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ThisparticulardaybeganatseveninthemorninginCasablanca（卡萨布兰卡）.MyfriendMikeandIweregoingtovisitAbdel,ayoungmanwe'

dworkedwithonavolunteerprojectinKenitra,anindustrialcityontheMoroccan（摩洛哥）coast.He'

dbeenexceptingustoarriveinCasablancaforafewdaysnow,andsincehehadnotelephone,he'

dwrittendownhisaddressandnameandtoldustojustshowup—hismotherandsisterwerealwaysathome.

Apparentlytheaddresshehadwrittendownwashardforforeignerslikeustounderstand.Whenwegotintotheneighborhood,ourtaxidriverstartedaskingdirections.Eventually,withthehelpofapoliceman,wewereledtoahousedownawindingroad.Ourdriverwenttothedoorandinquired.HecamebacksayingAbdel'

ssisterwasinthishousevisitingfriendsandwouldcomealongtoshowuswheretheylived.

Soonagirlofaboutsixteenemergedfromthehouse.Surprisingly,shedidn'

tlooklikeAbdelatall.Sill,I'

dseenotherfamilieswherechildrendidn'

tlookalike,soIdidn'

tgiveittoomuchthought.Shethenbroughtustoayard.Wewaitedintheyardwhilethesisterwentinandreturnedaccompaniedbyhermother,sistersandbrother-in-law,allofwhomgreeteduswithcautiouswarmth.Wewereshownintothelivingroom.ThemothertoldusinbrokenFrenchthatAbdelwasout,butwouldbehomesoon.Wesatonlow,cushionedseats,drinkingsweetmintteaandeatingsugarcookies,whilethefamilymemberssatwithusandmadeshy,politeconversationthatfrequentlyfellintouncomfortablesilence.

Anhourpassed,morefamilymembersemergedfrominnerrooms.Iwasagainstruckbythefactthatnoneofthemlookedathinglikeourfriend.

AfteranothertwohourshadpassedwithnosignofAbdel,thefamilyinsistedonservingusamealintheirkitchennextdoor.“Soon,”wastheonlyresponseIgotwhenIinquiredastowhattimeAbdelmightcomeback.

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Finallyweheardthewordswehadbeenwaitingforfromthemother,“please,Abdelisbackinthelivingroom.”

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WhenItookoutthepieceofpaperAbdelhadgivenmeinKenitraandshowedittothenewAbdel.

高分作文：

Finallyweheardthewordswehadbeenwaitingforfromthemother,“please,Abdelisbackinthelivingroom.”Soon,inpoppedayoungmanwearingablueplaidshirt.1Muchtoourshock,however,hewasnotourdearfriendAbdel,butanotheryoungmanwhohappenedto1sharethesamename!

WhenMikeandIexplainedthewholestorytothenewAbdel,hewasnotintheleastembarrassed1.Instead,heinquiredinthesamebrokenFrench1,“Isthereanyaddressprovidedbyyourfriend?

”

WhenItookoutthepieceofpaperAbdelhadgivenmeinKenitraandshowedittothenewAbdel.Winkingmischievously2,hetoldusthatourfriendhadmisspelledtheletterLforI3.Nowonder2peoplewouldmistakeitforanotheraddress.Havingcorrectedthewordforus,thenewAbdelandhisfamilyservedusarichMoroccanfeast4,whichweenjoyedinamerry3andjoyfulatmosphere.Itwas5:

00p.m.whenwefoundtherealAbdelbythenewaddress2.Aswesharedhimthewholestory,hejokedthatatwinbrotherofthesamenamemiraculouslyledustohim5.3Whatapleasantserendipitywehadinthishospitablecountry!

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一、动作

1.happento发生于；

偶然发生

2.Winkingmischievously调皮地眨眼

3.misspelltheletterLforI把L错拼成了I

4.servedusarichMoroccanfeast为我们提供了一顿摩洛哥盛宴

5.miraculouslyledustohim奇迹般地把我们引向他

二、心理

1.notintheleastembarrassed一点也不尴尬

三、固定搭配/专有名词

1.brokenFrench蹩脚的法语

2.Nowonder难怪，怪不得

3.inamerryandjoyousatmosphere在欢乐的氛围里。

四、高分（语法）句型

1.Soon,inpoppedayoungmanwearingablueplaidshirt.

很快，一个穿着蓝色格子衬衫的年轻人突然冒出来。

2.Itwas5:

00p.m.whenwefoundtherealAbdelbythenewaddress

下午5:

00当我们通过新地址找到真正的Abdel时

3.hejokedthatatwinbrotherofthesamenamemiraculouslyledustohim.

他开玩笑说一个同名的双胞胎兄弟奇迹般地把我们引向了他。

4.Whatapleasantserendipitywehadinthishospitablecountry!

在这个好客的国家，我们有多么愉快的意外经历！

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StephenCranewastravelingfromtheUnitedStatestoCubaasanewspaperreporter.Onenight,

hisshiphitasandbarandsankintheAtlanticOcean,offthecoastofFlorida.Mostofthepeopleonboardgotintolifeboats.StephenCranewasamongthelasttoleavewiththreeothers:

theship'

scaptain,thecookandasailornamedBillie.

Thesefourmenclimbedintotheonlyremaininglifeboatwhichwassosmallthatnoonebelieveditcouldfloatverylongbeforetheywouldeverreachtheshore.Butthemenfoughttheseasbravely,withalltheirstrength.

ThesmalllifeboatbouncedfromwavetowaveintheroughseasoftheAtlantic.Thefourmenintheboatcouldn'

tseethesky.Thewavesrosetoohighandpushedtheopenboatviolently.Everymanthoughteachwavewouldbehislast.Thewaveswerehuge,andeachcreatedaprobleminguidingthedirectionoftheboat.

