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高考英语作文写作指导如何进行叙事描述
高考英语作文写作指导如何进行叙事描述
1.描述《时间与地点》2.描述《活动与过程》3.描述《困难与帮助》4.描述《原因与结果》
描述《时间与地点》
【典例1】会议大约持续了三个小时。
Themeetingtookapproximately/roughlythreehours.
Themeetinglastedthreehoursmoreorless.
Themeetingended/cametoanendaboutthreehourslater.
Ittookthreehoursorsotocoverthemeeting.
[仿写]英文短片播放时间大约2小时。
（1）TheEnglishshortmoviewilllastabouttwohours.
（2）IttooktwohoursorsotoplaytheEnglishshortmovie.
（3）TheEnglishshortmovietookapproximately/roughlytwohours.
积累:
last持续
cometoanend结束;终结
ittakessometimetodosth做某事要花费多长时间
【典例2】公园是公众娱乐休闲的地方。
Aparkisaplaceforthepublictorestandenjoythemselves.
Aparkisaplacewherepeoplerestandrelax.
Aparkisaplacewherepeoplecanhavearestandhavefun.
Aparkisapublicplaceforrelaxation/amusement.
[仿写]GreenHill是一个有趣的用来娱乐休闲的地方。
（1）GreenHillissuchafunplacetorelaxandrestin.
（2）GreenHillisafunplacewherepeoplerelaxthemselves.
（3）GreenHillisafunplaceforrelaxation/amusement.
积累:
aplacefor...一个……的地方
aplacewhere...一个……的地方（where引导定语从句）
【典例3】他瞥了一眼地图,然后告诉我们,往前再走不到20英里就是一个村庄。
Glancingatthemap,heinformedusthatavillagewasmerelytwentymilesaway.
Heglancedatthemapandtoldusthattherewouldbeavillagelessthantwentymilesaway.
Hetookaglanceatthemapandtoldusthatnomorethantwentymilesaheadwasavillage.
Havingglancedatthemap,heinformedusthatavillagewaswithintwentymiles.
Hecastalookatthemap,tellingusthattherewouldbelessthantwentymilesaheadofusbeforewegottoavillage.
[仿写]往前走不到100米就是我们的图书馆。
（1）Thereisourlibrarylessthan100metersaway.
（2）Ourlibraryislessthan100metersahead.
（3）Ourlibraryiswithin100meters.
积累:
lessthan不到;少于
within100meters（往前）不到100米
【典例4】我们在一个窗子朝西的教室里学习。
Westudyinaclassroom,whosewindowsfacewest.
Westudyinaclassroom,thewindowsofwhichfacewest.
[仿写]我们在一个窗子朝南的实验楼里做实验。
（1）Wedoexperimentsinalab,whosewindowsfacesouth.
（2）Wedoexperimentsinalab,thewindowsofwhichfacesouth.
积累:
定语从句中“whose+n.+其他”相当于“the+n.+ofwhich/whom+其他”。
【典例5】夜晚,同学们到达了这个小村庄。
Intheevening,thestudentsgotto/reached/arrivedatthesmallvillage.
Itwasintheeveningthatthestudentsreachedthesmallvillage.
Itwaseveningwhenthestudentsarrivedatthesmallvillage.
Thestudentsdidnotgettothesmallvillageuntil（itwas）evening.
Eveninghadalreadyfallenwhenthestudentsfoundtheirwaytothesmallvillage.
[仿写]那个周末,我们去了附近的一个地区。
（1）Itwasthatweekendwhenwewenttoanearbyneighborhood.
（2）Itwasatthatweekendthatwewenttoanearbyneighborhood.
积累:
Itis/was...that...为强调句式
【典例6】我们盼望的春节马上就要到了。
TheSpringFestivalthatwelookforwardtoisapproaching.
TheSpringFestivalthatwelookforwardtoisdrawingnear.
AroundthecorneristheSpringFestivalthatwearelongingfor/aredyingfor.
[仿写1]高考马上就要到了。
（1）TheCollegeEntranceExaminationisapproaching.
（2）TheCollegeEntranceExaminationisdrawingnear.
（3）AroundthecorneristheCollegeEntranceExamination.
[仿写2]我们盼望的汉字听写大赛马上就要开始了。
（1）TheChineseCharacterDictationCompetitionthatwelookforwardtoisapproaching.
