourinquiry
1.Iamparticularlyinterestedin…
2.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucould(would)sendme….?
3.Could(Would)youpleasegivemedetailsof…?
4.Iwouldliketoknow…..
C.Ending
Politeconclusion,expressingappreciationofthereceiver’stimeandconsideration.
Aimtogaincooperationfromthereceiversandattainaquickresponse.
Tellhowtocontactyou.
1.Foryourconvenience,youcanrespondtomebyemailandmyaddressis
2.Iappreciateanyassistancethatyouareabletoprovideme.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
•lettersofgratitude
A.总起
写信目的,简略的感谢
9.Onbehalfof…,Iwouldliketoexpressmysinceregreetingsandheartfeltthanksto
10.IfeelIcannotlettheoccasionpasswithoutwritingawordofthanksforyour
11.Iamnowwritingthesefewlinestoexpressmysinceregratitudefortheguidanceyougaveme.
12.Wearewritingthislettertoexpressoursinceregratitudetowardsyourunconditionalkindnessandcompassiondisplayedlast…
B.具体感谢内容
对对方的馈赠、帮助、关心和邀请等表示由衷的感谢
说明对方的馈赠、帮助、关心和邀请等所起的作用和对自己的意义
C.结尾
再次表达感谢
表示希望日后有机会答谢对方
1.Weagainappreciateeveryone’sefforts. Wishyouahappyholiday,happyfamily,goodhealth,prosperouscareerandeverlastinghappiness!
2.Pleaseacceptourearnestappreciationandthankfulnessoncemorefordisplayingsuchbenevolenceandcamaraderietowardsstudentsofyours.
3.Ithankyouagainforallthewonderfulworkyouhavedoneandwishyouallthebestforyourfutureendeavors.
•Lettersofcongratulations
A.Opening
Tellthepurposeofwritingtheletter.
Statetheexactachievementyouarereferencingandindicatehowyouheardofthegoodnews.
1.I was thrilled to hear the news that …
2. It's the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.
3.I offer my heartiest congratulations on your promotion.
4.Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationsonyourgraduation.
5.Wordsreallyfailtoexpressmyjoyatthenewsof
B.Body
Congratulatethereceiverfortheworkdoneandexpressyourhappinessforhim.
Praisetheachievements;alsodiscussthesignificanceoftheachievement.
1.I know clearly that how talentedyou are and how selflessly you havededicated yourself to your work toattach this goal.
2.All of your hard work has finally paid off!
3. It's been a real encouragement to me to witnessyour efforts rewarded.
4.Noonecandenythefactthat
5.Owingtoyourqualityofleadershipandgoodcharacter
C.Ending
Endyourletterwithacongratulatorynoteandgoodwishes.
13.Atthesametime,Iamextremelyconfidentthatyourfuturewillbemorebrilliantandyouwillobtainwhatyouwantnaturally.
14.Againcongratulationsfromallofushere.Yourpromotionisrichlydeserved.
•lettersofinvitation
要点:
点明邀请的时间、地点、场合
特点:
简短热情,形式灵活
15.wewouldbemorethangladifyoucancomeandfollowingsaresomedetailsattached.
16.we'reallawareofthefactthatyouareverybusythesedays.still,wearereallylookingforwardtoyourparticipatinginthiscontest,forwe'resurethatyourarrivalwilladdgreatpleasuretotheday
17.asregardsto...,Ihavethesensethatyou'llbeboundtogetcapturedbythebreathtakingsceneryinsuchasplendidspring.itcanbeafeasttoyoureyestoappreciatethecrystal-blueskyandthenewgreengrass.
18.don'thesitatetobeengagedinthistripopentoyou.
19.yourcomingwillsurelymakeadifference.
20.Pleaseletmeknowassoonaspossibleifyoucancomeandtellmewhenyouwillbeabletodoso.
•lettersofapology
A.Opening
Sincereapologyforwhatyouhavedoneorwhatyoufailtofulfill.
Sincereandhumbleapologyforyourt