Fortwodays,sincetheshipsank,thefourmenhadbeenstrugglingtoreachland,buttherewasnolandtobeseen.Theboathadonlytwowoodenoars（船桨）.Billiedirectedtheboat'

smovementwithoneoar.StephenCranepulledtheotheroar.Thecaptainsatinthefrontofthesmall

boatandkepttellingBilliewhentoturntheboat.

Butluckily,thewindwasblowingtowardtheshore.“Ifitstartsblowingtheotherway,wewillneverreachland,”saidthecook.Thereporterandthesailoragreedbutthecaptainlaughedandasked,“Doyouthinkwe’vegotmuchofachancenow,boys?

”Thismadetheothersstoptalking.Buttheyalsodidn'

twanttosuggesttherewasnohope.Sotheyweresilent.

Buttotheirjoy,afewseagullsflewnearandfarandbrownpiecesofseaweedappearedfromtimetotime.Theyshowedthemenintheboatthatitwasslowlyapproachingland.

Astimewentby,theycouldseemoreandmoreseagulls.

Aftersearchingtheskyforalongtime,StephenCranefinallyfoundthelighthouse.

Astimewentby,theycouldseemoreandmoreseagulls.Theyalsosawtheland,whichwasasmallisland.“See!

”thecaptainsaid,“Isaidwewouldsurvive.”Butthenakedisland1hushedhim

quiet（让某人保持安静）.Thefourmancouldseenothingbutsand1.Hopelessandexhausted2,

theygotontheisland.Itseemedthattheywereattheendoftherope.ButStephendidn’twanttosurrendertothefate2.Herackedhisbrains3,anditsuddenlydawnedon4himthathemay

findthelighthousenearby.Whennightfell,hemadeeveryeffortto5seethroughthesky.

Aftersearchingtheskyforalongtime,StephenCranefinallyfoundthelighthouse.“Alighthouse!

”histremblingvoice1betrayedhiselation6.3Theotherthreemenjumpedupandasked,“Where?

”Stephenpointeditout,andtheyallsawtherayofhope3.Withouthesitation,theygatheredalltheirstrength7,gotontheboatandstruggledtowardsthesparkoflight4.Timeticked

by,andtheyeventuallyarrivedatthelighthouse.Theywereallrescued.Afterwards,whenaskedhowtheysurvived,Stephenputonabeamsmile8andanswer:

“Wherethere’sawilltosurvive,thereisaway.”

1.seenothingbutsand除了沙子什么也看不见

2.surrendertothefate向命运低头

3.rackedhisbrains绞尽脑汁

4.dawnedon开始意识到

5.madeeveryeffortto竭尽全力

6.betrayedhiselation暴露了他的喜悦

7.gatheredalltheirstrength聚集所有力量

8.putonabeamsmile面露喜色

1.tremblingvoice颤抖的声音

三、专有名词/固定搭配

1.thenakedisland孤岛

2.Hopelessandexhausted无助且疲惫

3.therayofhope希望之光

4.thesparkoflight光的火花

1.Itseemedthattheywereattheendoftherope.

他们似乎已经到了穷途末路

2.itsuddenlydawnedonhimthathemayfindthelighthousenearby.

他突然意识到他可能会在附近找到灯塔

3.histremblingvoicebetrayedhiselation.

他颤抖的声音暴露了他的喜悦

一、人与人（四）、人与陌生人2、善良友爱（20）题目

HenrygotonhisbikeandbegantodelivercopiesoftheMarch8,1970,issueofTheGazette.Halfanhourlater,hethrewthelastnewspaperontotheporch（门廊）at35OakStreetandcycledtoTheGazetteoffices.Theremustbesomethingimportant.fortheeditorinchieftomeetwithan

11-year-oldpaperboy.

“Nogoodwaytodeliverbadnews,”Mr.TrottagreetedhimwhenHenrysteppedin.Henry'

ssmilefaded.

“We'

reclosingshop,Henry.Advertisingisdown.Televisionishowpeoplegettheirnewstoday.

Localpapersarethefirsttoclose."

Mr.Trottashrugged.

Henrycouldn'

tbelievehisears,frozentothespot.Hethoughtofallthosepeoplehehadmetonhisroute.Theywouldn'

tgettheirneighborhoodnewsanymore!

“Youweregreat,Henry—alwaysdependable,”Mr.Trottasaid.Henryforcedhisheadupto

saygood-bye.

Asherodepastthehousesheknewsowell,hesawMr.Gradyonhisporch,holdingabroo（扫帚）.Henryledhimtoachairandcleanedtheporch.TheysatforawhilesMr.Gradyrecalledhowhappyhe'

dbeenmovinghisfamilyto10Oak.Hesoundedlonely.

Aweekafterhislastdeliveries,HenrywonderedifhiscustomersmissedTheGazetteasmuchashedid.Hethoughtofawaytofindout.Hestartedoutonhisoldroutewithanotebook.

HenrystoppedatMs.Burke'

s.Sheopenedthedoor,holdingthetwobabies.Sheaskedhimifheknewanyneighborswithexperienceoflookingafterchildren.

Mr.Simonwasnextdoor,carryinghisviolinout.“Hey,Henry.MybandishavingaconcertintheparkthisFriday.Tellallyourfriends.”

AsHenrymademorenotes,anideastartedforminginhishead.Maybehecouldcreateanewsypage（小报）fortheneighbors.

NeighborscheeredHenry'

sidea,readytoofferinformation.

Henry'

sfirstOakStreetNewsthenproduceddesiredeffects.

sidea,readytoofferinformation.BesidesMrs.Burkewholongedfor1ababysitterandMr.Si