（2）TheChineseCharacterDictationCompetitionthatwelookforwardtoisdrawingnear.
（3）AroundthecorneristheChineseCharacterDictationCompetitionthatwearelongingfor/aredyingfor.
积累:
...isdrawingnear.……就要到了。
Aroundthecorneris...……快到了。
【典例7】一听到那个令人兴奋的消息,她就大笑起来。
Assoonassheheardtheexcitingnews,shebegantolaugh.
Onhearingtheexcitingnews,sheburstintolaughter.
Themoment/instantsheheardtheexcitingnews,shebegantolaugh.
Immediately/Directlysheheardtheexcitingnews,sheburstintolaughter.
Hardly/Rarelyhadsheheardtheexcitingnewswhensheburstintolaughter.
Nosoonerhadsheheardtheexcitingnewsthansheburstoutlaughing.
[仿写]一听到你们招聘志愿者的消息,我马上就写信申请了。
（1）Onhearingthenewsthatyouwererecruitingvolunteers,Istartedwritingthelettertoapply.
（2）Themoment/instantIheardthenewsthatyouwererecruitingvolunteers,Istartedwritingthelettertoapply.
（3）Immediately/DirectlyIheardthenewsthatyouwererecruitingvolunteers,Istartedwritingthelettertoapply.
（4）NosoonerhadIheardthenewsthatyouwererecruitingvolunteersthanIstartedwritingthelettertoapply.
积累:
burstout突然……起来;大声喊叫
【典例8】直到失去所有的财产,他才意识到被骗了。
Hedidn’trealizethathewascheateduntilhehadlostallhisbelongings.
Hedidn’trealizehewastakeninuntilhegotallhispropertieslost.
Notuntilhehadlostallhiswealthdidhewakeuptothefactthathewascheated.
Itwasnotuntilhehadlostallhispossessionsthatherealizedhewastakenin.
Onlyafterhehadlostallhispossessionsdidhebecomeawareofbeingcheated.
[仿写]直到接到电话,他才意识到今天是母亲的生日。
（1）Hedidn’trealizethattodayishismother’sbirthdayuntilhereceivedthecall.
（2）Notuntilhereceivedthecalldidherealizethattodayishismother’sbirthday.
（3）Itwasnotuntilhereceivedthecallthatherealizedtodayishismother’sbirthday.
积累:
notuntil置于句首时,主句用部分倒装形式
Itwasnotuntil...that...为强调句式
【典例9】农历正月初一是春节。
TheSpringFestivalfallsonthefirstdayofthefirstmonthofourChineselunarcalendar.
TheSpringFestivaloccursonthefirstdayofthefirstmonthofourChineselunarcalendar.
PeoplecelebratetheSpringFestivalonthefirstdayofthefirstmonthofourChineselunarcalendar.
[仿写]农历九月初九是重阳节。
（1）TheDoubleNinthFestivalfallsontheninthoftheninthmonthofourChineselunarcalendar.
（2）TheDoubleNinthFestivaloccursontheninthoftheninthmonthofourChineselunarcalendar.
（3）PeoplecelebratetheDoubleNinthFestivalontheninthoftheninthmonthofourChineselunarcalendar.
积累:
fallon...表示“（庆典或特别事件）在（某日）,适逢（某日）”
描述《活动与过程》
【典例1】万一计划失败,我们将采取其他的措施来解决这个问题。
Iftheplanweretofail,wewouldadoptothermeasurestosolvetheproblem.
Iftheplanshouldfail,othermeasureswouldbetakentodealwiththeproblem.
Shouldtheplanfail,wewouldtakeotherstepstosettletheproblem.
Iftheplantosolvetheproblemfailed,wewouldtakeothermeasures.
[仿写]要不是妈妈心不在焉,我们就会省去一遍遍回去的麻烦。
（1）IfMomhadn’tbeenthatabsent-minded,itwouldhavesavedusthetroubleofgoingbackagainandagain.
（2）Hadmomnotbeenthatabsent-minded,itwouldhavesavedusthetroubleofgoingbackagainandagain.
（3）Momwasabsent-minded,otherwiseitwouldhavesavedusthetroubleofgoingbackagainandagain.
积累:
if+主语+should/weretodo表示对将来情况的假设
【典例2】我们怎样克服这些困难呢?
Howisitthatwegetridofthedifficulties?
Howshallweovercomethedifficulties?
Howshallwesmoothawaythedifficulties?
Whatmeasures/stepsshouldwetaketoovercomethedifficulties?
Whatisitthatweshoulddotogetoverthedifficulties?
[仿写]我们怎样解决自行车停放场地的问题呢?
（1）Howisitthatwesolvetheproblemwiththeparkingplaceforbikes?
（2）Whatmeasures/stepsshouldwetaketosolvetheproblemwiththeparkingplaceforbikes?
（3）Whatisitthatweshoulddotosolvetheproblemwiththeparkingplaceforbikes?
积累:
How/Whatisitthat...?
为强调句式
takemeasurestodosth采取措施做某事
【典例3】他突然想起一个好主意。
Suddenlyhehiton/uponagoodidea.
Suddenlyagoodideacametohismind.
Agoodideasuddenlyflashedacrosshismind.
Hesuddenlythoughtoutagoodidea.
Agoodideasuddenlystruckhim.
Agoodideasuddenlyoccurredtohim.
[仿写]徒劳地驾驶了一段时间以后,母亲突然有了一个好主意。
（1）Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Mumsuddenlyhiton/uponagoodidea.
（2）Suddenlyagoodideacametohermindaftershehaddriveninvainforsometime.
（3）Agoodideasuddenlyflashedacrosshermindaftershehaddriveninvainforsometime.
（4）Agoodideasuddenlyoccurredtoheraftershehaddriveninvainforsometime.
积累:
hiton/uponagoodidea想起一个好主意
agoodideacomestosb’smind某人想起一个好主意
flashacrosssb’smind在某人的脑海中闪过
agoodideaoccurstosb某人想起一个好主意
【典例4】他正在努力实现他的目标。
Heismakingeveryefforttoachievehisgoal.
Withgreatefforts,heisstrugglingtoachievehisgoal.
Heissparingnoefforttorealizehisaim.
Heisdoingeverythinginhispowertorealizehisaim.
Heisdoing/tryinghisbesttoachievehisgoal.
Heisdoingwhathecouldtomakehisgoalcometrue.
Heisdoingasmuchashecouldtorealizehisaim.
[仿写]父亲和我非常努力地沿着河流走,以便于找到保罗叔叔的农场。
（1）DadandImadeeveryefforttofollowtheriver,sothatwemayfindUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.
（2）DadandIdidwhatwecouldtofollowtheriversothatwemayfindUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.
（3）Withgreatefforts,DadandIfollowedtheriversothatwemayfindUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.
积累:
achieveone’sgoal实现某人的目标
cometrue实现
【典例5】演讲过程中,他不时参阅发言稿。
Whilemakinghisspeech,heoccasionallyturnedtohisspeechdraft.
Duringhisspeech,hereferredtohismanuscriptfromtimetotime.
Duringtheprocessofhisspeech,heconsultedhisscriptnowandthen.
[仿写]在他们骑行的过程中,其中一个朋友停下来开始修车。
（1）Whileriding,oneofthefriendsstoppedtorepairhisbicycle.
（2）Duringtheprocessoftheirriding,oneofthefriendsstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair.
（3）Duringtheirride,oneofthefriendsstoppedtofixhisbicycle.
积累:
whiledoingsth在做……过程中
occasionally偶尔;不时
fromtimetotime不时
nowandthen有时;不时
【典例6】如果明天下雨,我们该怎么办呢?
Assuming/Providing/Supposingitrainstomorrow,whatshouldwedo?
Suppose/Assumeitrainstomorrow,whatshallwedo?
Provided（that）itrainstomorrow,whatshallwedo?
[仿写]如果你能来,我将去你（住）的地方去接你。
（1）Ifyou’reabletocome,I’llgoandpickyouupatyourplace.
（2）Assuming/Providing/Supposingyou’reabletocome,I’llgoandpickyouupatyourplace.
（3）Provided（that）you’reabletocome,I’llgoandpickyouupatyourplace.
积累:
Assuming/Providing/Supposing/Providedthat...假设……
【典例7】非常偶然的是,我在书店里遇到了我的一个大学同学,我们已经有五年没有见面了。
Ihappenedtomeetoneofmycollegemat
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